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Reviewer: inuyashaloverr (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Damn, this is good!



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Damn, you are busy, arent ya? Great chapter. Evil Naraku, the rat-bastard! He just makes my skin crawl sometimes. Cant wait to see InuYasha kick some ass, oh yea! Wonder what Sesshomaru is gonna think and do about Rin now? Its not her fault. Ya can pick your nose, but ya cant pick your relatives. Dont mind me, Ive had too much chocolate,lol. Again, great chapter, update soon! 



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Another great chapter. Naraku deserves more than to just get an ass-kicking. Makes me wonder what Sesshomaru has in-store for the rat-bastard. Maybe he'll just let his otouto have him. Either way, it should prove most interesting. Ooh, cant wait to see what happens next, dammit. Gotta re-load the M+M bowl, lmao.



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


OH, hot damn if you didnt keep me on the edge of my seat, dammit! Lol. You really know how to write a fight scene woman. I just love how this all flowed. Heh, dunno if it flowed that easy in writing it, but you make it look so damn good on here. Update when you can, SOON hopefully, lol.



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


And I wanted to give a "Thank You" to Leila-chan for being your beta for your stories. I can now understand why a beta is needed, and appreciated by the author



Reviewer: inuyashaloverr (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Well that was totally awesome! Like I said before, you do know how to write a fight scene. Damn, you're good! I've loved this story from the get-go and will miss it as well when it ends...sniffs...sniffs...but I know it isn't over just yet, so I eagerly await the next chapter. 



Reviewer: Tyashaay14 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

awesome job...I love this story more and more every time I read it...but it still can't be better than Suicide Rain...now that was the bomb...but this one is too, don't get me wrong...lol...update soon...luvs Ty < 3



Reviewer: Tyashaay14 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


ooooooh...Inuyasha thinks that Kagome is really Fluffy's intended...wow...he is dense...lol...I can't wait for the next chapter...update soon...luvs Ty < 3 



Reviewer: Tyashaay14 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

ooooooooooo...thats a baaad Kikyou...tsk tsk tsk...I can't believe of her thinking those things...ew...Kikyou...and Inuyasha...thats just wrong...lol...and Sesshomaru...thats just great...He almost went into youkai mode when he saw how beat up Inuyasha was...this is definatly the making of a great fanfic...I apluad you...spell check apluad..lol...update soon...luvs Ty 



Reviewer: Tyashaay14 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

What possibly did Naraku mean when he said true nature....Hmmmmm...I'll just take a few guesses on my own....was he perhaps referring to when Inuyasha turns full youkai...when he gets all sexy and evil? well...thats the only guess I have...any way...great job...update soon....luvs Ty



Reviewer: Tyashaay14 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I loves it...that was sooo great...I cant wait until the next chapter...please update soon!! luvs Ty 



Reviewer: Tetsuya Yamahas (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


I swear, I'm just hanging off of your writing, and this story. Everytime I'm on the computer I come and check if there is a new update. believe me, that's alot. So please, make this pittiful fan girl happy and review when you get the chance. I'll love you even more when you do. I don't want to be completley mean and not even leave a real comment, so I just want to say that I am in absolute love with this story. It's an amasingly Creative idea, but then again, yo u're prettty good in that area. hugs and all of the encouragement I can offer



Reviewer: Tetsuya Yamahas (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


I loved the latest chapter! It was so sweet, I was very happy with it. Please keep it going to keep us grovelors happy. One question though. Is the story set in Japan? It reminds me of old england sometimes, but then I read something else that yells Japan...so Please clarify this for me. I'm apparently not smart enough to figure it out on my own ^_______^; 



Reviewer: Tetsuya Yamahas (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I really like this story, I like it alot. The plot is really neat as well. Bu tone thing is bothering me, and please tell me if I'm stepping out of line here, but I know that if someone could give me just a little hint, I would want it. You have a bit of a grammar problem when the characters are talking. When adressing a person, there should be a comma before their name, or what ever they are being called. As in, "Thankyou, Rin." Okay, I'm probobly getting really annoying now, so I'll go now. But yes, love the story



Reviewer: mel f (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


love the story. cant wait for more please update again soon. 



Reviewer: mel f (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

So happy you updated, even more happy inu made kags his mate. Love your story want more! Cant wait to see how you end it.



Reviewer: mel f (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

The action in your fic is amazing!! Your the best!! cant wait to see what happens next, Now that everything is somewhat died down. there is still the issue with kagome's family thinking she wants to be with Sesshomeru I want to know what they will think of inu him being half blood and all. Anyway i am lookinh forward to your next update so please make it soon. 



Reviewer: xSilentbeautyxx@hotmail.com (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

well i have no clue what happened last night to you, but im glad everythings ok. good chappie! i absolutely love this story. its such a great plot. (plus youre still my favorite Inu/Kag writer out there! ^.^) Seiteki xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com



Reviewer: xSilentbeautyxx@hotmail.com (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

very nice fight scene, it was written very well. 



Reviewer: cj flutterbye (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

ack! It's not done yet. I hope you come back and finish it. Different story line and a lot of fun. I'm looking forward to more.



Reviewer: cj flutterbye (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Shiori is safe - phew - and is at ease knowing that Rin is safe. They'll all be together. It will all be good. I expect that you have a thing or two left up your typing sleeve - and I'm looking forward to it. I love how you are writing Rin and Sess.



Reviewer: cj flutterbye (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


wow! So much action - and now Inu is in on it too! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!



Reviewer: cj flutterbye (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Fantastic battle scene! So much action - so many people to keep track of. Wonderfully done! Yea! Yasha got's his mommy back!



Reviewer: Inubutterfly (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Bravo, Bravo. I'm so excited for the next chapter. Keep up the good work! (My Champion was sooo cute)



Reviewer: Inubutterfly (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 11:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I really like it so far! Keep writting, I can't wait for the next chapter



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