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Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


i wonder how they're gonna rescue inu. and dammit, if naraku "sits" inu while he's trying to fight, i swear i'll lose it! on a lighter note, lovely chap. 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


very happy to see that a plan is being devised to rescue inu and everyone has finally met one another. inu looks like he needs all the help he can get. aaaaah, a horny kikyou. poor inu. ha.



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

i can see sess patting himself on the back alot more often than we all realize! silly. i am excited about the escape coming up. wonder if things will go smoothly or to absolute sh*t? either will be fun. 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

so far so good, right? right? naraku better stay "preoccupied" 'till all is well. i hope kag can get tha hell outta that castle and into inu's arms, asap. 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


whaaaat. i swear i have a love hate relationship with your cliffies! i'm glad that you atleast let us see a brief reunion between inu and kag. i wonder how things will turn out. since inu thinks kag has to marry his big bro, things may get weird. man, i wish there was more to read here! staying up 'till the early morning hours watching fox news coverage on the hurricane is NO fun. thanks for the temporary respite. my parents and brothers live in houston, so everything is cool. they wont get the sh*t end of it. so yeah, thanx and please update when ya can. *beats the ever living f*uck outta the spam filter* 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

yup. i think its unanimous that inu is hopelessly clueless. this fight scene coming up is gonna be the sh*t. well, as long as our guys win! ^_* 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

kikyou is so bad. and stingy! atleast in regards to poor inu. hopefully kagome will be the one to end her. painfully! what is up with the charm? is kagome a miko in this fic? guess i'll have to wait and see.



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


i forgot to ask a minute ago on my last review...didn't you have another fic posted? i forgot the title, but it's been bothering me for a while. i'm pretty sure it was yours. i think it was about inu having had a mate other than kag and she was killed. it also included gun smuggling and all of that cool sh*t. if i'm wrong, let me know and tell me how stupid i am. ^_^ if i'm not, why did you delete it, and will you repost it? Thanks.



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


all of these quick updates have my eyes swirling. i love how you are prolonging the inevitable getting "together" of inu and kagome. so good! damn kikyou to hell...alone!! ^__^ i'm excited 'bout the training. wonder how that will turn out.



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


nooo. how could you stop it there?! "her mates body is being claimed"? hell no. kikyou is gonna fry!...ok, moving on. i love your OC kinto! he's such a good guy. is shiori inu's okaa-san? i must know! and the whole thing about a tasty hanyou treat...kikyou wishes (so do I ^_^igjh). or does she get what she wants? i have to know. ahhh please update asap!!! 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:08 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

i reread chap. 1 and now i remember. i guess the name threw me off. i know it's not an excuse, but it WAS kinda late when i reviewed! lol. i like the mental comm. going on between the couple. good idea. it makes me even more ready for their reunion...and the kikyou/kag showdown. ^_* 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

yea, an update! inu is gonna be waay upset when he realizes all of the things kikyou is manipulating him to do. i've said it before... what.a.hooker. moving on, i see that you now have TWO pages worth of fics up. that is awesome. go kiki. keep givin' us more. ; ) 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


i think it all makes sense now. my last review made me seem LOST. i think i'll go and reread some chaps. i need to brush up, cuz i know you must get sick of me reviewing about being confused. ; ) poor miroku. again. i can see why he would be intimidated over being upfront with sango about his feelings. she can be scary! he is smart. waiting might be good. : )



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

i like the whole aura thing. the idea of either caressing or shoving it is cool. it looks as though kikyo's days are numbered... i hope. the sess/rin stuff is sooohoho funny. steamy, too. 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


nagaharu is StUpId! holy hell, kinto will beat him unrecognizable, or dead. rin is too sweet. she Would wait for him. aww. damn, yash is a crazy hanyou when under someone else's control. lol. i keep thinking of all those weird japanese movies with all the blood spraying on the walls whenever someone gets cut. eww. X D



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


poor rin and sessh. you've got a crazy scheme going on here! i wonder how you will get sessh out of this mess now. i am so happy to finally see an update from you. i missed ya! hmmm, what has rin got up her sleeve? can't wait.



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


SH*T, disregard last review. was meant for PBE. grrrrr. 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

i guess his youkai didn't give a f*ck and was hellbent on destroying her for her supposed betrayal. and it also seems like he didn't make it either. that can't be good. they hadn't even seen eachother that much and their love was still new. i wonder if that would have even mattered in the end. thanks for updating. hopefully "other" reviewers will learn how to gently encourage you to do so soon instead of being abrasive and immature. thanks again. ^_* 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


finally, shiori is free from that scumbag! and inu and kagome are o.k. poor rin. i know how much it sux to feel weak and unable to help. wish i could take some martial arts classes and be badass! that would be awesome. well, looks like we're in the final countdown. yay. exciting. 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

wow. is there anything kagome can't do? inu feeling his mother's aura/presence would definitley lift his spirits. i am so happy. soon, hopefully, inu will have a wonderful reunion with his family. i think naraku's downfall will most surely be his arrogance. HE has no idea what HE is up against. sess is arrogant as well, but with reason... so i forgive him. =p 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


have i told you how much i love this fic? well, this much! *spreads out arms wide open* keeping inu and kagome from each other for so long has raised the intensity level of this story so high. i will probably cry at the end. man, naraku sux. and sess is kinda sucking right now, too. in a bad way, pervs. 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

hell yes. naraku's over confidence is gonna get his ass kicked. i hope. *shudders at his insane inner musings* i just know that the next chap will be crazy full of action and long awaited reunions. you say this chap was hard to write, but it came out so perfectly as the appetizer for the next chap. yer so modest! you know we've been waiting for this. = D we're all excited. 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

i wonder if kagura will be spared or naraku will roast her? hmmmm. inu sounds pissed! definitely gonna be some blood shed. poor muteki, i liked him, but not for sango. miroku is my #1 choice. yay for inu marking kags. next, the good stuff. ^_~ can't wait for next chappie!! awww, i got nominated for class beta president?? i accept. XD 



Reviewer: leila-chan (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

this fic has been so awesome from the start. it reads like an epic. of course, it's not as long as one. =P keeping inu and kags apart  for so long made the reunion that much sweeter and i loved the mother/son reunion too. like everyone else says, the battle scenes were badass!! they were written so professionally and smoothly. you don't skip around and then lose your readers like some authors tend to do. i got lost in this chap, as in tranced out. so great. i will be sad to see this one end. i just hope that when you've finished all of your current fics, that you continue with new ones. i might die if you don't. this beta is a workaholic, so, gimme some work. ^_~ 



Reviewer: rinreddot (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Ok no more complaints about rebound since i got fatality ... oh the dinner scene that was good. Rin is such a terase but Sess is beating her to it. That hook up when it happens is going to be very interesting. Like always perfect. Read you lata hun.



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