awesome job! it took me only 2 days to read this whole thing! but i did it! phew! haha! i really love this story. it's friggin awesome! i am purely in love with it. take as long as you want writing the next chapter bcz i know with time you can make it perfect! =] just like all your other battle scenes. when you wrote the fights at the coliseum i can sooo see it. and i usually can't picture battles. so awesome job! and good job at making sesshomaru have feelings for rin. a lot of ppl can't pull it off bcz of sesshomaru's personality, but you used his pride in a very good way. i love it so much. and the conversation between rin and sesshomaru was friggin good. me: WOAH!!!! i never expected it to be so harsh! haha! i loved it!

dude!! you wrote the battle scene so perfectly! i imagined it pretty darn well!! and i liked how you didn't forget the characters and they weren't really idling. good job!! and the ending made my eyes water, so cute. and poor kagura, i wanted her to escape... T_T

I just wanted to say this: Rin: grow-up. sesshy:slow down. Inu: stay strong. kags get ya man. kikyo:still a slut and needs her ass kicked. miroku:keep hope alive. sango: open your eyes. naraku:kill kikyo quick. That's it. I feel bad for not reviewing and i wanted to say, well... I love InuGRRL. YOU FUCKIN' ROCK, out loud. love ya, Boop

Ding dong the bitch is dead, which old bitch, that kikyo bitch. Oh my Gosh, action, action, action. Finally, kikyo is dead, though i really thought it would be naraku to do the deed, but as always he never does get his hands dirty. Sesshomaru really needs to get a grip about all that demon pride shit, we all know the truth, no need to front sesshy^_^ Poor miroku, to see the love of his life get kissed by her trainer. Yea, inu's mommy and "dad" first kiss, what a surprise that will be when they find out the truth, huh? no, not Suki!!!! anyone but her, noooooooo!!! @_@ she was so fuckin' tight, i'm tellin' ya. what a way to go down. No inu don't hurt kags she comin' for ya.. Well, gotta go. love ya, Boop 

that was like soooooooooooo fucking great. im really glad they got inu back and kagome was saved too. a-hippy-who-ha to that my friend. oh yeah, i almost forgot. ahem... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO why his arm?!?!?! why damn u , naraku, WHY HIS PRECIOUS ARM( crying) o, my poor, sweet sesshy, my-poor, poor-sweet-now-sort-of-defenceless-but-not -really sesshy. its so sad that the demon slayer died(sowwy, im not good at remembering his name, sowwy again) i know that when the ending comes it will just be so off the chain that i cant stand it and i just cant wait for more, so new chappy soon.... i hope. see ya!!! -love ya, Boop

This story is so thrilling! and very enjoyable! But I wouldn't expect anything less from such a well accomplished writer of my favorite anime fanfiction!(translation: you totally rock!!) Thanks for all the great stories and allowing me to deviate,if only for a while, from my responsibilities as a mother, wife and student! After reading one of your much anticipated updates, I don't feel quite as guilty for not studying bc it was time definitely well spent!! Keep them coming!!

great chapter! I hope they reach Inu in time before Kikyo "defiles" him!! 

This is a perfect example of why hanyou ears should not be used for eavesdropping!! It only leads to ANGST! great chapter! keep it coming!

YAY!! They finally meet!! Great Chapter!!
I absolutely LOVE this story!! I can't wait until the rescue!!

Wow!! That is really different! I LOVE IT!! Keep it coming! Your other stories are really great also! 

This was so well written... I think you're having a hard time writing as much because your ability is getting so much better, and you're being hard on yourself before you even get it onto paper... I know the feeling. You're so amazing, you know...

I don't know who zelix is, but... thanks. :D Without them, this chapter may not have come out. Honeybee likes to bang things out... don't ya? lol. I liked this chapter, with the number one MILF, heh. I can understand why Rinni would get upset, but she must realize that he's telling the truth. Of course, he should have told her he cared about her. He's an idiot. Just like someone else we know. *blush*. Great chapter, kiki. I need to write the last couple chaps of YY, and I haven't even started. *groans*. I have no inspiration. *sigh