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Reviewer: Jennyxoox (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

wow i really like this story i hope you keep going with it. pleae update as soon as you can your a good writer and i hope to see more of your work.  



Reviewer: crzy144  (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

wow this story blew me away for sure update soon becasue i would like to read a lil more ya mauh i luved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1



Reviewer: BlackMikoKikyo (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I love this fic, the writing the plot everything on it. But I hate the cliff you left in that last chapter please update soonnn!!!!



Reviewer: Azure Raiden (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

W00t! An escape plan! I really do hope they get him out before Kikyou has her way with him. Do hurry and get the next chapter out!



Reviewer: *THE* Fallen Angel  (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


Acually the enjoyment factor is or 100 for me. PLEASE WRITE MORE, I keep comming back to this story every day,seeing if u wrote anymore and I get disappointed whenever I find out there is no new chap. *gets all teary-eyed* please please please write more!! i can't wait to see what happens...what there "rescue mission" is gonna be like. Also I can't wait for Inu and Kag to get together. U r gonna write a lemon for them at one point in the story right? Can't live without them in the stories, there the shizznit. Lol



Reviewer: chanda (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

This story was absolutly outstanding. You really pulled me in. I am not surprised though, most of your stories pull me in. I do hope you update soon. Thanks Chanda 



Reviewer: InuKagsChild1 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon please!! It' such a good story!



Reviewer: KawaiiKoneko89(mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I love this fic!!!!! Please update soon okay!!! =^^= kitty!!!! 



Reviewer: catalina27 (mm.org)     Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

AWWWWW that is so sad. Why can't Inu see the truth...i'm gunna cryyy! 



Reviewer: Of BloodBaths (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Someone really needs to throw a brick over that kid's head ^^ Thanks for sharing your stories with us!! 



Reviewer: ur #1 fan (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

i love this fanfic ^________^ omg...INUYASHA IS SO STUPID ! ... doesnt he know sesshy doesnt like humans? -_-;;; ... anyways, UPDATE ~ mwuahhhh LUV YAAA :D 



Reviewer: sunflashmace7 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

i like it lots new chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! otherwise bad things happen 



Reviewer: Wind Sorceress (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

This story is great! please keep it updated!



Reviewer: jeninuyashalover (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Hands down you have to be my fav writer so far lol. And thats saying something beacuse i love to write storys but i dont really like reading them but your storys make me want to read them. Good job and keep up the great work. Update asap 



Reviewer: contemplating (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

So far, I really like this fic. You're using the characters in new and creative ways without them being massively OOC (well, maybe Sess is, but only where his little brother in concerned - which is a NICE change...). The only complaint I have is that Kagome is crying all the time. You set her up to be a strong character (as she is in the series) and yet she sheds tears over everything. I know she is a princess and all, but couldn't she just be sad like normal people? ;) PLEASE update soon! I can't wait for them to be reunited!! 



Reviewer: Shippo (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

All I can say is... COOL! But for some reason... Some really odd reason... I think of Gladiator... O_o; am I suppose too? Anywho, I simply love this story... 



Reviewer: Sailor Sarcasm (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Just wanted you to know that I think you're one of the best authors. Ive read a lot of your fanfics and they're so much fun! I do eventually plan to read them all...when I remember...*wanders off muttering to self*



Reviewer: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

yay u updated! :3 .. well the whole kikyou thing.... shes such a whore. omfg.. she tried to rape him? what the fuck? anyways, hope that mother load of a bitch dies. hmph... gosh this is sad~ but i still love itttt < 33 :D 



Reviewer: rin136 (mm.org)     Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

I love this version of Sess. I love the plot too! Great story.



Reviewer: Inugurl27k (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...


why did it end??? this story, at least the whole slave fighting ring part, reminds me of the movie gladiator. i wonder if that was what you were going for. anywho, this is a great story, i dont understand however, that a charm ment to protect one's mate, would cause them pain. maybe you could explain that a little for this sad reviewer. pitty the fool who can grasp the concept. o.0



Reviewer: InuBaby369246 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

Hey!!! I love this story!! Do you see a patern, because I feel like I'm repeating myself when it comes to your stories. well I can't write more right now because i'm supposed to do homework. P.S. I you have an ounce of mercy you will update soon



Reviewer: inux3kagome4ever (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

sounds like a really good fic ... can't wait till ya update!



Reviewer: kikyou hater (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

this chapter is really nice, but i wish inu could get away from that bitch kikyou... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!! 



Reviewer: inu_candy216 (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

EWWW,POOR INUYASHA ,HE'S PROBALY BURNED FOR LIFE. Update soon it's really good. 



Reviewer: FataLFelineOfTheNight (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Nightmare Begins...

u no,i really luv this fic, however i am guilty 4 not reviewing out of sheer laziness n i apologize 4 that. -_- but im finally taking the very short time 2 inform u that i do enjoy ur writing very much n i understand how u feel. its UR story it shud be written how U want it. plz update soon. 



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