Date: July 03, 2011 8:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Damn and I was so happy with the chapter, until Inu got bashed. It had to be Bankotsu and his brother, what are they going to do to him? Oh boy I don't think I really want to know.
Date: July 03, 2011 8:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Well..why was I sure u were gonna fuck it for em? Sighs...please update soon Kiki!
Date: July 03, 2011 8:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
AY UPDATE!!!!! ^________^ ... GOD, fucking kikyou is up to something nasty! well the chapter was FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC! ^_~ .. i do feel bad for souten.. but i hope she doesnt become a bother in their relationship! ~~
Date: July 03, 2011 8:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OMG! NOOOOOOO!Evilest cliffie of all cliffies! Whats gonna happen? PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON MY LOOOVE!
Date: July 03, 2011 8:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
ya know, i always thought phone sex was odd until i read that. and rin, damn that girl is set on she's got the right view and everyone else is wrong. now is it any large age gap that freaks her out or just one where it's below the 18 age regardless of being able to consent? sesshy better behave himself or he's going to find himself getting his ass kicked by his baby brother. naraku's plotting, kikyou;s plotting, and the secret is getting out (well at least a bit). exciting stuff happening! and neddi's place...teehee!
Date: July 03, 2011 8:50 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
HOLY CRAP..that was such an awesome chap!! The phone sex..phew..i need a cold shower now lol.I hope Sess goes easy on her..ah crap man,i cant believe u left it on a cliffy!! *pouts* Update soon,cant wait for the next one!! ^_^
Date: July 03, 2011 8:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I like this chapter I thought it was good I can not want still you up date the story.
Date: July 03, 2011 8:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
*cries hysterically* Kiki, how could you?! Another cliffy! Why oh why has kami forsaken me? Oh woe is me, for I will never survive without another update! *coughs* Don't mind me, I'm an actress. Anyways, this chapter was hot! I loved the phone sex! I've never seen it written so perfectly! Lol, I love Sess! He is so awesome: "So, yeah, I can't believe they raped him..." "I didn't rape him!" OMFGWTFBBQ!!! That was so funny in a sick way! Ooh...Sess gave his word to Inu that he wouldn't hurt Kagome...we'll have to see what happens next chapter, ne? On a side note, congrats on writing 41 chapters! Update soon and Happy Writing! -Christina
Date: July 03, 2011 8:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Oh my goddness, you did an amazing job Kiki! But a cliff hanger?! Ahh! I can't wait until you write the next chapter. I loved so any parts in this chapter. Keep up the good work and I hope you put up the next chapter soooooon! ^^
Date: July 03, 2011 8:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Awesome update, KiKi! That phone sex was hot!!! Beautiful writing at it's best! Take care.
Date: July 03, 2011 8:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OMG... That was so fricken awesome. LoL. That was really good Kiki, I loved it. But damn that phone lemon was... was... So hot!!! LoL. Great update Kiki, it was really good. I can't believe that Sesshie knows now. Wow, if I were Kagome, I'd be afraid of what Sess had to say to me. Wonderful chapter. And no need to apologize for the delay, I understand. I can't wait for the next chapter and Sesshie's converstation. Is he gonna hurt her?
Date: July 03, 2011 8:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Damn what a chappie! You are the cliffhanger queen! I gotta agree with Chrissy. Everything is coming together. If I were Kagome I'd be having a heart attack about now. And once again you used my (new) favorite word "Vialaceous". So Luc gets a restaurant and Neddi gets a restaurant. I think you should just make a restaurant called Lovelies'. Two stories down and still more to go. Go Kiki! Go Kiki! YOu can do it!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 8:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
evil evil cliffie, but yay to kouga getting what he deserved. man i really hope things work out for kagome and inuyasha...sad endings are just too well sad. great chapter! phone sex? how kinky (good thing sess didnt come over sooner)
Date: July 03, 2011 8:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
FUCK!!Fuckety fuck fuck fuck!!! This is what happens when you take a month to update. You give us the Quadruple angst...My heart Kiki...I think someone needs to call 911. I..can't..take...no...more...angst. Ok, yes I can. I looooooooooooooooove every damn minute of it. Whoooot, so fuckin hot. I looooooooooooooooooooooove Sesshomaru!! But pweeeze don't take another month to update. Not that I am one to make demands or anything. lol! And Sesshi can eat this Italian Neddi out anytime baby!! I will make my special cream for him....hehehe! Your perve friend. Love Neddi
Date: July 03, 2011 8:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Oh come on Seshomaru can't do anything to Kagome, he promised Inuyasha! An if he does try to convince her to stay away from Inuyasha then I hope she doesn't listen and tells Inuyasha what happened.
Date: July 03, 2011 8:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
WOW!! With Summer school and all, I have barely had time to breathe, much less catch up on stories. But this chapter liked to nearly kill me with all of the angst..and phone sex!! Cold Shower, anyone??! Great Chapter! Hope all is well with you!! Until next time!
Date: July 03, 2011 8:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz PLEASE!!! continue!!!!! i luv ur story!!!! update soon Kay Ja ne *Jessica*
Date: July 03, 2011 8:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
That was fucking awesome. Kick-Ass-Sexxy...yea he is, lol. Now, wonder what the hell he's gonna say to Kags. Aw excellent chappie Onna. Most definitely worth the wait. And hell, whats a little phone sex between loverrs.... :P
Date: July 03, 2011 8:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Shit! He ain't gonna do nuthin, is he!?! HE PROMISED! Please update.
Date: July 03, 2011 8:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Is there one of those thingies i can join to know when you update.... Wait...I'll check your biio thingie....I Love you! You are an absolute complete FRIGGIN GENIOUS!
Date: July 03, 2011 8:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Oh, lordy. This is such a stressful story! ;) It's all so twisted and insane, I love it! I feel so awful for Inu and Kags...damn, it's such an awful situation. I hope Sess stands up for her or at least gives her a chance, shit, someone has to be on there side or I'll have a fit. Yeah and those sex scenes practically give me heart attacks, eep! Great writing, I can't wait until the next update.
Date: July 03, 2011 8:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Yay! I'm just so giddy with joy. I have been dying your fics when my computer broke down. Now that it's up and running I get to read all of your stories and I'm sooooooooo behind. First, off the update was great and the phone sex wasn't bad either. Kikyo don't have no good luck coming and Sess and Rin's case is so ironic and I wonder how Kagome's going to deal with that. I know big drama is on the way and I can't wait to see what Sess going to do. I hope he don't inflict the same pain he did on Kouga. *_*
Date: July 03, 2011 8:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Great update, KiKi! I am still here reading your wonderful fics. I hope you are doing well and please take care. Christal
Date: July 03, 2011 8:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Great update! I was SO scared for Kagome when Sess came. Hell, she had it coming. Bank and Kagura was so cute even though I'm not really digging on Bank's attitude. Oh, and him wearing Jordans had me laughing for my personal reasons. I also feel sorry for how Souten is being treated. um...what else do I have to say...well Kikyo's still is a bitch. Rin is gettting played by a smooth talking trickster. Anyways, great update and I wish you joy and happiness. (I think I'm going to stick with that signature)
Date: July 03, 2011 8:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hnnn...I kinda thought Sessh was gonna do more than he had, but am glad he didnt. Wonder what Rin will say when she finds out, then eventually finding out that guys just fucking with her AND Sessh. Yea, how gullible can Rin be...hope not too much. Hope she comes to her senses, and soon. Makes me wonder what exactly Kikyo's gonna witness as well. And always wondered if Kags ends up pregnant or not. Then the things goin on with his parents and that. ...hnn...interesting.... Seems everything's slowly coming to a head now. Awesome chapter. And update when ya can..... :P