Date: July 03, 2011 8:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Shit Kiki, u scared the shit out of me! I thought he was gonna kill her ass! Sweet Lord! Im glad he didn't! Hehe I said sweet lord. Lol. Please update.
Date: July 03, 2011 8:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hey mama....you updated whooot!! That had me stressed... Asshat...now you reminded me of you and Luc when yall argue...so funny. I loved the chap as I always do. I have no clue as to where this is gonna go...but it dont look good at all....nope not one bit. Yash is gonna be soooo pissed at his brother...ooooooooh, I dont want to be him. Lol. I love ya....talk to you later.... Neddi
Date: July 03, 2011 8:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Comments: Kiki will this one work out? I'm starting to feel it is doomed. How long until he turns 17? He could get married with a parents consent. Sess seems to be becoming youkai like... Are they youkai in hiding and Inu doesn't know? Well looking forward to 100 more chapters from you until I actually get my next one out.... Lets hope chapter 7 comes quicker.... Honestly I am too busy reading other stories to write I only write mine when everyone hits a dry spell...
Date: July 03, 2011 8:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Kiki... Wow. That was a really good chapter, and worth the wait. So, that was the Sess/Kags confrontation. This appears to be only the beginning. I'm sure a shit load of stuff i gonna happen before the end. All I can say again is, wow. I can't wait. Wonderful job, I loved it. ;-)
Date: July 03, 2011 8:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Poor Kagome, it just seems like the angst and drama won't stop for those two. Well can't wait for another chapter, please update soon!
Date: July 03, 2011 8:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
hey kik, you kick major bootay!the chappy was rockin' grrrl! pen is worried yash wont get the note and i can smell whats comming! this is the only fic we've read that we like Naraku at all! can't wait fo' the yuri!! keep up this rockin' fix grrrl! lots of inu luv to ya! ur inu buddies , pen & skye
Date: July 03, 2011 8:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Oh man now you have me worried. As long as Inuyasha isn't in an accident and get amnesia completely forgetting about Kagome,than I'm fine. But damn you have me intrigued about what you are plotting for them.
[Report This]Date: July 03, 2011 8:13 PM
Chapter number: 44
Title: The Careless Days of My Youth
Oooooo! Dulce de Leche! I love that cake!
Date: July 03, 2011 8:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Sounds good I like Sango already.
Date: July 03, 2011 8:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hmmm...Well, this definately shows promise. Cant wait to see where this all goes to. Great start.
Date: July 03, 2011 8:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Lucient is so special... because he's read this AND the next chapter muhahahahaa. This fic is awesome, and I'm so excited to read the rest of it. I've waited TOO long for you to put this one out! Mwah......Luc
Date: July 03, 2011 8:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
hmmm interesting,yet another story.Well i wanna see where this goes b/c u are an awesome writer.update ASAP onegai?
Date: July 03, 2011 8:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
this story is really awesome! I've only read the first two chapters, but it's really fun :] it definitely caught my attention btw, how old is kagome? if you haven't chosen yet, you shouldn't make her too old.. it'd be kinda weird.. XD
Date: July 03, 2011 7:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
There must not be a rule againist workers and boss at her store. She is the owner so I guess she's got it like that. How old is Kagome? Ant way that car sounds so cool. I want one maybe not black but I take what I can get.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
hell yes! a new story. *can't wipe huge smile off of face* you never seem to run out of ideas, do you?! i love them all and i just know this fic will be another of my faves.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I love the sexual tension there. They want eachother so badly. It's a beautiful dance, like pantomime momvement. How the hands of the people are so close, you can almost see electricity between them... but it's just thin air... a phenomena. I can't wait for more.
:)
Date: July 03, 2011 7:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
wow. not that many dare write the story where kag's the one who's got the years on her while inu's the kid! how old is she suppose to be anyway? write more!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Holy shit, this is already hot! UPDATE, CHILD! Btw, you forgot(sex) to add in(lotsofsex) what Kagome's age is,(addsex) update soon and(addsex)be sure to(giveuslotsofsex) tell us(aboutthereallykinkystuff) what Kagome's age is^^
Date: July 03, 2011 7:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I LOVE this new story of yours. So far it's really good, and I thought Kagome's silent musings was so funny. This sounds like the beginning of a great thing. I can't wait till the next chapter. This is a new one on my list of favorites.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
This is so good! And I can sense lots of sexual innuendoes comming up.... WAH! I'm so exited! Hurry up and update please!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
KIKI!!!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!! OMG OMG OMG!!! YOU ROCKED THAT SHIT CHICK! This fic has already blasted off and only on teh second freakin chapter! I'm so sorry about not being the first to review.... being grounded bites ass... also, ARIGATO ARIGATO ARIGATO!!! I AM SO HONORED TO HAVE A FIC DEDICATED TO A NOBODY ME!!!! I KNOW YOU'LL LOVE YOUR FIC WHEN T'S TYPED!!!! I LOVE YOU!!! HAHAH!!!! Well I'd better go now... I'll write another review when I get home... using the schools computers to do this is highly unusal of me... and quite sneaky! HAHA!!! YOU ROCK!!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I can tell already that this story is going to be a winner!! I love it!! Especially with Kagome being an "older woman". I can't wait to see where you take this one!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Very cute story. I'm anxious to see what happens next. How old is Kagome? I see you like working with a black-haired Inuyasha. Not my favorite view but, that's just my opinion. I read alot of your stories. You are one of my favorite authors. This is the first time I was able to catch one of your stories near the beginning. I not a good reviewer, but I'll try to do better.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Wow... Poor Miro. I've been waiting for a fic like this. He always gets it so easily. I loved this chapter, can't wait for the next, HB :D Luc
Date: July 03, 2011 7:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Girl, keep coming with the stories! I love the concept of older woman, younger guy and definitely seeing Inu in human form. YUMMY!