Date: July 03, 2011 7:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
YAY more chappies! *dances* i love this fic update ASAP plz?..oh yea how old is kagome anyway????
Date: July 03, 2011 7:51 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
wow, is sango actually into inu? or, is she gonna try and make miroku jealous first? or, is she really just friends with inu and thinks/knows miro is a big perv? i'm so confused. man, this plot is brand new for you all over the place. : )
Date: July 03, 2011 7:51 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Ohh that must hurt Miroku... I like it still though. Damn that statutory rape law...at least in this story
Date: July 03, 2011 7:50 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
well, now i'm even more confused about sango. and damn if inu isn't already whipped. lol. keep up with these updates. your on a roll!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Wait a minute is Sango falling for Inuyasha. She can't be can she. So if Kagome 23 and Inuyasha is 17(atleast he will be in a few what days,weeks). That means their 6 years apart. That could work I know couples that are 7 years apart. Athough they might what to wait till he's 18. You so it's leagal.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Okay, I'm a little confused. Is this a Sango/Inu fic, or Inu/Kag? Or is all this Sango liking Inu thing just a part of your great overall story plot? Do tell... Aside from the confucion, GREAT update, I LOVE this story, my new favorite... I can't wait for the next update!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:48 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I love the almost love triangle between Miroku-Sango-Inuyasha. That's certainly different.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:48 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
InuGrrrl!!!! Awesome plot!!! You know what, I know all too well what Kagome is feeling. Although I was 21, he was 17 and nothing happened...I didn't encourage it... I sure wished something had happened. Sorry Kags...it looks like you are going to jail!!! Mwahahahaha!!! Sango's interest in Inu is an interesting twist. I sense that Miroku is going to have to be a bit more forthcoming to win her over. With Sango and Kikyo wanting gorgeous black haired InuYasha, they could really mess things up for Kag/Inu. So many potentials....love how you keep us guessing. Although I am dying to see what comes next, I know that the writing needs time. I look forward to the next chappies. As always I remain... Truly yours, QS.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:47 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I so love this fanfic I wonder what is going to happen next now that kouga is in the pic ple update next chapter soon
Date: July 03, 2011 7:47 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I LOVED that chapter, it was too cute. Wow, that was a close one with Kag and Inu in the store back there. And now Kouga's in the picture... lol. I really love this story, but everytime I read those Sango and Inu moments I hold my breath. I know it's part of the great plot, and I know that Inu doesn't like Sango that way, but I'm starting to feel really bad for Miroku. I mean doesn't Inu realize that doing the those little things for Sango like kissing her on the head, and cheek, and hugs and all that will either make a girl uncomfartable if she doesn't like you, or make her fall for you? I don't know, but I do knwo that I LOVE all thoses close Inu and Kag moments. Once again too cute, and I find it funny that Inu is even younger than Kag's younger sister Rin the story. Too funny... Anyways great update, and I can't wait till the next! Great work, keep it up!!! ;
Date: July 03, 2011 7:46 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OOHHHHH! Kagome fallin for younger men now. Ha ha ha! I feel bad for Miroku he broke the rule but still. Sometimes when you like someone a lot you forget that there are rules. Inuyasha and Kagome have. Does Sngo like him I mean she does kinda act like she does. But she noted that Miroku was himself or was that just a friendly concern. Oh well I'll find out so.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I feel that this was a great start for a story. The first five chapters are wonderful. Hope that you update soon! EK!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
What a great start for a great story. Love it! Please Update SOON. P.S. Love YA!!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OMFG! Sango did not just do what I think she did! HAHA!!! I can't believe you! But I know things will turn out right... or maybe not... I know how things went all wacky in Suicide rain... hmmm... Oh well. :P You rock anyways! AAHHH!!! BEING GROUNDED FROM TEH PC BIT ASS!!! I NEED TO UPDATE BOTH MY FICS!!! AND I DON'T HAVE TIME!!!! AAAHHH!!!!! AND HOLY SHIT!!! THERE ARE 30 SUM FREAKIN REVIEWS AND I'VE ONLY WRITTEN TWO!!!??? WTF!!!???? CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP!!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
HAHA!!! Take that! You stupid MM non-notification of my favorite author bull! I, Sharlene Witt, have written my 3rd! *Holds up fingers* Review! Beat that! KUKUKU!!!AMAZING FIC CHICKY!!!! YOU SO ROCK!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! HAHA!!! *Quickly rushes to type another pointless review... you prolly don't even read these hehe*
Date: July 03, 2011 7:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
*Crawls helplessly to her computer chair* Hello again!!! I am trying to make up for the damn reviews I never wrote!!! I'm sorry if this is scaring you, kehe, but think of it this way... I'm getting the hits up. hehe. Also... this gives me an excuse to use for procrastinating... I don't wanna write anymore chapters for HBL... Having writers block... need juice!!! And POCKEY!!! *Grins* Yes... lots and lots of pockey....
Date: July 03, 2011 7:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Okay... I promise that this is the last one... for now. I just feel so terrible about not getting the chance to review for a fic that was inspired partly by me... LOL please forgive me!!! *Bows down* I'm not worthy... I do promise that you will love YHS2!!! It's the least I can do for such a great author... though I've no idea why you would even want to read my junk. LOL Thanks again sis! I love ya! And keep up the awesome work! This fic is getting quite interesting... and extremely tense. LMAO
Date: July 03, 2011 7:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
*Looks nervous*Oh wow it's my first review to ya!*puppy eyes*U don't mind do u? AHHHH KAGS GOING ON A DATE WIT KOGA SHIT! I'm goin kick kogas ass for my yash okay lady lady. lov ya LadyWolf P.S. coolness oh yeah shar shar was on ya mind I know she loves it!
Date: July 03, 2011 7:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Wow... you know, the "bros before hoes" thing is hillarious. But to tell you the truth, I love my friends, but my woman is my world. She's the one who's been there for me through everything, even things they just wouldn't understand. This is really well written, Kiki, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how you're able to change the character's complete personality like nothing flat. You're totally gifted. And I feel awful for Miroku. And Inuyasha's a damned dick. How come he can't see what he's doing to his friend?! And at the same time, on a side note, I have to re-write my fic now, cause some of the stuff has been pretty similar, so my highschool fluff fic is going to be a little later than expected. And since it's going to be a cakewalk, I'll be working on, but not posting the OTHER one that you liked so much. Anyway, honeybee, I'll talk to you soon. *yawn*.... Luc
Date: July 03, 2011 7:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Inugrrrl you are doing it again. Twist Kagome older... How are they going to get together... Poor Sessie is human HAHAHAHAHA I love it... I love them all. Don't forget about your other stories...
Date: July 03, 2011 7:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Kehe, very nice chicky... Screw that. OMG THAT WAS GREAT! Though this whole Sango likin Yasha thing is kinda freakin me out... haha. In a good way I guess... no wait... yeah let's just go with that. haha. *Sighs* Inu's adorable... and Miroku's dead sexeh. hehe Koga... I'll get back to you on that one... *GRINS* Nice work hun and I can't wait to read the rest! You've gotten so many hits already too! Haha, just goes to show ya... nobody can beat InuGrrrl hehe. Love you lots, Shar-Shar
Date: July 03, 2011 7:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OMG ur are so getting me hooked on this story lol.jeez kagome made a really stupid choice *sweatdrops*.Well i think ur doing awesome and hopefully u'll update ASAP.Keep up the great work Inugrrl!!! ^.^
Date: July 03, 2011 7:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Wow... the way Sango unnerved Inuyasha is hillarious. I know Sango's going to be hurt. :( I feel the worst for Kagome, though. How she wants to, but can't. Man, have I been there before... I don't know what my thing was with older women when I was younger, of course, my intentions were not as pious as anyone else's. And oh ho ho Sesshomaru, buddy, here's some advice. You're in waaaay too deep. lol. Loved it Kiki, as always. I guess I should get my lazy ass to work on MY fic, lol. Luc
Date: July 03, 2011 7:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hello there: I like this story alot and it kinda hits home. I am a woman who has been married to a younger man for almost 5 years now and we are doing great! Age is just a thing to us. He is 25 and I am 32. Keep up the great work! Looking forward to more chaps! Take care.
Date: July 03, 2011 7:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
poor inu, poor kag, poor sango, poor "roku". heh, poor sessh, cuz he's gonna be the prey. mwahaha.