Date: July 03, 2011 3:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Oh my bloody freakin gods! Do you have any idea how fucking hawt you made Inu and Miro look out there!? AAAAHHHH!!!! It just makes me wanna become their own personal cheerleader! HAHA!! And I hate htose preppy little weirdos! They hate me too though so I have bragging rights. kukuku. hot-diggity dog chicky... lmao did I just say that!???
Date: July 03, 2011 3:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I LOVED this chapter, now I REALLY can't wait for the party, I know that's gonna be GREAT...
Date: July 03, 2011 3:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
NOOOOO! Mirkou you pushing him in the wrong direction. Ok I like Sango and all but I think she meant for Mirkou and so does Inuyasha. So maybe a little heartbreak will be Mirikou clue to go for it. Kikyo I don't like her so I really don't care. I feel bad for Kagome's cousin thought she just a freshman and this is probably her frist highschool crush. I remember mine and it did not end well. I was upset for awhile but I got over it. And isn't it ironic that OUT OF ALL THE FINE ASS FOOTBALL PLAYERS KAGOME LIKES INUYASHA THE MOST. Even if she doesn't know it him. Which gives up another point when are they going to meet. And why has Sesshy said everything else about Inuyasha but his name.
Date: July 03, 2011 3:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I hate gavin rossdale.... but I love your fic, Kiki! OH MAN I wish Kagome would have heard Sessh. And I know Rin's loving every bit of that. I love that Miro's an FB player. He's a lover not a fighter, like you saud in SMC, but he needs to kick some ass. :D rawk.... Luc
Date: July 03, 2011 3:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
YES another update,ur good lol.well loved it like always hopefully u'll update ASAP.:D
Date: July 03, 2011 3:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I was thinking (which is always a dangerous thing for me.LOL) and since you seem to enjoy incorporating songs into your stories that compliment a particular situation in the story, how about "Vacation" by Simple Plan for Inuyasha to Kikyo?? Then maybe she will take a hint?! It was just a thought I had bc she seems to be totally oblivious to his cruel actions towards her!! Poor Inu is just so irresistable that every female with hormones seems to want him!! What's a guy to do??I can't wait until the party!!
Date: July 03, 2011 2:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
love the way u incorperate songs into ur fics and they always fit so perfectly anyway really loved the chap me being a big sports fan and all :)
Date: July 03, 2011 2:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OMG who was it at the end? was it Inu?!! damn the suspense is killing me lol.update ASAP ^.^
Date: July 03, 2011 2:50 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
ooooh, how dare you!*lol* just leaving it like that.*lol* love the fic! please update soon! :)
Date: July 03, 2011 2:50 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
ooooh, how dare you!*lol* just leaving it like that.*lol* love the fic! please update soon! :)
Date: July 03, 2011 2:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hello there: I love the way you put an evil grin on my face because of your cliffies. Can't wait to see what will happen next with Kagome and Inuyasha. Keep up the Awesome writing! Take care, Christal
Date: July 03, 2011 2:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Someone enjoys making messes. I'd love to see how clean this one up....Good stuff, girl, good stuff!
Date: July 03, 2011 2:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Who is it!!!???? *Puts on best pouty face* Tell meeeehhH!!!???? LOL Kiki you big baka meanie... person. LOL naw just playin. I loved this chappie! Go Miroku, I think he's finally getting somewhere kukuku!!! Kikyo, you go to hell biatch! LOL *Sighs* Alright.... now time to get back to my work. WHEEE!!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 2:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
WWWWWHHHHHHHHYYYY? Must I be like this. They both at the bar come on please let the nexty chapter be when they meet. Please. I understand you have to move obstacles out of the way but come on. Some Sango found out avout Miroku but their still the issue of Souten andher now really having a crush on Inuyasha. But can you not he is sooo sexy. Rin thought so too. Wait till she finds out that is Kagome's highschool boo.
Date: July 03, 2011 2:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
This is fuckin HOT!! I love it!!! PLEASE update soon, such an EVIL place to leave it, but still good all the same...haha..Can't wait for more!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 2:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Man...there is a giant face to face wtf coming, I just know it. I never leave my drink, because who knows what could happen to it? Literally. Man, I didn't read this forever, but now I regret that. Well, sort of. It's nice to read a fic when it's finished, no horrible waiting. So, now everyone's met so it will be an even funnier wtf when they run into each other. Big double take. I always found football scary because there would be huge sweaty guys trying to break each other's bones. Man....not attractive. Anyways, update soon, chica!
Date: July 03, 2011 2:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Oh god pleaseeeee let Inu and Kag get it on in the next chapter. Don't let Kagome back out of this. I want to see them together, age be damned!!!
Date: July 03, 2011 2:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Either Naraku is not all that evil in this story or he just wanted to get at Kikyo. Ok let me review Rin has found out about Inuyasha beind Souten crush and Kagome's. Souten realized Inuyasha doesn't like her like that as well as Sango. Kouga didn't say what they were fighting about so Sesshy doesn't know about Kagome and Inuyasha relationship. And now Kagome say no again. She needs to stop playing with people emotions. Or did Inuyasha say it. I find out in the next chapter.
Date: July 03, 2011 2:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
well you ended this chapter no better than the last one!*lol* you enjoy that don't you? not that i blame you, it makes the reader drop everything when that email notice comes in and read the new chapter. at least that's what it does to me. ;) i will now wait with baited breath for the next chapter...
Date: July 03, 2011 2:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Hehe, another great cliffy! I just can't seem to get this grin off my face. You are soo good at what you do, and it just doesn't get any better than this. I am looking forward to the next chapter and thank you for the fast updates. You're the bomb! Your fan, Christal
Date: July 03, 2011 2:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I LOVED chapter 14, I was so happy when I found out that you updated with 2 chapters, today. It really made my day. Your story is just to awesome, I LOVE it, it really is my all time favorute. And don't let any of the reviews that say they don't like any Inu/other girl pairings, besides Inu/Kag. I know this is an Inu/Kag fic, but they cant be together without a world of conflicts first. I mean come on, incest... Of course there's going to be problems. I understand where you are coming from, and I salute you. I mean I don't usually read fics about a 16 year old, and older person, but for your story, it fits. Which is what makes it soooo GREAT. I really do LOVE your story, and I can't wait for chapter 15, I hope it comes out tomorrow!!! GREAT, Wonderful writing, i LOVE your work... ; ) *hugs,and kisses* -TrinityK(Krystal or Wereblood)
Date: July 03, 2011 2:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Goddamnit. He was just in the zone. ::sighs:: Damn you Souten and your teenage hormones! I was just glad that shit was powdered sugar! ROFLMMFAO! I didn't want him to fuck Sango, although that would have been a weird avenue to go down. Damn... Inu, bro, I feel your pain. I've been there and done that. Whew. :D hugs to my honeybee
Date: July 03, 2011 2:34 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Im like, Dayyyuummm, what you mean, you and me cant happen? Kuso! Personally, I like younger men, always have, lmao. And the longer the hair the better, so I dont see nothin wrong with the age thing here,BUT, the small town thing? The kuso can really hit the fan sometimes. LMAO ,but who cares anyways! This is fan-fic-world, where anything goes. LMAO...I need to take my nutty bunz to bed, I been up way too long. But I be waitin on the next chapter tho. heh.
Date: July 03, 2011 2:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Holy shit... this is the most twisted story I think I've ever read! HAHA! The love triangles are so bloody confloosing! But I love it all!!! WHEEE!!!! I love this chap! Kukuku
Date: July 03, 2011 2:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Ahem... as I was saying before I was rudely interrupted... *Glares at the clock and school bells* Why do people on this f-ing site have to be so freakin moronic!? I swear! Who gives a damn if there's a lot of really cool Japanese words mixed in with the story!? And who cares about the whole age thing or the football team!? Just enjoy the story dammit! If you think you could do a better job at writing this fic, then you go right ahead and do just that... but I swear you'll regret the day you crossed me! Especially since Kiki is a very very talented and respectable author on this site; not to mention my dear friend! So get a life loser! It's people like you that take all the fun out of reading great fics such as this one, by thinking too much into it! Just enjoy it and keep your idiotic criticisms to yourself... *Grumbles* Ass-holes these days… is it difficult to just enjoy something every now and then!?