Date: June 29, 2011 6:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
amazing. You are such an amazing writer! BUT DAMNIT KAGOME! and DAMNIT INUYASHA!! do better Pweez!!
Date: June 29, 2011 6:26 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
It's so fucking cheesy, so you know I love it. lol.
Date: June 29, 2011 6:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Gyaa~ I get scared whenever I read this fic of yours XD the plot is just so wickedly evil and I have no idea what's going to happen next o_O; ... Damn Inuyasha... is he.. really considering Souten?! I now officially hate him... I know I'm supposed to hate the "Inuyasha shoulder-devil" but I adore mine so I'll just hate Inuyahsa in general XP ahahahha.. I want to congratulate you for a story well done! Also, congratulations! The edge of seventeen almost has 500 reviews! woot woot! update whenever you can!
Date: June 29, 2011 6:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Kags better hurry up n do something bfore Inu's feelings for souten gets stronger. I seem crazy, but i alwasy seem to get jealous when he's kissing souten n not kags! Plwease hurry update! I wanna see what's gonna take place when he goes to work l8ter...n what's gonna take place at the dance. I love it!!!! UPDATE!!!
Date: June 29, 2011 6:23 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Omg, I know Im annoying and i HATE begging, but this story...god, im like crying at every chapter. Now im re-reading the first ones, and im crying soooo hard thinking how it was before and how Kags FUCKED UP BAAAAD!!! Pleeeeeeeeeease, update this! At least until the dance, or just until Inu gets to the store, I know something'll happen when they see eachother, and i sooo wanna know what kags is gonna do to win him back!! OMG, PLLLLLEEEEASE!!!! I really hate begging this way, trust me, this is killing me inside, but Im so deep inside this story, I really dont give a shit! Please, please, please, update this thing, THIS IS MY FAAAAVE STORY in the whoooole world!! *cute smile* now, pwease update...? ok, ill stop bothering you.......PS: Your story is HAWWWT!!(If u hadnt noticed...lol) Plzz update IK OBSESSION
Date: June 29, 2011 6:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Thanks so much for updating this story. It couldn't have come at a better time. Well, hurray for Rin and Sess for there romantic evening, and a special hip hip hurray for Miroku and Sango for working through it. They are sooo stubborn. Ahhhhhh now for our lovely Kagome and Inuyasha moment that is going to be comeing up. Hmm, the other thing is that... I feel really wierd reading Souten and Inuyasha, it feels kinda like he's too old for her. He is a man and she is a girl. But doesn't that make it ironic? Kagome in this fic IS the adult and Inuyasha is the kid. Uggg, I hate it when I do this...tooooo much thinking. Well as always, you did a fantastic job..I will chat at you later!!!!
Date: June 29, 2011 6:19 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Miroku and Sango are so cute! Things like that really do happen in real life. Passing notes is the ultimate high school therapy. "Do you like me? yes? no? maybe?" lol. I'm still gushing over Sess's and Yash's brotherly relationship. I'm also liking the Souten and InuYasha thing going on even though I'm dying to see how in the world is Kagome going to get him back. That dance will be full of drama Anyways, great chap and I wish you luck and prosperity.
Date: June 29, 2011 6:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
damn, you have built up this dance so much that i might explode when it finally gets here. i have no fingernails left! *shows hands* woohoo for naraku and plans to destroy kikyou! but, this inu/kags rollercoaster is my fave. *basks in the light that is kiki's fanfiction*
Date: June 29, 2011 6:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OMG,that was so sad,i cried..darn it.Ok can i tell u something? i really dont like inu and souten together..LOL.Poor inu and Kag,i hope they get back together soon.*Sniffles* great update,sad and depressing but great.Update soon ok? I HATE SUSPENSE lol.^_^
Date: June 29, 2011 6:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
*screams and cries* My heart is breaking with every word. Goddess, it is. I can't get over the relationship, or the familiarity. This story is a violin that plays for me and I hate it and love it with a passion. Your words reach me so deep sometimes I'm afraid I'll drown in the amd never come out. Appreciate this one, because even though I have always loved your stories, and even when they spoke to me, none of them reached me on such a level that my soul inside was changed. I think I may be changing because of this story because I can see... I can see where it all came from. All of it. I love it. Thank you for writing this, it's absolutely amazing.
Date: June 29, 2011 6:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
This was like a powerhouse. This chapter right here shut down the gate, man. It was by far the best in this fic at this point. It had emotion, passion, sorrow, and was heavily soaked in angst. I was holding my chest and was on the brink of tears for real. That was so beautifully written and I can't wait to see what happens.
Date: June 29, 2011 6:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
OH! OH OH OH NO!! OMG!! GAH! they better end up together! i will hunt you down and and... MAKE you have them end up together! i love this fic but they better! O_o please? lol
Date: June 29, 2011 6:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
T_T i wanna crrryyyy... and u are perfect!! the perfect author to me! i love ur writing style, plot, drama, and all the crazy stuff!! u r perfect in all the readers' eyes!!
Date: June 29, 2011 6:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
ahh this story is so angst and sooo good!!! i've been waiting for this chapter, i was so upset with the ending of the last chapter because i want to see how inuyasha and kagome reacted once he went back to work. i really enjoyed this. is there much of the story left??
Date: June 29, 2011 6:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
omg! the angst, the semi-cliffie of the big dance! err, im going crazy. this is by far one of my favorite stories.(hehe almost all your stories are.) im going crazy waiting on all your stories to update. ^.^ but ty ty for taking time out of your busy busy life, and working through your writers block. it makes my day when i get an email saying Inugrrrl has updated a fic.
Date: June 29, 2011 6:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Intense. It's like a crazy roller coaster ride. That last part of the chapter, with the different languages asking for forgiveness was so amazing. Just... wow.
Date: June 29, 2011 6:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
AAAAARGH that was so clooooose!!! Grrr I understand Inu Yasha's feelings, but why did he say noooo?! AAAAAARGH! >.< *sigh* well update soon please!! I want to see the dance!! =)
Date: June 29, 2011 6:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
I am crying buckets right now, you are just such an amazing writer that it would be hard as hell not to feel such raw emotion. Please continue with your works of art, they are the best and I will always keep reading!!! Can't wait for more, update soon!!
Date: June 29, 2011 6:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Awwww man!!! I jus fell real hard! the love i got for your stories keep making me fall! The part when he went work was so spectacular!!! I love it. pwease hurry update!!
Date: June 29, 2011 5:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Oh, man! You had me almost in tears in the last part of the chapter. Very well-written and Inuyasha is very mature. Just can't get enough of this story KiKi. You still RAWK and will always be up there with the best of them. Thank you for the updates and for your time and passion. Take care of you! Your fan, Christal.
Date: June 29, 2011 5:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Awesome, awesome, awesome! I love this fic! I find myself enjoying the angst. I can't wait to see how everything pans out. I still don't want Kagome and Inuyasha together in this one (and this one only) so I think I'm getting what I want. Great update keep 'em up!
Date: June 29, 2011 5:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
You are the cherry on my sunday, the apple of my eye, the salt on my Micky D's french fries, the peanut butter in my rieces pieces, the ranch on my salad, and dammit the frosting on the friggin cake. You made my day woman!!!!! I love the chapter. Why the hell cant she just come out to everyone and say she loves him? Why can't she go to Rin and ask for legal advice....? Do you want to know why??? Because this is a godamn angst story and nothing is supposed to go right until the damn end...right? I am supposed to bang my head against my desk until the blackness consumes me and then wake up to read the chapter all over again praying that I read it wrong to begin with...right? Right!! It will just make the ending all the more sweeter.....Right again I am!! Ahh bloody hell, where is the taquilla when you need it? Well, Sesshy is calling me to bed now. Gotta go, can't keep fluffy waiting. You take care, and you know I will review ya later.
Date: June 29, 2011 5:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Why oh why did you do that(Sobbing hysterically)!!Inuyasha and Kagome belong together they shouldn't be apart (another sob). Who cares if you have made any grammatical mistakes, this story is so good it's not noticeable. I love that you updated so quickly, your story just rocks
Date: June 29, 2011 5:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Inuyasha grew up... Gaaah! Why do people have to grow up, anyway?! T_T The agony of reality... Bah.. I mean.. why do they have to wait for Inuyasha to be 18 anyway?! (stupid laws XD) They're exceptionally in love! The government should just leave them the fuck alone! Gah.. they're both so stupid ~_~; I wish things would work out... if not.. if kagome and inuyasha separates... and if inuyasha goes with souten.. I wish Inuyasha and Souten would die in a car accident XD ahahahha... ^_^ lmao.. anyway.. thanks for the fast update!
Date: June 29, 2011 5:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Sweetest Sixteen
Dolphin's cry is one of my favorite songs... I love Live, they're so raw. They're like an electric spark on an open wound... weird... it makes sense to me. The chapter was great, and it seems as though your writer's block is clearing away. Mine is too. I have 4 chapters written to my new fic. It looks like it'll be about 8 in all, but it's a start. Thanks for being there for me.