Date: May 28, 2011 9:00 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
Okay, here I am!!! Sorry for the delay on this review lol. Onto said review:
OMFG!!! This story is so flippin' awesome! Is it just me or is InuYasha a pro at the Art of Seduction? lol He's just so smooth, but then again Kagome is so innocent. I think that's why they belong together...perfect balance, you know?
Oh gosh, I want Kikyo to get her revenge and hopefully, it'll end up benefiting Sesshy.
Hmm...based on Tsubaki's words, I thought that the truth serum she brewed would have some awful affect when Sesshy gives it to Kagura, but then again, I'm pretty sure she doesn't have a death wish. I guess I'll find out her meaning in the next chapter ;) LOL Sometimes I feel kind of bad that Tsubaki tries and fails to recapture her youth :(
Oh wow! Kohaku den lost his mind! I don't condone his psychosis lol, but I guess it's true that you should be careful of how you treat people! I feel so bad for Rin T.T
I have a question: I remember reading (I think in one of your review replies) that the pairings in this story are 'canon.' So does that mean it's Sess/Kagura? Or is it Sess/Rin? I was never quite clear of what canon pairing means for Sesshomaru.
Anywho, thanks so much for this update; it was truly awesome, as is anything you write :p I've really missed this story ;) Thanks again, Grrrl!
Date: May 28, 2011 3:23 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
I almost forgot what this story was about so I went and re-read the whole thing. One word: AMAZING!
The latest chapter: I loved that part when Inuyasha ordered a salad as an appetizer XD So funny! Cant wait to read more! :)
Love, Maya
Date: May 27, 2011 2:21 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
Is this a zombie story? 'Cause I swear to god it came back from the dead. HA! Nice chappie. :)
Da Grrrl Says: Quiet, you! :P Leave it to jenny to come in here stirrin' up stuff!
Date: May 26, 2011 2:27 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
I really enjoy this story and the fact that you stray away from what other authors produce ^_^ I just started writing InuYasha fan fiction and I'm still trying to find my niche, but reading your stories helps to put me in my creative mood :) Hope you update soon
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! Dare I say that you SHOULD branch out and not be afraid to go OOC or introduce plot lines that differ from the norm. Who wants to eat pasta everyday when there's steak just around the corner? LOL. Good luck with the writing and thanks for the review!
Date: May 26, 2011 4:01 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
So happy to see an update on this one! Great chapter, looking forward to the next!
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you muchly! And you won't have to wait YEARS for it -haha. :D
Date: May 26, 2011 1:51 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
Pt 2 of ramble lol -_-'
Yo, Rin is pathetic - but damn, that's reality on how addiction - any type - can make u do. I loooove Kohaku - he ain't a pansy ass no more, but that shit he did is fucking insane - tho i dont feel a thing for Rin. She needs to pull her act together, and the reason y i think Kohaku is right to do that shit is cuz of the silent shit she be doin him. Ha - well well.She needs major help - seriously o.o
In conclusion to ma ramble lol, i love that u use slangs that our country used/ am familiar with. I mean i kno there'd b similar things even tho the culture is different but reading the hood tlks is nostalgic. xD Makes me feel closer to this fic since in the Caribbean (where i live specifically) aint no New York.
Kudos Grrrl! You kno i love this - hands down!! I'm still in shock that u updated THIS fic!!! haha
Da Grrrl Says:
Rin is a hot mess, I admit, but it's her childhood that has her so screwed up. her self-worth is in the toilet. And tru dat; addiction is nasty biz. I'm happy to say I've never used drugs, but I know many who have and it's not pretty at all.
Ah, the slang is because this is such an urban story, taking place on NYC streets and such. I don't really talk that way in real life (a few words here and there), but it's fun to play with it in this story.
Yush, I haz updated it and plan to update it a lot more. I want to retire, so that means working toward it. 0.~
Date: May 26, 2011 1:42 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
Well, you made my day - literally!
I was out all day but blv me - MPR stayed on ma mind most of the day. Then i got home and just had to re-read the whole thing... That was a rush!!! lol
Re-reading it, made me realize how much Kagome is sooooo immature and innocent!!! She's so green, that corrupting and manipulating her is easy as one - two - fucking three! This chp tho with her giving it to Inuyasha was good - at the dinner. I LOVED the line she spit to him saying "...So talk what you know, or try something really impressive like shutting up" ... That line was the shit! But who am I kidding - i love this Inuyasha!! It's so good to hate him, yet so bad to love him. smh... But the speech he gave her there was sizzling! I love how he's digging his ditch - saying how it's just to get info out of her for his bro! He's jus in utter denial and it's so cute and pathetic at the same time. His sense of false awareness in that field is fun to watch - especially the circumstances he put himself into. Omg i jus love them!!! (But again, Kags so EASY lol... I love how u blatantly have her filled up with so much naivety)
Then we have Miroku... who - unlike Inuaysha - is completely aware and open with his new found changes. Seriously, can Miroku b any more amazing?! He's seriously running competition with Inuyasha in ma heart. I'm still in awe at what he did for those kids, and him actually moving away from his pervy ways and calling Sango a cab - and even coaxing another kiss out of her? Ah-mazing and sooo KAWAII!!!
I love Kagura's strong persona. But it's even more interesting when u see the real them - emotion filled. Kagura is by far the strongest female who can stand her ground to anyone in my opinion - and that's why i love that girl so much...
Then Sesshy, that arrogant piece of sexii ass!! aaauuhhh!!! I love his cocky ways and am eager to see if he'll pull thru with gettin Kagura. I'm at a loss at what could happen. Both of them have such strong personalities - there's no way the norm can happen. Both of them "gets what they ultimately want."
Da Grrrl Says: O snap! bubbles is in da house! :P
Kagome is a little immature, but not overly so. Remember, she knows nothing about InuYasha other than he kisses like a dream and looks hot like fire. He hasn't exactly been forthcoming with her and he cursed her out and called her a zillion names. Can you really blame her for acting the way she does? But now that he's asked her to be his girl officially, things may start to change between them. She just has to get used to his tude.
InuYasha is a good guy underneath all that wreckage. He's in mourning, and now with this little assignment, he's in a tailspin. He's attracted to Kagome, but he hates that he is, that's why he's such a jerk. He takes his frustrations out on her, going from hot to cold. When, or if, he'll get it together is anyone's guess.
Miroku is a good guy, but also a bad guy. he's womanizer, and a drug dealer, but Sango is making him see the world through new eyes. He feels guilty and ashamed when he's around her because she's just so much better than he is. So he's kinda falling hard and really taking a minute to think about who an what he is.
Kagura IS strong,a nd you'll see how much in later chapters. her past is fucked up, but she's making it her own way. Seeing her lose it is rare, but like perfection, she went right back into the zone and got ready for her date. lol.
Sesshomaru is a LOT of fun to write. I don't like having the brothers enemies. It's always irked me to death that RT went there. So I unravel her shit on the regular by making them care about each other. And Sess is naturally arrogant, so seeing him act up is normal. :P As a couple, I like Sess/Kagura more than Sess/Rin, but in this one anything can happen.
Date: May 24, 2011 7:01 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
Oh.my.god.
My mouth dropped when I realized this story was updated. I thought that this was one of the stories you labeled off as permanently incomplete. This is really exciting. Honestly. I've always had a thing for mob stories, I think everyone does.. I mean, really - who can resist them. This may be extremely creeper status, but I read your blog alot, and when you mentioned that you'd be updating one of your oldies, I got so excited. I just didn't expect it to be this story, but I'm SOOOOOOO happy it was. Thank you so much for the update. I'm definitely looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thank ya, thank ya, thank ya! (:
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Abby! It's been ages since I updated this and I'm really trying to catch up on super old stories. This was always a personal fave and I didn't want it to die off without being completed. And you're totally not a creeper -I'm actually flattered that you pay attention to my blog. :D
I should be posting another chapter soon (different story, tho), but I hope it will keep ya entertained!
Date: May 24, 2011 6:47 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
I'm really happy you updated this story! I really like it and enjoy reading it. The story line is well thought out. I'm not surprised Kohaku is doing that to Rin, she keeps stringing him along because she knows how he feels about her. And Inu with kags seems to be heated up, the Miroku and Sango aspect seems to be picking up. I'm excited to see more.
Da Grrrl Says: Hey Brit ^^
I don't know if you read my blog, but I wanted to thank you for that review left for Treasure on the Tide. I accidentally deleted that fic a week ago. I was able to re-add it, but your review couldn't be saved. However, I did get a chance to read it and I'm working on a new chapter. I didn't know it had been so long! Eek!
But anymewho, I'm glad you liked the chapter and I so appreciate the review. This hasn't been updated in ages, so it's nice to see that a few people remember it. :D
Date: May 24, 2011 2:00 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
WoW... I've waited forEVER for an update to this fic, and I'm glad that I waited. :) Very good.
Da Grrrl Says: CA! I didn't know you were still in here, girlie. :D I plan to put this story in "regular rotation", so you won't be waiting eons anymore. Thanks for the praise. ^^
Date: May 24, 2011 1:21 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
Damn. I love it when Sesshomaru gets all regal and boss-like on someone's ass. He's never been my favorite character, but when he cracked the whip on Tsubaki, that was so much fun to read. So's this version of InuYasha xD His food stamps crack had me in stitches. Seriously. Nice way to say "Just order whatever you want." I love it...and I'm REALLY loving how Kagome's been snapping back here, too. You've never really made her the "lay down and take it" type, but here more than ever she seems to give off that NY girl 'tude.
I really like Mir/San, too, and can't wait to see how they'll pull through if/when things get complicated because of Shippou's plan for Kohaku and Miroku's job. I actually feel SO bad for Kikyou, too, so here's hoping she sticks to all four of those assholes. Renkotsu especially. Ugh.
Rin on the other hand, needs help >.>
Really interested to see where it goes. You have NO idea how excited I was to see this one get an update. Its one of the first fics I read when I came to Abi (and yeah, its definitely been a while because it was last updated around that time, too xD), and up there as one of my faves. If this is the fic you mentioned on Redemp, can't wait to see what else you have in store now that you've figured out a new direction to take it in!
~Am :D
Da Grrrl Says: AM!!
I knew you'd be happy to see this one back. Every time I work on it I think of you and remember the review you left about liking the Tanisha part. I was like, "Awwww! She's so awesome! *gushgush** xD
Sesshomaru is a lil demigod. He's totally badass in this cool, understated way. Unlike Yash, who will wild out and you KNOW you're on the list, Sesshomaru will kill you quietly and then go have a glass of wine. lol. It was a load of fun for him to get all "sama" on Tsubaki -ha!
IY/K: They're so much fun to pen because he lives to push her buttons. Deep down, i think he likes her, but he's not ready to admit all that yet. So it's more fun to steal kisses and work her nerve. Kagome knows she likes him, but she'd not trying to take his crap, either. But, as you see, she often gives n because she likes his lips. LOL. Will this escalate? Well, maybe.... definitely. Haha.
Mir/San: He's such a playa, but he's got a little heart. S ango, though, is bringing it out of him overtime. Like, he's never met anyone who was completely selfless before, so she amazes him. But their story gets twisted, so it will be interesting to see if they stay together when all the different shit hits the fan.
Kikyou: I abuse teh shit out of her in this, don't I? That's for years of dicking Kagome around, bitch! LOL. But really, she's a victim here and Ren is a psychopath with a split personality. Look how nice he was to S hippo, then he can turn around and beat her down. *SMH* Will he get his eventually? Maybe. <.<
I've been working on this forEVER, and was still just on the Sesshomaru part. But then I buckled down and banged all that out over 2 days. It was actually fun to delve back into this 'cause it's a fave. And yeah, this is the one I mentioned on redemp. The plot I had is still in place, but I thought of an interesting -and sick- twist for one of the characters' side story that will nicely tie into another's. It will be a BLAST when all the pieces fall into place, trust me.
As always, thanks for the awesome review. <333 Not many people did, but this story is so old I'm surprised anyone remembered it at all.
Date: May 24, 2011 8:33 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Standing at Ready
MPR = Most Powerful Read
I love all the characters and how everyone is shady. I hope the story continues quickly. Inuyasha is such an adorable ass. Miroku is a sweet heart in design. But how dare you... -o-* >.> thou she did deserve it. for being cunty. Keep it up heffie o.o* will expect more.
Da Grrrl Says: (o*?) She had that coming. You're also a Kau! *o.o* And stay away from my mate. I'm watching you! (-*?)
Date: January 23, 2011 8:44 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.
Great story, I'm surprised I haven't come across it yet on absolution.
I hope you update soon, because it is really a must read!
Date: November 14, 2010 11:32 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Switchback
Wow, you're really becoming one of my favorite writers in ff, which is great considering they're aren't many "stand out" writers these days. Whether you intend to or not, your stories often have this "love it or hate it" element and either way they always leave me with something to say. :)
I love the urban vibe to this story. It's got a realistic feel to it. I even find myself attached to some of the characters. Rin, mostly, probably and how she's pretty much the outcome of what could have been Kagome had things went differently. I can't help but feel attached to the trouble girls. Haha. I hope you update this! I'm really eager to find out what happens next! I smell a love triangle (square?) coming on, maybe?
Oh well, happy writing!
Date: October 14, 2010 7:53 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Switchback
Você tem talento incomparável, um verdadeiro dom no que você faz. Você tem o poder de transportar seus leitores para um universo que você criou, literalmente, com uma fina ar.
Da Grrrl Says: What a lovely thing to say! Thank you so very much.:D
It makes me really happy to see the stories being enjoyed. I know I need to try and update more often, but I'm seriously working on that. Thanks again! <3
Date: October 12, 2010 11:24 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Switchback
Please Update I Love This story!
Date: August 28, 2010 11:29 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Switchback
I just have a thing for fanfiction with a little urban theme to it. I don't know why I like reading fanfiction with drugs and violence so much, but it's just so addicting. I'm a little sad that this was the last chapter posted up, but like all your other stories, it was a joy to read.
Date: July 13, 2010 11:37 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Switchback
I love this story! Is there going to be more updates or is it on permanent hiatus?
Date: July 10, 2010 9:40 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Switchback
Rereading; yesh I am, hehe.
hugzz
Date: June 21, 2010 12:53 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Switchback
oooh, just the story to lift my day up. FAILED my computer exam and have been thinking about it the whole day. This story is amazing, hope you update soon!
kimiko
Date: June 12, 2010 6:44 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Switchback
Hey...its Jin again! I just wanted to say first off... I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES!!!! It's pretty hard to find like the very best writers and I consider you one of them. As I got older I have been searching for stories that take me into the authors world and you are one of the few who can actually do that. I have fallen in love with almost all your stories and I just wanted to ask about the ones lik G.F.E and this one ,Money.Power.Respect. I mean I have read some of your current ones and even though I love those too these just keep popping into my mind. Will you ever write another chapter for these or is it writers block...or what will happen.If you want to comment back you can always write back to me on email. babygurlreree@yahoo.com. Thanx
Date: March 11, 2010 10:51 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Switchback
Kinda sad that ths is the last chapter that you have posted. Really want to read more!! =) *hint hint*
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 11, 2010 10:13 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Test the Limits
InuYasha...*sigh* There's a reason Kagome has come into your life. You should let yourself fall for her like you want to but won't admit. You might think it's betrayl, but Tanisha wouldn't want you to be living the way you do.
Dude...I work at McDonald's...and if Miroku came into my store and asked for that much food, I'd be on it in a second. Miroku would have his food SNAP! Well, within like 6 minutes because they don't keep THAT many nuggets and cheeseburger stuff in the cabinets... It made me smile to see him doing this for the kids.
Great chapter, Grrrl! I really think you should finish this story!! =)
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 11, 2010 4:49 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Transparent Bonds
That last part has me laughing... "Please, Kagome." "Call me sweetpea." Hehehe. Good chapter, Grrrl!
**ShortieJ**
Date: March 11, 2010 4:26 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
Poor Kags!!...now it's like she's being stalked....
**ShortieJ**