[Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 6:25 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
I'm back from the dead and I get updates!!! Woo hoo!!! (I still have Seasons Change and both of C-Note's new ones but I got to PW and this...)
I liked this chapter...I don't know that I so much like Rin but I like this chapter. Sango and Miroku are getting a *little* bit cozier. Too bad the shit's gonna hit the fan when Sango finds out what he does for a living. Oh! I loved the quick allusion to Inuyasha in the Inuyasha story. Hilarious!!!
Can't wait to read more!!! (Six days of no internet is killing me!)
Author's Response: JENNY!!! You're back from Vegas :P You'll have to tell us all the gory details! ^_^ Thanks for the review! Rin is <.< not a nice girl, lol. Sango and Miroku are >.> interesting. But that's all I can say :P
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2007 11:34 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
Ooooh, drama, drama, drama!!!!!!!!! SQUEEEEEEEE!!! How I love it! I wish that I knew what the note said though... *looks around and whispers* Tell me! I won't tell anyone, I promise! 'Gome has a yankee jacket, lol. Do you have one too? Now I want Rocky Road. *pouts* Scary movies are also a cure for any problem. :D
Happy Writing!
Author's Response: Tina!!! Thanks for the review :P I have <.< 4 Yankee jackets and >.> 6 t-shirts/jerseys. I'm a Yankee kinda gal :P Don't worry, he's gonna tell her what was in the note, lol.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2007 10:12 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
well, leaving the chap there wasn't very nice, kik. XD ahhh, what does yash think he's doing?! he is gonna get a big piece of kags mind if he isn't careful. lol i wonder if he'll be able to handle this mission he's been given. he doesn't seem very patient. (understatement) i hope you update soon. sorry about taking so long to read/review. i had belt tests and other crap with school. i have been dying to get the chance to catch up. i started having withdrawals. hope you are doing well and that i hear from ya soon. take care!!!! *hugs* -c
Author's Response: Court!!! I'm gonna e-mail you soon. How was your Mama day?? Hope ya gots lots of good stuff :P Yeppers, Yash is in for it, but underneath it all he's a good guy, lol. <.< Tho it's hard to see that at the moment!
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2007 12:17 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
I'M LOVIN' THIS STORY.........PLZ TELL ME THAT SHESS SND RIN WILL BE 2GETHER AT THE END.........ONCE AGAIN I'M LOVIN' IT......UPDATE REAL SOON......
Author's Response: Mara! Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it! I can't give ya any info on the pairing >.> but I hope you enjoy the story anyway, lol.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2007 12:07 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
Heh, in a phrase... Whose zommin, who?
Great chaps here, My Onna! Hugggzzz....
Author's Response: Tee hee! I love that song, Onna!! Thanks for the review!
Date: May 16, 2007 5:55 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
OH, RUN AWAY KAGOME!! RUN AWAY!! Inuyasha needs a good chase. What happen was sad but, does he really thing his dead wife would really want him unhappy? I mean if you really love someone you want them happy...He's just a asshole...I guess thats why we have Kagome, huh? I hope he realizes it pretty fast and doesn't stay a a-hole long.
Author's Response: LOL! You're so hard on poor Yasha! He's actually a good guy, just bitter and self-loathing. I think he knows Tanish would want him to be happy, but that starts inside. So until he can forgive himself, he's doomed. Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 3:27 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
Omg! Miroku is Sango’s hero! I loved how he saved her! ^-^ Knight in shining armour! But she didn’t have to lie about why she was in the bad part of town. I’m sure Miroku would have been very supportive about the subject. Though you most likely wouldn’t give Miroku Sango’s younger brother’s name to him since Miroku would know Kohaku, or know of him. Hmm… evil thinking Kiki, hehe.
You made InuYasha seem so evil but soooo hot! He’ll be a tough love for Kagome, but I think everyone knows she can handle it. I can’t wait for the next chapter! Gooooood luck :)!
Author's Response: Nat!! I swear, anytime I pen Miro/san I think of you! I know I said I'd do a Miro/san one day, and guess what? I finally found a plot for them. It's based on a movie I saw and I like it. Definitely fits them better than Inu/Kags.
Now the story. No... it's not time for sango to mention Kohaku. She's still dealing with issues and the subject is a sore one. But they have an interesting side story and that's all I'm gonna say :P
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 7:02 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
Sweet, another update.
I love how everything's going. Rin is perfectly bitchy (I love that Sess is with Kagura AND Rin in this one!) I really felt sorry for Kohaku ; ; I want him to end up with Rin!
Again, loving the short, but interesting interaction between Sango and Miro. Miroku is a perfect liar =p
I feel sorry for Inu, though. I can understand where all the hostility is coming from XD
Now, what's gonna happen with our favourite pair!?!?!? They're both so sexy in this fic =p Update soon!
Author's Response: You love that lil liar, don't you???? LMAO! Miroku is great. Rin is a total crab and Sess is a playa. But Inu (you know I love him the most) he's so mixed up. But it's on and poppin now ^_^
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 4:09 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
waaaaahh Poor Kohakuuuuuuuuuuuuuu T.T
Poor Kaguraaaa!!!! T.T
and yyyyyyeshh yeshhh Inu and Kaggie angsty and sexy game is about to begin *¬* Omg Kiki-neechan this fic is getting very very interesting!! awesome as always girl!! XD
Author's Response: Maria!!!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY, MARIA-NEECHAN!!!! I hope you're gonna do some kinda partying tonight (or this weekend!) and i still wish I could have sent ya that cute guy in a box :P Thankies for the review! I felt bad for Kohaku too, but <.< he needed to get it lol.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 12:33 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
Let the games begin....I really hope Kagome gives Yash complete and total hell. I really like Yash in this story, and what happened to him was horrible to say the least. But, the fact is, that he's a complete and total ASSHOLE at this point, and I would surprisingly rather see Kagome drop kick than kiss Inuyasha at this point. Sexy as all hell (MAN are you good at making him that, LOL), but a JERK nonethless.
As for Rin and Sesshomaru, PLEASE tell me that he's not playing himself here. Rin is a sympathetic character....but I really don't like her here. And Sesshomaru can and should do so much better; Kagura just seems like the better match for him in this story. But, I will give Rin credit for one thing: she finally stopped stringing Kohaku along. She definitely could have been nicer about HOW she told him the truth, but, nevertheless, she did him a favor by telling him point blank that she was just using him.
I will definitely be looking to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Another awesome review from one of my favorite readers! ^_^ Thankies! You're right (as always) Yash is a dirtbag, lol. Hot and smexy <.< but a serious dirtbag! Right now, he's got this dual life thing going on and there will definitely be ups and downs. But kagome has backbone (even though she's young and inexperienced). I don't think she'll take his shit unconditionally.
Sessy, Rin, and Kagura. I sooo can't say anything about that, lol. But it's a bumpy ride :P And I felt badly for Kohaku too, but like you said, he had to get told. >.> We can only guess how he'll react when/if he learns about Sess. O.O
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 10:51 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
*claps* Another awesome chapter! Had me going there, i though ship was in trouble or something!
I kno Rin's past might of been...harsh, but i still hated the way she treating a kohaku, the only guy that treated her like she was a lady...Tho i would of dropped him since THE sesshomaru is in da picture! ^_~ I jus loved the way sesshy acted around rin's place--tho i have kno idea why. lol.
Again... Inu, inu, inu! He really can put up a good front, ne? After seeing kaggie again, he completely changed! Tho u left it at a cliffy "v.v" Is all good >.> And the song? I LOVE IT! Since i kno a lil french, i'd b singing the french part alot! Tho trust me when i say i hate french >.< It's getting boring now! But but but! I do do love love this chapter!!
Who am i kidding, i always love every word of every chapter of every fic! lol, i love doing that detail thing =p
Oh and many thanx for that review u gave me *hugs* It meant alot to me for some reason =)
Update when u can, and happy writing as always! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks girl! <333 I loved the first part of your oneshot :P It was really cute. My teachers would have had the cops there >.> but still. Nice smut!
Sessie is terrible, lol. He was just shocked by how bad Rin's building was because he's a total snob.
Inu is great and he knows what he's gotta do, but it will be interesting to see how long he can keep it up.
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 8:17 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
Well dayum. Inuyasha says he doesn't want to have anything to do with her, but he's not acting close to reluctant!! I loved it, and I can't wait for the next Kiki!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Tinii :P Right now, Inu's playing a role >.> or at least he thinks he is. His thought process will tell the truth :D
Glad you liked it!!
Date: May 15, 2007 3:58 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
Yay!! Great chapter as usual. Umm yea...don't like Rin :) sry, she just screams pity me all over her and she needs to take a hike. lol I'm starting to feel really bad for most of the women in this story, it seems like everyone is getting conned.
Anyway, amazing job, it still keeps me on the edge of my seat, so don't you think about stopping now :) lol
and can I ask you something... are you Indian, like Hindu, or are you friends with Indians? The songs that you've have been putting up on your site are from are Hindi, and I was just interested.
Thank you again! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Pa Print! I'm glad ou liked it. I wrote this on an all nighter and made some boo-boos, forgot to add the download and a bunch of other stuff, but I knew I owed two chaps over the weekend and couldn't get to them because of work. I wasn't entirely happy with it, but here it is :P
Nope, not Hindu :P But I <333 some of the music. I'll listen to anything with a great beat - and I do have a couple of Hindu friends. ^_^
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 3:53 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
Cool, let's hear about the manga with the jewel and the schoolgirl! Does she have great legs and a cute boyfriend, huh huh huh huh huh huh huh?
Ahem...the preceeding was a rant brought to you by Drake on a sugar high...sorry :P. Anyway, awesome as always. I'm confused as to if you're leaning for Kagura or Rin to snag Sessy...hm...
Author's Response: LOL! I just got the new manga (the english one anyway) it *would* be the first Kikyou so-called dying thing -.- But it was good nonetheless, so I had to pay tribute! Kagura and Rin >.> Yep, everyone wants to know about that one, lol.
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 3:47 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
I'm interested in this story but was it an error in writing or did Yura say the wrong thing? Yura said that "he gave me a Benjamin to deliver that" but Ulysses S. Grant is on the fifty.
Author's Response: Nope, entirely my fault. I wrote this after being up 24 hours straight and jacked it up, lol. The bad thing? I was looking at a $50 bill when I wrote this and STILL wrote benj. To add to that, I forgot to write the name of the song and its performer, forgot to add the download. These are the things that happen when I write with no sleep at all. >.<
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 3:24 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
WOW,that was frikkin HOTT! Inu's sure doing a good job of acting.
Author's Response: Sheeeeena!!!! Glad you liked it. I love this Yash :P Now that he and kagome are thrown together, thy'll be getting a lot more screen time.
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 2:59 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Night of the Hunters
YES!!! that was my first thought to the last line! and miroku is such a charmer. for a dealer he's got a sweet spot. i'm not so sure about sesshomaru though. playing two woman at the same time is one sure fire way to get your ass burned. and rin is a bitch. talk about shitting where you eat best. she needs friends not pimps. you've really woven some great characters here.
Author's Response: C-note!! Thanks, girl! MPR is actually fun to write (when I'm motivated and not pulling all nighters), so I'm happy you liked them. The men are all asses to some extent (ALL of them) and Rin is horrible. You want to talk about treating someone like garbage! >.< Even I felt sorry for Kohaku! But we'll see a lot more Yash and Kagome now and things should start progressing quickly! Yay of quickness :D
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2007 7:18 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
Nice update! Inuyasha being assigned to Bedtime Stories will be quite interesting...Neither Kagome nor Sango want to have anything to do with drugs yet they're about to get involved with guys that are *heavily* involved in the drug scene. Hmmm... Irony!
Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2007 12:17 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
Inu!!!!!!!!!!! *sreams* He's gonna fall for kagome, and fall hard he will! ^_~ Am soooooooooo Happy this was updated, tho i thought inu would go straight to kaggie when she was alone...*sigh*
I still cant tell who sesshy will end up with!! ARGH! I mean he said it himself...he really likes kagura, but then there's rin who wants to kno him better...and and...*sigh* i wont even hurt my head with that ight? ^_^ But Rin;s past was harsh, i mean am suprise suicide hasnt taken ova at all.
This fic is like a freakin puzzle jus waiting to b solve, my theory is that seeing sesshy and inu are so mighty, when inu falls for kaggie and they happen to b kicking it off, bank would try to hurt kags to get to kagura and hell with pay when inu gets his hands on bank!! YEAH! but hey, that's jus my theory...
And if that person is bank in the end, speaking to shippo...
I jus hope he gets out, and it's a human, ne? Shippo is a youkai! Kick his ransy arse ship!! *grins* Glad for this update, kiki...Oh and PWEASE go on ED and read part 1 of my two- shot...Pwetty pwease!! *puppy eyes* I hope i see a review!
Date: May 13, 2007 8:16 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
I think just hugh grant and Drew Barrymore...You can hear both songs on youtube..Just type Music and lyrics it will give you a whole list of them!!
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2007 10:54 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
Aaahh Kikii I LOVED IT! The plot thickens... ^_^ I love the fact that Yash has to become a regular costomer haha. I absolutely can't wait for the next!!
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2007 9:04 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
Pure entertainment! I love this!
All of the characters are really well developed and just too cool for school =p
But poor Rin, I felt sick when I read her scene =(
I can't wait to see what happens with our favourite couple, and Sango and Miroku. Interesting!
Update again soon ^^
Date: May 12, 2007 6:25 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
I know i already just left a comment..Don't think me a werido, lol..But i watched Music and lyrics last night and like 2 of their songs made me think of this fanfic...Way back into love and meaningless kiss..
I've been living with a shadow overhead
I've been sleeping with a cloud above my bed
I've been lonely for so long
Trapped in the past, I just can't seem to move on
(Begining of way back into love)
Just a meaningless kiss
It wasn't suppose to end up like this
Just a meaningless kiss
Oh oh
Just a meaningless kiss
We knew it was wrong but we couldn't resist
Just a meaningless kiss
Til I fell in love
With you
(Chorus of meaningless kiss)
Author's Response: OMG! They DO sound like they fit into this story! That's so wild :P thanks for posting! The next chap is being written right now so you might see it tonight. Do you know who sings these?
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2007 2:40 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
WooHoo... UPDATES!!! You know I love em. :P And the plot thickens... dun, dun, duuuuunnnn. Lol. Lmao with those two in the kitchen, lol. Inu-fuckin-Yasha as Martha-fuckin-Stewart, lol... can see that now, too - droopy ass shorts and a Newport hangin out his mouth, lol. Great chap Onna.. cant wait to see what all else ya got up for it. Hugzzz
Author's Response: Onnnnna! Thanks for the review! (Though I always give you sneak peeks) I think the kitchen part is my fave too. Imagine Yash all nekkid except for hanging shorts and a cigarette?? GAH!!!!! 'Licious! <333
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2007 2:03 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Beware of the Boys
Kiki-neechan!!! *_* updateeee!! and a very veryyy good one!! CLIFFY CLIFFY!!!! I WANT MORE MORE MOREEE!! poor Kohaku!! T.T
i still want Sesshie with Kagura XD (is trying to apply some hypnotism act to Kiki ;P)ohhh girl!! a LOT of ANGST is comiiiing (or cuuu....g!! ajajajaa) Thanks for the update nee-chan!!
huggles***
Author's Response: Maria-neechan!!!! *hugs* Yesh!!! A cliffy and <.< I can't tell ya who Sessie ends up with, but the whole thing will be very eventful! Bring on the angst! <333