[Report This]Date: January 28, 2007 10:40 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel
I just love this chapter, It's great. Talking about "Kiss of Fate" I love how Kagome got her first kissed, Kagura is going to kill her. You know our "Boo" emotion are so tied up now it's like rush hour traffic on Friday night. I really like how you had Shippo and Kohaku went back and forth on what they like about each girl. Rin not giving Sesshomaru's number to Kagura is going to come back and bit her in the ass...right, anyway Ms. Thang thanks again for updating. Till next time later!!
Author's Response: D-Gurl! I'm happy that you liked this one. It was struggle for me for some reason :(
I must have re-written it 3 times. Gah!
[Report This]Date: January 28, 2007 10:10 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel
I really enjoyed the chapter. Update this story and others really soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm definitely updating this week so be on the look out ^^
[Report This]Date: January 28, 2007 8:46 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel
Woo Hoo! And entire fiction just for me!!! Okay you get out of timeout free-ONCE! Great chapter. I'd forgotten how much I liked that song. I like the daring side of Kagome. She's gonna get her head ripped off but I like the daring side to Kagome. (Now if only Yasha would pull his head out of his ass that would be nice but then he wouldn't be your hanyou, now would he?)
The story's coming along and (as you know) I love it!
Thanks for the gret chappie, girl!
Author's Response: Jennnnn! Darn you :P Making me agonize over this chap for 2 days. If it wasn't for you, I would have been lazy and waited. I'm happy you liked it and I even threw in a kiss for ya:P *sneaks back to the men's room in spelling 101* LMAO!
[Report This]Date: January 28, 2007 5:38 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Something He Can Feel
poor kagome...poor yash. why do i have the feeling things are going to get even more complicated for the two of them and they are gonna get thrown really close together and not be able to handle it.
Author's Response: C-note! I know, they're just... bad off lol. But I'm sure brighter days are ahead :P
[Report This]Date: January 07, 2007 9:45 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
oh hoho. nice. i love how you left it off. as for inu-fucking-yasha, that is too great. his shit talking in this chap was hilarious. you are outdoing yourself on this fic. i love it so much. as for rin and her, uh, problem, this outta be interesting. ha, i'm off to hikari now. ttyl.
Author's Response: Beta-babe! You and Deb kill me with the Inu-fucking-Yasha, lol. He's such a butthead, ne? ^_^
[Report This]Date: January 06, 2007 1:08 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
ohhh, suga! ewwww, shippou and kags! yucky! now to see how they all react to each other, kagome, the deals going down, the back stabbing and the blackmailing!
Author's Response: I agree about Shippo <.< but... you know I like to test the waters :P
[Report This]Date: January 06, 2007 6:45 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
Now see so not fair just when I was just getting into the story- BAM a brick wall, just kidding, loving this story too. Yeah, I'm pleased to see that Inu was mated to a sista, I've never read a story that has depth with him being apart of the urban community, I like it. Too bad she had to die though or rather the baby, it woulda been cool to see ya put face and features to a asian/hanyou/black baby. Got me stumped on who Sess is going to be intrested in being as that he showed a little in both Kagura and Rin. Ah,seems like Kagome's innocence is going to be tested if she gets involved with Inu, I hope she can heal him. Hey, although it's rarely done sometimes you can turn a ho around and even into a housewife, take my word for it hhehehe. See ya next read.
Author's Response: This was a great review, lol. One day I do plan to do a lil prequel about his life before she died, just to feel curiosity. But that'll be awhile. In the meantime, we get to see worlds collide ^_^
[Report This]Date: January 06, 2007 4:45 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
...... AND THEN WHAT?!?!?!
[Report This]Date: January 05, 2007 11:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.
OMG! That was so sad i almost cried*tears*
great good once again.
Author's Response: Thanks Bobbie :P It was sad, but it doesn't stay that way >.> sorta lol.
Date: January 05, 2007 12:55 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
I totally love this story and I am so interesting in how its gonna play out! Rin and Sessy or Kagura n Sessy?! How will Inu and Kagome get together!! so awesome!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it & a new chap will be up soon. Honestly, I think this is the most fun I've ever had writing a story.^^
[Report This]Date: January 02, 2007 7:58 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
So about this cliffie thing? NOOOOO!!!!!!!! Why must you be evil? I think you do this just to torture me. (Because the world revolves around me).
*sigh* Great update. I can't wait to read more....Damn you Kiki....
Author's Response: Tee hee! Good things come to those that wait! <.< sometimes.
Date: January 01, 2007 6:26 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
That was evil. I reading and enjoying myself than the rug was snatched up from under me leaving my hanging....like a cliff. lol Great update. I've missed MPR because its such an orginal InuYasha fic. Anyways, great chapter and I wish you luck and prosperity
Author's Response: LOL! Like a cliff :P You're outta hand. I was trying to review Heartbreakers and the review thingy kept playing me -.- But awesome update. I am Loving your Xmas one. Just awesome!! HNY!!
[Report This]Date: January 01, 2007 4:00 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
Great cliffy. Looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for thee review! Next chap will be up in a couple ^^
[Report This]Date: January 01, 2007 10:49 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
ok, am guessing that lil evil cliffy you left us means Suga is kagome? Well, i hate the cliffy, yes...but i got a good laugh with inu! ^_^ I jus keep lovin him more n more! Oh, yea, thanx for the card even tho it's a late thank you and happy new year!! =)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! ^^ Yesh, evil cliffies, but a new chap will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: January 01, 2007 2:38 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
LMAO!!!! This chapter was funny as hell. I laughed the whole time! The Jaken's balls thing......there are no words, LOL. And even better...I'm just as confused as I ever was about who Sessh will be paired with. I have no idea, and it's great. And I can't wait for the next chapter when I hope that Inuyasha and Kagome finally see each other. Inu's cracking a lot of jokes (and very well, I might add), but when SESSHOMARU willingly allows himself to be the butt of jokes just to hear you laugh......you must be really bad off. I hope things are about to get better for Inu soon....or at least until Kags finds out about his job, LOL. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Ms. Goddess! Thanks for the great reviews. This chapter was actually very fun to write. I guess I was feeling a little comedic ^_^ I hope to have more chaps up soon. I had killer block, but I think I'm back!
[Report This]Date: December 31, 2006 8:50 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
Yep, definitely laying on the cliffies, arent you Grrrl? :P It's starting to pick up! LOLOL, I HOWLED when I read about Sesshy licking old balls. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! That's disgusting!!! :P :D So there IS a drink called a screaming orgasm? *raises eyebrow*
Happy Writing!
Author's Response: 'Tina!!! Wasn't that hilariously gross? I could just *see* them! HAHAHA!! And yesh, there is such a drink 0.~
[Report This]Date: December 31, 2006 5:34 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
This was a really good chapter. I love the last part the best, "Eyes of gold widened as she walded on the stage" Now the fun will begin don't ya think. REVIEWRS NOTE: I hope you and your family and friends had a safe and happy holiday. ;)
Author's Response: D-gurl!!! Happy New Year and thanks for the review!! Yesh, next chap Inu will see/meet Kagome, Rin is gonna hit the stage and there will be a lil' drama -it's good for the soul!! ^_^
[Report This]Date: December 31, 2006 4:24 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
heyyy. it's me again... i love EVERY story/one-shot you ever came up with... however, the lack of updates disappoint me. wait, i don't mean to offend you or anything so let me re-word that... i wish you'd update sooner. do you know that everyday i check your site for your updates...? *sigh* well, you must be really busy, huh?
anyways,, Suga is kagome, right? and wow, rin sure does pack a punch, ne? *snickers.* miroku is such a lech. :p well, i hope to see you updating more often... ~may you be prolific in your writings.~
HaPpy NeW YeaR! :]]
Author's Response: Bewildered! Thanks for the review! So sorry about the updates =\ I was telling my forum that I've had KILLER block, just awful! This is the first piece I've been able to complete in ages. BUT I have two more updates that will post really soon, so I'm getting back in the swing of things! Thanks for sticking it out ^_^ HAPPY NEW YEAR!
[Report This]Date: December 30, 2006 11:57 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Tell Me a Bedtime Story...
Oh, now that was good, Onna. Lmao @ the guys, too. 'I'm Inu-fucking-Yasha.' Even tho I gotta keep in mind that he is rather jaded, gotta love Inus attitude.
And getting interesting here: everyone seeming to show up at the club at once. Cant wait to see where all this goes...as well as whats Inu-Fucking-Yasha (snicker) gonna do when he gets a loada 'Suga'. And tho the chap is shorter, it was still great. Update when ya can, My Onna. :D
Author's Response: Onna, you know the drill! He's "Inu-fuckin-yasha" and he don't take no mess :P
[Report This]Date: December 16, 2006 12:42 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Intertwine
I read this story for the first time and I really enjoyed it. Who will the couples be beside Kagome and Inu. I hope it will be Sess and Rin. I like Kohaku but not for Rin. Update soon as well as PBE.
Date: December 06, 2006 8:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.
LOL nah.
Date: December 05, 2006 4:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Love. Hate. Tragedy.
Nice story...but I hope you know what youre doing =/
Author's Response: Keh, don't I always? 0.~
[Report This]Date: December 05, 2006 4:28 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Intertwine
Oooh, it's starting to get interesting! Next chapter they meet, I bet! And poor Rin...she's a prostitute/drug-user/stripper. Rough life, it must be... At least she has a friend like Kagome. I liked Kagome's take on the West Side Story song. :D It was funny! And poor, sad Inu...I bet you are going to make him all better, ne Kiki? ;)
Author's Response: Tina!! I know, we must fix Inu, but it won't be easy! ^_^
[Report This]Date: December 02, 2006 10:59 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Intertwine
Awwwwwww. The end was so sweet. I wasn't expecting it. I almost cried off that one. I love this story. I can tell drama will be on the one way. Especially with Sango and Miro. Anyways, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.
Author's Response: Sexy C! Thanks for the review! Yeah, gurl, the drama is definitely coming but we had to get the smal stuff out of the way first. More characters will come into play later, but most of the main ones have finally been introduced. Dontcha just love Inu tho? So loyal!
[Report This]Date: December 02, 2006 9:24 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Intertwine
yes, yes you can Inuyasha! Kagome will save the day! I loveee this fic. Updates soon sweetheart!
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it!! But Kags saving the day? <.< Um... LOL!