Date: May 23, 2009 6:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Noble End
I was listening to a song that fit this perfectly as i read it. And i'd never heard it before and choose it out of almost 2 and a half thousand songs on my library, most of which i've never heard. Talk about coincidence. But i like your style
[Report This]Date: April 08, 2007 2:14 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Our One Last Chance
*wow* i mean i dont think that even begins to cover it. . that was nothing short of amazing!
[Report This]Date: February 06, 2007 9:55 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Our One Last Chance
*sobs* oh that was sooo sad. but definately worth the read. I know it's hard getting reviews for a non-inuyasha story. but DAMN gurl that was amazing. I loved how you tied together the first and last chapters like that. :)
wonderful job.
[Report This]Date: February 04, 2007 11:45 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Smell of Spring
*squuueeeeee*
oh how I love how you write.
pfft. you stress for nothing m'dear.
another amazing chapter.
The soundtrack really helped the mood. =)
[Report This]Date: February 02, 2007 8:43 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Blood-tipped Cherry Blossom
Seems about right. It's hard for me to imagine that she'd never reached the big O before... but they say some women don't.
I could read into him so much. It hurts... it hurts...
[Report This]Date: February 02, 2007 8:29 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Smell of Spring
I'm suprised with how realistic I found it to be... it's not just smashed. You're doing an awesome job with this...
[Report This]Date: February 02, 2007 8:12 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Winter
Goddamn, I'm so hooked... so jealous of your talent... I'm blown the fuck away! I love how everyone has all these interesting names... Jacks... Jax... mortal combat? :P
[Report This]Date: February 02, 2007 6:51 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Noble End
Holy shit... What are you asking me for tips for? This is superior to anything I've done. I can't write action like this, slow though it was, agonizing... painful... beautiful. Poetry in description...
[Report This]Date: February 01, 2007 3:40 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Blood-tipped Cherry Blossom
VERY nice and I loved the last bit of thoughts. *swoons* so powerful, especially when you know that he did. Ax, you're doing such an awesome job with this. I'm so proud of you!
[Report This]Date: February 01, 2007 3:36 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Smell of Spring
Very good chappy -powerful. I enjoy the way you did the lemon. It was enough to let my imagination run and the aftermath was unexpected. Lovin' it!
[Report This]Date: January 29, 2007 11:30 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Winter
shit, you floored me with his age, but you did a great job depicting his personality. everything from his gait to his eyes; gray. even his sleep is gray, when it isn't filled with red and when he sleeps he dreams of the very thing he sees everyday of his life. death.
[Report This]Date: January 29, 2007 11:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Noble End
whoa-you've got all the cobos here: romance, blood, gore, torture and you pull it all off nicely as a one-shot. i'm curious to see how the other two pieces are going to work in.
[Report This]Date: January 26, 2007 8:28 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Winter
Wow! The first chapter was pretty intense and very dark. I must say that I am glad you are continuing to write this, I cant wait to see where this leads us. Its rather exciting. Thanks for the read. Until next time, take care! Neddi
[Report This]Date: January 26, 2007 12:26 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Winter
WOW! This just gets better and better. I love dark fiction and this is fucking yummy! Entreri is so cool with his shit. I love his thought process and the scene about his mother was intriguing. Now I have to wonder who killed her -him or his father's "fast approaching fist". This fic is fucking awesome, Ax. I'm excited for the next chap. I can actually picure the scenes unfolding, and though I'm sick for InuYasha, a good original is a real treat!
[Report This]Date: January 26, 2007 12:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: A Noble End
Like I said in my other review, I loved it! This is a VERY intense chapter and even though you see it coming, you still "feel" it when he's finally put out of his misery. Very original, and I love the fact that you didn't shy away from the violence. Very powerful work!