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Reviewer: SHORTFRY   Signed  starstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2012 11:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

This was a lovely oneshot. I can't believe people flamed you saying this was rape -__-" It's not even remotely close, even to me I don't feel like it's dark enough. Anyways, beautifully written little lemon :)



Reviewer: Khrystyne   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: September 23, 2012 9:32 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

I didn't think this fic was bad at all. I guess I can see where the controversy could come from but I don't really believe it. I thought it was really good, maybe it's because I have a special appreciation for alpha Inuyasha. Great job!

Da Grrrl Says: Trust me, the hoopla had more to do with my not allowing a bunch of strangers to censor and dictate to me than it had to do with actual content. It was blown out of proportion by very petty losers and I still stand by my work, regardless. Thanks for the nice review!



Reviewer: Keitolatte88   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2012 1:09 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Just what I wanted to read, I must say I like it because it's different from the usual loving and tender Inuyasha, I like both sides of him. ;)
I almost laughed when I read some people think this is rape. I'm glad you didn't listen to what they said, your stories are beautiful :)

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, doll. :D You would be SHOCKED by how people reacted to this story. You would have thought InuYasha gang-raped her then hacked her into bite-size pieces! Really strong (and stupid) reaction for "fiction" about two characters that don't exist. lol.



Reviewer: Lynnia   Signed   [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2012 5:02 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Wow this is a good one. I love the darker side of InuYasha, and the rougher side of Kagome/InuYasha's relationship... because it just fits to well in this story.



Reviewer: fansick   Signed   [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2012 2:34 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Wow hot and heavy with just the right amount of force.



Reviewer: DarkNeko   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2012 9:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Ah, I love fics where Inu turns full youkai. You don't see them very often!

Anyway, I like how you did the possessiveness and dominance of InuYasha's youkai, you have captured it well :)



Reviewer: Jin   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2012 1:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Lol WOW!! Great chapter /fic and I def. would NOT call this a "rape fic". SOO ridiculous for people to even suggest that.

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! You really wouldn't believe the frakkin' crybabies in this fandom at that time. They made such a big BS sob story about how this was a rape fic and were genuinely angry that I wouldn't call it one. Just laughable shit. But my readers always understood the method to my madness and that's why you guys are awesome. <33



Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2012 2:57 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

that's a good discipline!



Reviewer: inusgirlkagg   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2012 11:54 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Really Good! Wished there was a sequel about life after!



Reviewer: Cakemeister12   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2012 12:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Aggressive sexy InuYasha! Loved it!



Reviewer: Protostar   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2012 10:56 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

I had read this a while ago, but I'm still super excited by this story, it's such a delicate balance of domination and underlying desire/love.

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! This story is >.> "controversial" for some people, but I stand by it, flaws and all. I like a dominant, canon InuYasha and I'd like to do one more instance of him before I retire. :D



Reviewer: InuEared Miko of Darkness   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2012 3:02 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Woah! Hot lemon!



Reviewer: fansick   Signed   [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2012 12:56 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Hottttt!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks. ^^



Reviewer: Cwillia   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2012 1:54 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Still soo in-love with this story***

Da Grrrl Says: LOL. Thanks. Quite a few people would beg to differ, tho! XD



Reviewer: Rapunzel87   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2012 6:04 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

HOT!!!!



Reviewer: rai   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2011 12:24 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

I finally see what all the rave is about with this story and its not rape -______- i loved it! its rough so rough! its agreesive and you convey it so well. your writing is something

Da Grrrl Says: Yeah, it was a lot of hoopla created by people who had an issue with the way I write and the fact that people enjoyed what I was writing. It only got worse when I wouldn't readily let them label my work without a fight. In the end, I'm grateful to those assholes. Had they not been such losers I never would have created my own archive and I've never been happier. ^___^

Thanks for the great review!



Reviewer: Starr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2011 2:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Wow this was something XD loved every single word... and whoever said this was "rape" has a lose screw!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks. Glad you liked it! :D



Reviewer: JustNineLetters   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2011 11:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Wow, that was great! I first heard about your stories when I saw a picture on Hentai Foundry by Inuyashalovrr for Edge of Seventeen. So then I looked of Fanfic for you, I read your profile, saw that you'd left, and then continued to serch diligently. Once finding this site, I was overjoyed, and so far I'm loving all of your stories :D

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! :D

Inuyashaloverr is like my mom, so she's blessed me with lots of art about my stories. It's nice to know that one of her gifts got you curious enough to seek me out -and it's even better that you enjoy thefics!



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2011 12:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

The FIRST time I read this story I was blown away.  That was years ago, and after re-reading, it still packs a wallop.  I liked it then, and after reading and reviewing stories that would make this one seem G-rated, I'm glad I re-read it.  It still kicks butt to this day.



Reviewer: (Fanworks) IK Obsession   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 11:02 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Hey Kiki!! I looove this one-shot, its my fave!! Can u write a sequel? Like how Inu reacts when he turns back hanyou? Please!! Love, IK Obsession



Reviewer: (Fanworks) kagome313   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 11:01 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

*dreamy grin* I've always admire the Alpha. Kami! I so think he's sexier that way. That sure teaches kagome, ne? If only something similar would happen in the anime!! I hate it when they're both dolt! Enyway, I realize I haven't kept my wordd n review all these stories, but I did rea all of them, even the new ones I've rea now. It's just the upation I'm waiting on. I really think there should be a sequel too. But I know it must be real stressful for you write now, so I'm not gonna beg you jus yet. ^__^ I really amdmire this story. I hope to see some wonerful updation Kiki!! I'm sure that in your league, wonderful is such a big understatement. Hurry update the rest stories pwease!!!! ONEGAI!!!!



Reviewer: (Fanworks) GakiBlondie712   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 11:00 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

very good, Kiki! amazing yet again! keep it up!



Reviewer: MalevolentHuntress   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2011 2:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Hawt and sexy!



Reviewer: Littlekely   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2010 4:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

Loved it. Absoultely, Positively, Undeniablely loved it. Who ever said that this was considered rape, obviously didn't read correctly. I love your stories and your ideas. You are absoultely one of my favorite authors.



Reviewer: Deirdre   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2010 9:59 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha

I read this fic back when you were still on MM, and I loved it. I love this side of InuYasha, it's so refreshing. I mean, it really releases the annoyance you feel when watching him on the anime, thinking, man, he should be so much more badass then this. I'm so glad I found it again! (Took me about 20 minutes of navigating from site to site and finding old, old passwords).
I like how direct your writing is. It really helps me visualize the whole scene. You are awesome!



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