[Report This]Date: March 25, 2012 3:02 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
Wow!! Can not wait to see what happens next!!
[Report This]Date: March 22, 2012 12:48 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
All I can say is WOW! The scene between Kagome and Inuyasha at the end was just amazing. This has to be so far one of my favorite chapters to this story.
[Report This]Date: March 11, 2012 4:52 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
OMG!!!..Kouga!..that douchebag!..i keep reading that somehthing kagome did to kouga tha made him feel like this towards her..i can't wait to read what..update soon..bombastic fic
Date: March 10, 2012 4:45 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
The last chapter is scary :p
But I love that ^^
[Report This]Date: March 10, 2012 9:01 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Geneva by the Bedroom
IY is unbelievable here....i mean who would even think of considering the offer Kagome made...u less u r a "h*****r"...but....if u have a friend like Miroku...anything is possible..!..
Da Grrrl Says: You know... you can use bad words in reviews. I don't get offended by that stuff -unless I'm being cursed out. lol. And IY does have his reasons for the things he does. He's a great guy in this. No one really has any serious complaints about him in this one.
Date: March 08, 2012 10:07 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
Gotta re-read this again! It's been FOREVER since I have. Its like I always have to re-read a story whenever I see a new update so that everything is fresh in my mind.
[Report This]Date: March 02, 2012 11:55 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
Whats going to happen next!!!! cant wait for it!!!! man this is dark, all the secrets the beating wow, i never read anything like this and with kouga you are nailing the subject about domestic violence on head!!! nice job. Hate kouga in this one and sesshomaru is an ass ughhh he needs to get laid pronto like the plot so far it is really good keep it up XD
Date: March 02, 2012 8:36 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
awwwww :) sweet ending
[Report This]Date: March 01, 2012 9:02 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Swing Batta Swing
OMFG!!!!!! INUYASHA not the Alpha!!!!!! I started laughing to hard when I read this LMAO XD Only you can come up with something so out of the ordinary and still make it part of the character that is Inuyasha. I am speechless :X
Da Grrrl Says: Why, thank ye kindly! I always laugh at this chapter. he was just SO uncomfy and all emasculated. :P Fun stuff!
[Report This]Date: March 01, 2012 10:46 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Taking the Plunge
AWWWWW so im assuming that my wish will not come true??? man i really wanted him :p
[Report This]Date: March 01, 2012 10:22 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: If Only You Knew
WOW!! I would of never of guessed that I would actually feel sadness toward kikyou!!! I felt so bad for Inuyasha I actually wished that he could of stayed with her (I can't believe I just said that) Anywho Oh I hope Kagome lets Iuyasha in soon, If not, I want him, and experience the best sex in my life lmao :p
[Report This]Date: February 26, 2012 10:25 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
Sorry to hear about the headache, I'm glad to hear it got better. Probably gonna ramble uselessly as I always do, so I'll try to keep this short. As usual you've posted something amazing. I don't know why, but I feel drawn to this story, who've guessed it would be the first thing I read here since the invite? I've still got a LOT of overdue reading to do now that I can access your works on mobile ^^.
Date: February 22, 2012 11:58 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I wonder what will happen first... Kagome and Inuyasha fighting because he is a Tashio, therefore her company enemy, wich will lead her to probably belive he was just using her to discover how to ruin her...or Inuyasha finding out his brother is trying to destroy the woman he loves...
Not even sure this things will happen... I'm just wonderring...lol
Anyway, happy you decided to update this fic! It is one of my favorites! =]
[Report This]Date: February 20, 2012 10:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
wow so intense i could never imagen Kagome as a bitch but i guess there is a first time for everything.
Da Grrrl Says: Oh.... Kagome is pretty bitchy in this one, so the first handful of chapters will be an eyeopener. :P
Date: February 19, 2012 11:29 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I've been reading most of your stories and this one is definitely going on my list of favorites : )
Date: February 13, 2012 1:02 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
Hmm... That was some intense shit going on there... Of course I've been forced into back-to-back-non-stop Disney movies and this is my vacation from the kids' stuff. :P
Date: February 13, 2012 10:23 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
YASS!!!!! I love this chapter! Kagome whupped a stroke on Kouga!!!
Date: February 12, 2012 9:28 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I never took the time to read this story until Fan Month and I am so glad I read it. It is a very intriguing and gripping story. I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!
Date: February 12, 2012 3:45 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
Had to read this all over again and I'll say that it was definitely worth it. Omo, Kouga is freaking me out right now and I really hope Inu fesses up before Sess gets to Kag :( This is driving me up my walls. Good update! Can't wait for the next one. :)
[Report This]Date: February 12, 2012 1:00 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Make the Choice
Good lord that girl is one stuck up judgemental bitch!! Well most of the time she is. Sango had her seeing reason, and then she built her bitch-defense right back up.
I'm sure InuYasha can help to take them down though. If he can get past his temper that is. Man they are so volatile, it's constant drama! I love it!
Date: February 11, 2012 2:42 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
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(* o) All I am going to say is how DARE you make me hate my fav. I can picture Kouga to be a jerk sometimes but OMG this was crazy. I wanted his dick on a stick for this! (* -)
Da Grrrl Says: (~ >)> <--- Can arrange that.
Kouga had to get it. You know that! (^*?)
Date: February 11, 2012 8:19 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I can already tell this is gonna get messy. But I dont understand why kagome cant tell inuyasha where she works and visa versa. Inu already made her belive he was a pro but would she really be mad if he told her that she was a buisness man???
Da Grrrl Says: Kagome hasn't revealed anything about herself up until now because she wasn't sure how deeply she wanted to be involved with him. It's a common sense move if you're dealing with someone who is a "hooker" and has the potential to destroy your reputation in a very public way. She doesn't work at a sandwich shop -she's the CEO of one of the two biggest companies in ALL of Japan. Would you trust your true identity with just anyone if you were in her position? Most people won't even share their real names online.
InuYasha hasn't told her who he is because he wants to be sure this is going somewhere. He let her believe the hooker mess, but now, he's just scared to tell her because he wants her to love him for who HE is first and not based for his family name. As I've pointed out, several times in this story, he has a real aversion to all that comes along with the name "Taisho".
Now that they're definitely in love, they have the opportunity to start being honest about who and what they really are, but keep in mind that his name is TAISHO, and his older brother is in the process of trying to ruin her. Just how do you think Kagome may react to that?
I think GFE is one of those stories where many of the clues to the plot are everywhere, so reviews like this (and there are many) surprise me because it makes me wonder if anyone -except a small few- are really reading the actual story the way they should be.
[Report This]Date: February 11, 2012 12:15 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Proposition
My oh myyy!! What a bad girl she is!
"Oh, the things he could do with that if he was a nastier person... " Had me rolling!
This is a great set up for the two of them, I'm excited to see where this goes!
Date: February 10, 2012 4:52 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
How does that saying go" "Oh what a tangled web we weave. When first we practice to deceive". My stomach was in knots reading this chapter, Uggh...Can't wait for your next installment. Keep up the fantastic writing.
Da Grrrl Says: Shankies! Yes, the web is thick in this one! I'm just happy that I've been able to continue it after such a long break. Thanks for reading!!
Date: February 10, 2012 1:45 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I've just re-read this story before enjoying the new chapter and I'm so glad you've continued. I imagine we're going to be kept on tenterhooks for Kagome's reaction to Inuyasha's real job for a while, but I can't say I'm looking forward to feeling the emotional fallout. Thank you for posting this.
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you for the nice comments! I'm glad you're enjoying GFE. I know this fic has had a nasty hiatus, but I'm definitely trying to pick it up again and keep the flow intact, so thanks for sticking with it!