Date: February 10, 2012 11:43 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Sakura Drops
LOL Pussy Cream? Where did you come up with that i was laughing at the for like 10min straight lol
Da Grrrl Says: LOL. But it IS pussy cream! xD
Date: February 10, 2012 11:12 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Blow by Blow
This has really got me on edge im anxious to know what kagome did to make kouga so mad!!!
Da Grrrl Says: I haven't revealed that yet, so you still have some time. However, yeah, really bad blood between those two. >.>
[Report This]Date: February 10, 2012 1:26 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Promiscuous Girl
That was all lemony-goodness! I really liked their give and take. Seeing Kagome be so demanding is definitely new too, but good. Man did she kill the mood in the end though. Ouch. Was not expecting that lol!
Da Grrrl Says: Kat!! I owe you some mail soon. :D
This story is FULL of sex, so be prepared. xD I don't know why I went so pervy on this one, but it worked for their characters and the mood of the story. We get to see how something begins as just physical attraction and lust and develops into something important. I love them as a couple in this, I must admit. Thanks, as always, for the review! <3
[Report This]Date: February 10, 2012 12:53 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
Oooh she's rich? From investments and the like? How interesting. Kagome Higurashi, businesswoman! Very intriguing beginning, and it's only a a few sentences!
Da Grrrl Says: Kinda-sorta? xD You'll get the full deal in the next 2 chapters!
Date: February 09, 2012 7:12 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I feel like I skipped some chapters in this story....probably should go back and reread 'em...but oh well. This was excellent as always. Kouga's such a douche and I hope he gets what's coming to him. That said...I don't think he's gonna go down without causing some more damage to Kagome.
I really enjoyed Ayame this chapter too...she might not be physically showing it, but mentally she's growing some backbone! Yay!
Date: February 09, 2012 8:01 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Wicked Descent
This is really good!!! I was starting to think it was another guy that hurt her so bad but now im thinking, was it her father? Guess im gonna have to keep reading to find out. Oh yea and her dad is a serious asshole i mean really who says that kinda shit to their on kid but im guessing this isnt the last time were gonna see him.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for the reviews -I really appreciate it! ^___^
Yes, Kagome's father is a giant butthole, and you'll see him again, but he's doesn't have a prominent role like, say, Sesshomaru. InuYasha well, his identity is a bit complicated, but you probably read about that by now. ^^
Bitchy Kagome IS fun. It's a refreshing change from timid, doormat, nice guy Kagome. lol. Hope you enjoy the future chapters!
Date: February 09, 2012 6:21 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Proposition
Dont tell me inu is going to be the boy toy of a rival company. thats not good. but good story its now on my top fav fic list and im only on the 4th chapter Lol.
Date: February 09, 2012 5:56 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Promiscuous Girl
Im kinda likin' bitchy kagome, but im guessing from the prologue she wasnt always like that. I can already tell that im going to like this one so plzzzzz dont stop writing!!!
Date: February 08, 2012 8:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
SOO.. this is one of the very first fanficitions that i've read by you and im HOOKED! I love this story and beyond excited to see a new chapter.. I really enjoy your other works too, usually stay up all night trying to finish one, then hop on another .. Im lackin sleep @_@.. but yea... its worht it..
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you so much! I appreciate the kind comments. This story went on hiatus for a long while and I'm really happy about being able to pick it up again and have it flow like I never stopped. (I have to be thankful for my great memory!). Hope you enjoy the other chapters and it will definitely be updated again in the near future. ^^
[Report This]Date: February 08, 2012 4:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
I like how you made kagome the rich and powerful one cuz its always either inu or sesh and i really like the change. GP!!! LOL!
[Report This]Date: February 07, 2012 9:42 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
This "partnership" between Kouga and Sesshoumaru makes me want to shit bricks. Most stories I've read that have Kouga as the antagonist make him such a cad, but he's just a sentient douchebag in this story. I love it.
Finding an update in my inbox and reading a dose of your trademark drama was the pièce de résistance of my day.
"itachiiyoubastard" is happy to be of entertainment.
Date: February 07, 2012 6:41 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
You know I have to admit, when you posted a new chappie for this fic I was happy I couldn't wait to read it! Then when I was about to read it, I was like "Uh Oh, what happen before..." I wanted to go re-read the few last chaps, but I was going to wing it and read the new one; hoping that it would bring me back up to par before getting more lost... and you know what I remembered what had happen. Yay me!!! :)
Good chapter. I was on the edge of my seat when Kouga confronted Kags. Glad she made it out on time. And in the saftey of Inu's arms. Thanks for the awsome chapter. Can't wait to see what else Kouga has up his sleeves and even what Ayame will do since she has the job and if she'll see Inuyasha once again... Till then Huggles. :)
[Report This]Date: February 07, 2012 6:23 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I know... just know I reviewed this a few ago *scratches head and makes face* tho would not be the first they've gone MIA *snort*
But as was saying before, or along there of.... Dun think Sess knows exactly who he done got in bed with on this deal, thinking Banks in the hospital and Kags would next. Fool. Think Koga's gonna be more of a pill then even he realizes. Should be interesting when Yash gets drawn into it all. w00t! can't wait, hehe.
Hugzz
Da Grrrl Says: You did review, Onna! :P But you posted it to chapter 1 by mistake. <333
Date: February 06, 2012 9:56 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
Chappies are funny that way :P You ahve an idea of how they ought to go and finally slide into place when they damn well feel like it. The muse is a bitchlike that....but the writing was wonderful, the emotions were tehre,and tsk tsk is my Sesshmo being a devious bitch again? for shame! I wouldn't expect anything else :P cheers, ki! your penny
Date: February 06, 2012 9:36 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
dun dun duuuuun love it! Damn Kouga's a bitch, loved the ending!
Date: February 06, 2012 9:16 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
GREAT closing line! I totally recognized the lyric, that song is a fave of mine as well >:P Really fun to be reading your stories again and everyone is in rare form; Rin is sweet and cuddly, Yash is vulnerable and sexy, Bankotsu is a bitch, Kouga is Super Bitch and Ayame is pining for him yet again....in a severely altered way. I'm loving it! You write modern darkness very well and I could feel her pain my friend. Love it love :P Cheers! your penny
Date: February 06, 2012 8:53 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
Oh! And I forgot to add how pretty the skin is! SO CUTE! I love Kagome's pink nails, little details like that aare just orgasmic. Lawls. I'm already excited to see the skin for Money. Power. Respect since you mentioned in your last review response that it's beau-ti-ful. Pretty pictures and updates from you make for a good day! :)
[Report This]Date: February 06, 2012 8:40 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I'm always so pleasantly surprised when you update! I love FA month and I really love that you're still sticking around just for us - you're 'lil ol' fans (fans? Sounds fancy! Lol!) Even though you've lost your interest in writing fanfictions because of the sourpusses you unfortunately met. I know I say that a lot, but I really am grateful you keep writing. It irritates me how some people still don't leave any love when it's clear that you really are just doing this for us (which is incredibly touching). Kouga is such an a-hole in this story. I just want him castrated, tortured, and chopped into tiny little pieces. I was so worried for Kagome when popped up. I thought she was for sure a goner. I would have started dancing ya know *cough* in relief that Kagome got away, but I'm currently in the car and it's impossible to do all that moving in this beatle car. I don't know if you'd believe me, but when I say that I danced from getting riled up or out of excitement or happines or something, I really did dance. LOL. There is no exaggeration on my part. I like to dance when I feel any of the above because of a story. O_o is that odd? Well, I am an odd person. Ha! I like being odd.
Anyway, I totally just got sidetracked as usual. Don't I always? O.O
There's so much I wanna say, but the moving car and my phone's virtual keyboard is making it hard to remember everything I wanted to say in this review.
I think it's safe to say that the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome in this story is one of my favorites from your other stories - I mean, pretty much everything you've written are my favorites, but there's something about this story and those two's (is that even grammatically correct? O___o I sound so stupid. LOL.) Relationship in this story that just makes me feel all warm and fuzzy. They're so sweet to eachother! One good thing came out of Kouga's bitchass self (sorry, am I allowed to say that? O_O he really is the biggest, ugliest pikachu - and by pikachu I mean *cough - ever!) And that is Kagome coming to terms with her feelings for Inuyasha, rushing home to him, and telling him everything he wanted to hear! So cute!!! I'm telling you, when I read your stories, I start thinking about my own love life and that is when I begin to wish it wasn't so nonexistent! Normally, I could care less about not having one, but when I'm reading your stories or watchinf chick flicks, that's when I'm tempted to go out there and hunt for someone as dreamy as the lead actor in the movie or any of your Inuyasha's! Ha! I feel bad for Ayame, it just makes me wanna kill Kouga more. -_- I mean, what more does he want from a woman? Right when he got home, she had his meal prepared and was ready to do anything he asked for, but he still found a reason to be a jerk-off. Tuh! Ironic that Inuyasha was her first love. That sucks even more though. She had someone as sweet and dreamy as him for a boyfriend and now she's with a scumbag. *Le sigh* it's tragic, really it is. That happens so often in real life. Perfectly good girls end up with douchebags.
Thank you so, so, so, so much again for the new chapter! I got the alert the other day that you updated and when I couldn't read it as soon as possible, i got 'withdrawal' effects. This whole day, I was seriously thinking about the update and now I am satisfied now that I finally read the new chapter. Thank you again!!
Oh! Uh.. How do I email you? Do I email the address I receive 'feudal-pulpfiction updates' from? Or should I tweet you? LOL!
Date: February 06, 2012 5:10 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Blow by Blow
Oh.. jeeze well can kagome open mouth to insert foot. haha
I guess maybe SOME of the secrets are gonna be coming out soon. ANd that is going ot be very interesting. Though I wonder if they are still going to the party?
OH well, this was a very nice chapter to come back with after 5 months. Gets us all straight back into the action.
=D
Date: February 06, 2012 5:10 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Blow by Blow
i started reading this story ever since the end of the summer &i've fallen inlove with it. it's really descriptive and detailed as if i'm really there watching it.. like a movie! glad to see you update!
more, please? (=
Date: February 06, 2012 5:09 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Blow by Blow
Oh Shit! Now Kagome is either going to lie, or tell the truth... I hope she picks the latter of the two.
Great chapter~
Chanda
Date: February 06, 2012 5:08 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Blow by Blow
Oh no... Sess, just sold out his brother and didn't even realize it. Oh the plot thickens.
Inuyasha's still sore, too funny.
Chanda
Date: February 06, 2012 5:08 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Blow by Blow
Hey, Sweetie, chappie 12 is FANTASTIC!
Only one 'snafoo, though. You downloaded it twice.
YEP! a repeat performance. I guess you really WERE tired (chuckles). Don't matter. We got the 2 for one deal.
Luv ya, Sweetie.
Date: February 06, 2012 5:07 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Blow by Blow
I know youh already probably know but your chaoter is doubled.. same thing twice.
Just incase you didnt know. Im loving it still.. Im so excited for when ALL the truth comes flying out.
ANd Kouga... psshh... canyou say freak or stalker.. man its like my ex boyfriend ..after ten minutes he was frickin' creeping me out.. haha...
bye
=P
Date: February 06, 2012 5:06 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Shadowed Felicity
Wow I knew her father was shitty, but damn, he's up there with Naraku, shitty.
Inuyasha confessed... to bad Kagome passed out!
Chanda