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Reviewer: monica   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:54 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning

kagome and inuyasha really do have communication problems. but when do they never lol. im glad to see that you updated this story, i was wondering if it was ever going to be updated. also i was just wondering did you take down that story where all the inuyasha characters were little kids at some summer camp or daycare or something like that?

Da Grrrl Says: Nope, I didn't take it down. It's just buried because I've updated other fics. You can use the search feature on the toolbar, or peruse the categories on the left side of the homepage to find the fics that aren't displayed on the front page. Thanks for the comment! ^^



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:53 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: If Only You Knew

This is sooo sweet.



Reviewer: chanda   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:52 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: If Only You Knew


LOL... this chapter is defiently wanting me to step away from the dark side. I love ice-skating, and you captured the scene so well. Kudo's my friend.

Chanda



Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:52 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: If Only You Knew


I just started reading this, and of course I'm already hooked.  :)  I love the premise here, although it's definitely weird having InuYasha in such a role...I'm relieved that he actually isn't a prostitute, but the fact that Kagome believes him to be one is amusing...and a little unsettling, since I smell a lot of drama brewing from that assumption.

And may I say, ma'am, that you write a mean lemon.  I'm going to have to start wearing a bib to catch the drool when I read those steamy scenes...lol.  I know you've heard that before, but I just had to add my two cents.  

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story - or at least what you have posted so far - when I have time.  Between finishing up mine and work and school, there isn't as much of it as I would like, but I guess there never is for anyone.  :)  Great work, as usual!



Reviewer: la623   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:50 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.


OH NO!!!!!!!   That was so intense...and then he left her!!!!  WHAT?!?!?!   Can't wait to read more!



Reviewer: beckyducky   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:49 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.


omg!!  i absolutely love this story!!  Everyone is so in character (in my opinion).  I especially loved the interactions between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha.  They sound like brothers and yet they have an invisible rift between them.  >w<  Also, I love your lemons!!  You're an awesome writer and i hope you update soon.  goodbye.



Reviewer: midnightwhispers   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:40 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.


Wahey! Hot stuff! I'm so glad this fic is here too. *hugs* Maybe it'll encourage people to write superhot lemony darker stuff instead of the usual fluff, eh? Can't wait for the next one. Hope the server stuff gets resolved soon.



Reviewer: chanda   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:37 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.


Awwww, a cliffy. Omg!!! Girrrl... that was so F'n good. Ha! I was right, she did lie.

Okay, I will patiently wait your update....

Chanda



Reviewer: SilverGodFanGirl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:34 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.


you are killing me! i've been dying for the newest chapter! has it been posted somewheres else?!



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:33 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.


Ooh...so InuYasha was involved with Ayame who's currently involved with Kouga, who used to be involved with Kagome...who is now with InuYasha. The little rectangle going on here is deliciously entertaining. And grrrl...you are SO from New York! If you hadn't said it yourself the lingo peppered throughout this story says it ALL! I love it...it gives the story a very interesting flair. And the angst is just amazing. Not everything is revealed in one shot...you keep us on the edge of our seats dying for more! The whole thing with Kagome's father...and Kouga...and Kikyou...wow. Just WOW! I can't wait to see what you have in store for the characters next time! And I read your devART...LUCKY! You get to see Coheed & Cambria! I've been dying for the ticks so my brother and I could go see them...but no such luck scoring. I'm almost tempted to hit up a scalper...-__- lol, but I don't know how reliable that method'll be. Have lots of fun though! And kudos on the great story! I really enjoy reading this! ~Amber



Reviewer: chanda   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:31 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Make the Choice

Great chapter! I am glad that Kagome and Sango reconciled their differences. The interaction with Miroku was great.

Poor Kagome, wow Inu sure did leave his mark. And now he's in her appartment. I don't know what I do: jump him or throw him out. I guess mixed emotions about it. Well, I'll have to continue to read to find out.

Chanda



Reviewer: fallenangel7583   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:29 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Make the Choice



O_o woo hoo, more smut on the horizion!!! ....so, does Jen know about Miroku? LMAO!! i nearly fell out of my chair on that one. hehehehe. first luc and jamie, now Jen...LMAO.

wonderful chapter, i am so looking forward to see just where this is going (and to see the look on Kagome's face when she realizes just 'who' inu really is). hehe. yay for happy pills!!!



Reviewer: eatthetrees   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:26 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Swing Batta Swing


What's going to happen?!? [[gasp]] That was a fun chapter. Haha. Update soon, por favor.



Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:25 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Swing Batta Swing

WHOA!!! What a low blow.

He's going to use Kouga? Damn.

ANd hmm.... in the ass.... can't say I seen that done before.. or done it.

;D

I love it. Your awesome Inugrrrl!



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:24 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Swing Batta Swing


HOT DAMN!!!

 And you thought that MY lemon was good! IF I TOLD YOU ONCE I'VE TOLD YOU SOOO MANY TIMES BEFORE!

YOU   ARE    THE   #1   LEMON   QUEEN!!!!!!!!!!

Maybe I should try that with you know who. It's worth a shot, just might get me something good outta it.  You've given me IDEAS, Sweetie. LOADS of dem.

(GIGGLES)  LUV YA, LITTLE ONE! KEEP ME POSTED ON EVERYTHING!

 JA NE.

 



Reviewer: chanda   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:23 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Swing Batta Swing

Wow... what a decriptive chapter. However, for some reason I can't get Mustang Sally out of my head, when Kagome became dominating...LOL

Wow, Sess is playing dirty. I didn't think he go this far... but Kouga... I wonder what dirty trick is up their sleeve.

Great chapter!

Chanda



Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:23 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Swing Batta Swing


Okay...I just want to say that I'm still laughing about InuYasha's analysis of Sesshomaru by way of his coffee.  "That means you're a bitter, flavorless fuck."  That is going to have me rollin' all day!  :-)



Reviewer: chanda   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:21 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Proposition


ohhh, hot damn! The plot thickens... Boy miss Kagome is in for one rude experience when she finds out her dejected boy toy is a millionare as well. *Smirks* and she wanted to hide her reputation. I think she defiently got more than she can chew, aye?

Chanda



Reviewer: Yasha_lover   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:20 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Proposition

I loved it!



Reviewer: fallenangel7583   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:19 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Proposition


woo-hoo!! i found it! ::does the happy dance:: this is hawt to, Kik. wow. i'm so interested!!! i know they're gonna meet up somewhere and kags will be all 'wtf'. it will be great. lol. better yet, though, i can't wait to see Miro question Yash over his...err..indiscressions. HAHA, yash's a whore! LMAO. oh, that's priceless!!!!



Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:19 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Proposition


Hell yea u do..u kno u want it!
lol
GO KAGOME!
ne ways loved it u need to update it!



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes


am bored as hell! >.> Oh, pwease, oh pwease read that last chappy i have *pouts*....am goin lemon hunting now :p lol, cyz, oh, n you kno i love this fic!



Reviewer: jessicabrrg   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes

why havent you updated in so long?!? :( I've been reading this story for a while but you never update no point in keeping the story if your not gona update :(



Reviewer: chanda   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:15 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Promiscuous Girl


Hot damn, Girl! Poor Inu, treated like a peice of meat... He's not just any meat, but top A quality choice meat! Yummy chapter, looking forward to chapter two....

Chanda



Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2012 3:14 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Promiscuous Girl

Wait is he human here with the hair and eyes the same or is he a hanyou?



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