Date: February 06, 2012 3:13 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Promiscuous Girl
As always very very steamy, you sure are one hell of a lemonade artist.
Date: February 06, 2012 3:12 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Promiscuous Girl
Damn!
That was fuked up!
let me gies hojo or koga hurt her?
=]
GO INUYAHSA!
Date: February 06, 2012 3:11 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
YAHOOOO!
I've been waiting for this for AGES!!!!
Beautifully written, Kiki! Talk about a cliffhanger for an ending! I can't wait to see what happens!
Date: February 06, 2012 3:10 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
OK. This story was hot. Real hot. But boy, do I feel sorry for Kagome now. What a mess Inu and Kags have created. And I don't think I have ever seen Koga being so evil. brrr.... Well, please get my favorite couple back together. A happy ending, please?? And maybe have Sessy act a little nicer and hopefully warm up to Rin... Thanks for writing.
Date: February 06, 2012 3:09 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
omg this chapter was really great you have to add another chapter. i just hope that you will write another chapter because this is a really great story. dont stop keep writing=)
Date: February 06, 2012 3:09 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
wow this is an amazing story...... can't wait for the next chapter =D
Date: February 06, 2012 3:08 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
Please finish the story it's really good I want to know what happens
Date: February 06, 2012 3:07 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
this is one good story. i just wish that its completed already.
Date: February 06, 2012 2:59 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
I can not wait to read the next chapter, I LOVE this story ^.^ keep them coming.
Date: February 06, 2012 2:58 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
I like thisstory it has all kinds of things going on in it but YOU ARE TAKING WAY TO LONG TO FINISH IT OOOHHHHHH!!!!!!
ANYWAY keep up the good work!!!!
Date: February 06, 2012 12:37 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I personally think she should tell Inuyasha and Inuyasha needs to tell her he's not a freakin prostitute!
Da Grrrl Says: When that happens, the fic will pretty much be over. So, unless y'all want an early end...
[Report This]Date: February 06, 2012 10:59 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
O.O OMG AN UPDATE! ^__^ i simply LOVE this story... and i just cant wait to see how everything is going to work out... if only they knew who they really were.... This update was awesome as always... please dont make the next one such a long wait ~pretty golden puppy eyes~
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Sarah! ^^
GFE was almost in danger of never being completed. I kinda >.> forgot about it, and with that, lost interest. But I'm slowly getting it back together. I haven't written anything in months, so it's a good sign that this was amongst the first to be completed.
Date: February 06, 2012 8:33 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
just read this :D good story but that's not unusual when you're the writer. Kouga definitely brings problems with him, I hope Kagome and Inuyasha can deal with him, and tell each others the secrets they're still keeping hidden...
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! I appreciate the nice comment. This story has some dark parts that will be revealed later, but I think everyone will enjoy the craziness. Kouga is a problem. >.> That's all I can say!
[Report This]Date: February 06, 2012 5:43 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: If Only You Knew
this chapter. IS AMAZING. I love how you handled Kikyou's death! You didn't fall into that trap of vilifying her, which is really refreshing
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! I'm happy you liked it. I honestly don't like Kikyou that much (at least when she's being paired with InuYasha), and have made her the baddie in plenty of stories, but in this one, it didn't fit into what I wanted for the plot. In order for InuYasha to be what Kagome needs, he had to have good experiences himself, so Kikyou had to be a good thing that happened to him. But, yeah, you shouldn't look for much Kik-luv in my stories. >.>
Date: February 06, 2012 4:08 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
Thanks for uptading.Love the flufy moment after all the tension
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Mei! ^__^ I figured you guys could use a little break after Kouga's insanity.
[Report This]Date: February 06, 2012 2:31 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
Update! Update! Update! WooHoo! :P Koga has a viciousness that am astounding, and makes me wonder what Yash will do when he finds out, but as well, what's Sess gonna do when he also finds out.... cause he's of the mind that Bank is only in the hospital and he's like OK with Kags ending up in the same place. Cruel Bastards!
So should be interesting on how this scenario plays out. Am lovin' it!!!Hugzz! <33333
Da Grrrl Says: ONNA-MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Isn't Kouga (and to a lesser degree, Sesshomaru) a creep? But the former, he's just terrible. He's so cruel I was finding it hard to write him, but it had to be done! I'm going to be updating MPR soon and I know that's a fave for you. Wait until you see the new art -WOWZA! Hugerzz <333333
Date: February 05, 2012 11:50 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
Loved it! Can't wait for more : )
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Jaz! I'm gonna try to get this updated again after FA Month is finished. ^^
Date: February 05, 2012 10:54 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
oh my that was awesome....hope the next update is soon
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks muchly! I have other updates to get to for FA month, but after that, I'll try to work on this more.
Date: February 05, 2012 10:18 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
Wow I would love to give Kouga a swift kick in the balls. Maybe even chop them off. He's such an ass and I hope Kagome will be able to help Ayame out. I feel like really bad things are about to happen, but I'm loving the drama! Everything you write is so perfect and I'm honored to be able to read your work :)
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you so much! <33
GFE isn't that long. It will probably end in another 10 chapters (unless I find reasons to extend the plot), and you're right, more drama is on the horizon. Kouga is an animal, but to be fair, he does have a legitimate beef -that you'll have to see when it all unfolds. :D
[Report This]Date: February 05, 2012 9:46 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
*SQUEE* a update and a great one at that.. you love to leave us with suspense.. what will happen now.. thanks for sharing it with us.. until the next update..
Take care of those hands.. *HUGS*
Da Grrrl Says: NEOOOOOOOOO!!! Thanks for the brilliant header. It captures their essence perfectly. :P I'm glad you liked the chapter, too. It kicked my ass (since writing's been hard), but at least it's written and I got some progress in. Wish me luck on the next! :D
Date: February 05, 2012 9:15 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I can't remember the last time I read this story (I know it's been a while!) but I was able to follow this chapter really easily, and I remembered things along the way -- goes to show that a story is only as good as the author (and no matter what you think you definately didn't disappoint!) This was a great little read -- you packed alot into it, and now I have to go back and read the other chapters because I'm interested all over again! Thanks for the great read Grrrl!
Take care,
Rana ;)
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks Rana! ^___^
I'm VERY behind in ending thi story and sometimes >.> I can't believe how many fics I've neglected for so long! Ungh. But I'm really going to work hard to catch up and get some of these wrapped up (as well as re-open a few others that will get a 'rushed' conclusion. It's better than no completion at all!). But I do appreciate the great reviews you always leave and you're a definite on my account list. <33
Date: February 05, 2012 8:46 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
Yay! But oh my goodness. Can't wait to see how this all plays out.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for the comment luv, Kayla! ^^
[Report This]Date: February 05, 2012 8:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
Yeah, it did it again. Here's the rest: Keep up the smashing work, Grrrl, I'm rootin' for ya!
Da Grrrl Says: For some reason, Abi is really messing with you. =/ I wonder why... Are you using any HTML? Are you using firefox? That's the best browser for this site. >.<
And thanks, Nutella!! I'm happy you like the update! <333
[Report This]Date: February 05, 2012 8:30 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I'd REALLY like to know why it cuts off the rest of my review all the time... =/ I'll keep it short and sweet - loved it, great job, Goober.
Da Grrrl Says: Nutella!! Using your new account already, eh? :P I turned off captcha (since a new update is up to make it easier on folks), but lucky you, you won't have to deal with it anymore! What browser are you using? That may be why Abi is giving you issues. >.< But I'm happy you liked the update! <333
Date: February 05, 2012 8:19 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
YAY glad to see this one updated!!
You SHOW Kouga who's boss!! :D
Da Grrrl Says: LOL. I'm certainly gonna try in future chapters! Glad you liked the update! ^__^