Date: February 05, 2012 8:07 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
I love this one! I'm so glad it was updated. And saying 'bitch tornado' is definitely something I plan on incorporating into my everyday life!
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much, and feel free to unleash your bitch tornado on everybody! xD
[Report This]Date: February 05, 2012 7:39 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
Another fantastic chapter! I'm uber glad you wrote some more to this story, it's such a great story. (Well, I lied, they all are!) And the end of this.. it's so heart warming.
Oh, and I'm so glad Kouga got what was coming to him! Way to go Kagome!
Thanks for working so hard, Grrrl! It is really appreciated by me, and all of your fans. ^^
Da Grrrl Says: Hey chickie! ^^
Thanks so much for the review. I appreciate it and I'm glad you liked the update. This story did NOT want to get written, but I'm glad I forced it until I found my flow. It's even 2000 words longer than it was going to be originally (I was struggling THAT much). But I did it! *moonwalks*
See ya at the next update! ^____^
Date: February 05, 2012 7:22 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
Great chapter, girl. I'm so glad that you decided to update this one; it's one of my absolute favorites. And you came back with a bang. Good grief, Kouga is evil incarnate. I can't wait to see how Kouga bites it...because surely that bastard has to die. And I sincerely hope he gets castrated :-).
And I never thought I would see the day when Sesshoumaru was....naive! Bankotsu in the hospital....he wishes. Sesshoumaru clearly has no idea what he's really dealing with. And since his intentions are SO far from pure, I can't help but hope he gets a good smack in the face (and the wallet) as well.
And Inuyasha...what a babe. He is adorable...but he and Kags have a serious communication problem. They are both hiding so much from each other that somebody' s gonna get hurt simply out of ignorance. I really hope they soon understand that love and trust have to go together before one of them ends up hurt...in more ways than one.
I am so glad to see you writing again. Great job.
Da Grrrl Says: Hey Miss Lady!!
I'm so glad you're still around, peeking at the works. You've been with me for AGES, so it's always nice to see you leave your mark!
And, as usual, you caught the hidden message!! Yes, Sesshomaru is somewhat naive to whom he's dealing with. Remember, Bankotsu didn't do any additional (deep) recon before he handed over Kouga's info to him. He knew what kind of guy Kouga really was, but Sess didn't and still doesn't (obviously). It will indeed be interesting when he gets a taste of what he unleashed on Tokyo!
InuYasha is just a dream. I think this is the sweetest I've ever written him in a 'city' fic. But he and Kagome have issues. Whether they'll tackle them before things blow up? Maybe, maybe not. :P
More updates to come and thanks so much for the review. <33
[Report This]Date: February 05, 2012 7:16 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Night of Reckoning
ASJKDOFJWI -dies- It still surprises me how quicker you're updating for fan appreciation month (I don't care how short it is, it's still getting love). GFE is probably my most favorite- no, wait, The Neighbor, no, A Treasure on the Tide, Edge of Seventeen, Ever After- ach! I can't choose!
Anyways, I absolutely loved when Kagome fucked up Kouga's face. Can't stand him in canon and definitely can't stand him now. I've heard of abusive relationships- hell, I've been in one- but this motherfucker deserves to be castrated, riddled with bullets, and buried six feet under.
Thank you for updating ^-^
Da Grrrl Says: Girl, you crack me up! LOL. Kouga does deserve to get his. >.> I hate him, but I think I'm really getting my aggressions out on this fool. I like showing him for the douchebag he is. Bastard! >:D
And I had to have Kagome show some serious backbone. She's been through a lot (more will be revealed on what she went through in future chapters), so he deserves that hot case to the face. I should have wrapped this up sooo long ago. >.< But I'm glad I've been able to pick it up again. I've got 4 more chapters to go for FA Month. WOO!
Date: February 02, 2012 7:09 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
just readed and im amazed. I love all the suspense around the story
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks muchly. Mei. ^^ I'm actually writing the update for this now, so there will be more to come soon.
Date: November 28, 2011 11:05 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Swing Batta Swing
the title is funny becuase well, yasha just caught as well as pitched! lol
Date: November 28, 2011 10:53 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Shadowed Felicity
aww, downer yasha! that was a funny ending :P
Date: November 28, 2011 10:21 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Taking the Plunge
some of my favorite writing of yours is the scenes between Sango and Kagome :P
Date: November 28, 2011 8:56 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: If Only You Knew
heheh! When Kagome put her hand in Yasha's face...I do that to Skye quite often. She just licks my hand! :P And Kagome in a Trigun tee. Nice!
Date: November 28, 2011 8:43 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Wicked Descent
(Swoon) Damn, Yasha! Falling in love already,ne? Well, good hard sex is part of that :P (lol) Seriously.... But loved it!
[Report This]Date: November 28, 2011 8:25 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Under the Surface
Love the chapter! I hope Kagome's dad gets his. What an ass! Your stlye is always lyrical and easy to get into. Well done!
Date: November 28, 2011 8:22 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Under the Surface
Love love LOVE your lyrical style as always Ki! It always leaps off the screen and is so easy to get into. That's partially why I love your fics so much, you are truly a gifted writer. And the intimacy of the pairings doens't hurt either!
I hope Kagome's dad gets his, he's a real ass and a halfer. I hope she won't flip too bad when she finds out Yasha isn't a hooker! He's still getting paid :P AND laid! Can't wait to read some more ^_^
hugs! penny!
Date: June 17, 2011 12:13 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Dirty Little Secrets
Man Kouga is ruthless. Another good chapter
Date: June 17, 2011 12:06 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
I love this chapter.
Date: June 16, 2011 11:59 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
This is the best chapter
Date: June 16, 2011 11:10 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Sakura Drops
I cannot stop reading this story. It's amazing
Date: June 16, 2011 10:50 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Blow by Blow
This is starting to get really good.
Date: June 16, 2011 10:25 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Swing Batta Swing
DumDumDUUUUMMMM
Date: June 16, 2011 8:55 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Shadowed Felicity
That eding was epic.
Date: June 16, 2011 8:04 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Taking the Plunge
TvT thank God she's going to give him a chance
Date: June 16, 2011 6:20 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: If Only You Knew
It is confirmed this is my new favorite. Grrrl you really have a gift.
Date: June 16, 2011 5:56 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Wicked Descent
I think I have a new favorite. :)
Date: June 16, 2011 5:33 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Under the Surface
What a wonderful way to wake up. ;)
Date: June 16, 2011 5:12 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Geneva by the Bedroom
You have a gift with words.
Date: June 16, 2011 4:45 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Make the Choice
YYYEEESSSSSS TvT