Date: November 07, 2008 10:25 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
Wow. I don't even know where to start. EXCELLENT chapter.
Inuyasha is so screwed.....in more ways than one. Not only did he leave Kagome on the floor after she showed so much vulnerability, he just got busted walking and talking with another woman in an expensive ass suit! We haven't seen this side her in a while, but we all know that Kagome is the wrong bitch to fuck with (and I mean that with the utmost affection, LOL). I feel so sorry for him....but that unfortunately is the least of his worries.
Kagome is in some serious trouble....and all because of that asshole Sesshoumaru! In case I haven't told you already: I can't stand his arrogant, prissy, ass in this story. I am hereby renewing my request for Sessh's castration by Kagome at the end of this story. He is such a PRICK! With any luck his two "fleas" will off each other and leave Kagome out of it. But that would be too easy. Kagome is about to be in the middle of a dangerous war between desperate men. And that is a dangerous place to be. This is a really bad time for she and Inuyasha to be distrustful of each other. But it wouldn't be the terrific angst fest that it is if they were, lol. I loved it, girl. Your block is definitely gone!
Author's Response: My girl!!! As always, your reviews make my day -and make all of the bullshit worth it. You always show support and encouragement for me and my work, you'll never know what that means. <33 And expect some mail from me this weekend!
On to the story. Yes, shit is hitting the fan. GFE doesn't have very many chapters left. I have plans on trying to finish as many fics as I can then I don't think I'll be posting publicly anymore. I don't think a lot of people read this shit, combine that with my carpal tunnel, and I think it's time to stop going out of my way to post in a public setting. I'll always write, and have my tales, but I won't be making much of a conscious effort to keep people entertained. However, you're one of the few that I will invite to my -password protected- archive to read my wares if you so choose. :)
I hope to make the currently public fics worth the read for those that follow them, and then I'm going to lock Absolution and make it by invitation/request only.
And Sess is definitely an asshole. So is Kouga. But I like their characters; I like writing the evil. It's fun, and makes the fic worth saving (since I have plans to cut some of them). Expect mail!
Date: November 07, 2008 9:26 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
I love that song, nice last line =p And GRRRRRR! Just, GRRRRRRR! You frustrating woman - I'm hooked all over again. Keep it up!
Author's Response: AXY!!!! I swear, you were on my mind when I chose that title and that ending line. I was like, "I hope Ax gets to see that." LOL. You crazy thing you. Yours is coming next. <3
[Report This]Date: November 07, 2008 5:08 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
LOL! I was just reading this yesterday! Nice to see a continuation, but ah! I see more angst for this story in the very near future. Can't wait!
And wow...Kouga is especially assholic in this one. The verbal and physical abuse he put Ayame through...and possibly Kagome? He needs to be maimed for it. As for Inu/Kag...maaaannn! I got so excited that they'd both be going to the Kaze meeting and all that good stuff (like "Hey, I'm rich!" and "Oh really, me too!") would probably be coming out. But.......did Kagome just quit?? Lol. That just kills that hope...which I suppose would've been too easy anyway. She has to catch him with a co-worker instead and think hes cheating and.......*sigh* so complicated and angsty! But I absolutely LOVE it!
Def looking forward to the next chap when you can manage it! I can't believe Sessh ordered a hit! Well, I can...but...
;)
~Amber
Author's Response: Amber! <3
Thanks, once again, for taking the time to appreciate the work and leave a review. It means so much. <3 When I lock my archive from public viewing, you'll be amongst the ones that get invited in. ^_^
Kouga is horrible, isn't he? I love that. I love writing evil and angst; it's like an aphrodisiac! And nothing is EVER easy in my fics. I hate mush, fluff, and sappiness. It's boring, and I don't want to just read about I/K at home watching TV and having a "moment". I don't read/write fiction for something I can do at home myself, lol. I like it wild, and I love a zillion side stories that keep people's mind occupied -and let's not forget the hard lemonade. So I'm glad my writing style hasn't scared you away. 0.~
Date: November 07, 2008 3:32 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
please update soon:)
Author's Response: Will do, and thanks for leaving your mark. :)
Date: November 07, 2008 3:22 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
wow Bankotsu kept Kagome in line. She sure didn't back down from him either. I'm curious why there's such hate between them though.
Author's Response: I can answer that for you. She knows that he's a lowlife and while she uses him for what she needs, she doesn't respect him. It's also kinda obvious that he has come on to her in the past, and knows about the hookers, so he likes to remind her that she isn't the "princess" she pretends to be. I figured I'd explain that since there won't be any exploration into their relationship. Thanks. :)
Date: November 07, 2008 12:35 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Paint it Black
I soo enjoyed. I'm so glad your making updates again, i look almost everyday for a update now! It does sound like Inuyasha and Kagome are going to have problems. She thinks his seeing other girls and he can't really explain the whole thing unless he wants to blow it. Now where adding Koga..I smell trouble, lol. =)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you did!! I'm really putting in an effort to get back on track with regular updates. Not too easy, but I'm having fun. :D Thanks for coming by and showing support for the work. I appreciate it. <3 Writing is so much more fun when I know people are looking forward to it. And yes, Kouga is nothing but trouble! xD
Date: July 25, 2008 5:17 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
ARGH! When is he going to find out about Kouga? When are we going to find out what happened between Kouga and Kagome? Argh! And his name! And Sesshy and his devious plot! Will the Higurashi Empire fall? I hope it doesn't, I want Kags to win... And are Miroku and Sango going to get together? Sesshy and Rin? So many questions! Update soon please, I'm begging!
Author's Response: LOL! You really made me chuckle -really funny review. Thanks for reading and taking a moment to leave your mark. :D Questions will get answered in due time. This fiction is NOT over, obviously, but I can say that it doesn't have that many chapters to go, either. I'm hoping to keep this fairly short. When the next will come? Not sure yet, but eventually.
Date: July 23, 2008 5:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
Im loving this story when's your new chappies coming out? P.S Your my fav author it's hard to find good inuyasha stories but your's rock.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! ^_^ Writing has been really hard for me lately, so it helps to know that someone is looking forward to updates. Thanks for reading, and please bear with! It shouldn't be too much longer. <3
Date: May 10, 2008 10:57 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
wha... NO! HOW CAN THEY (or rather: HE, because let's face it, 99.9% of the time it's the man's fault) BE SO GODDAMNFUCKING THICK!?!?!?!?! s'cuze my french....
and update soon, pleeeease!
Author's Response: LMAO! You're hilarious. Yes, men are thick and women are stubborn. Sorry the update for this is taking so long. But I'm working on it. Hopefully it won't be long now. :) Thanks for leaving your mark. I really appreciate it! <3
Date: April 10, 2008 1:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2008 term!
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[Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 4:29 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
It's a great plot, and a great lemon. It really doesn't get any better than this. Definitely hope you finish the piece.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate your reading my work. :D A new chapter should be coming soon, I've just been really busy.
Date: April 04, 2008 10:03 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
hot hot hot :)
really, I have to hand it to you, that last chapter was something...and I can't wait to see how the plot evolves now that Inuyasha is going to be forced to work...why do I feel tension coming?
Loveeeeeeeee, IK :)
Author's Response: Tinii!! Thanks, girl. :) I wanted to give up something decent since it had been a while. Heck, I'm behind all over again! >.<
Date: March 17, 2008 1:23 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
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[Report This]Date: March 05, 2008 6:27 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
omgomgomg!!!! i spent all day reading this (at work, so alot of duck and cover) and i have to wait to get to the end!!!! omg hurry and finish this masterpiece! this is the best thing i ever read!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you very much. You made my day. I loved the "duck and cover". That made me laugh because I hear that a lot. >.> You know, smut content and all. *looks innocent* A new chapter is on the way!
[Report This]Date: February 25, 2008 1:50 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
I'll just say this grrrl...Damn you know how to build suspense! Everything is closing in on them...so many bad things building and waiting to happen. Sess is such an evil heartless bastard! There's so much just waiting to blow Inuyasha and Kagome apart...I hope they will make it through tho. It's so sad...neither of them really give a fuck about their 'inheritance'. Here's hoping for a better ending than Romeo and Juliet! Thanks for sharing your story!
Author's Response: Thanks for checking GFE out! ^_^ There's definitely a lot going on >.> plenty of deceit! I think that's what makes it so fun to write. :P I know I don't update as fast as you guys might like, but I will try to make the upcoming chaps interesting!
Date: February 20, 2008 7:50 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
Omg! What a cliffy! Kiki..! Nooooooo. Where did InuYasha go to? The feeling that she was going to confess her feelings to InuYasha and then he disappeared? Was it some sort of crazy...ness that InuYasha thought "hey, I should take a shower right now?" I hope that's all it is and nothing to Ahh. lol.
Anyways, that was a pretty exciting chapter. I loved how it was like he was hunting her to the end. Since he's a dog I thought he would win. Go InuYasha! ^-^
Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one!
Date: February 15, 2008 10:16 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
HOT HOT HOT...HOTTTTTTTTTTT!!!
Author's Response: Shankies!!
[Report This]Date: February 14, 2008 11:11 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
I kno i must be forgotten... heh... blame it on school... i'm drowning in all the work and life outside of school work ^__^
Now... da update! It was so damn hawt! I was laughing with bank's snide remarks... i mean, the way he said alot of stuff had the privilage to be in her whole... and that he knows her shit stinks...? or sumn like that... lol... that was funny! And yes, am weird in the weirdest way... so i thought he was so damn hot with those remarks!! *drools*
Then the hide n seek?!?! *Fans myself* If Inuyasha was real... If only he was real!! hmmm... *shakes head* I think this lil teen would become a nympho in 0.2 seconds! lol
You did good as always kiki... I'm loving it, and 'kuso!" I havent heard that or used it in a LONG time! I'm slowly being transported to taiwanese, LOL... the japanese nature is still in me tho!
To see that they might confess so early with so many secrets 'tween them... it jus opens them to more troubles in the futur... and it'll make them more stubborn and hateful(they wish!) to each other... Ah well... this onna gots to go sleep, ish after 1 am... xD
Ja! And awesome update... now i sense some angels, humans and demons in a fic to be read... when i get a few hours of sleep... Laterz girl! ^_~
Author's Response: Bubbles!!!!!! How the heck are you, girl?? I was wondering where you've been. :P Don't let them work ya into the ground (darned school!) and always take time to smell the roses and relax. I don't want to hear about you driving yourself bat-shit crazy. :PrnGlad you liked the chappie -you know I always try to make the lemons worth reading. :)
[Report This]Date: February 10, 2008 2:36 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
Fun and games. This was a great chapter. I have read a lot
of sex scenes in fanfiction, but I have never seen anything like this Then just when it seems that they
are about to make a breakthrough,you leave use on the edge of the cliff because the room was empty. You are so
nasty. Can hardly wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response: Tee hee! Why, thank you very much!! *wears her evil author button* I'm glad you liked the chappie -and what a compliment! You haven't seen a chap like that? That makes me *really* happy. I always try to make my lemons dirty and fun (yeah, plenty dirty), so the fact that you enjoyed it means a lot. ^_^
[Report This]Date: February 09, 2008 4:26 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
Whoa! That was fucking unbelievable. Pun truly and utterly intended. The game of chase was so hot. You weren't kidding about the games and the sex. :) Love it! And wow! I think that was the first male/female anal I've ever read and gods it was so fucking hot. You popped my cherry in that respect. :) I loved him showing herself to him in the mirror and telling her that he loved her. That was so cool and of course the angst factor. It wouldn't be InuGrrrl without the angst. Though oddly enough I like your Bankotsu. I saw this on ED too when I swung by earlier so I'd better get over there sometime soon and fav it on there. I'm so happy it's there too. Maybe it will inspire less fluff though I like a little fluff now and then. Looking forward to more. *hugs* I hope Inu didn't go far.
Author's Response: Thanks, hun!! I was shocked that you've never see f/m anal! Lawd, makes me wanna do that more often! And I like Bankotsu, too. I loved him in the series. The fight between him and InuYasha was terrific, though he got lots of shit off on my hanyou. >.< So I always try to give him a role in my stuff. :D
Date: February 08, 2008 8:14 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
my god . . . that was incredible! seriously! that was really really really good. damn! inuyasha can be a freak! lol n u left it at a cliffy! no fair! :pouts: but oh well, i'll wait for the next chapter. this was real entertaining to read so thank you fro taking ur time to write it.
Author's Response: AOA!! Thanks for the review, hun. I know the cliffy was... >.> bad? LOL. But hey, it keeps ya coming back, ne?? I have a few updates to get out this weekend, but I'll try to have this one out in a timely fashion. :)
[Report This]Date: February 08, 2008 5:35 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
*blush*
Ha. I always wondered what would happen if InuYasha was put into a prey/predator situation. Thanks for bringing my fantasies real. Gosh, hot doesn't even begin to describe this chapter. :P
Man, Bankotsu is a jerk. At least Kagome has InuYasha to cheer her up. Lucky her.
What? No! He left? I was hoping for some confessions of love after their beautiful lovemaking. Aww. That cliffie was cruel.
Put up the next chapter as soon as you can! Thankies!
Author's Response: Arigatou, Rosie!! I'm glad I was able to give you the smut you deserve in a "beautiful" way -haha. The cliffy was harsh *nods* But you know I'll make it up to ya! :D
Btw, I love Bank. he's such a jerk!!
[Report This]Date: February 07, 2008 10:10 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
hmmm, not i what i expected when i started the chap, but hot damn, i am not complaining. that was too good. yash can chase (and catch)me anytime. but, why did he leave the room? btw, do NOT like bank. whadda jerk. kouga, too.
Author's Response: Court!!! I have almost 4 chaps for you. I definitely will need the edit this time because I don't seem to have time to finish anything. >.< But don't ya love the smut that sneaks up on ya?? :D
[Report This]Date: February 06, 2008 12:45 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Game On.
Dayum! That was fucking HAWT! I swear Inuyashas mouth would so get me in trouble,lol. Awesome chappie,very sex-licious and yummy. Kiki has done it again! Now i have to go find MY Inu and ravish him lmao. Keep up the great work Kiki,this is one of my fav fics so far. ^_^
Author's Response: Laini!! Thanks -glad you enjoyed the smut. I do aim to please (especially when there's a citrus drought!). Now, let me find out you've got an Inu and didn't share!!! <33
[Report This]Date: February 05, 2008 12:06 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Mistakes
*comes out of bathroom wiping off hands*
Uh, yeah ... I'm back now ... *cough*
Well, damn, now where'd he go?
Author's Response: Do I even want to know what went on in there?! LMAO!!!