[Report This]Date: May 04, 2007 10:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 1
Yes! It's Kagome ^^ For a few seconds there I thought it was Kikyo. I'm glad it was Kagome, she's the best friend and best friends almost always fall for the best guy friend. Aww..! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome reviews, Nat! But your other one got lost when I had to take the sites offline :-( Sorry about that. But I'm happy that you liked it!
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2007 5:08 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
Well, I suck! What the hell took me so long to read this?! It was fan-fucking-tastic!!! I must confess, I thought that it was going to be a SessKag since it was for Neddi and all, but instead you give me a heartbreaking, angsty, funny, sweet, and loving tale. It's beautiful Kiki! I'm so proud of you! Neddi's right...when you say something sucks, you are SO wrong! ;) A masterpiece.
Happy Writing!
Author's Response: Tina!!! Thanks for such a supa review! This one gave me a hard time and I kept writing and redoing it, but finally I was like >.< gah, screw it and hit post. I'm SO glad you liked it though! I knew the fact that it wasn't sess/kags would get some of y'all. But I have such a hard time with that pairing >.< I had to follow my heart and Neddi likes both so I lucked out!
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2007 8:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 1
SQUEEEEEEE!!! I LOOOOOVE THIS ONE!!! ^_______^ I've been wanting to read it like crazy since you told me about it. =P I ADORED the BDSM. and Inu was sexy as fucking hell. as always!! My absolute favorite line: "You didn't kiss me goodbye." I swear I melted into a puddle of goo right on my bed!! lol. =P and the shower scene. gah. squeeee. I laughed soooo hard. I could just envision poor Inu wet as a lake with a hard on the size of alaska hightailing his ass outta their house. xPPP "gotta GOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" HAHAHHAA i died laughing. LOL xD and the sex. GAWD the sex! *drools* kay. i've decided that i shall be buying a swing when i get hitched. xDDDDD *squeegigglegush* lolol. ^__^ i love you!!!! *cheekiesandchibihugs*
Author's Response: Weebs!!! < ( ^_^ ) > Thanks for the LOVELY review and I'm soooooo happy that you liked it! <.< No swings, young lady! I sooo can't picture my chibi doing such things! >.< I'll write you something fluffy soon!
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2007 6:35 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
I feel like kind of a jackass, but I was sort of dissapointed by this one. I liked the initial setup, with the notes and Kagome being this pent up sex kitten sort of character for once, and the lemon was hot, but I didn't like how at the begining of the lemon there was the standard "I love you" thing. I've read that in so many fics, and I just thought it didn't fit in with the whole dom thing. But other than that, it was good as you usually are.
Author's Response: Ah well, can't please everyone. They were in love, and he told her that because he didn't want her to feel like he was treating her like every other girl (I did establish that he was a man-whore). So that's why he confessed. Just because a couple like to dabble in D/s doesn't mean they can't be in love, lol. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2007 4:53 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
This is a really steamy piece, but it feels like there are an awful lot of loose ends that could be tied up in a third part. The morning after, Yash asking about the poems, Kags asking about his change of heart, and the rest of the crew getting their kicks and thanks? Not that this wasn't great on its own, but it's not like you to leave potential steamy citrus unwritten. Even if you don't decide to continue, this was some good work. :)
Author's Response: LOL, True! There are places I can still drag this, but I was on a schedule, lol. It took me 4 days to write this because I had block and by then I was already late for the birthday >.< So I won't shut the door to a future addition, but at the time, I needed to get it posted. Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: April 30, 2007 5:57 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
wow! my mind is literally blown away. that was a great lemon but my mind is kinda in the dark since i don't what a swing looks like T-T... well, i hope your friend, Neddi, has a GREAT birthday!
Author's Response: Thanks, Rosie!! Hmm, a pic of a swing... I can help, lol. Try this link: http://www.sextoysexotica.com/images/product/pictures/A/1454-7.jpg
That's EXACTLY how they were positioned. Thanks for the review and I'll pass along your b-day wishes!!
[Report This]Date: April 28, 2007 5:13 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
OMFG!!! KIKI-NEECHAN!!!! THIS IS AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! O.O I FUCKING LUV IT!!! T.T I´m almost crying!! so bootiful, so... PERVY, so... I WANT SOME!!! (actually this lemon made some MEMORIES BACK uuuhuhuhuuhuhu)ajajajajajajaja ;P I really luv it! and Neddi deserves it!! Omedetô!!!
u r the best!!!
Author's Response: Maria-nee-chan!!! I'm happy you liked it. I didn't know you were so naughty! *wags finger* Hell, I oughta go out and make those memories too! :P
[Report This]Date: April 28, 2007 1:45 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
now THAT is some good D/s smexieness! and throughout you didn't lose that tone of slight uncertainty between them, that change that was going to happen if they went through with it. and lord love a drunk! banks rocked! i'm also very happy to see kags is an extrememly curious virgin. damn, we have dreams too! it just takes us a bit longer to get to them! it was hot and sensual (though i would have gone with a caramel topping myself) and the kind of thing you can read over again to get you in the mood!
Author's Response: OMG! You liked the smex! That shit kicked my ass and it wasn't even *all* of the things that could have been included. Would you believe I was looking at caramel topping when I wrote that?? I should have added it, ne? Bank is da shyt! Now I know why Wendy likes him so much. He's sooo cute. And you noticed that I tried to keep things just a lil' weird between them because it was new -you're da bomb, lol. I must try D/s again sometime. LOL@ virgins.
[Report This]Date: April 28, 2007 1:15 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 1
oh so sweet! may i add queen of the dialogue to the list of queenie type achievements we've given you? it's great. you have such a knack for hte banter back and forth. it reads like a screen play, natural and easy. i can picture them smacking each other around! and do i detect a trend here with kikyou and not playing the villan? i like her too. that's why if she's gonna be bad, she's usually long gone by the time kags arrives. on to the next chapter!!
Author's Response: C-note! WOOT! Ya liked it -now that makes me giddy. Queen of dialogue? o.o who me? :P Naw, I just have a thing about speaking properly - I just won't allow it unless it's a *must*. I love banter and slang and bad diction, lmao. It gives the characters a sort of "realness" to me.
[Report This]Date: April 28, 2007 1:08 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
i like the set up in ch 1...it was cute.very very nice lemon in this chapter...kinda hard to see kagome as a dom but you worked it.
Author's Response: Sheena!! Thankies, girl. Glad you liked it. The one thing I noticed about most people in the D/s scene -out of the scene they look so normal, lol. That's why it was easy to play with Kags that way. <33
[Report This]Date: April 28, 2007 11:39 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
*sqquueeee*
how do you always make me like everything you write?
I've never been all that into bondage..
but heck. that was hotter than anything.
amazing job. lol. I bet Neddi loves your ass even more now for that!
Author's Response: Keiko!! Thanks for the review, girl!
I'm not into bondage either (but don't tell nobody :P). This was an experiment, but I may try it again, lol.
[Report This]Date: April 28, 2007 8:35 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
That was an Awesome two chapters, KiKi!!! Hot, Hot, Hot! I love the writing style and the comedy relief too. Don't ever stop writing, you are the best! Take care of you!
Author's Response: Christal!! Thanks for the review. I hope everything is going well on your side of the world. <33
[Report This]Date: April 28, 2007 5:00 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
**APPLAUDS... WHISTLES... **
Awe-fucking-excellent, My Onna. Just one big long roller coaster of a ride.
From the notes, to friends, and lets not forget the, 'Kiss my entire ass', and the shitting of sneaker, lmao...
...on to secrets and poetry, playing of practical jokes, nice... hot... showers, and a nakkie Kags, lol... w00t! Go INU... to leather and feathers, chocolate sauce, and my personal fave...' The Swing'.
w00t!
Yup! One big awe-inspiring roller coaster that, yea...
... "This is the shit right here!"
You are awe-inspiring, My Onna
Huggzzz... ;)
Author's Response: LMAOOOOOOO!!!!! Oh, Onna, you're da bangin' :P I'm so happy you liked it. <33
[Report This]Date: April 28, 2007 3:21 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
Great one-shot! It didn't drag on at all! Loved it! Got me in the mood to write again! ^^
Keep up the great work, that block is nothing
Author's Response: ALLLLRIGHT!!!! So we'll see a new chap from you soon, ne?? Thanks, Ax! I'm happy all my fretting was for nothin' :P
[Report This]Date: April 28, 2007 12:40 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
DAMN that was hot I need a shower now!!! It burned my eyes out... Whoa!
On the Baptist crack, you need a good Southern Baptist preacher that will let you out at noon every Sunday for lunch and the ballgame. If he doesn't let you out the Deacons start pointing to their watches!!
Author's Response: Woot! Thanks, Girl <33 I actually threw in Baptist because Neddi is Baptist. We're presbyterian and I just fall asleep in church >.<
[Report This]Date: April 27, 2007 11:01 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
*sniff* Well i hate to multi-task when reading your fics! That was so fucking hawt! On a swing no less!! *stares open wide eye*
I got an AWESOME lemon that filled my big hentai guts! lol, I wish this was for me XD I kno for sho your dear frien loved it, and a happy birthday to her too! Awesome job queen of lemons!! ^__^
Author's Response: LOL! Hai, a swing. I had to do it. I saw a picture of one and was like @_@ *must* work that in! Happy you enjoyed and thanks for the great review!
[Report This]Date: April 27, 2007 10:50 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
Damn Girl!!
Just when I begin to fear that perhaps you are beginning to lose your love for our beloved and OH! so Hot! DogGod, you come back with a vengeance and bestow us with a jewel like this one!!!
Please accept my most humble apologies for ever doubting you, Oh queen of InuLove!!
As always, you leave me tingling and all hot & bothered!! THANK YOU!!! ;)
Author's Response: Get tired of our Dog God?! BLASPHEMY!!!
Never, lol. Thanks for the supa awesome review. Makes my day and I'm ecstatic that you liked my first dabble in D/s!! <33
[Report This]Date: April 27, 2007 9:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 1
Oh yes! I so LOVE kikyou!!! Glad to see u finally finish the fic, and am sure your fried loves it alot! ^_^ Awesome job as awlays...keep it on...
Now, on to the next chapter! *grins*
Author's Response: Tee hee :P I know, Kik was good again. I think it's becoming a pattern! <33
[Report This]Date: April 27, 2007 9:00 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
Now *that* is a damn birthday fic! So....I'll just keep yours until X'mas. Actually, I'll keep it until my Colts win the superbowl again next year :)
OH MY GAWD! That was freaking hawt! I loved all the Depeche (hooray for Depeche Mode!!!) *that* was worth the wait. You're going to be so sad when you read your birthday fic ('cause my crap ain't nearly as hawt as your crap-k?)
Dayum woman! Just...dayum!!!
Author's Response: Ninja Teacher! <33 I better see that "damn thing" before Xmas, lol. Glad you liked it -really glad especially after how long it took. @_@ DM is da shyt, ne? I had to do something for them :P
[Report This]Date: April 27, 2007 8:32 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
*Fanning self* That was a SCORCHER. That romantic smut just made my day, lol. I still don't know how you mangage to make smutty and sweet at the same time. But somehow, you always pull it off. I really liked this one (as always!). Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks, Ms. Goddess! Ya gotta love the romantic smut, ne? I didn't realize I was writing it that way until I was done. But I'm happy you liked it! It was my first attempt at D/s >.> sooo mild that was, lol.
[Report This]Date: April 27, 2007 8:13 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
My sister..
What is a girl to say after reading that?? I am sooo fucking honored. This shit rawked the house. Let's see...where to begin? First, you made me laugh to the point of tears at his shorts. Apple bottom..I dont think anyone can top that one. Oh god, the line..."This is the shit right here!" Made me laugh extra hard. The lemon was fantastic...It was perfect. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. You will be my friend and my sister until the end of time..just you me, onna and your socks dammit!! I will take care of you, and you me. Of course that is what family is for, ne?? Thank you so much for being my friend and sister. You are soooooo loved in Cali.
Your Neddi-luv
Author's Response: NEDDDDDDDDDI!!!!!! *Bear hugs* I'm SO happy you liked it, seriously. It took so long and I really wanted it to be decent for you. You're very welcome, I love you to death, and it was a small thing compared to all the wonderful things you've given me. Like I said, you're loved in NY! Ya know, we were probably separated at birth, lol.
[Report This]Date: April 27, 2007 7:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 1
Wow, this shit is candy!! I am gonna keep reading....
Author's Response: You're so silly! The whole time I was writing, I swear I could hear you saying, "Shhh! Inu is on!" lmaooo
[Report This]Date: April 27, 2007 7:10 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
Hot damn, that was good.... OK.. now part 2... **goes back to read more... **
Author's Response: "My entire ass", right, onna?? lmao!
[Report This]Date: April 27, 2007 6:41 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 2
Yah...and leaving my mark here too....dammit...my story and want to be first reviewer...lol...Whoot...am so excited...just about ready to fall over with joy....**runs back to read it!!
Author's Response: Only you, lol.
[Report This]Date: April 27, 2007 6:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Playing the Angel Pt. 1
Just wanted to leave a mark at the first reviewer...although aint read it yet...lol....be back in a few though..whoot...my story is here!!
Author's Response: When I saw that, I was like O.O she read it that fast?! I should have known, lol.