[Report This]Date: November 30, 2007 5:52 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter One
really nice chappy... now i cant stop thinking about the licking lips XD I jus love to see when a guy does that sexily... i mean take T.I for instance *sighs dreamily* lol
Author's Response: Thank you, little one. And yeah, when the guy's got it down pat, it's sexy as hell. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: November 24, 2007 7:58 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter Four
Viki! I liked it =) I was super bored and took a break from studying to read ya =p The lemon was great, but I think the whole chapter moved a little fast - try slowing it down, add some more detail next time. You've really improved though! Great job, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Sorry about that Sweetie. And thank you for the compliment. Just remember one thing; almost everything that I write is translated from French to English. I AM trying hard, though. And my dictionnary is right beside my computer.
The last time that I posted a chapter on this site was before Kiki revamped it (again) and it kept telling me that I was 'not authorised' to send in anything. I don't know HOW many times I scripted the chappie ( on ED) before last before getting fed up & texting it in by smaller sections. That's why there were so many up-dates for it.
I don't know where to put up an html on this clunker. Fo that matter, I'm pretty sure that I don't have enough memory, either. This stupid thing IS 13 years old, & only has 240 megs, at that. The only reason that I've got it was because I wasn't sure that I'd like or get the hang of 'internet'. If all goes well, I'll be getting something better early next summer.
As for this last chappie, well, because of what happened to me the LAST time, I didn't feel like writing for over four hours. That's why it was kinda short & lacking. I could do better, I know, but I DID want to send something for Kiki to sink her teeth into. It's really, basically for her. Plus I hadn't up-dated anything for several months due to my illness & operation. Not to mention that the recovery isn't going as well as was planned.
I'm pleased that it got you through that boredom of your's, though.
And I wanted to thank you. Between you & Danga, you've both been busy little beavers. You know what I mean. I'm really grateful to both of you.
So. I hope that all is well with you & yours; and this answers any questions that you might have had about me & these silly stories of mine (chuckles).
Thank you for taking the time to write me, Sweetie.
Till next time, JA NE
[Report This]Date: November 23, 2007 6:42 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter Four
WOOT!!! Hot table lovin'! I loved this chap. I like the silliness between them and the sex is awesome. You're such a great writer, Mammy! Thanks soooo much for such an awesome gift. I need to repost these to Absolution!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!
But I truly do not consider myself to be that good a writer. You, on the other hand are in the major leagues, so these words, coming from you, are quite an honor. One that I don't feel like I deserve. Thank you.
This chapter was written just for you. It didn't come out the way I really wanted it to, though. But when I started, the 'Smutt Bunny' started whispering in my ear, & this was the result. Short, sweet, and smutty! I know that I should have played it out a bit more, but with the way I had to go about posting the last chapters, well, let's just say that I REALLY wanted you to get it ASAP. This lemonny one is ALL yours! As for the sex, well, you know where THAT came from! I really did have fun writing up that silliness with the teriyaki sauce, but I think that I may have edited it a tad too much.
I promise to do better, next time, now that I know that the site doesn't want to restrict me into up-dating a dozen times, anymore. Whatever you did, it worked. I can write longer chapters now without having to worry. I found THAT out when I texted in 'Incense'. Never thought that I could sweat drop bullets 'cause of a limited time space (snickers). So, until we cross paths again in the very near future, HUGGSS!!
Luv Ya, Night Owl Sweetie. You take care now, ya hear?
Mammy.
Date: August 30, 2007 3:41 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter Three
This is my first attempt to try and review on this site, so I hope you get it. Wonderful erotic story. Please keep it up!
Author's Response: Sorry I couldn't get to you sooner than this. I forgot to turn on my 'author's response'. Thank you. I'm glad you like. There will be more. Here as on Eternal Destiny, the original site. I promise.
[Report This]Date: August 27, 2007 10:22 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter Three
HELL YEAH, MY FEUDAL MAMMY! ^_^
OMG, that lemon was great! But when he complained about carpet burn I almost split a side! That was both delicious and hilarious --great way to bring chappie 3 to a close. I'm going to repost this on Absolution today. Loves, Loves it! Thank you so much for such an awesome present!!
[Report This]Date: June 14, 2007 11:36 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter Two
OOOOOH HELLLL YEEEEEAH! Vikki, DAYUM, GIRL!!!! That was hawt. "Like this? And this? And this?!" Lawd, I could just *see* it as it happened -fucking nummmmmmmy! That was an awesome lemon -one of the best I've ever read. Hell, I need me a showa now! I'm DEFINITELY posting this on Absolution, lemon queen. Thank you SO much for such a wonderful gift. I feel very privileged! *hugs & Luv*
[Report This]Date: June 14, 2007 11:35 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter One
Vikki!!! I'm sorry I missed this. My apologies. I'm so honored and deeply grateful and I LOVE IT! The poem was soo sweet and the canon was just perfect! I love the WAFF, and since I don't write it much, it's a real treat to read the good stuffs!!! I'm going to post it to my site too, okay? Thank you very, VERY much and I hope everything is going well in your life. You remain in my prayers. *Hugs & Luv*