[Report This]Date: February 09, 2012 11:15 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: You're Crashing Into Me
SQUEEEE! Up-a-datey!
if that's not a word, it am now. :P
Woohoo... soo loved how this came out; wonder if there gonna be a cat, or would that be a inu-hanyou/ookami scratch fest in the near future. If not there should be, on principal alone, hehe.
Unguanakickbooty! Yesh! *dances*
Hugzz
Da Grrrl Says: ONNA-MOM!!!!!
Why haven't you logged in with your account yet? You don't have to be anon anymore. <33 And I haz happy you liked the update! My hands are starting to bug me, but I'm not stopping, not while I have a little inspiration. I really hate having carpal, Onna. It's debilitating, and the other "condition" I have exacerbates it. :( I'm already in braces after a few updates -it's a real downer. Sigh. But anyway, thanks for the lub! <3333
Date: February 09, 2012 11:03 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: You're Crashing Into Me
I love this story! ^__^ I'm really glad you decided to include it with the other FA stories -- it's alot of fun to read, and I love the way you changed their personalities. It's nice to see Kagome warm up, even just that little bit!
Take care! (and go rest your hands!)
Rana ;)
P.S. I read your reply to my review the other day -- I'm honored, thank you! <3
Da Grrrl Says: THANKS SO MUCH!! <333
It really means a lot that you're enjoying this one. I've struggled a lot with it and this is the first chapter that actually flowed for me with no issues. I even got a long update out of it -I'm so happy!
And you must have read my mind. My hands are already acting up after just a few continuous updates. :( I can't stand having carpal tunnel. It's a writer's worst nightmare. My other illness makes it worse, so it's miserable. But I'm not stopping. I'm inspired at the moment and I can't bear to lose it because of my hands. >.< So wish me luck -and you're much welcome! :D
Date: February 09, 2012 10:08 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: You're Crashing Into Me
ayame's so different in this story! but i love it cause i NEVER see her like this lol. and ohh miroku, 'when did the elderly carry iphones?!' sometimes i ask myself that same question LOL. also on another note, joining that mailing list, best decision ever! now i wont miss an update haha. anyways cant wait for the next one!
Da Grrrl Says: Haha -Ayame is crazy, but she's fun to write. There's a lot of role reversal, so Kagome is InuYasha and she's Kouga, but girls, I think, are more vicious than boys. That's why their arguments are a little nastier. And thanks for joining the mailinglist. I update it every time I create a new chapter, but once the reader accounts take effect, you'll be able to get mail alerts straight from my website, so either way you'll be covered. :D
[Report This]Date: February 09, 2012 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: You're Crashing Into Me
*snort* I think you were right, Goober. I was on Chrome every time I reviewed the other stories, but now I'm on Mozilla, so let's see how it works. =P Haha. Anyway, I LOVED. THIS. CHAPTER!!!! You say it hates you, but I thought it read smoothly and I really enjoyed it. =) This is like my favorite fic, haha. Well done, Goober!
Da Grrrl Says: Nutella!! <3
I had a feeling it was the browser. Chrome and Internet Explorer don't receive this website or ED very well. Firefox is the best browser (Safari works well, too, and Opera is decent). And lookie -your review came through with no problems! xD
And you liked the chapter! Squee! I'm proud of this one because it didn't give me fits like every one before it. I cleaned up the prior chapters before I started in on this one -OMG. Terrible. There were so many mistakes I never caught because I went into "just get this shit off my desk" mode -haha. But they're decent now and the flow should be better. I'm gonna work on this one again soon while it's being nice to me!
Date: February 09, 2012 9:42 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: You're Crashing Into Me
Loved this update and the art. BTW Ayame is a mega Bitch!
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, chick! Isn't it funny how she's completely different from GFE? >.>
Date: February 09, 2012 9:34 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: You're Crashing Into Me
I think you did a great job, and its cool to see a big update, considering how much the story hates you :P
Great update! :D
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! >.> This story has hated me for ages, but I think we might be reconciling now. xD
[Report This]Date: February 09, 2012 8:45 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: You're Crashing Into Me
Great update grrrl.. love how everything is coming together.. thanks for sharing it with us.. trial and all -- maybe this story just felt like it needed a little love this time and worked for you.. LOL!
Until the next update.. *HUGS*
Da Grrrl Says: NEOOOOOOOOOO!
That's what I'm hoping. The first few chapters, who knows how I got them done? >.> But this one, for the first time, really felt 'right' and I'm so happy about that! I'm even back on track plot-wise, so I'm giddy right now. But -no time to savor. I'm already working on the next update! Thanks for the review luv!!
Date: February 08, 2012 1:14 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: A Worthwhile Pursuit?
"just be mindful of that tender heart...it would kill me to watch it break.: Awwww your writing is always touching at best, hysterical with the slang :P Love it, grrl. but then again, I always have! :P
yourpenny
Date: February 08, 2012 12:56 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Human, Demon, or Other?
damn that was awesome! love seeing kags as an inu and yasha reversed, lovely turn of pace! Your fics always pick me up, they're written very fluidly and flow like water. Love it! Looking forward to more then beddybye. your penny
[Report This]Date: January 25, 2012 6:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Human, Demon, or Other?
Uh, I'm sorry if I'm invading your inbox with all of these review notifications, because for some weird reason, they're not all showing up. This will be the last time, and if it still doesn't work, then dammit, I'm going to find another away! *determined*
Goober! :D I just read your blog, and, awwww, you rock too.
[Report This]Date: January 25, 2012 6:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Human, Demon, or Other?
You're review page thingy is going wonky - it won't show the rest of my reviews...hmmm...
[Report This]Date: January 25, 2012 6:20 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: No Hidden Catch, No Strings Attached...
Daawwww. I got all smiley at the parts where he was all protective and possesive, because it's just so HIM. I freaking love the way you portray Inuyasha in your stories; just awesomeeee. =) Can't wait for the next installment, love.
[Report This]Date: January 25, 2012 5:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Human, Demon, or Other?
(*twitch* Wtf. Didn't work that time either...alright, one more time? If not I'll just include this one in with my review next chapter.)
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...Sorry. Had to wipe the drool from the keyboard from picturing Yash in that costume... e_e Yum!
Goober! :D I just read your blog, and, awwww, you rock too.
Date: January 25, 2012 5:51 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: If I Met You Halfway...
Goober! :D I just read your blog, and, awwww, you rock too.
Date: January 25, 2012 3:38 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: How Far am I Willing to Go?
I love the smartass and witty comebacks you have everyone say. xD If only I had the creativity to come up with something like that...haha. Anyway, glad to see that mom and daughter didn't hash it out like last time. :) If only Yash and HIS 'rents could talk it out...or have them just accept their son's actions for what they are. But, alas...DRAMA. XD haha. Luuuuuuuuuurrrrrve it!
[Report This]Date: January 25, 2012 1:03 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: A Worthwhile Pursuit?
Gah. Damn Sesshomaru needs to get the stick out of his frigid ass...ahem. Brilliant, dahlin'! :D I especially loved the moment between Yash and Kag when they both turned to look at each other after walking away and they wave... so precious. :) Again, looooove it. Onward!
[Report This]Date: January 25, 2012 12:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Human, Demon, or Other?
"Piece of fuck!" Hahah. xD This is one of my favorites stories of yours, because I love the role reversals, Kagome a hanyou and Yash a human; even their personalities are reversed lol. Loooove it. I also love how Yash doesn't give up; it's just like him. :) On to the next chapter, and awaaaaaaaay!!!
Date: October 10, 2011 2:48 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: No Hidden Catch, No Strings Attached...
I like the situation switched! They're so cute together
Date: July 15, 2011 10:53 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: No Hidden Catch, No Strings Attached...
awesome! Love all your stories, keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: June 26, 2011 12:03 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: No Hidden Catch, No Strings Attached...
i was so into it that i hadn't realize the scroll had reached the end x(
First off, let me comment on how amazingly awesome ur creativeness always draws me in!! I mean seriously, it may seem simple to you - on the ideas of what u bring forth, but i REALLY admire you!!! I don't ever see anyone come as close to u as writing and i cant picture havin anyone else other than u as my fav author!
You break down things right to the core, changing everything to make the story perfect. Having Ayama with Kouga's personality is one of the many elements in this story that i adore!!! The focus is on Inu/Kag - no doubt, but u always give others the right amount of attention needed. Yo am jus reading and shaking my head in amazement - and it's not even like this is the 1st story of urs i've read!!
Further more - i LOVE Kagura and I can't wait to see how things with Sesshy and her would progress (if u choose her for him and a growth of something strong tween them), I'm feeling like if it was to happen, then Sesshy would stop sitting with that thick ass stick up his ass.
Inu and Kags are soooo cute together!!! I absolutely ADORE how natural things between them got with Inu draping his arms around her; jus interacting with each other seemed like second nature. And then in the car?
I almost cried at how Kags snapped at him, and opened up so easily. That's the first she's done that, and idk - it was jus so cute yet heartbreaking at the same time. But the tenderness Inuyasha gives her, and his patience - any girl would be a fool not to fall for a guy like that x)
This was a fantastic read - and Kags still have her demons hiding in the closet, and alot of things aren't said or brought to let so this fic can only get better and heated - I. CANNOT. WAIT!!! lol
Oh oh - and i havent forgotten about our fav lecher - I feel it for him!! lol, Sango and Kagura makes a good team - they jus evil!!! lmao
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2011 11:05 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: If I Met You Halfway...
I love Angel Sanctuary - and when i saw u mentioned it i cudnt stop squealing cuz Lucifer is HAWT and so is Inuyasha so mixin hawt on hawt?!
Damn grrrl...
I really enjoy this (when dont i ever? haha). I'm all too familiar with the similar things based on the family situation with Inu and his peeps - especially the bro. So it really angers me reading that part xD Often had to take a breather to calm myself. Although the parents are doin it for love, i hate how blinded they are by superficial things, and how Izzy's baby Inu so much.
Also again, i love how there's knowledge of everyone connected but the coffee hasnt brewed fully as yet. With Kagura goin to work at a bank - and would meet sesshy right? And then the even Sesshy's work place is holding - they jus happen to be the sponsor for the sorority with Sango? And - if Kagome does get to b a sister or associates more with Sango (no brain storm there), then she'll have to attend the banquet, n even then if things go smoothly with her n Inu she could be his date still - which will ultimately bring Inu's pretentious family and the hanyou goddess clashing - for the worst?
ah~ Shit's gonna hit the fan either way and i'll be reading to see it unfold - in sloooow motion lolol x] ok ok am shutting Dx
LOVE IT!!!!
Date: June 24, 2011 8:15 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: No Hidden Catch, No Strings Attached...
I love this. I've read so many stories where Kagome is a hanyou, but you honestly portray the whole situation the best. This story brings out my every emotion and right now all I want to do is cry for Kagome and give a huge hug. An utterly amazing story!
[Report This]Date: June 24, 2011 1:16 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: How Far am I Willing to Go?
So i had to re-read from chp 1... I can't blv how much of ur writing i missed out on... I have soooo much catchin up to doto last me a lifetime - am sure lol
First off - i'm glad u have the sharp-tongue Inuyasha still - even with the roles switched... that heated convo with his parents had me on edge. I hate how his mother is as oppose to his father. Even those roles are switched cuz it's usually the dad who's the pain in the ass - or has Sesshy mirroring his attitude!
Then the whole AYAME being a sneaky bitch. She's a full demon aint she? and if she isnt then she's an hanyou right? idk, i jus feel like she's not human, and she's so sneaky - am more eager (atm) to find out things bout her.
Yo i love how u have Inuyasha and the boiz in general (Miroku) to be a man... like thinking bout sex n what's not - but not havin them sayin it raw like man-whores... i think it's cute xD haha. Man i hope Inu gets into the party - i wanna see more development with him n kags. Plus baseball Inu? Am seeing the suit - blue or red would make ma heart beat rapidly haha.
Ah~ i love how ur switching works perfectly without pushing too much on the OOC (cept for kags), but u kno wat i mean xD haha
And i kno am late, but u've been writing for a while now as of the 14th or 16th of June right? uh 5yrs? Am not sure, but congrats on the number!!! I'm glad i was there to see ur growth in the earlies - u rawk!!!
[Report This]Date: June 19, 2011 12:05 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: No Hidden Catch, No Strings Attached...
I really like the Kagura you have here. She very accepting and I can't believe I didn't figure out her heritage! It is a great new angle to work from, and you've done it well. I'm kind of liking Ayame as one of the 'bad guys' too; you kind of get that vibe off of her at first and it works! Man Inuyasha's parents are going to freak out when they find out about Kagome. If he hasn't moved out by then I can't see how he'd stay after that fight!
[Report This]Date: June 18, 2011 8:27 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: If I Met You Halfway...
omfg. *fans self* Your imagery is just so awesome when it comes to the goodness of Inuyasha. I really thought Kagome was going to come out to Sango in this chapter too, aahhhh! That suspense is getting to me! I like Kagura, in general, but I never could really figure a good way to make her into a good character but you did a damn good job of it. I cannot believe Miroku fell for that either! How would he think it was okay to ogle someone else like that in front of Sango and think there would be no repercussions? I'm sure he'll be sore and cramped up in the morning after spending the night in one position! Hooray for Midori being a good mama too, I liked that scene very much. It shows that her mother still knows her, even though they've been fighting and haven't really talked in ages. Not only that, but Kagome listened, which is testament to that mother child bond I'm getting oh so fond of! If only Izayoi would do the same, although you're doing a great job of justifying it. To her, she's doing all that she can to stop her baby from making the wrong choices. The fight those two had, versus the conversation Midori and Kagome had is a sharp contrast that really shows the differences in their relationships and parenting styles.