Date: April 27, 2008 10:00 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Butterflies.
nee-chan!!! this is so sweet!!! and there comes the angst and suffering... but i just love the picture of chibi Inu and chibi Kagome together!! glad u hva ur inspiration back!! I understand u completely, thanks for this wonderful story!!
Author's Response: NEECHAN!!!!! *hugs* Thanks for the review. :) It took a long time, but I'm finally writing again. I'm about to start on Chap 3, and then it will be a wrap. So happy you liked the Chibis! :D
Date: April 27, 2008 5:42 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Butterflies.
you leave me guessing as always... man I can't wait for the thrird part... you really know how to leave us hanging... (^_^)/
Author's Response: Neo! ^_^ I try! I really do try not to be >.> so obvious. But... yeah. :D I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: April 27, 2008 5:39 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
After I read this chapter my stomach is making strange things.
I can see where this is leading and to say it outright I think it will make me very sad. Inu Yasha and Kagome are just so cute together and I'm really hoping that they don't have to separate from each other, because that would be just... Urgh my stomach hurts again when I think about it.
You know you're the only author that makes me feel such things after reading yor stories and because of that I'm addicted to them. I'm so glad that you'll write more in the future, I'm really looking forward to it.
So again, sorry for my mistakes; I hope you'll understand what I wanted to say you^^
Greetings from Germany
Lara
Author's Response: Thank you, Lara!! Wow, you're from Germany! :D Do you have any idea how amazing that is, to know that someone in a country so far away is reading and actually enjoying my work? That's incredible -thanks so much!! And you like story (even though the anxiety is getting ya!) Sorrrrrry! :D I can't give hints to the ending, but it's great to know that I actually make you feel something with my silly tales. :) I'm working on the last one now, so the tummy troubles will end soon. ^_^
Date: April 27, 2008 4:37 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
You did it again another cute chapter ,she save his live with a kiss. But I just knew it that you put snubby brat Kikyo to be Inuyasha bride. What up with Koga and his sled he act like he the coolest person with a sheet of wood between his leg..He think "He The Thang"! "What Eeevvveeerrrr"! LOL! Kagome it the cutest ever stepping up for her Yasha. Thank for te hugs and a* BIG FAT HUGGGGS* back to you keep up on the wonder writing .
Author's Response: Hah!! I know! Kouga was such a butthead. This is taking place waaaaaay back in the day, so things like sleds were a little more important than they'd ever be now. But I did like the way Yash and Kags kinda saved each other. One more to go, girl, and then maybe I can get some work done on my other stuff. Yay! :D *hugs and plushies*
Date: April 27, 2008 3:40 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Butterflies.
Another good chapter. Even though these two are really young, you can already tell that they're in love with each other. That scene at the end with the snowbank...wow. And the way he tries to protect her from the knowledge that they have very different stations in life is wonderful. But Kouga....what a jerk. That's all I can say about him. I really can't stand elistist little punks like that...UH!
As for the very end....oh, dear. I have a terrible feeling I know what marriage was arranged....Inuyasha and Kikyou, Princess of the East. He is NOT going to take that well, especially after what happened with Kagome after that sled crashed. They are in for some pain, boy, as Inuyasha's duty will have to contend with the fact that he will have to give up his soul mate. And Kagome WILL have to find out that she and Inuyasha truly are from different worlds, that her relationship with the prince was unique to say the least. And he will be forced to accept that he can't protect her from these things. This is so GOOD, girl. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: You liked it! :D I'm having a surprisingly easy time penning this one, seriously. And I'm so glad! I think it's because the story is really simple, no "lemon" pressure, and it's not as draining as writing angst. (Can you believe that I even said that??)
Kouga was definitely a jerk. I don't like him so it's easy to show him as one. And yesh <3 the love is already there. He loved her before she was born. I think that's probably the cutest aspect of the whole story. I could have made this tale longer, but I don't really want to. I kinda want the impact of three quick (well, not so quick. Writing this stuff takes a while!) chapters that tell a little tale.
Thanks so much for enjoying it and leaving such awesome reviews. You're one of my best reviewers, really. You pay attention to *everything* and I LOVE that!
Date: April 27, 2008 1:13 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Butterflies.
Awww man! Why her?!?!?! lol...I loved this so much! Inuyasha and Kagome are so cute! can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Shankies, la! ^_^ One more to go, and I'm really hoping to have it out tomorrow. *crosses fingers*
[Report This]Date: April 27, 2008 12:33 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
Boo for arranged marriages and treating children like whores. Boo for loudmouthed Kougas. Especially loudmouthed 14 year old Kougas who for some reason brag about owning sleds. I mean, it's a frickin sled.
And boo for encouraging Falcon. You know better than that, woman!
But yay for giving Inuyasha a set. Maybe for once we'll get a story where someone completely refuses to be traded around for the sake of the family.
Author's Response: LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG, I'm cracking up here!!! The whole time I was doing the sled part, I was thinking the same way. A jerk popping shit over a sled, lol. But, again, this is taking place at a time where there were no video games and such things. Buts till -we think alike!!! :D
I did not encourage Falcon! >.> Okay, maybe just a little. And hell yeah, let's give Yasha a set! I wanted to let him bust Kouga's ass but that would have jacked Kiyoko's lil' manhood lesson. Darned fluff.
Date: April 27, 2008 12:13 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Butterflies.
Nice chapter!!!!!!!!!! And you're still going!!! GOOD!!! VERY!!!
Although... you can't keep the agnst out of your stories, ne? You must through Kouga and an arrange marriage somewhere... LOL Well. That's Kiki, can't everything be just fluff!!! LOL You must sweat for happiness!!
Beautiful sweetie, only three chapters? Really? LOL Now, seriously, great update sweetie, really great!!!
:HUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGSSSSSSSSSSS: LOVE YOU!!!!!!
Author's Response: Mama Hen!!!! You consider that angst?? Really????? That's not angst at all to me, and it's >.> definitely more fluff than I usually like to deal with. But I'm so glad you like it! *hugs* That chap took all night to write with revisions and editing >.< but I'm satisfied, and I still feel like I can keep writing, so that makes me very happy! Let's hope this momentum carries over to my others! >.< Love you! HUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGSSSSSSSSSSS!!
Date: April 26, 2008 11:53 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Butterflies.
ack!! i know what the obvious choice is...but it's WAFF. wait...kikyou weds sesshomaru!! it has to be a wedding between the eldest! and kissing 10 year olds! you're getting as bad as me and my 15 and 25 year old!
Author's Response: You just come around for my fluff! :P Kidding! Shit, like I have so much of it. *looks around fluff-less house* I shant answer any questions. We have one chapter to go and we'll just have to work for there. :P And it was a tap kiss -no tongues!
Date: April 26, 2008 11:34 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Butterflies.
Another great, sweet chapter. I love the young...well, love, blooming.
Author's Response: Shankies! :D
Date: April 26, 2008 6:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
OMG Inuyasha is SO adorable. I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks, Renee! I'm glad you like him (I thought he was pretty cute, too. I love little kids at that age). Chap 2 will be up in about an hour. :D
[Report This]Date: April 26, 2008 2:45 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
you did it again... like how this going.. can't wait for the rest... good luck with the rest... (^_^)/
Author's Response: NEO!!!!! Thank you for gracing me with a review. *hugs* I'm happy you're enjoying my attempt at the fluffies. I think I needed a break from my hard stuff just to get going again. Thanks for the luck, too. I need it!
[Report This]Date: April 26, 2008 10:46 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
Oh! It's so sweet and wonderful. I love a good fairytale. Thank you for sharing. *hugs* I'm so glad you're back on form, K-chan. (I'm sorry you're having trouble with those nasty bots.) I hope it lasts forever and a day (like a happily ever after). :) Heehee... More! More!
Author's Response: Neechan! *tackleglomps* I owe you a lengthy e-mail, but I'm really focused on finishing this on time, so bear with me. I'm so glad you like it. I'm never confident about my fluff, but the encouragement has worked WONDERS. I may even try more of it in the future. :D
-_-; The bots. God, I was PISSED when I had to delete all those bogus reviews. I hate capcha, but it's that or get the site rocked with nonsense. I had to do it to ED as well. =\
Date: April 26, 2008 4:50 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
oh my gosh! I LOVED THIS! I loved how Inuyasha was...can't wait to read more! I can already tell that this is going to be one of my favorites!!
Author's Response: Thanks, La!! ^_^ I'm almost done with part 2 (I can hardly believe it!) and I hope you like it. :D
[Report This]Date: April 26, 2008 3:22 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
Pfft... And I'm the one who gets tagged with the fluff accusations.... It's no Last Exit To Eden (hint, hint), but it's good to have you back.
Author's Response: LOL! Why, thankies, lil bro. And I have not forgotten (hint, hint) LETE. Just give me a few days to gather my forces. <.<
And you ARE fluffy!!!
[Report This]Date: April 26, 2008 2:20 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
Awwww, sweet! OOh, that WAFF gives me goosebumps. :D
Author's Response: Onna, you're so silly. :P
Date: April 26, 2008 1:31 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
Ohh that so cute!
Author's Response: Breezie! *hugs* Thanks, hun. ^_^
Date: April 26, 2008 1:02 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
Awwwwwww!!! You know...Having been diagnosed with diabetes a few years ago has changed my diet & eating habits, but they never mentioned that I could actually go into sugar shock by reading something as sweet as this!!! And I HATE having to inject insulin more than once a day!!! However, I must admit that it was sooooo worth it!!! I love it!!! This was just what the Dr ordered!! It just made my entire day !! I really look forward to the next part and above anything and everything: Welcome back sensei!! You are the absolute master of stories and I really missed you!! I really hope that this means we will be reading more of your wonderful stories soon!!! Love you, and best wishes: Neko Chan (Midcat).
Author's Response: LOL! You're reviews always crack me up, woman! *hugs* Thanks for that. You made me feel *really* good about a story I was unsure of. >.> You know me and fluff. We have a love/hate relationship. But thanks for the warm welcome. It's been too long and I'm really hoping I'm going to stick around for a while. I missed writing, but more importantly, I missed my lovelies! <333
Date: April 26, 2008 12:37 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
Wow, Kiki. What a comeback! Inuyasha was absolutely ADORABLE, from his certainty that Kagome was a girl to his cute little vows to protect her, he was an absolute doll! This was so good...and such a departure from most of the stuff you usually write. That just goes to show that you can truly write anything. You're just GOOD, girl, lol.
I'll probably drop you a line later on just to chat (and not about you know what). Take care, chica, and it's so good to see you writing again!
Author's Response: Ms. Thang!!!! Whazzzauuuuup! :P I'm glad you liked it. I actually had fun writing it,. There was no pressure and I think that's what I needed right now. Plus, I've been watching early InuYasha lately, and remembering why I loved him so much. Then whammo! Out comes a story. Not too original or anything, but so what? As long as we're having a good time, eh? And you liked my fluff! SQUEEEE! I don't >.> fluff normally, but I'm trying my hand. We'll see how I do. And yesh, drop me a line!
Date: April 25, 2008 11:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutteee ^^
I love this idea, even if it is predictable and extremely fluffy =p Can't wait for parts 2 & 3 =)
I'm so glad you decided to write something!
Even if it's something new, it's great because you can get all the good feedback you'll surely get, and jump back into the swing of things.
Good luck!
Author's Response: Mhmm, that's me. I be a lil' predictable, but dontcha love the idea?? I've always wanted to do a fairytale sorta thing and this is probably as close as I'll ever get. And yesh, I wrote something, and hopefully, this is the kick I need to get my pen back. I haven't felt like doing anything for so long, but I do now, so I want to take advantage as long as I can! Thanks for reading, Axy! <33 I always look forward to hearing what you think.
[Report This]Date: April 25, 2008 11:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
Yo its me Zach. I can't talk long because I need to go to bed so I can stay awake at work but I just wanted to tell you that this story shot up to my ultimate favorite list.
I don't know what it is about it but it is so cute and perfect. It makes me feel warm inside.
Well take care and I hope you are doing well.
Your friend,
Zach
Author's Response: Zach!! Thank you. :) You know, this is kind of your story, too. Remember when I promised some kind of fluff on devART? Well, here it is. I'm not very fluffy, per se, but I'm definitely trying to leash my angst MUCH more than I normally do. I mean, how much damage can I do with 3 chappies?? :Prn
<.< No, that wasn't a trick question.
[Report This]Date: April 25, 2008 10:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
*mega-squee* AWWW it's so damn CUTE! like. i'm really grinning here gurrrl. It's adorable. Amazing job aaas usual. :)
<3
KC
Author's Response: KEIKO!!!! *glompers* Thanks, Hun. :D You know, I just found out tonight that you have a new story up at ED. I'm all over it as soon as I finish this up over the weekend. Squee. I love your stuff! <33
Date: April 25, 2008 10:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
that was cute left a smile on my face can't wait for more updates
Author's Response: Thank yooooou! And I'll be working on Hikari very soon. 0.~
[Report This]Date: April 25, 2008 9:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
This is a perfect chapter!! Great start to (my opinion) a great and orginal story!
I enjoyed the fluff mixed with the angst! The use of chibi young InuYasha is perfect! I love his speech!! Being just like other little boys and hiding on the nanny/babysitter. And to prove that he was really himself - Very cute!! Can see this!! and have seen it before! What little ones would do for cookies!! He showed the natural talent that all kids show for being in tune with 'supernatural' the knowledge of the baby's gender to being able to talk and communicate with teh baby in the womb. I loved that he got to name her!!
The birthing scene and the afterwards I loved as well! The little warrior/protector!! So delightful!! And him getting to hold Kagome in the end was so touching!
Love all teh ineraction and depth to the characters!!
I like the fluff... it is needed in this time of darkness and its light and sheltering warmth are beyond words to express!! Thank you so very very much!!!
Author's Response: Now this is the review I was waiting for. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed the first chap. It's a really short story, but I think you'll like it and it does have 'ze fluff' like I promised it would. I'm sorry it took me so long to get my writing bug back long enough to get this going. But inspiration struck late last night and I grabbed it while I could.
Prayers and best wishes to you. You're not having it easy right now, but if the fic makes you smile, then it's well worth it. ^_^
Date: April 25, 2008 8:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Destined.
Not "terribly original"? Psh, you should stop lying Kiki! I honestly haven't seen anything like this plot! Inuyasha having a pregnant nanny, Inuyasha easily guessing the sex of the baby, Inuyasha naming the baby, Inuyasha "pr'tecting" the baby...I love it! I can't wait till they get older! The fall in love age sounds right!
I LOVE it!!! Watch out world, the blatantly unapologetic grrrl is BACK...
And BETTER THAN EVER!!! <3
Happy Writing!
P.s: I hate this security code thing...this is my third time trying! lol
Author's Response: I'm SO sorry. Last night Axel's fic was spammed 53 times. FIFTY-THREE and I had to delete them all by fucking hand. I was so mad... so I need to keep that up for a few days until the "bot" decides to give up. Don't worry, it won't last and thanks for making sure I got the review.
YOU LIKED IT!!!
I was writing your next chap when this bug hit me and I though, "If I don't pound this out right now I'll lose it." So, here I is. Chap two will post sometime tomorrow and expect time jumps. I'm determined to keep 3 chapters.
Hugs! Thanks, TLH, for always being so supportive of my efforts. It means a great deal. <3