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Reviewer: sheena   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2008 10:20 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Day Five.

I feel so bad for Rin...most of the time when I think of marriages falling apart in my fandom...it would be Inu and Kags....either because of Kikyou, or Inu's stubborness....(but they always get back together! of course hehe). It's just hard to see it as Sess and Rin...I feel so bad for them!

Author's Response: That's why I stuck it on Sess and Rin. It was about time Yash and Kags got a break from me. I have plenty of time to torture them in other fictions. Though, I admit, having them so "lovey dovey" every minute is hard to write. I'm an angst girl at heart; all this fluff between them irks me, lol.



Reviewer: sheena   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2008 10:12 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Day Four.

Oh wow. That was a long one...and its so perfect...I love all the others, but this is my favorite so far! I just can't put it into words!

Author's Response: Yeah, I liked that one, too. Sessie makes a great Scrooge!



Reviewer: sheena   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2008 10:03 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Day Three.

Wow. Rin is usually so strong and sure of herself in fics...I like this Rin...it makes her human...(that she is).

The story sounds about right actually...Kagura is a true Cinderella...she was always sent to clean up Naraku's messes...I never thought of it that way before



Author's Response: I honestly don't see adult Rin as strong or sure of herself. I write her that way a lot myself, but I will always see her as Sess' little puppet. I don't know; I've just never liked her much. These days, I think Sess is better with Kagura (I used to write him with Rin a lot, but I'm moving away from that. In fact, I'm moving away from writing Sess fiction altogether. I don't really enjoy it).

And Kagura as a "dark" Cinderella is perfect; fits her character completely.



Reviewer: sheena   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2008 9:54 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Day Two.

I can't remember if i reviewed this one yet or not! I've gone and read through em, but I haven't had time to review, so i'm stopping back in! Sleeping beauty fits Sango and Miroku so well! I love the ending of it. It was so Miroku! So cute!

And the nicknames you came up with! OMG! They cracked me up so bad!



Author's Response: Onna did such a cute job with Sango and Miroku -though he should have gotten a slap at the end. xD And thanks! He just seems like a "puddin' puppy" to me, lol. (If he was real, I think he'd kill me for that....)



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2008 9:37 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Day Seven.

Aww! Rin's story was so sweet! Great piece, Chanda! I've never seen Legend before but I definetely think I will now. The piece was written beautifully and REALLY corresponds to the canon ending.

And LOL! "this would be the part when someone died"...such a Sesshomaru thing to think! Its funny too because Rin was thinking in the scene right after about how everyone around her had changed. The last few lines of this chapter brought a smile to my face, too. Inu/Kag fluff! (I'm sure Kai is gagging in the background as I write this ;P)

Glad you're feeling better girl...and kudos to braving the frozen tundra! I couldn't even leave my Grandma's place for school let alone to go home...@_@ Thank God its icing over now! But anyway.........great job to you and Chanda! A very fun read indeed (heh..that rhymed). Until the next one!

~Amber ;)



Author's Response: But it just seemed like SUCH a Sessie thing to say, lol. And I always try to add a tiny bit of I/k fluff (cause I'm so not a Sess/Rin person >.>). Thanks for all of the well wishes. I had a relapse cause the boiler in my building broke for a full day and the temp went down really low (Imagine getting sick like that in your own house?), but I'm trying to hang in there for the last 3 days. Wish me luck!!



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2008 5:20 AM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Day Seven.

Wow.  I really enjoyed this entry.  Chanda did an EXCELLENT job with the tale.  The imagery was beautiful, and the take on Legend was just well done.  I'm a sucker for romance, and this one was perfect.  And it was so fitting for Rin to tell it.  This is SO her style.

As for Sesshoumaru...that's aother wow.  Sessh actually having dinner with "the HELP"?!  If anyone had doubted that Rin has had a massive positive impact on her mate, they won't anymore, LOL.   Of course, he is not completely reformed; he still has too many homicidal thoughts for comfort.  When Toshi first annoyed him, and he thought "this would be the part where someone died", it sort of proved the he wasn't named "Perfect Killer" for nothing (LMAO...I LOVED that part).  So, no, I don't think we should get Sessh twisted.  Yes, Rin has softened him...but he's still no puppy either, LOL.  I can't wait to read the next one.  And I'm glad you're feeling at least a little better, girl.  Ain't the strong shyt the best?  :D



Author's Response: Well, the help turned out not to be the help, eh? lol. And i agree, it was definitely a fluffy Rin kind of story, ne? Chanda did a great piece.

I have to say, Sessie didn't give me as much trouble this time. I'm a total IY Grrrl, so I don't mess with him very much. But he's being a good youkai for me so I'm happy. I've always loved that "aristocratic assassin" label. He's too cool for the fucking room! xD The boiler in my building blew the other day and it gave me a relapse, so I'm barely hanging in there now. But with 3 days to go, I'm determined. Thanks for another fantastic review! :D



Reviewer: chanda   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2008 12:49 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Day Six.

Ashley you did an amazing job with this story! I loved it! It was funny and classic Inuyasha. Stupid wolf when is he going to learn. :)

Inugrrrl, I do hope you feel better. Hugs, and as far as this chapter, it was just as good as the rest. Get well!

Chanda



Author's Response: Thanks, girl! <3 I'm actually doing much better than i was before, but I still need to take it easy and pop pills. Thanks for coming in and leaving your mark. I know the authors appreciate it. And thank you for contributing!



Reviewer: chanda   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2008 12:40 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Day Five.

PseudoHanyou! OMG that was truly a wonderful renditon of Labyrinth. Well done! This entire chapter teared me up. lol.

Inugrrrl you did such an amazing job writing around these stories and yet, keeping up with the plot. I truly felt for Rin in this chapter, and hope that her and Sess will work it out. Thanks again for your dedecation and hard work you put into this!

Chanda



Author's Response: Thanks, babe, but it all belongs to the authors. I'm just the thread, they're really doing their thing and it makes my job a little easier. :D And isn't P.H. da shit?? :P



Reviewer: chanda   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2008 12:25 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Day Four.

Again another wonderful chapter and how you tied Sess into JMaxwell's story! Both of you deserve a large round of applause! Sess as Scrooge was classic, and I don't think a better character could play that role any better.

chanda



Author's Response: Agreed! J did an amazing job of bringing that tale to life. I bugged him to make sessie the scrooge and I'm so glad he let me. :P Thanks for another kind review!



Reviewer: Anonymous   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2008 11:39 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Day Three.

Wow!! Inugrrrl, you are doing such an amazing job with this story! Hugs!

Sensei, what a wicked twist with Cinderella. I loved it! Poor Kagura, always getting the short hand of the stick!

Chanda



Author's Response: You're kind, doll. Thanks so much. <3 And wasn't Sensei awesome? She put a twist on Cinderella that I never would have thought of. Dark and sweet!



Reviewer: Lunamoon   Anonymous  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2008 11:20 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Day Seven.

I'm loving each and every chapter. It's like the chocolate candy you get each day, only a little better!! I can't wait to find out what will happen with Rin and and Sessy!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you very much! The writers and I appreciate it. :D



Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2008 10:57 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Day Seven.

Awww, gushy!!  I love it!  A sweet, ultra-fluffy story is very nice every now and then.  Please tell Chanda that her story was magnificent.  :)

I can't believe Sesshomaru is actually lowering himself to have Christmas dinner with "the help."  XD  Perhaps there is a Christmas spirit in him after all!  I can't wait to see what happens next, and, of course, the next story!  *SQUEEE!!*  



Author's Response: Wasn't is sticky sweet? ^_^ I had a lot of fun with her rendition of Legend and I shall pass on the luffs!

And yus, Sessie is having Xmas Eve dinner with the janitor. Just goes to show that he's not such a total snob after all! :P Thanks for another kind review, m'dear!



Reviewer: La Vaca   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2008 10:03 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Day Seven.

I like to say your story has me excited for each chapter you move into the tale with such ease. You should do this more often >.> thou it takes away from other things. Its worth it.  Amazing like always <.< thou you don't need the praise. o.o But its good.

Author's Response: KAU! OMG, she fucking reviewed instead of lurking. >:D< and you think you're funny, huh? *-.-* This is the last and I mean it! *shakes fist* And you know you only want me for my Rin. >.>

Is kidding! :D



Reviewer: xgrenade   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2008 4:42 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Day Six.

YAY! XD  I love how your narration fit with my story!! XD  and i'm so glad everyone liked it.  i had way too much fun writing it!

Author's Response: ASHLEY! <3 Thanks so much for participating and writing such a cute story! We did indeed love it and I will have to rope you into other projects in the future! ^_^



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2008 4:29 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Day Six.

"Hi, InuYasha here." LOL! What a funny and fitting way for InuYasha to start his story! That was amazing xgrenede. I think I laughed the whole way through!

And haha...the family scene in the beginning was really cute. It reminded me of back when I was a kid. I could make my brothers do anything by calling them chickens..a pretty fun, secret weapon when you're six years old ;P But anyway, I think InuYasha showed them pretty well that he can tell a story. Hanyou: 2 (because he got the girl in the drabble, too) Mangy Wolf: 0. (ha, Kouga!) XD

Anyway, wonderfull collab! I can't wait to read the next one and what Rin has to say. And of course, Kouga will be back to redeem himself, too, won't he? Now its six more days! And oh my God, its snowing! Lol...until next read!

~Amber



Author's Response: You're getting as bad as me with kouga! :P He's definitely getting his beating (for all the times that he messed with yasha over the years!). And I think "chicken" was everyone's code word. Throw that out there and it was on! xD I didn't get to write as much as I wanted (couldn't think for my cold-induced migraine), but Ashley's awesome story took up all the slack, ne?!

Just a few more fays to go (woo hoo!) and it snowed here, too -and I had to go out in it. -.- It was SO not fun. I hate snow.



Reviewer: Tina   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2008 11:43 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Day Six.

Haha, that story was so...so...Inuyasha! "The wolf kidnapped a girl, I saved her, I kicked the wolf's ass." :P Very cute.

I wonder what Rin's story is going to be like...Unfortunately, I won't be able to read it, or any of the other stories until I get back from Vacation.  But I wish you health and happiness and a very Merry Christmas Kiki!

"See" you when I get back!

Happy Writing!



Author's Response: TINAAAAAAAAAA!! Have a GREAT time, okay?? *Big hugs* And take lots of pics to share at the HOA. Merry Christmas, sweets! I hope you get all the wonderful things you want and deserve. <3333



Reviewer: Neo   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2008 1:09 AM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Day Six.

Poor Guys they always get picked on.. but it's totally funny to read...

Can't write much, got family coming for Christmas... but any who... the story was a great read to both of you...

Hope you feel better soon IG... get plenty of sleep... if you need anything just yell for me... ohh wait your head hurts.. ok.. just text me something.. and I will happy to help... (^_-)y



Author's Response: Don't ya love when the guys get it?? xD Thanks for popping in, Neo. I know you must be a busy bee over there for the holidays. I'm feeling better than I was, but I haven't slept. I'm about to remedy that now, though, and pop a few cold meds. With any luck, this mess will be cleared up before Xmas. >.< Thanks for being awesome. ^_^



Reviewer: inuaddict   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 11:25 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Day Six.

Grrrl, what are we gonna do with you?  I wish there was a quick fix for colds, but I guess you have to ride it out. :(  Nyquil...lots of Nyquil...

I figured it was about time IY told his story, and it's cute how Xgrenade wrote it, with IY actually "telling" the story and fitting in quite well with the way your narration has been flowing.  I can't wait to hear what Rin has to say.  And I still ADORE Touga.  We're still waiting to find out what Kai is up to and of course Kouga's got to have a turn...poor Kouga!  I almost feel like I want to write a story with him as the hero...alllllmost...hehe.  I think this is the best party I've ever been to! ^^



Author's Response: >.< I know... and the worst is that I seemed to have gotten it in my own house. I've been lazy about insulation for my bedroom windows, so sometimes it's really frigid and I think it did me in. But I'm getting better with the help of cold medicine.

And isn't Ashley awesome?? When I first read her story, I had such a grin on my face. It was just too cute.

Touga is great fun to write. I love mixing his personality with sessie's. Too bad he isn't a real IY character -I'd love to see what he'd look like, lol. As for Kouga, well, he just may get his due -kinda sorta. 0.~ Thanks for coming and being so awesome. We love having you! <333



Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 11:17 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Day Six.

Oh, no!  I hope you feel better!  Sick sucks! 

I have to say that the title to this chapter alone was enough to throw me into a fit of giggles!  XD  Very cute.  InuYasha's POV was awesome; I loved how he defended his right to portray the wolf any way he wanted!  LMAO  Loved it!  

I hope you feel better soon - get some rest and take care of yourself!!  :)



Author's Response: Thanks, Selina! ^^ When I did this chap I was pretty much down for the count, but I'm hanging in there and taking my meds. I just hope I lose this bug by Xmas. >.<

And I will pass the good vibes to Xgrenade, who is ridiculously awesome. :D Her drabble is one of the cutest I've read. She really nailed it with yasha's POV!



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 10:53 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Day Six.

LOL.  This one was a lot of fun.  Leave it to Inuyasha... :D.  No Iwonder what Rin is going to say for her story next.  But, anyway....  Feel better, girl.  Take strong cold medicine and knock yourself out.  That's the best thing for you. 

Author's Response: Agreed! Cute and funny all rolled into one. Ashley kicks booty! And thanks; I'm feeling better, but still stuck with regular cold symptoms. That night I had a migraine along with the cold, so I was really jacked up. But I got me some strong shyt now and I'm rollin'. xD



Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 9:58 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Day Five.

Third time making an attempt to leave a review! My goodness! I'm going Grrrrr! Gotta love interruptions that make you turn off the computer!

Another sweet chapter, Goddess, oh yes! It is!

Oh! I do wonder what Kai is up too! and to what it was that Rin had said that was so crushing? 'm so very curious about Kai's gift!

Poor Touga.. he must be so confused and in turmoil right now. 

Poor InuYasha.. sometimes he can make jokes and sometimes they flop!  It might have been better if he stated he was going to send Kouga in after him...

LOL! Kouga did it! He got the kids saying Suck.. and it's going to become the favourite word for quite a while because of the reactions! I can just picture the school/daycare center calls now... *smirks*

Oh yea! Miroku had to get into the action of open mouth insert foot! 

I adored the twins little info-mmerical! They always do love to devulge information for free that is embarrassing for the parents! And Sango getting in on the action!! LOL! Pricless!!!! Absolutely pricless!

Heee.. maybe Souta is jealous he didn't get to mention it first.... or he is trying to impress the ladies! 

I do love the angst you write so very well! And to learn more into Rin's side is another piece to the puzzle! I'm getting more and more curious and intrigued by the comments of Rin lying to herself and seeing through rose-coloured glasses... hmmmm.. I am wondering if Rin has been focusing completely on Sesshoumaru and his wants, desires, happiness and needs that she has no idea how to express her needs/wants/desire much less come to grips with them within herself.... 

The big question what want did she try to stifle?

To PseudoHanyou: wow.. that is so very deep and delightful! and the moral! the lessons in it. Be careful what you wish for.. Wow!

I do love the use of Labrynth!! (it's a fave.. even if his outfit (pants) scared the dickens outta me when I first saw it!) How he couldn't express gentleness, tenderness and love as he never experinced it himself...

So apt and poignant.

I don't understand this line: you told me that when I tired of trying to best you that you would let me go.

I really.. really enjoyed it and will enjoy thinking upon the piece.

Back to Grrrl: Oh my Goddess, I love the depth of this chapter..

I am starting to wonder if Rin has 'lost herself' that her own individualness/identity has been put into danger of disappaering...

I give you a standing ovation!!

THIS ROCKS!! *Glompage*

I can't wait for the next part!!

*huggles*



Author's Response: Nikkie!! ^_^

I love the kids in this. They're written after my own family members (except Touga) and they used to act just that way. It makes me smile and feel like those times are back again. :D Besides, it was Miroku's turn!

You hit the mark with your assessment of Rin. She has been so busy concentrating on Sesshomaru, she neglected herself and her own needs. But then, turned around and blamed that on him. That's what she was coming to terms with in this chapter. Hopefully, she works it out. :D

Gakusei (the author) did a wonderful job with her piece. I've never actually seen Labyrinth, but I heard enough about it to know she killed it. But I expected nothing less -she is a hell of a writer. Her stuff is usually pretty dark, but you should check it out anyway. It's written so richly, you can totally withstand the darkness!

Thank you, once again, for another generous and kind review. It's so appreciated. <33



Reviewer: c-note   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 7:35 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Day Four.

"and God bless us, everyone!"

a perfect rendition of a feudal christmas story! that's what happens when you fall asleep to movies. and rin is so adorable as Christmas Present (my personal favorite part)



Reviewer: c-note   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 7:29 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Day Five.

amazing rendition of labyrinth (one of my favorite movies...minus the tights...shudders) and Sesshomaru as Jareth is so perfect here. he would see it as everything that happens, every emotion that she has, is granted because of him.

wonderful!!!



Reviewer: inuaddict   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 7:17 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Day Five.

You're both amazing!  First of all, I can't begin to comprehend how you've taken the random stories and woven them together within your own story, which is quite captivating in its own right.  Now that I'm caught up, I have something very special to look forward to every day!  Seriously, I just think it takes an awful lot of talent (and time and hard work) to do what you've done Grrrl, and I thank you!  It's a lovely gift to your friends. *hug*

And I love this tale.  Makes me want to grab my Labyrinth and watch it right now *dance the magic dance* ^^  Maybe I will later.  And it's so weird, but I can totally see Sessh in Bowie's place...I've connected them in my mind many times before, but that's a different issue! :P  Wonderful chapter!  Thank you both!



Author's Response: Thank you, lovely lady. *huuuuuugs* I admit, the first time I did this (last Xmas) it was one of my usual "jump in headfirst" ideas and I was completely shocked that I pulled it off because the writing was totally random, much more so than this time around. I basically asked for a xmas drabble, any genre, any characters, and I just weaved them. This time, I attempted to be slightly more organized -but it didn't matter, lol. I'm still flying by that seat. xD But as long as I can finish off the last few chaps, I won't complain. It's a pleasure to work with so many talented people. They all write different things in different ways and it allows me to introduce them to people that may not be aware of how great they are. That's what makes all the work WIN.

As for Gakusei (the author) she's fabulous. One of the best "dark genre" authors on the web, and I had a feeling that not enough people were aware of her presence. She's fantastic amd deserves more attention for being so.



Reviewer: Danny Girl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 8:01 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Day Four.

"J" I love this I would have never thought of Sess as Scrooge.



Author's Response: I shall pass on the praise. ^^



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