You must login () to review.
Reviewer: Natilie   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2008 2:01 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Day Three.

Hey! Good job on the Christmas story. I’ve never read anything that you’ve done before but this was quite good. Thank you for writing the chapter! ^-^



Author's Response: So happy you liked, Nat! I shall pass the love to Salome! ^_^



Reviewer: Tina   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2008 10:28 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Day Three.

Tina is all caught up! Yea!!! I love this Kiki! I think it may even be on its way to being better than last year! :O I'm kinda sad that I didn't write a story for it...but finals have to come firsst, ne? Speaking of, I got my first final mark back and it was a 92! YEA!!!! Super excited...I hope that economics will be good too, but I'm not JM...

I really like the plot and fairytales...they are so cute. And I like the kids and everybody's relationship with them.  Especially the Inu/Touga relationship.

Until tomorrow, happy Writing!



Author's Response: Tina!!!!!!!! *hug* Congratulations, girl!!! A 92 is fucking awesome! Then again, you're Tina. You always excel. :D And i wish you could have, too, but YES, school first, pleasure writing later. Besides, I'd still like to do another one, just not for Xmas. Something completely HOA and smutty! But >.> more on that at the HOA.

Thanks for popping in and reviewing. I know it means a lot to the authors and I'm so happy you like it! It was really rough for me to write starting out, but now I'm in a zone and they're not as hard. But better than last year? Hm. I don't know if anything ever tops the mold-breaker. xD



Reviewer: axel720   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2008 1:40 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

Yes I'm a bit late but I started reading them =p Nice work so far! I'm thinking of letting the chapters build up so I can read them all at once...

Anyways I love the tone; what a great idea to have them all telling stories =) And I love Touga already XD

Zomg Hansel and Gretel always creeped me out - great chapter!

Author's Response: Axy!! Thanks for sticking your face in here to say hey. ^_^ And I'm glad it meets your approval >.> thus far. You're not supposed to let them build! It's a countdown to Xmas, lol. You're always breaking stuff up. :P

And I like Touga, too!



Reviewer: Cricket42   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2008 12:33 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Day Three.

I won't review again till the end but god dammit where's/whatthehellisupwith Fluffy? He needs Rin and for some reason she needs the ass as well.

Author's Response: Thanks for popping in. :)



Reviewer: Danny Girl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 11:11 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Day Three.

Mirkou, your are a idiot sometimes but I just love him, HAHAHA!!!  Poor Rin she shouldn't think that Kagura would be better for Sess. She is and Inuyasha is right he is a frosty fucktard (I like that). I thank you SalomeSensi chapter 4 is great.

Author's Response: Yesh! Who doesn't love the lech? :) I'll pass on the good vibes to Salome!



Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 11:00 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Day Three.

*prances Happily*

Another day, another de-Lick-ous chapter! Oh Goddess, what wonderful treats you gift us with!!

I think I already know of that Ebil game!! *shudders* and with acute senses of smell!

I love the stubbornstreak in InuYasha! The way he does the sulk! And Kouga... always taunting the underdog...

I nearly fell out of my chair for two reasons.... 1 - tipsy and 2 Ayame ramming that chip into Kouga's mouth with a peck on his cheek!

LOL.. the little ones all looking at Miroku for a story! and their speech manner! So cute!!

Oh mys!! Touga's stress and distress at having his parents seperating has manifested itself into Sesshoumaru Mannerisms! Oh my goodness! I loved the way InuYasha had stepped in to get Touga back to being 'human' and out of robot/glacier mode!

The vision of Mini-Me Sesshoumaru flying backwards courtsey of a pillow and immaculate hair flying made me defintiely fall off chair! I shall cherish that image! and I bet InuYasha wishes he could do the same in real for Sesshoumaru! I adore the way he looks out for everyone he holds in his heart!

Rin is keeping too much to herself! She nees to let it out! 

I am cringing about Miroku telling a story... how much lechery will he utter? Or can he be a good boy and use this to get into Sango's good side by being good? 

Small whoopies... Was InuYasha holding Touga? then how did Kai get into his arms? 

Salome-chan!!: OH! Wow! That is some freaking deep messages! Poor little kids... I wonder how many will have bad dreams from this!

Miroku made big boo-boo! Such a dark tale for little ears to hear and a very touchy subject for peoples. 

I can understand why he'd want to do this.. But wow.... holy heck... wow! 

Did Miroku mean that Kagura was better with Sesshoumaru? For him to rescue her? Didn't he know it would hurt Rin?

Back to Da Grrrl:  ANGST! ooray for ANGST!! Sweet and tastey Angst!! It adds flavour to everything!

I really enjoyed the way it was InuYasha who went and comforted Rin. 

Miroku certainly was doing a good thing but didn't think it out carefully enough... I do hope Sango gives hima punishment for hurting Rin so much! andby hurtingTouga by the cascading effect!

I hope he heard how much pain Rin was in as InuYasha comforted her. *goes to comfort Rin*

I do love the way InuYasha told her there was a connection and it was all because of her sweet influence! That final line of his!! He is smart becuase of his mate!



Author's Response: Nik, you're hilarious! xD Only you...

Now, for questions! Yasha wasn't holding Touga, per se. He pulled him over to kiss the top of his head. Then he had his son all hugged up and Touga was watching. Sorry that wasn't more clear. >.< I write it as I see it in my head and sometimes it doesn't come out exactly as it was meant to.

Nopers, Miroku wasn't saying Kagura was better. He was actually saying that (in his opinion) if Naraku had cared about Kagura maybe they would have found something in each other to fulfill their lives. Like everyone else, he thinks Rin belongs with Sess. And it's Xmas, I think Sango will forgive him! xD

I like InuYasha's relationship with Touga a lot. He's very different from Sess, so he provides a bit of a balance and his influence won't allow the kid to be a complete carbon copy.

As far as Rin goes, I wanted Yash to be the one to make her feel better; after all, who knows Sesshomaru better than he does? I think, for her, it's more believable that Sess loves her if it comes from Yasha.

This chappie had a bit of angst, but the next has less, so it will be a bit more lighthearted >.> for now (Cause you know I must revisit the angst!). And I really think you'll enjoy Day Four -I certainly did! ^_^ Thank you for another awesome and very generous review! *hugs* I shall pass the love to Salome!



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 10:20 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Day Three.

Nice one.  It didn't have a happy ending....but neither did all of the REAL fairytales.  And, more importantly, we got some more insight into how the separation from Sesshoumaru has affected Rin and her kids, particularly Touga.  It's cute when he acts like his dad...but, as pointed out here,  a little sad, too.  As Yash said, he's too young to be so old.  And he's trying to fill his Dad's big shoes with feet that are too small.  As for Rin, her low self-image is understandable.  Anyone who has been as submissive as she has for so long (500 years?!) had to have some self-esteem issues.  and Yash was just perfect here in explaining to her just how much of a positive effect she has had on her mate.  I do wonder again, though, what she could have possibly said that hurt her mate so much that he would leave.  It must have been a doozy! 

Author's Response: True, True, true. Not all fairytales end nicely, and it was fitting given the characters. I love the way she writes -very deep and meaningful. I was kinda like "... damn." LOL. You're right about Touga, too. Instinct tells him to be the "man" of the house, but he's not ready for that. InuYasha is SO much more laid back than Sess; it's a given that he'd be the one to bring him down (the way he does with his big brother!). Rin is soft, but not the flower she used to be. She's seen enough and dealt with enough to toughen up, but you know what happens when people fly into a rage. They say effed up things they don't mean -but they meant it at the time, lol. Eventually we'll learn more about the fight and see something in their personalities that reveal something kind of funny. :P As always, Ms. Goddess, thanks for a great review!



Reviewer: la623   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 9:52 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Day Three.

I loved that! So cool...loved the in-law moment! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, La! I'm glad to see that my plan to make InuYasha absolutely adorable is working. xD



Reviewer: la623   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 9:32 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Day Two.

this was great! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, La! I'll pass it on to Salome. :D



Reviewer: Paw Print   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 9:10 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Day Three.

Lovely!!! Each day has been amazing, as expected from each of you talented authors ^_^.  But darn, I was hoping Kiki would throw another tyke in with Kagome and Inu (go at you two, we like your children in these types of fics so give us another one!!)ahahha, I'm just playing with you, Kai and Shippo are a force to be reconed with on their own.  All in all, the 12 fairy tales of Xmas 08' is turning out to be phenomenal so far, so please keep at it all of you!! Until the next review and happy holidays everybody!

Author's Response: Paw Print! *glomps & rolls*Merry Christmas, doll!! Thanks so much for hanging out with us, and I shall pass on your good vibes to the authors. :D Looking for more kids, eh? lol. The thought crossed my mind, but then I went with Kai (and like you said, Shippou was already something! :P). I know this chap was a tad angsty, but still pretty mild for what I usually throw at y'all. And don't worry, it gets better. ^_^ See ya next chap and thanks for leaving your mark!



Reviewer: Natilie   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 8:35 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Day Two.

Kiki told me to read day two and I’m glad she did. This one was good! I love Miroku and Sango together, hehe. Your choice on Sleeping Beauty fit well with them. It’s such Miroku’s character to set out on a journey just because he believes there’s a woman out there who’s beautiful, hehe. The ending was quite cute. I enjoyed this! Good job Inuyashaloverr. :p



Reviewer: Natilie   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 8:28 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

Hey Chrissy,

 

This was a great chapter! That witch kind of creped me out with her green teeth… ew. *Shudders* I like the idea of everyone telling a story. It’s cute. ^-^.  Good work!



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 7:08 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Day Three.

Wow! That was an interesting spin to put on the story of Cinderella. Miroku's take on Naraku and Kagura was pretty interesting, too. Though not one I think the kids needed to hear, lol.

Anyways, Loved the InuYasha and "T" moments. I almost fell off my seat laughing when Touga started going grammar Nazi on the twins and got hit with a pillow for it! Then the part where he giggled about it afterwards was so adorable. Sweet how InuYasha was the one to make Rin feel better, too. He's just an all-around kind of guy...and I love the way you write him! You really capture the "sweetie" inside that tough exterior of his, and show that his past and present experiences (with him being a loner then finding Kagome) influences the advice he gives.

I can't wait till Sessh and Rin make up. It seems like she finally got closure on the Kagura thing...so thats one insecurity down. I have a feeling there's a couple more. Excellent piece SalomeSensei and Inugrrrl! Till tommorow's chapter!

~Amber



Author's Response: It was a bit of a "dark" Cinderella, ne? I love the way Salome writes -very rich. And you know Miroku; he says what he thinks, but he's always tactful. he never said their names, not even when they knew who he meant. He just wanted to get his point across, and the kids have no idea who they meant anyway. Let's give the lecher a pass! xD

And thank you! I admit, Yasha is my favorite above any and all others, so I always try my best with him. Usually, he's my entire focus and everyone else gets sloppy seconds. >.> But don't tell them that. I wouldn't want a strike on my hands. :D



Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 10:20 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Day Two.

More! Yes! It's More!! *does the Happy Dance* I can has Grrrl Fics?!

Yes, Goddess, this is going so beautifully and the flow from story to story is smooth and flawless! And the continuation from the last Christmas party seamless!  This ROCKS!!

Okays.... I will have to look up on word to figure out the Dorito-eared douche comment.. *hangs head in embarrassment*

I can see many sets of eyes rolling mentally over Kouga and InuYasha's competetive streaks. But they do rub each other the wrong way... Just as long as it's only hot air they are marking the area with and not like actual canines....

*eyes rolling* MEN! They always gotta make everything into a contest! InuYasha going after Kouga! *giggles* I can only imagine what they are going to do! ..... and what the women are going to do back at them!

*face palm* Yea... that is true... kids watch the parents fight like that.... been there and done that.... and the Italian side of the family - Family gatherings... Nona (great grandmother) cussing in Italian, cousin Paul doing his mirror image of Sopranos or The GodFather, Great Aunt Lisa going "Mangiare! Mangiare!" 

You know... it IS Genetic! ROFLMAO!! Sesshoumaru's Anal-Rigidness! The butt-plug has been passed along! Poor T!! Poor sweet T!! Inu should sneak the little guy off and get him to unwind and let loose! Glacier with teeth... and legs.. and arms... and apatheticness..

Sango's comment about them being children is priceless! 

An eerie thought popped up... Kikyou had an imitation body and InuYasha went for her.... now, there is that video game with imitation women in it.... OUCH! The boy has a fetish! *Eyes plushies and DVD sets along with Books and sighs hugely*

For InuYashaloverr: *TACKLING GLOMPAGE* You wrote!! You are writing again!! I am sooo very thrilled and bouncing with pleasure!!!

You didn't! Oh you didn't!! You used Jaken as the Herald!! LMAO! *GLOMPAGE* I Luffs you!  oh I adore this!! 

Yah... The King should have known better.... don't tick off someone who can bestow serious butt kicking curses... and Don't Tick off a Female who can bestow curses who has PMS during the time you tick them off!

I love your telling of this tale!! It's better! Much better! 

Oh you had Totosai as the Smith!! *giggles* That is sweet! So very sweet!! And he is not as scattered as usual! 

Why does the image of people with their faces in mashed potatoes pop into my head.... and the stable boys taking care of the horses!! *cringes and shudders*

I love the way you wrote it was the spark of the magic that did Sango! I love the tale!

Oh he JUST had to say that didn't he!  *chuckles* at least he didn't go grabbing her butt or chest!

This totally Rocks!! Thank you very much for sharing this!!

And back to Da Grrrl:

ROFLMAO!! Oh GODS!! You wrote Pookie!! I can see Garfield's teddy bear Pooky!! 

The pet names are too adorable! I love them! InuYasha having drool with the ear rubbing! I adored the embarrassing reaction he has from his mate's affectionate touches and her sweet and teasing words!! He should be thankful his leg/foot wasn't thumping the floor! Or *waggles eyebrow* Does that happen when Kagome rubs his belly....

Dumps... *snickers........ snorts*

Dumps.... the kids are going to remember that for years!!

LOVIN IT!! 

Totally Wickedly Awesome and Exquisite!!!!!



Author's Response: Nikkie!! <33

You always leave such kind and generous reviews -but also, you always think beyond the surface to what the aftermath could be, lol. I love that. Since it IS Xmas, I don't think the boys will get killed over the video game, but you know Kagome I'm sure she'll pay him back eventually. :P

Dorito-earred -lol. That just popped into my head really because his ears are shaped like those chips, and add that Kouga is just silly, and it popped out. ^_^

As for the pet names, I can't imagine them not having any! Especially InuYasha -he's too cute to not have one. And "dumps", well, I had to get Kouga! I pick on him as much as humanly possible >.> but it won't be completely throughout.... *evil grin* But I'm so glad you're enjoying the wares and having fun. With it being the last, I would hate if you didn't. >.< Thanks so much for popping in to brighten my day. It's so appreciated!



Reviewer: Chanda   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 1:57 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Day Two.

Inuyashaloverr, what a wonderful spin on Sleeping Beauty. Ever since I've read Ann Rice's version of this story, I can never look at it the same innocent way I did before. However, your ending to the story was classic Miroku and I had a great chuckle. Nice Job!

Happy Holidays!

Well looking forward to the next chapter of this wonderful story!

Chanda



Reviewer: Chanda   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 1:32 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

Very nice job, Bluezinthous! I loved your version of Hansel and Gretel! Your story really gave a nice feel to the spirit of Christmas, eating dinner, enjoing conversation, and then telling stories.

However, you cannot help but feel for Rin; I wonder what she did? Well, I guess I have to continue with day three. :D

Happy Holidays!

Chanda



Reviewer: Chanda   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 1:17 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

Wow! You posted your 12 days of Christmas! All homework stops  to read and leave my reviews! It's always good to see you writing again.

I loved how you threw together a party and that it was post-canon, and everyone survied the past. However, I couldn't help but feel for Rin and Sesshomaru. I also liked how you decribed time near the end of your story, nice job! 

I'm so looking forward to day two!

Seasons Greetings, my friend!

Hugs!

Chanda 



Author's Response: Thanks, Chanda! ^_^ I decided to try a lil' Xmas angst since it was super fluffy last year. I was having a really hard time at first, but things seem to be falling into place and I may just get through this without killing anyone! :D Merry Xmas!! And thanks for popping in and contributing to the cause! <3



Reviewer: mariapalitos68   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 12:31 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

Nee-chaaan!!! why is YOUR last Christmas "party"???

but.. u r going to keep writing, ne?? PLZ TELL ME U DO!! ^^; 



Author's Response: NEECHAN!!! *hugs* Yeppers, this is the last hurrah for the Xmas parties, only because they're such a big thing to organize. But also, because I have carpal tunnel, so writing so much in a short time span really puts the pressure on. >.< BUT I am going to keep writing -at least until I complete all of my fictions. After writing them so long, I couldn't just let them all die. <33



Reviewer: Neo   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 11:59 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Day Two.

These just keep getting better and better... man you guys know how rock a great story...

Thanks for writing this for us everyone.. and the big thanks to IG for putting up with it... until the next read...  (^_^)y



Author's Response: Thanks, Neo! <3 Always happy to make someone smile, and I'll pass the luffs on to Onna!



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 11:11 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Day Two.

LMAO!  I ALOMOST feel sorry for Kouga; Ayame is is embarassing the heck out of him!  LOL.  And I really enjoyed the fairytale...especially that last line.  DEFINITELY Miroku.  I'll be looking forward to the next one... 

Author's Response: Thanks, Ms. Goddess! ^_^ You know I had to beat Kouga up -it's like tradition! But he's a good guy in this. I fashioned him after a combination of distant uncles. I took every one of their crazy traits and stuck them in him and Yash, and Ayame is my great-aunt. Just can't wait to humiliate him on some level! Thanks for popping and in and having fun! ^_^



Reviewer: Inuyashaloverr   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 10:15 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Day One.

 

PARTY!!! *passes out trays of goodies...*

I so love the story within a story concept here. How you connect em altogether. Love Chrissy-Chan's take on Hansel and Gretal as well. Heh, Shippo, the lil piggy, lol.



Author's Response: Onna! ^^ Yesh, C-note did a great G&H, ne?? Very cute and very her! And you're story got some favorable nods, too! ^_^



Reviewer: Danny Girl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 9:19 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Day Two.

I love it, let Inuyashaloverr  know this is a great chapter. Later kiddo. ;)

Author's Response: I sure will, D-Gurl! Thanks for popping in! :D



Reviewer: Natilie   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 9:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prelude to a Fairytale

Aw Kiki!! <3 You’re doing the Christmas stories again this year! I loved the ones last year that you did. They were so cute and very thoughtful. I can’t wait to see what everyone has in mind for this year stories. Of course in this story, I loved all the parts with InuYasha/Miroku/Sango/Kagome in this one, especially the part where the twins jumped him, hehe. Though I’m not into Rin/Sesshomaru things… but this one was pretty good for their story.  The only thing that confused me was the part when they were talking about time and how Rin and Sesshomaru grew together. It would have been great if you set a time that the story was in because Rin’s a human in the story and Souta mentions the ‘five hundred years’ together. I don’t think humans live that long, lol… Regardless, it was a beautiful Christmas story. It’s too bad that Sesshomaru didn’t get off his bum at the end and join in the celebration. That would have made Rin’s and the children’s day, I’m sure! The whole 12 Fairytales of Christmas gets me thinking that Christmas is so close. I’m just not in the spirit for Christmas this year, which is weird. To me, it feels like Christmas is so far away when it’s really just around the corner. There’s only one thing to do! Shopping! Hehe. ^-^ I don’t think I could wear contact lenses. I’m a bit of a klutz so me trying to handle a delicate piece of rubber or whatever they’re made of… on my finger… without breaking or dropping it would be quite difficult… And then there would be the hard part to get it into my eye without poking my eyes out… though it would be good for a laugh. But all is well! I always love the layouts here and on Eternal Destiny. It’s nice to see a little change once in a while since when I go on other InuYasha sites, no one is putting any effort into keeping them looking nice. You put so much effort into everything you do, that even the little things look great. Well done!! And don’t worry, I’ll definitely tell her that you appreciate her kind words.  *Inspiration, inspiration!* Lol. All you need to do is think for a bit and I’m sure you could think of something that would be wonderful for Miroku and Sango. There’s no rush, of course I think I already said that before… lol. It’ll come out great in the end, I just know it. 

Mhm, I’ve noticed that you love writing dark fanfics recently. You’re really good at what you do! No complaining here, hehe.

 

I noticed you got rid of that silly number box thing at the bottom! Gosh, I hated that thing, lol. It always said that I didn't enter the numbers properly when I know for sure that I did.

 

Great work Kiki!!! Keep up the great work and I hope you're doing well! <3<3



Author's Response: Nat! ^_^ *hugs*

How are you, m'dear?? Thanks for stopping in to spend a little time with us -we so appreciate it. :) I'm with you on the whole "Xmas spirit" stuff. I'm not feeling it yet, but maybe that will change. Without my mom and gram, the holiday loses a lot of its appeal, so I'm kinda just getting through it. In a way, I'm glad that these stories are keeping me so busy.

And speaking of, I totally understand the Sess/Rin stuff. I don't usually center anything on them, but the idea hit and I just ran with it. Besides, I always tear Inu and Kags apart -it was their turn. Oh, and you might like Day 2. The fairytale is about Sango & Miroku. ^^

Thanks so much for the compliment on the sites. I try very hard to keep my homes looking good and it's great that someone appreciates the effort. :D I don't see the point of having a site if it's a sloppy mess that one can easily forget. That sucks. So rest assured, I will continue to keep the houses pretty!

As for your fic, I'll put my mind to some sort of plot when I'm done wrapping this up. Right now, I can barely wrap my head around anything else, lol. Oh, yeah. And Rin is human, but when she mated Sess she got his lifespan, as did Kagome with yash. So she's immortal.

I took the security down to make it easier for my guests to get reviewed. Bots attack my site constantly -12 since yesterday, leaving bogus reviews on the stories, so I have to use captcha or I'll get overrun. When the party is over, it will probably go back up. :(

Okay, I must lie down. I've had a migraine for 2 days. >.< But we'll chat soon! <33



Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 8:28 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Day Two.

Holy moly, I almost spewed soda out my nose when I read "dorito-eared douche."  Then I got to "glacier with teeth" and almost had a stroke.  How you come up with this stuff is beyond me, but I am in awe!  XD

Sheesh!  Even in fairytales, Miroku can't help but offer his swimming baby-makers to beautiful women.  XD  That story was so cute, Inuyashaloverr!!!  An awesome feudal spin on a great classic.  Well done!  *applauds*  Can't wait for tomorrow's tale!  :)



Author's Response: Thank you! ^^ I'm a banter-grrrl. I always try to find a chuckle or some form of insanity in the conversations the characters have, so I'm glad you liked it! (I mean, come on! You know they look like doritos! :P )

And I will be sure to extend your awesome review to Onna aka Inuyashaloverr. She'll be thrilled to hear that you enjoyed her tale! :D



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 7:57 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Day Two.

Oh yeah...I see oodles of love coming Kouga's way XD ! Lol. The nicknames part was cuuuuute! (haha, "puddin' puppy).

And I liked the 'Sleeping Beauty' adaption! The ending and the Miroku-Sango banter was especially funny. The kids must be having a blast...as am I, reading this enjoyable tale. Ooooh...can't wait to see Sesshomaru again. Mini-me seemed like he missed him. And Kai! I think I feel worse for him...he's dying of embarassment! Until tommorow's tale...this makes the countdown to Christmas really fun!

~Amber :D



Author's Response: I like Kouga! I do!!!!!!!

Okay, so maybe I don't. xD But I'm just teasing with him (unlike my other fics where I want to kill him. >.>) Sessie is coming back to the fold, I promise! But I can't tell ya when, and Kai, he's such a little Yasha, lol. I like writing the kids more than the adults sometimes since I'm imitating most of my cousins. :D

And I will gladly let Inuyashaloverr know that you enjoyed her fairytale; it will make her day!

Thanks for hanging out with us. <3



You must login () to review.