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Reviewer: Momoko   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2009 4:14 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Divinity Destroyed.

You've peaked my interest yet again. I hope I enjoy this one as much as all the others. Have fun, I know I will!

Author's Response: Thanks, Peachy! :D I'm definitely going to try to remember to enjoy the ride instead of making it another chore. ^_^



Reviewer: axel720   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2009 11:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Divinity Destroyed.

How interesting! You've managed to create a nice other world. I'm never one for vampire stories - but you're always the exception ~.^

Take it easy, and remember to have fun with it!
*hug*

Author's Response: AXY! *smothers with glompage*

How are you?! Totally need to pester you with an e-mail.

Yeps, vamps, and a "sorta" other world. It doesn't stay in the past (you know me and my need to be current), but it will still be a fictional city. I'm hoping to create a little tribute to all of the vampire movies I've ever loved. :P Wish me luck!



Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2009 8:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Divinity Destroyed.

i was re-reading this again xP lol n in the reviews i realize i didnt put my name xD

well am sure u kno the gyal speakin bout vamps is lil ol bubbles o.~ lol... love this!!!

i still cant blv how ur gonna make inu n kags a couple.... mostly seeing that its like kikyou is cool - and like i told u, my hatred for her is gone to some extent ever since i read through the manga =/ lucky betch lol



Author's Response: I always know why it's you! You're the only one that writes in this crazy way. And yes, Kags is the "lub" interest -you know I don't write Inu/Kik fiction. >.< I don't hate her nearly as much as I used to, but I will never permanently pair her with InuYasha. I just can't do it -except in my one sess/kags fic and that's because they're both dead. >.>



Reviewer: cassie   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2009 8:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Divinity Destroyed.

eeeep another IG story! i was so excited to see updates when i opened your page today ^_^
so are they vampires?! i'm not an IY/kik fan in any sense, but your description of how he watched from afar was very sweet and touching :) except when she introduced herself as kikyou i was like oh poop. lol :p i like to say that i'm not a mushy romantic but your stories really do it for me!
this reminds me very much of twilight IY-style, minus the excessive fawning over ed cullen/IY. i guess naraku/onigumo exists to stir up trouble everywhere he goes, huh? i thought it was cool how the purple beads are like yash's rosary necklace :p
i am super excited for updates (on this or anything else, really :p). is this really your last serial?!? :(
THANK YOU for your fabulousness

Author's Response: Cass! <3333

Yesh, InuYasha is a vampire and NO this is not an Inu/Kik fic. >.< I don't write those ; I promised y'all that I never would. It's just <.< no. But with their romance, I simply wanted to show that at heart, InuYasha isn't evil. He is what he is, and he does what he does, but he doesn't "relish" it like his brethren. As for Twilight, I've never read it or even watched the movie (though I have a download of it), and I really don't plan on doing it now because I don't want the influence. I've seen too many good/fun vamp movies that I want to tribute. So, yah, no sparkly vamps here. xD And YUS! Naraku is a bastard in this, but take my other story, Ever After. He's awesome in that. I like playing with characterization; it's what AU is all about!

This will probably be my last serial, at least in the sense of chapter count. I want to stick to stories that have 10 chaps or less. It's less commitment and less chance of abandonment (not that I'm actively trying to kill any of my stories). If/when I do get all my crap together and end the stories that I know are close, and then I'm able to significantly shave down my other stories, AND I come up with a decent plot, MAYBE I'll entertain it. But as of now, yeah, last of the tribe. xD

Thanks for another awesome review, Cass!



Reviewer: Jenn!   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2009 8:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Divinity Destroyed.

UBER EXCITED. Seems very... classy. I like it. And when i saw that Stock Tie thing and imaged in on Inuyasha I was like... oh... sexy. =] I'm excited for more! Oh! Happy 4th! Wewts! Thanks for posting that anime price list for me! hehe. I'm still forever groveling at your feet for more G.F.E & S.M.C butttt I still love you update or not! =] Well pop some champange (totally spelled that wrong) and enjoy four years of greatness!

Lovies!



Author's Response: Jenn!!

Of course I posted the list; I told you that I would and always try to keep my promises, especially with something that would only take 2 minutes to do. I hope you get some sales!

Thanks for the review -and I know what you mean. The prologue is written in a bit of a "flowery" way, but that's because it's taking place in the 17th century. Eventually, it does tone down to this century's speech, lol. And isn't the stock tie kinda cool? I imagined him in that and totally squee. xD (we're such fangirls, ne?) Thanks for the happy wishes, and I have not forgotten GFE or SMC. I wrote half a chap of SMC 2 weeks ago, but then work got busy and I had to put it down. GFE is also on my list. I've been reading old chaps to get in the mindset, so there will be something on that front, too. Believe me, if it wasn't for my recent bout of block I would have had something up by now. It's just been a crappy 3 months. >.<



Reviewer: Simmer_Dee   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2009 7:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Divinity Destroyed.

awesome =] though it may have been done before as you've pointed out, it hasn't been down with your flair lol. i'm interested to see how this goes....

Awaiting the next update ^_^



Author's Response: Hey Miss Dee! :D

Thanks for the vote of confidence. I should have posted this 2 years ago, but time got away from me and I figured now was as good a time as any. It's a genre I've always loved, though I almost never read it in fanfic (I never have the time). I look at this as a culmination of all my favorite vamp movies with a little IY canon-ish stuff mixed in. (You'll see what I mean as it progresses). Thanks for the review! ^_^



Reviewer: Anonymous   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2009 4:32 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Divinity Destroyed.

i saw  the word twilight in there!! lol..  i got those books for my bday 'cept the last book =(...but heck.. its vampires dammit!!! mwahaha

*coughs*

eh eh.. i seriously thought the girl was Kagome! It put a damper on mi lol, but now am more eager to see how they'll meet up, since this is kags/inu fic right? Man... onigumo is so.. blah! I love how u have history in this story... i find i'm addicted to history, yet i nvr loved the subject much lol. But it's really really wonderful and it sucks that it's ova so soon!! lol

Are they demons? i mean i dont kno why but i keep thinking bout vampires more than normal xD haha.. either way u kno i enjoyed this n would tell u to update when u can o.~

I always love ur writing... always!! and i think its a curse u put on mi.. to nvr hate w/e u write... but i love the curse lol.. This pulled mi in sooo deeply, and i jus couldnt stop reading, even if i'd wanted to!!

in closing.. Happy Aniversary!!! xoxo You've come a long way and only u kno how much that line would mean more than anyone... am so glad i got the honor of finding such an amazing writing like urself =P (i soun sappy huh xDD lol)

Ja... and update when u can <3



Author's Response: Girl, you running in here anonymous again?! xD

Yeah, the word Twilight was in there, but I've never read the books or seen the movie, so nooooo not that twilight, but yes, vampires. I should have posted this when I first wrote the plot, but everything always gets in the way. Sigh.

This isn't a period piece, by the way. It takes place in the modern era, but the prologue is set in the past. The chappies will be fairly short. I don't want to commit to big chaps during the summer when I work so much. Plus, it will be easier on my hands.

Thanks for the happy wishes, babe. <33 I must acknowledge that yeah, we've come a long way, all of us, together. This site turned 3 years old today, and my writing, 4, and it's like... wow. So much has happened, and yet, it doesn't feel quite that long. I didn't even expect to be doing this 4 whole years. >.< But, here we are, ne? lol. Not to sound morbid, but I don't know how much longer my heart will be in penning stories, so I guess I should try to finish up what I started, at least.



Reviewer: leilachan   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2009 2:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Divinity Destroyed.

this is always an exciting genre to write in. and your so called IG twist makes anything we read 1000 times better. interesting how kikyou is set to be the queen. wonder how that will turn out and if she'll 'last'? ; ) off the subject, ever thought of writing outside of inuyasha? you could do it all, ya know! *big huge hugs*

Author's Response: LEILA-CHAN! <333

Thanks for popping in, babe. I haven't written shit in ages >.> but now that I'm trying again, I'm gonna have to put you to work! Yeah, the Kikyou thing. Well, I'm a I/K gal, so you know that isn't what it will be -hehe.

I have thought about it, have even done some writing of my own characters, but I'll never post that stuff online. I have a friend that constantly pushes me to write "for real", but I don't know if this is a career. I'd rather write for fun. Plus, I suck at deadlines. 0.~ But thanks for the vote of confidence!



Reviewer: Paw Print   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2009 1:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Divinity Destroyed.

Really interesting story so far!!! Me likey so very much.  Usually I'm fed up w/ vampire stories b/c I feel like they are way overdone, but I really like the linguistics and setting of this one.  And knowing you, there will be some definite spice to this fic :p

P.S. - You fooled me w/ that Kikyou stunt!  I thought it was going to be Kagome >.< lol in any case, beautifully written and I can't wait until the next update hunny.



Author's Response: Paw Print! <33

I totally understand. I've only read one vamp fic and that was 3.5 years ago, so I've probably missed a lot. Maybe it's just me, but I really don't run across them very much. Then again, I usually don't have time to read anything. *sigh*

As for this story, I'm sorry to disappoint *cringes* but this is set in modern day. The next chapter is a big time jump, so I hope you don't end up hating it. *cringes more* The story plot is fairly simple with a couple of twists and turns, and I can assure you it won't be too over the top. I'm a huge lover of vampire movies, so there will be lots of influences from those, but I don't want to cheese it up with guys that sparkle, or whatever, lol.

And this is soooo not a Inu/Kik fic, I swear. Never wrote one and I never will. That's one promise I will always keep!



Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2009 7:35 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Divinity Destroyed.

I must say that it's a good start, and it totally has me intrigued.  Can't wait to see what comes next.

Author's Response: Thanks. :) I just hope it continues not to suck, lol.



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