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Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2010 8:21 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Shadows on Your Side

Yay!  You updated Loved!  I adore this story.  I really am enjoying reading it.  Can't wait for the next update.  :)

Author's Response: Thanks, CA! I'm just sorry it took me all this time to get the block out. I'm hoping I can pull off another chapter soon since we're nearly done. :)



Reviewer: InuSoul   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2010 8:05 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Shadows on Your Side

OH, I really want you to update again. I love it when you update its like waking up on christmas and finding you finally got that present you always wanted. Now if only we could some how slap that damn hat off inuyasha head, we'd be fine.. lol

Author's Response: *Grins huge* Thanks, doll. I appreciate the sentiment greatly. I always worry about letting you guys down when I post since it always takes so damn long these days *grumbles* But hearing that you really enjoyed the work makes me feel TONS better. >.> Now to get that hat.... xD



Reviewer: Jai   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2010 10:02 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Cracks in the Pavement

Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the December 2009 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here:http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here:http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here:http://jaimed1968.deviantart.com/journal/29840759/#comments Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here:http://feudal.animara.org/  Please pick up "site only" awards here:http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20Dec09/  First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal.animara.org/gallery.php  Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association



Reviewer: Brittany Jordan   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2010 12:04 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

when are you going to update this one? i really like it.



Reviewer: Brittany Jordan   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2010 10:59 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

I like this story a lot I wish you would add another chapter.



Reviewer: Jenn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2009 11:08 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: My Own Way

I LOOOOVVVEEEE this fic! :)



Reviewer: MadMistress65   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2009 11:26 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Cracks in the Pavement

This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!

Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

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Reviewer: MadMistress65   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2009 10:44 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Cracks in the Pavement

This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!

Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

Our official website can be found here:
http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/

The current nominations pages are here:

http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction)
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Check them out to see what you were nominated for!

Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here:
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**Please note that FA membership is closed during voting.

Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!


~ The Feudal Association

**Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.



Reviewer: Jenn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2009 10:43 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Cracks in the Pavement

One of the reasons I like this fic so much is that Kagome's character is so relatable and she's not as silly and clueless naive yes but not stupid I really enjoy her is this fic!



Reviewer: Jenn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2009 8:05 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

I love this particular fic it's so sweet!  I'ved read all 60 of your fics now and I really enjoy this one I can't wait to see where it goes!  Thanks for writing such great stuff!

Author's Response: Wow, all 60?? I'm impressed, considering they're mostly chapter fictions. But thank you very much! I appreciate the "patronage" as well as the review. It's always awesome to know I've entertained someone. ^_^



Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2009 8:21 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

I have much love for this fic!  Awesome.  I always love your stuff that I read.  Patiently waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D Sorry this one is taking way longer than I wanted it to. I got a bit of block, so I tried to update other things. But I'm getting back on top of this one ASAP.



Reviewer: Anonymous   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2009 3:46 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

NOOO!!!!!!!!! I got to the end of the chapter and i went to hit the "next" button and it WASN'T THERE!!!!!!!! this is an awesome story! I hope that Kagome talks to him about the ear thing again when they wake up! this story is just soooo cute! Update soon please.

Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry there was no 'next' button. >.< I updated another story instead, but this one should be coming. Hope you like! :D



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2009 4:08 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

Inuyasha shouldn't be so hard on himsel, but I guess old habits die hard.

Great chapter, Kitten!



Author's Response: Thanks, Mammy! He IS hard on himself, ne? But that's what makes him so cute and sweet. :D



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2009 3:44 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: My Own Way

Ooooooh! And the plot thickens! This getting to be really damned good!

Author's Response: Thanks, Mammy! I'm really learning to embrace short fics. The long ones just require too much commitment for someone that likes to jump to new plots all the time. At this point, all of my fics have a goal of 12 chapters or less. 10, though, is what I'd really like.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2009 3:26 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: I Take the Dice

Dick Dastardly....I remember watching that when I was a kid.

I like where you're taking this, Kitten!



Author's Response: Shankies, Mammy! <33

I saw him on Boomerang (a cable TV channel for old cartoons) and had to include him. He was so cheesy that he had to be awesome, lol.



Reviewer: vikikibouki   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2009 3:10 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Cracks in the Pavement

I gotta great laugh when they sang that crazy tune. My twin grandaughters LOVE The Little Mermaid!

Author's Response: I love it, too! :D It's my favorite Disney movie of all time!



Reviewer: Meanha aka LadyWolf   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2009 9:36 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

Aw did it have to end like that. I can't wait to see what really happen with his mom or if he'll tell kagome what he is.

Author's Response: Kid Sissy! :D

You know I had to leave a little bit of a cliffy! It was so bad, though, right? xD I'm writing the next one now, so we should be in business in a few days. I also need to finish outlining your story. It will probably be a two-shot and I'm going to start it sometime this week, just to get all my ideas down, then I'll get the first chapter up. Squee!



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2009 3:28 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

Yes! I'm not the only one who does it loudly and (terribly...really terribly) off-key! I laughed so hard when I saw that in there. Totally unexpected. I love it! :D

I'm loving the dialogue in here, too. Kagome is a riot accidentally letting those comments ("ooh, la la") slip and Sango...she's so funny! The Alice in Wonderland reference was hilarious! She's been watching waaaaay too much Disney. Then Inu/Kag together...it was so many things: sweet, funny, sexy. The much awaited interaction was definetely worth it. They were so flirtatious and fun and giggly. We even got a kiss!

Who can forget Gil and Yasha, though. Challenging him for man of the house! Thems fightin' words! So along with this mystery of the possibly still-alive Izayoi and what InuYasha has to ask her, I'm highly anticipating Gilbert whipping out the battle fins and putting him in place....or maybe just InuYasha whipping out the ears. I'm starting to see the touch of angst. Really bittersweet ending this round having him start to like her, but then realize what he is and how that complicates things.

Can't wait to read more! This story always leaves me smiling (pun soooo not intended >.>)

~Am



Author's Response: AM!!

I was waiting for you to see your shout out! :P This chpater was hard on me for some reason. Well, mainly because I was trying to keep the balance between non-lewd comedy, sweetness, and mild angst. You know me. It's VERY easy for me to slip into angst mode and really make the characters hurt, but I didn't want to do that.... Okay, I did wanna do it! But I refrained. :D

The next chapter is in progress and I hope to post it soon. I don't want this fic to drag/feel rushed, which is why I said 6 chapters, but I'm starting to question if I can get it all out in 2 more chapters without feeling like I steamrolled for time. Argh. That's what I get for giving myself limits...

As always, thanks for a slammin' review! <3



Reviewer: Dei Dei (DeiPurple)   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2009 4:06 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

OMFG... this is such a cute story... I love it .... can't wait to read more. 

Author's Response: Thanks, Dei! :D



Reviewer: la623   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2009 11:19 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

I loved this! Poor Inuyasha! can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks, La! :D
Part 5 is on the way!



Reviewer: Selina aka animeladypimp   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2009 5:20 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

Whoa i like the chemistry. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks, Selina! :D



Reviewer: Mika   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2009 11:58 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

Noo, it's not fair! How come Kagome's the only one who gets to lick ice cream off Inuyasha's fingers? That was such a sweet kiss. :) I hope there are more to come. Ahhhh I'm so excited for the next chapter!! What's going to happen with Izayoi? I wonder I wonder I wonder. ^_^ Man, I wish I could write like you. Hehe Thank you for the update!



Author's Response: Mika! :D

Thanks for the great review! Yes, Kagome is one lucky hussy! As I was writing that, I was listening to Framing Hanley's version of "Lollipop" and pretty much jotted down what I saw in my head. I wanted to be more... explicit? But it's too early in the relationship and this is supposed to be PG-rated, so.... :P

But thanks for sticking it out with me. I'm about 25% into the next chapter (I took a break to watch a movie), but I just opened my text editor so it's back to the grind!



Reviewer: Paw Print   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2009 5:40 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

'squealing uncontrollably' 

AMAZING CHAPPY!! I couldn't take my eyes off of the screen it was so good.  And you hit exactly what gets to me, that slow gentle seduction that Inu and Kag have!!! AHHH I love those interactions, sigh, if only this were an explicit sex fic...just teasing you!!! I actually love the gentle and playful way you write their interactions.  It's very charming to read and pulls you in.  I am throughly enjoying this!!!  Even though he hasn't told her the whole demon heritage (Half anyway) I know she'll love him... I can just feel it ^_^

And how are you doing lovely?  Those hands giving you trouble still, or rather the brain (writers block)??  I've been doin pretty good.  Doing some good reading and attempting to exercise (ekkkk, getting motivated to do it is the tough part).  I hope your enjoying the summer hun and I'll talk to you next update!



Author's Response: PAW PRINT!

How are you, doll?! I hope the summer has been fun thus far! :D My hands are good (thanks for asking!); I've been taking it easy and wearing my brace when I know I'll be at it for a long period, so that's helped a lot.

I totally feel you on the exercise. I'm lazy as hell when it comes to stuff like that. >.< I have a gym a few blocks away, too.... Yeah, another day. :P

I'm glad you liked the chapter! It gave me a hard time, but by the end, I was somewhat happy with it. I think it was a case of over-revising. I kept "fixing" things that probably didn't need fixing and screwed myself up to oblivion. SO not doing that again. :D I tried to make it sexy, yet still innocent, and no, my fellow hentai (fist pump for hentai around the world!), this is won't be turning into smut. (No matter what we wish! *cries*) I'm trying to stick to my word and write something fluffy and sweet, and when I start smuttin', all of the sweet flies out the window.

Nope. I have no sense of balance! xD



Reviewer: InuSoul   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2009 2:57 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

I love this chapter it was super cute..

Author's Response: Thanks, Chica! ^_^
I'm happy you enjoyed!



Reviewer: Simmer_Dee   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2009 9:46 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Want You More

Amazing Chapter... I hope Kagome succeeds in proving to Yash that he isn't some sort of freak or abomination. The kiss was terribly sweet and I absolutely loved it. Update soon  =]

Author's Response: Thanks, Dee Dee! :D

I'm working on number five; we can only hope it givesme less trouble than number 4!



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