Wow!  This is scorching, devilishly hot and I'm not just talking about the sex!  It would be too easy to assume that he has a wife and child--that would be TOO obvious.  There's something else afoot here.  Thanks for writing this awesome update and like Kagome I'm on pins and needles.  Talk about being fucked in more ways than one.  Poor Kagome!

Da Grrrl Says: Yesh, poor Kagome! She tries so hard just to get smacked back down. But she's being good. She did everything he asked her to do and got a big reward -thousands of dollars worth of VS goodies. (Hey, that's gotta count for something! xD) Maybe that's a sign that she stands a chance of winning his heart.

Maybe. :P

Ah HA!!! SO INUYASHA HAS A LITTLE SUZIE HOMEMAKER woman and baby girl huh??? After all that crap he spews out to Kagome about Kouga he turns around and does it himself???? Talk about hypocrite sadist! I honestly can't tell what you'll throw next but you know i'll love every second of it! The complete submission and needy nature thing irks me about Kagome sometimes, just because I take pride in being different from that but that just proves how in tune you are with writing this type of character. You have opened up a whole world that is seldom explored behind closed doors and showing us exactly what's it's like, somthing not many authors can do well. I look forward to seeing how this unfolds! A itty bitty part of me wants to see Inuyasha be thrown for a loop JUST ONCE! hahaha it would be so entertaining to see how he would react. All these thoughts are bubbling over in me, and a lot of them are contradictory which goes to show how good a writer you are with this type of story. I appreciate all the effort you put in and how in tune you are with your support base. I'm always cheering you on ^_^

Da Grrrl Says: Paw Pwint!!

As always, thanks for the review! I can't say much plot wise, but I'm glad you found the update interesting. As for InuYasha, he never said do as I do. He said, "Do as I say." So there's really no limits on what he can do and with whom. Kagome should have checked the fine print before purchasing. *shrug* lol.

This story kicks my ass at times, but once I post, I'm always happy with the result -haha- and it's a real change of pace for me. Like, in GFE, Kagome is the complete opposite. She's hell in high heels who'd never dream of putting up with this version of InuYasha. This version of her, though, sticks in the craw of many, but they still continue to read it. It's actually funny.

I want to tackle the next chapter soon (even though I have others on my update list). We'll see.

Hope you're doing well and not working too hard! <3

Oops accidentally posted this review for chapter 1 XP
I opened my email and SURPRISE SURPRISE!!! An new update to one of my favorite fanfics from you. ^.^
Let me tell you that I wasn't expected Inuyasha to have a kid and a wife/girlfriend whoever she is on the side. O.e
I feel bad for Kagome just for the fact that she pretty much gave up her life in order to be his plaything. I get the feeling that this isn't going to end well for Kagome. >.> Keep updating when you can. =D

I'm gonna cry man... does that mean he's married?
I was hoping it was just his niece or maybe his little sister or something, but then he started speaking to the mom, and... HE'S MARRIED?

*Le Sigh*

If he is, it's probably to Kikyo too. MAN, I just hate his character so much, but I can't stop reading. I feel like Kagome. I really, really do. I can't stand him. He's a complete psychotic, bipolar, scary ass, walnut! You're just the master of suspense. You always catch my off guard. Then again, I learned to never expect anything when it comes to your stories - there's always some sort of surprise! And we all love it so no complaints over here.
I just can't wait for everything to be explained, but that's probably gonna happen in the end, and I'm definitely not trying to have the story end yet. I like looking forward to its (crazyass) chapters.

What is he planning? Like, I really wish I knew. I just want to look into your brain right now and find out what exactly you have planned for Inuyasha's plans - did that make sense? 0_0 LOL.
I don't think that I'd be able to handle everything Kagome has to deal with being with Inuyasha. I wouldn't care how gorgeous he was and how good he is at *cough* stuff.. I wouldn't be able to handle it. I'd go insane. He's just so scary. I wonder what's going down when Kouga gets home. That'll be kuhray.
But.. maybe by the time Kouga gets home, Inuyasha'll be gone? He did tell his... wife (?) that he'd be home in a week or so.

UGH. All this wondering is killing me softly. Ha! With Inuyasha planning to leave in a week, does that mean that this entire time Kagome's just been a fling? It would make sense I guess. He was just so ... intense. (I really thought he was gonna physically hurt her in the last chapter!)

I know you posted a blog entry about how much you hated writing this update, but I couldn't even tell from the writing that you had such a hard time writing it. You told us not expect much, but this chapter was prettttty perfect . I mean - it got me all riled up. And it's always fun to be riled up from stories. Haha! Thank you for the update!!! I'm supaaa excited for MPR because of the skin you gushed over! It has to be beautiful if even you stared for awhile. LOL. You must be tired from this update though! I'm glad you want to get started on the next update for FA month so soon, but if you are tired, you should definitely take a break with VANILLA ICE CREAM! See? See? I totally remembered you didn't like chocolate much (which is KUHRAY) and you preferred Vanilla. (:

Thank you again!! This is a fabuuu start to Abby's day!

Have a good day! :D

Oh man, so he has a kid with another woman. This raises so many questions, one who is it, is it the obvious guess, *cough* kikyo, *cough* or someone else. Does he truly love her and is just using Kagome as an outlet for his needs to dominate another, or is he just fucking around with both of them. Does his baby's mamma know he screws around with other women. If so, is there going to be a threesome in the future? Thanks for a hot and sexy update. HOpe you are well and I'm looking forward to new chapters when you can write them.

Zach

Holy shit. He has a family? Can't wait to see what happens next.. >A< And poor Kagome, I feel so bad for her! Inuyasha.. You demented SOB you. Lol, but really, I enjoyed this, and can't wait for another update!

ok.. now that is not what I expected.. wonder when she finds that one out.. ohhh you and that *drama* you weave with magical hands.. great update Grrrl even if you say it's not..

Take care of the hands and can't wait for the next one.. 

I love this story, but I wanna choke Inuyasha and just bitch slap Kagome. I don't know where this is heading, but I don't see a happy ending for Kagome. Especially when Lucifer is leaving for his real life, which doesn't include her, in a week. But now I feel just as bad as him becuz I can't wait to.see what he does to her next!

I love it!  Thanks for the update, it was well worth they wait. I can't wait till you explain the new twist (the little girl and the woman).  Love ya much and take care.

A darker fix than what I am used to reading, but I really like it. You are a talented writer and I have enjoyed reading your stories through the years. I used to write fanfics many years ago and I understand your frustration about the lack of support through reviews. Unfortunately, I have become one of those people who supports their favorite writers silently. I am going to make a big effort to let you know how much I enjoy your stories and I hope that I will continue to enjoy them in the future. Keep writing because you have an amazing talent.

Da Grrrl Says: The Neighbor is definitely a dark fiction and I did warn about that. I usually let people wander in and stumble where they may, but when I mess with comfort zones, I tend to warn, like with this and Knife of Romance. But it's not nearly as dark as i could be. 0.~

And I'm glad you're reconsidering your silence. I'll be honest, and this is not just with me, but with any other fanfic author you read. The majority of our motivation and encouragement comes from the people who read our stories and let us know that they're enjoying it and appreciate the effort. If a writer says they don't enjoy reviews, I can tell you now that it's not true. When we get no response after we've put out chapter after chapter, the question becomes, why do I continue to share my work when no one cares about it? Silence really isn't support, not when it comes to this kind of thing. Silence is discouragement. If you really like someone's work, you should tell them so. :)

This story is really good.  As I was studying Kagomes and Kogas relationship, Koga and Inuyasha are not that different in a sence, both of them are Masters so to speak, excep;t Inuyasha isn't underhanded about it.  Koga already masters over Kagome but she dosen't know it because he hides it behind sweetness and charm. Kagome dosen't even see it.  She already a submissive, just in a differnt form for Koga, sweet little house wife and trophie for him, Inuyasha is just bringing it to light for her. I hope she starts to realize that. I can not wait to learn more about Inuyasha why he is the way he is. Well, I have a sence, he had no control over anything as a child, he said responsibilty was shoved on him from birth practically this way he has control over something or someone in his life. THis is very intersting and intriguing fic, you should be proud of it. I'm sure you had to do a bit of research to write this, in which I applaude you alot of fic writers do not research a thing and try to write about it and end up looking foolish and ruining what could be good fic.  You are awesome! Part of me feels bad for Kagome but Sango warned her all she had to do was research what she told her before she walked blindly into it and maybe she would have learned why she likes it so much. Well, Kagome will have a better understanding of her subject for her next photography project, and create an awesome show from her new knowledge and experience. Once again awesome, I love Kagomes inter thoughts, her confusion and trying to figure out why she is so attracted to this lifestyle. I can't wait to find he answers. Incrediable I can't say anything negative.  Till next time write on!

Da Grrrl Says: What a thoughtful review -loved it! \o/

You nailed a lot of points that many others didn't really see and I must applaud you for that. Well done! InuYasha has his reasons for how he is, and since this is a short story, they'll be revealed soon. But again, you really pay attention to the characters' thought processes and behaviors, which delights writers to no end. Then again, you're another "InuGirl", so I shouldn't expect much less. (Haha!)

I'm currently working on the next chapter. I took a break from this because it's, as you can imagine, a bit of an intense write and I put all of these chapters out in a very short time (they're days apart except the very last one). I was a little burned out, plus, I wanted to work on other stories. But this one will be coming back. ^^

This story has to be the most addicting inuyasha fic i've ever read. Your writing and mind is just... unbelievable. It just blows me away. And this story "WOW"... thats all i gotta say. I know you said this story wasn't originally suppose to be long, or atleast it wasn't planned, but you've got to continue because im absolutely inlove! Or atleast when this is finished, please write something simliar or another dark fic. Your stories are so great, they seem so realistic. Loovvee youu!!