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Reviewer: Claire   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 18, 2011 9:09 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension

One of the most amazing stories ever written. I've yet to come across an author like you -- I can't describe how incredible addicting you write. Everything feels so real, all the emotion, and all the scenes. Especially the way you create Inuyasha -- he screams raw power, and sex (yumm ;]). Your story plots always invoke emotion, I feel like I'm IN the story whenever I read.

Da Grrrl Says: What an amazing compliment. Thank you so much. You made my weekend! I admit, The Neighbor is one of my favorites, but it can be difficult to write. I took a hiatus -it was supposed to be a small one >.< -and still haven't updated it yet. But be assured that this is on the list of fictions that will definitely get an ending. The response to it has been mind-blowing, especially since I almost didn't write it because of the nature of the plot. I guess my readers are tougher than I thought -and I greatly appreciate that.

Thank you for reading and leaving such fantastic feedback. <3



Reviewer: Brooke   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 18, 2011 11:49 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension

I would love to see this one updated! You have done an amazing job thus far!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Brooke! I really appreciate the feedback. :)



Reviewer: penpaninu   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2011 8:16 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Ki, you is a freak! But keep on dishin' it out, I love it! :P That was dark...I actually clenched thinking he was going to mutilate her (Female circumcision?? O_O) then it got better. Thanks! penny



Reviewer: penpaninu   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2011 6:32 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: I Want it All

daaaaayyuuum! sweet!



Reviewer: penpaninu   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2011 6:19 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: It's Called a Heart

(whistles) and on to the next!



Reviewer: penpaninu   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2011 5:55 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Introspectre

Slumber parties in your twenties still indeed rock! That was sweet and can't wait to see what Yasha has planned. Whatta jerk :P



Reviewer: penpaninu   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2011 5:33 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suffer Well

DAYUM!! Ki, yeu a freak, grrl! But that's why I luuuuv you :P Whouda thunk that a misogynist Inuyasha would be so entertaining and delecious?? :P I'm loving the torture, and maybe that's why I'm a freak too :P Lovin' it more than miccy d's, gonna read some more :P Peace out!

 --penny :P



Reviewer: penpaninu   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2011 4:16 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Breathing in Fumes

daaaaayum! Inu's alittle prick, isn't he? Can't wait to see what Kagome does in the future :P



Reviewer: penpaninu   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2011 4:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension

that was good! I liked how you think KAgomes with Inu at first... and it's Kouga! hahaha



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2011 3:06 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Well, I'm guessing this story has an anniversary coming up soon.  Each time I read it, I find something new. So I'm looking forward to the next chapter (I'm patient! LOL), what happens next as in: Will Kagome try to escape home?  Will Kouga return and discover her perfidy and challenge Inuyasha (of course he will!  His garden has been invaded and his 'rose' stolen.  Well, he left it unguarded in his arrogance), is Ayame in the pic as his wife?  Will Miroku and Sess and Rin show up?  And last but not least--will Inuyasha's mysterious tragic history appear.  Again, its a pleasure re-reading this story while I save the Rin/Sess story for the ride home.  Happy Halloween!  Hugs!



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2011 2:47 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

The foreboding is just as effective at the end of this chapter!  Man, is she in for it.  All I can think about is the basement...and here it comes! 



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2011 2:22 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Hole to Feed

And another piece of Kagome is chipped away and surrendered to Inuyasha.  This last scene where he first claims her totally always gives me goosegumps. It's beyond intense!  Dang!



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2011 1:28 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Nothing's Impossible

Hot, hot, hot with loads of luscious angst.  And it reads even better!



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2011 12:44 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Here is the House

Sexy, sinister and sheer/shear pefection.  Steamy goodness!



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2011 12:18 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: It's Called a Heart

Did this chapter make me squirm with discomfort and my heart ache for Kagome like the first time I read it?  It sure did!  it's a story that everyone has experienced at least once in a lifetime--and we have all been the players in the scenarios.  The question is:  which player.  ha!  Loving it!



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2011 11:45 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suffer Well

There is sooo much going on in this scene and it ALL works!  It's amazing how he takes her apart and how she willingly succumbs while fighting it all until she is broken.  It's excellent.  And sooo dark--



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2011 11:27 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Breathing in Fumes

Awww...why do I love this story so much?  Well, I'll leave another review saying this chapter keeps getting better each time I read it.  Yowzah!  :-)



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2011 10:50 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension

Call me crazy but i'm rereading this story b/c it suits Halloween in a sexy sinister and darkly delish way.  I never get tired of it cuz reads so well.  I love Inuyasha's OOC as a dom.



Reviewer: penpaninu   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2011 9:12 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension

God this was awesome! Your writing style never ceases to entertain and amaze me and it's the best combination of lyrical and funny :P Kagome engaged to Kouga? Whoa~



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2011 2:36 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

I just re-read this today.  I don't know when you'll update but I just want to see this story reads better the second time around! And I really, really enjoyed it the first time.  It's my kind of story :-)



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 9:04 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Im dreading reading the last chapter b/c I will have to wait for an update  Grrr.  I didn't realize what I was in for when I started reading this story.  I'm hooked.  This scene. Blew. My. Mind.



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 8:42 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Hole to Feed

I think my eyeballs just melted after reading this hot scene.

I want more.



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 8:26 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

I don't know where this sexy rollcoaster is going but I have no intention of jumping off.  Awesome.



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 7:55 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Here is the House

This chapter left me in a big puddle on the floor. Wow.



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 5:51 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: I Want it All

I'm twisted up into the tentacles of this plot and have NO wish to be set free.  Nothing like Alpha Male in the late evening. *sigh*



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