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Reviewer: Sheena   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2010 7:39 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

OH NO! I can't imagine what Inu will do. I can't see why she would disobey Inu like that when she knows his rules! He made them VERY clear!

 

Great update! <3



Reviewer: bluesky   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2010 1:00 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

I find myself wondering if Kagome's attachment with Inuyasha could be something close to Stockholm Syndrome? I think it's very interesting, and utterly addicting.

But yeah, could Kagome have stockholm syndrome?

 

Merry Christmas! looking forward to another update. 



Reviewer: carebear   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2010 11:02 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Amazing! I'm definitely looking forward to the next update, so I'm hoping you'll update soon!

 

Aw, and you're in hand braces? How did you manage to get those? Regardless, I hope your hands get better soon <3.

 

And merry christmas! 



Reviewer: blaire   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2010 1:15 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

awesome! i'm definitely looking forward to the next chappie, and hopefully your hands are healing! have a wonderful christmas (L)



Reviewer: May   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2010 10:55 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Of course, another amazing update. I love how EACH chapter makes us inch more closer, and closer to the edge of our seats. The suspense, and mystery is intense. The chemistry between Kagome and Inuyasha in undeniably on fire, and the way you've made Inuyasha's personality is so dark, intense, and PERFECT.

 

I'm definitely looking forward to another update! Get well soon also. <3. 



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2010 2:07 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Why did I not notice that there was a new chapter? >.>

 *corrects this*

Okay, I didn't find most of the dark parts TOO hard to handle, but when he mentioned female circumcision...OW. I had to take a moment to pray you wouldn't go there, lmao, and I'm glad you didn't, though that whole scene with the razor was terrifying. Found it kind of funny, though, that Kagome had no idea what she did wrong but was all too happy to accept that she did something right when she saw those roses. Then she walked into the basement (which I'm happy we finally got to see! Even though...its disturbing and I hope Kagome doesn't have to see it again). The poor girl. Interesting how he purchased everything w/ Kagome in mind instead of just having those toys lying around. Makes me wonder if he's always been a lifestyle dom or doing it to prove some kind of point.

Really loved how creepy/thrilling him knocking her out with the handkerchief was. It felt so horror-movie...amazing! Even better was that by the end, it doesn't seem like she's changed her mind about all this. Its more like she can't help it/herself and is just falling deeper into him. Scary, but really exciting!

~Am :D



Reviewer: Stacey   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2010 10:07 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension

Wow, you left us in suspense once again. I'm interested in seeing more to Inuyasha's personalities in the upcoming chapter(s). This story is so addicting, I keep reading it over and over again! You need to pursue writing as a career. You're just too DARN good at it! 

Da Grrrl Says: That's really flattering. Thank you so much! :D

I don't know how much of IY's true self will be revealed, as its important to the plot. But you'll get to see him in bits and pieces until the pivotal moment reveals itself. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: MeMyselfAndI   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2010 3:20 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

InuGrrrl, just about every sex scene you write makes me blush like a virgin. I love it! Keep writing, can't wait for more of this story! You rule!



Reviewer: Sayuriko   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2010 1:30 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

I'm incredibly late reviewing. Apologies, babes. But I loved this chappie. It was disturbingly hot and sexy and the enigma that is InuYasha continues. When it seems like Kagome has all the reasons to forget this whole thing and run, he just reels her back in. And I know you have to keep this story progressing, but damn, I wish that Kagome would just keep on lying, only so that Yasha has to keep on punishing her! LOL 'Cuz you know, there's an awful lot of toys down in that there basement. XD

I totally owe you mail, but it's been crazy busy in my lil' corner of the world and once it stops spinning, I'm going to mail you and catch up. In the meantime, you take care of yourself, Ki. Hand braces? Seriously... okay, okay, no lecture from me... well, maybe later.... XD Have an awesome weekend!

<333333333333



Reviewer: Leilachan   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2010 2:17 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Hey girl. Sorry to hear you're yavng another flare up. My aunt is in hand braces right now, too. I completely understand not responding to reviews. Having a new chap was the right choice. And wow, dark doesn't quite cover it. ; ) Omg, I almost freaked with the ring gag. *_* but I trust you so I'm sticking around for the rest. Lol I love that he is so unpredictable. Never a dull moment and I can see why Kagome is so interested. Wow! Leather pants and such is just too hot! Hope your Turkey Day was wonderful. Looking forward to more from you!



Reviewer: Claire   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2010 2:09 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

OMG. That was amazing, and now you've left us wanting more. I love the complexity of Inuyasha' character, and his relationship with Kagome. It's really a puzzle, and we're all trying to figure it out. It's sort of like playing detective.

 

More seriously though, I do hope you get better soon! It must be awful being stuck in hand braces. Though, I'm surprised you wrote a chapter while wearing them! Stay safe, you know :) And it was very sweet of you to post 2 chapters.



Reviewer: Christal   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2010 9:01 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Awesome!!!



Reviewer: nekotaishou   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2010 5:16 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Oh my, this was....something lolol. The punishments are getting even nastier now >w<. But I guess Kagome got this coming for her when she even anwsered the damn phone. Grrr! *ripps my paper*

 The chapter, otherwise was very eventful. My curiousity has somewhat been alleviated with the mystery of the basement, although Im guessing that more of Inuyasha's past will slowly be brought up. Cant wait for that! :3



Reviewer: evera   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2010 11:34 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

awesome!!! Im so excited to see an update in this story!! Keep up the awesome job!! I cant wait for the next installment!



Reviewer: Meanha aka LadyWolf   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2010 2:58 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Happy 'belated' Thanksgiving big sis!!!!! (I forgot to say that before lol) This girl needs her head looked at. I'm sorry but so far he hasn't been THAT hard to read to me anyway. And yet this girl lies...I say again lies to his face!!! WTF! She would've been better off just telling him what really happen or just don't say anything, but to make up a story...slow moment. I love how she just came to see this "a madman, a sexual deviant" It's like really kagome he didn't give you that idea before? "I also heard the saying that shaving a woman's pussy bare strips her of her ability to hide." His eyes darkened in that familiar stormy way that preceded something unpleasant. "Or, in your case, her ability to lie." See now I that part I was like DEAD FUCKING GIVE AWAY!!!!! It really don't take much ya know. So in the end all I could think was 'silly bitch gonna get it' kinda funny now I know some would say I'm crazy but....so what she's kinda silly. Yasha's a king so far at what he's doing. She should have at least looked up on what sango said. And at this part "You also know that a kiss from me actually means something," he stressed, his ire growing. "So, tell me, knowing all that you do, why the fuck would I kiss a mouth that would lie to me so easily?" I was like....hmmm that's good point couldn't have said it better myself lol. I'm quoting too much right lol. But this 'she only told the fabrication because she was afraid of what he'd do?" Oh come on!!!!! Ending of chap...oddly sweet. Crazy but oddly sweet lol.

So as you can see I enjoy reading your work of madness as always big sis. LMAO Yet I get the feeling you knew this already...right^_^. Love yas!!



Reviewer: Meanha aka LadyWolf   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2010 1:53 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

OMG what she just did at the end....fucking dumb!! If she was going to pick up she should have rushed him off. Koga is a bit of dick himself. This girl needs to use her head more...it's not that hard. Inu is pissed now one can only guess what he may do. The dark side of this man is NOT one to play with at all.



Reviewer: Ravensashs   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2010 7:35 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Hey there,

And a very Happy 'belated' Thanksgiving to you too. I'm so sorry to hear about your wrist. Sounds to me like you need a nice relaxing massage. Massage can do wonders for carpal tunnel. Of course that's the massage therapy student in me talking...hehehe.

I was sooooo happy to see a new chapter come up so quickly. I can't wait for another one. It's just me but I kinda like the darkness. I'm not a huge fan of angst, but this story keeps me at the edge of my seat. Please take care of yourself and write more whenever you get the chance. Many hugs.



Reviewer: kimakaanna   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2010 10:03 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Yeah, so I know I'm late with this review. Sorry about that. I went to the hospital at 6am this morning, apparently I have Strep throat. I decided to take a shot (though I detest needles lol) and imagine my shock when I found out that I wouldn't be taking the shot in my arm....or leg.....lol. It is painful sit down lol.

Onto the review, OH MY GOSH!! InuYasha is ruthless, but his tenderness at the end threw me off a bit. You just never know what to expect from him. I wonder what the deal is with his family. How did he come to be this way? Or Kagome for that matter. 

He has 'the works' in that basement! I was actually scared for Kagome! Though, her disobedience and lies got her in trouble. If it was me, after seeing that basement, I would've tried to hightail it out of there! This story keeps me on the edge of my seat, biting my nails lol. You're on a roll, putting out chapters like it's nothing! Though, with your carpal tunnel, I wish that you'd take a bit of a break. Hand braces? That sounds painful; sorry you have to endure that, but know that you're hard work is greatly appreciated. 

Thanks for the update, Grrl ;)



Reviewer: Freeman Pwns All   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2010 2:38 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

I read 11 and 12 in a chunk, and to be honest, my heart was pounding almost the entire time. You can't do that to a girl! XD Nice job.



Reviewer: Jane   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2010 10:14 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

You definitely chose the right one :D. I got so excited when I saw that chapter 12 was up. But holy, that was intense and I loved it! Though I'm really glad he didn't decide to punish her in the other way. Somehow, I find that Inuyasha taking a kiss personally is kind of endearing. Maybe I'm just crazy. Awesome chapter! Please update soon!



Reviewer: flygirlrosie   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2010 8:45 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Keep up the good work! This totally made my day. You are a wonderful writer.



Reviewer: Dark-lady-69   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2010 3:10 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

^_^ that was awesome and a lovely thing to cheer me up on this bum vaca... I go to an island resort... And mother nature has some nerve showing up >.



Reviewer: Dgirl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2010 10:57 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Im sorry about your hands I hope you get better. Great story, a little suspenseful, but great.



Reviewer: Alpine   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2010 6:32 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

While I knew this was a dark fic, I chose to start reading it anyway... I just can't seem to NOT read it now. It's sadistic on a whole new level for me and quite interesting. I'm not sure if I'm looking forward to the next chapter or if I'm shying away from it.. ha ha

Thanks for writing such an interesting story
Hugs
Alpine ^_^



Reviewer: 3lue 3utterfly   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2010 1:10 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

I'm so addicted to this story I must say lol I see InuYasha in a whole new light now and I don't know how I'm going to continue writing him as I have when all I see is a sexy naked  InuYasha with a whip in hand. lol. You're doing the damn thing with this story and I can't wait for more. Hope your carpal tunnel eases up.



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