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Reviewer: Lindsay   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 11:53 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Hey Grrrl! Great Chapter!

And Happy (LATE!) Gobble Gobble YUM! Day! lol

 

Great Chapter.  Again not my kind of fic but your writing makes me step outside my reading comfort zone! hahaha ;)

Hope your flair up wasn't TOO bad, take care of yourself grrrl! And update soon!!!!

 

(Did I mention great chapter?  I meant to comment on the previous one but I forgot! sorry! haha)



Reviewer: JO   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 8:53 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

OMG!!! IDK whether to smile or cry...1 that was very creepy and 2 that was very good. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! im sitting on the edge of my seat wondering wtf i got myself into and if its wrong to be hanging on ur every word. I rather not think about it and just have u update. DARN ur flare up... I need to know more!!! hope u feel better thou and take care of urself u r no use to me if u cant write :) i kid!!! Update soooooooooooooonnnn



Reviewer: MsikGirl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 7:49 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Be certain that u really chose the right one....

And hey, if u want to write another chapter instead of aswering our reveiws again, u are totally welcome to.... LOL!

 Happy Thanksgiving for u too!



Reviewer: La Kau   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 5:13 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

So for Thanksgiving I would like an hour in Inuyasha's basement. (* o) You can't beat me on a holiday so deal...lol.LOVE IT! >.> I hope you know I'll be expecting more MORE MORE soon soon soon.

 Personally I wish Kagome got worse but hey that's just me. I love how evil Inuyasha can be. He's a total freak >.> and I like him like that. 

 But seriouly amazing work baby kau. This was a great chapter and  don't be a sadist and make us wait long for the nextone.

 



Reviewer: Stephanie   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 3:06 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

:) Thank you for suffering through your flare up and giving us this chapter, not to mention the last one. I think they were both wonderfully written and givin the circumstances, I believe that you gave us all fair warning as to what was coming. And it was DELICIOUS! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Have a wonderfull thanksgiving! and don't forget to enjoy it yourself!



Reviewer: KeiChanz   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 2:54 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Heyyyy Goober. (: Happy Turkey Day! I hope you had a good one. ^_^ As always, loved the chapter; it definitely had my blood rushing, that was for sure. ^_~ Kept me on my toes! Can't wait for the next one, but as always, take yer time.

Love alwaaaaaaays,
Nutella!



Reviewer: Leija   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 2:41 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Amazing once again! You really know how to impress. Inuyasha REALLY is a paradox. Once you think you have him figured out, another surprise! (I always thought that he had a torture chamber in that basement though).

 

:) Happy Thanksgiving. Hope you enjoyed. <3. It was really very sweet of you to post another chapter up so soon. It was the most wonderful surprise! 



Reviewer: Drake   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 1:47 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

And as another note I forgot before - great to see you in the writing spirit grrrl. :)



Reviewer: Drake   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 1:32 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Very sexy, dark chapter. I get that Kagome is confused since Inuyasha is so hard to read for her, but I think I'm getting it - he *can* give her that more romantic, tender love she craves, and is willing, but only if she earns it from him. In the meantime lying to him is going to make him resort to punishment and humiliation until she learns better. I was on his side for this, she didn't have to drop the L-word for Kouga, she did though and it cost her.



Reviewer: naduni   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 12:16 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Ooooh, this was great! I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.



Reviewer: Abby   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 11:26 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

My god, that was intense. I had a feeling that his basement was some s&m chamber. It makes sense from what I know about his character so far. I was so scared for Kagome when he started talking about female circumcision, thank goodness he didn't decide to punish her in that way. That would have just been horrifying. I wasn't too shocked with Inuyasha's punishment, just because it was definitely something something his character would do. This is such a great thanksgiving gift. (X I was ecstatic at seeing the alert in my email. You're really on a roll with your stories! Thank you so much for your update, I appreciate the fact that you still manage to update even when you're busy with you're own life. So, again, thank you! (: I'm looking forward to seeing what else happens between those two. Even though, if I was Kagome, I would have never lasted that long. I would have probably ran, screaming bloody murder. LOL.



Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 10:29 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Never Let Me Down Again

Happy American Thanksgiving!  :P

I was surprised to see an update of this story in my inbox so soon.  Awesome!  :)

Honestly, this story is bring out my inner deviant.  lol  I love how cold and calculating Inu is.  It's an odd relationship and I can't help but enjoy every little bit of this.

I can't help but wonder if Kagome is ever going to learn?  She does and says things that she knows he isn't going to approve of and now she definitely knows what the consequences are going to be.

Awesome chapter!  I"ll be waiting for the next one.

 



Reviewer: Leija   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 24, 2010 2:26 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

Wow, Sayuriko has me thinking now about everything in their review! Did Kagome shortly distract Inuyasha from his true motives? And if Kagome could possibly not be his target, then what is his intention with her? I'm really interested in knowing the thinking behind Inuyasha, and his true intentions, and also how he came across Kagome in the first place (what made him decide to pick her, and how did he first see her anyways!). Oh god, THE SUSPENSE.



Reviewer: Sayuriko   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 24, 2010 9:07 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

I just had to get in here to read this... Man, Ki, another chapter to add to the intrigue. What the hell is InuYasha up to? Looks like he was being distracted from his original intentions because Kagome was actually getting under his skin. He was tempted to kiss her, wasn't he? But with Kagome's slip (seriously, she didn't think he would hear?!) he's back on track with his real motivations. Until this chapter I had thought his real target was Kagome, but it's not, is it? She's just the means to the end. Yeah, yeah, me and my theories... XD

Doesn't bode well for Kagome though. Soooo... what is the right amount of coercion, Ki? I'm sure we'll be finding out soon! Is it sadistic of me to want to see Yasha punish her the way only he can? LOL. I can't wait to see what you have in store!

Awesome chapter as always, babes!!

<333333333333333



Reviewer: Ivy   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2010 8:12 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

Seriously! Have you ever considered pursuing a career as an author? You are one of the most AMAZING authors I've ever encountered in my life. You know how to captivate, and make people literally live your story. You truly do have a talent, and love the way that you haven't made Inuyasha the standard "shy" kind of guy. I like the way you portray Inuyasha, he's tough, controlling, he knows exactly what he wants which makes him all the more attractive, and mysterious. 

 

Brilliant!  



Reviewer: Jonelle   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2010 6:44 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

OMG UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!! LIKE ASAP!!!!!



Reviewer: Kazanova   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2010 3:21 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

Thank you, thank you, thank you for the update! I'm so happy! And once again, I'm definitely looking forward to reading more. :]



Reviewer: nekotaishou   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2010 11:21 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

Wow, I was so excited to see this updated! After such a long break, I was afraid this story was going to die. But aside from that, I really like how youre adding in curious foretellings like with that phonecall and the basement. I really do love this story. Maybe it could be even more interesting with other characters too. Otherwise, I hope that you update soon.



Reviewer: Jane   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2010 9:38 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

Oh dear, I'm afraid of what is going to happen in the next chapter. Feels very foreboding. I'm completely torn between Kagome and Inuyasha. Part of me wants Kagome to just make Inuyasha happy, but another part really wants Kagome to fight back, but there's just so much consequence if she does that. I'm super nervous for the next chapter, but sooo excited at the same time! Hahaha, please update soon! I absolutely adore this story!



Reviewer: Abby   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2010 8:30 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

GAH! You wont believe how excited I was at receiving an alert for an updated story of yours. Initially, I was hoping that it was an update from this story, but then I thought... "Naaah,"  only to be pleasantly surprised. (X Funny thing is, I was just thinking about this story today, and I was wodnering what was gonna happen in the next update. Glad to have finally found that out, but now I'm extremely curious what Inuyasha has planned. Inuyasha's character is such a mysterious, I just don't understand the way that man's mind works. I'm looking forward to finding out though. I feel awful for Kouga, he seems like a perfectly good guy, even if he's a workaholic. I'm so excited for the next chapter, I don't care how long I have to wait, you can be sure that I'll be there when another alert pops up in my email. (: Thanks for the update!



Reviewer: thisism3smiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2010 8:16 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

Damn it, Butterfly, you done did what you weren't supposed to do >.< Now I'm 30x more scared than I ever was for Kagome in this fic. He scared the shit outta me by the end of this chapter being all sinister and silent like that, and because I know he's got something awful up his sleeve...or in his basement? Who knows with this man. That's what's so scary...and the poor thing thinks he's actually going to be nice because he's being civil? Has she learnead nothing?!

Hmmm...but forget what? His mission? Life goal? Murder plot? >.> Some thing he came to prove and almost forgot? Having to do with Kagome's project? (and I'm asking as if you'd answer any of this xD but I'm in super sleuth mode after that chilling ending).

Very exciting, though again, I'm a little scared to see what you and Yasha have planned for Kagome next chapter.

Wondering how after a week she's gonna explain her abscence and half of her stuff being emptied from his home after Kouga come's back? Hmmm.

~ Am :D

 

 

 



Reviewer: purduepup   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2010 7:05 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

Dayum, grrrl, you're updating like crazy! *snaps fingers in a z-fo-mation!*

INUYASHA: ...Now that's just scarring.
INUGRRRL: At least she isn't your fangirl.
INUYASHA: ... T.T
INUGRRRL: Oh. Right. -.-'

I am very excited that you not only updated "The Knife of Romance", though, but this story as well; both are personal favorites of mine, and you hadn't updated in so long, I thought, "OH NOEZ, SHE DROPPED THEM! DX" but luckily, that was not the case. :D

Kagome's not the only one confused; I, too, am having bits of cranial bleeding. XP I wonder what's holding Inuyasha back - maybe Kikyou? - or maybe he views kisses as, I don't know, personal or emotional? :O (I'm just hammering out guesses. Feel free to ignore me. XD) I hate the circumstances here - aka, Kagome's still with ratass Kouga - but I know if they didn't exist, this would be unrealistic since Kagome would've automatically thought, "Ooh! Hottie! Don't-screw my longtime, serious fiance, and let's move on to that schmexy, BDSM beast over there!" but, sadly, reality sucks, and there must be much angst. XP But I love the angst, nonetheless, as I mentioned before, because you're that great of a writer. :D

And now, I crave to read what'll happen next, what Inuyasha will do about Kagome's unfair situation (having to tell Kouga she loves him), and how things will play out for these two in the chapters to follow. :) I wish you luck with updating your stories, and anticipate the next chapter's arrival, no matter how long it'll take to wait (because, after all, every update is worth it)! :D

MIROKU: If you hadn't noticed, PP is in a very flattering, suck-up mood today.
PP: Did I tell you your Georgia font is beautiful? :D
MIROKU: ...
SANGO: ...
INUGRRRL: ...
MIROKU: My point has been proven. -.-
PP: :D



Reviewer: kimakaanna   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2010 6:37 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

Ooooh she is in trouble!! Now I see why she gets punished (even though he's been going easy on her). I almost feel sorry for her lol. 

Hmm I wonder who InuYasha was talking to...Thank you very much for this update. I was just reading this story the other day hehe. It's taken me 11 chapters to realize that I can't predicate InuYasha's behavior in this story. He is a complete mystery! Thanks again, grrrl :)

P.S. He still won't kiss her? What is he playing at?!



Reviewer: MsikGirl   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2010 5:39 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

Oh my god!!!! I was so happy when I saw that u had updated, but now I don't think I can survive until the next one!!!!

Oh, and I'm sorry to hear that u will abandon some of your fics... I read a lot of then, and really wanted to see all of then finished, because your fics are really unique and I won't find anything similar anywhere, but I guess I'll have to wait and see witch ones will be unfinished...

I know that it's really up to you, but I can't help but ask if you would finish The Neighbor, because this is one of my favorite fics since I've started reading, and because the plot is really diferent from what u usually see out there, I really wanted to see the end of this fic..

I think thats all.... hope u update soon...

Kisses



Reviewer: Onna ^.~   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2010 1:40 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: But Not Tonight

Ahh.. someones in for a ass-whoopin, and her best duck an cover her ass pretty good! :P Kags, ya dumbass! This should be wicked, hehe..

 

Hugzz <3



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