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Reviewer: cassie   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2010 9:35 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Hole to Feed

YAAAYYYY an update!

where've you been, grrrl?! i got super excited when this story was back at the top of the list :)

so.. the chapter. i liked all the girl-talk, to be honest! it was cool to see kagome getting along with the rest of the angels :D and we got our long-awaited lemon yushhh. IY is fucking hot, lol. i always get a little sad at the end of every chapter when he kind of acts like he doesn't care about kagome though..

so why are they headed to kouga's now? i feel like IY's gotta have some sinister plans in mind (where are you coming up with all these ideas?!)

fabulous update as always! hope to see you soon xx

love, cass :)



Da Grrrl Says: Cass!

I've been working and stuff and feeling gripey and blocked out the ASS. But I think this was a "hump" chapter for me. Like, I feel like my flow is working again now that I got rid of this one. It took so freakin long. >.<

I'm not completely happy with this one, but I was happy enough to finally post it, so i don't have a favorite part. maybe the lemon, and only because it was more about his power over her than actual sex, which way more fun. And yep, they'll be making a stop at Kouga's place in the next chapter, but you shouldn't believe such mean things about Yasha. He's such a GOOD guy. lol.



Reviewer: Keiko-Chan   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2010 9:12 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Hole to Feed

Work that pole!!! 

 

 

wow. 

 

I need a cold shower. 

 

<3 

KC



Da Grrrl Says: Squee. <3



Reviewer: Kmoaton   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2010 8:49 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Hole to Feed

This was so hot and I love the fact that you gave us a little peek into Inu's psyche.  This was totally craveable and now it makes me want to listen to the stripper mix on my ipod!!!  LOL

Da Grrrl Says: Hey K-Gurl! Put on that stripper mix, woman! >.> Then pass it over. This chapter gave me over a month of headaches. i just couldn't get into it the way I needed to. I use music to write, and what I was going to use wasn't working for me. Then I found that song and found my flow and was finally able to finish this thing so I can move on. >.< So happy it was acceptable -thanks for the review luv, doll.



Reviewer: La Kau   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2010 8:33 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Hole to Feed

It's so droolable >.> and Inuyasha is so fuckable. <.< Licks lips o.o* and prepares for breating.

Da Grrrl Says: You know... You've been warned. *-.-* *proceeds to beat this kau's head off*



Reviewer: Drake   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2010 8:24 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Hole to Feed

Very nice, I've been waiting for you to update this!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Drake! (You and me both!)



Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2010 8:02 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Hole to Feed

Whoa...  Totally hot.

*is speechless*



Da Grrrl Says: Well, I tried... 0.~



Reviewer: Kinky-Hoe   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2010 10:50 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

Woow!! This is by far one of the greatest portrayals of Inuyasha! He is perfect. Absolutely perfect. Now, I only wonder whether he's really fond of Kagome or not, but given that InuKag is your OTP, I trust you.

Looking forward to the next chapter! This dom!Inu makes our panties wet.



Da Grrrl Says: LMAO! Girl, that last line cracked me up! Thanks for the trust -I hope I don't disappoint ya- and thanks for checking out the story. I'm actually working on the next chapter this very second so you've motivated me!



Reviewer: Miss_Marilyn69   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2010 5:56 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

*sigh* This was hard to read, but not because of how its written (its beautifully written).  Its just every time he does something cruel its almost like he was doing that cruel thing to me.  I got so sucked into the story, and I'm feeling her emotions, wanting what she wants.  Hoping for romance and crying when she doesn't get it.  This kind of reminds me of The Story of O.  I didn't enjoy that one as much as I did Anne Rices forays into D/s but Anne was some how kind still and I don't see that coming in this, so that's way its hard for me to keep reading even as I know that I can't stop.  So I'll just shut up now and keep hoping that maybe just maybe there will be some kindness in the future for them.

Da Grrrl Says: Awwww!! I totally understand, really. *hugs* I get that way when I read other people's stories. You just get so caught up -you hurt when they hurt, cry when they cry, and just pray for the love. I remember when I read a "Bus Stop Fairytale" years ago. When InuYasha cried, I WAILED for him and was just SO upset. So, trust me, I know. But when I'm the writer, I can really, REALLY dish it out. I'm an "angst queen" so there's always a lot of that in my fics. I can't give any hints on what happens in the last few chapters (this is a short story), but I hope you can stick it out. :)

Thanks for the review! <3



Reviewer: nekotaishou   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2010 1:29 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension

This is a really intense fic! Haha love this! How can Kagome put up with such violence; its driving me insane~ This is so exciting! Cant wait! :3



Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! :D In InuYasha's defense, he hasn't really gotten violent... yet. That was just, as he called them, "love taps". She hasn't quite seen him when he's really in the "zone". lol.



Reviewer: Toasty   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2010 12:55 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension

lol I just reread my fave parts of your story! I cant get it out of my mind and I saw your response, lol sorry I mean the desctiption of it when you look at the summary I thought it was a story with Inu cheating on her! But how wrong I lol! I know Imma be a having dreams about him tonight! nowif you excuse me I'm off to finish reading your sweet tooth aching yet heartwrenchingly sad story ' Ever After'! :3 Love it

Smooches



Da Grrrl Says: OOOOOH..... Definitely not a cheating fic. lol. He's too busy twisting her life inside out to think about another girl. :P I admit, I like this Yasha muchly. He's a lot of fun (when he cooperates!). I'm really hoping he'll be good and let me finish chapter 10 soon. >.<

Thanks for all the review luv. I appreciate it, and enjoy Ever After!



Reviewer: Toasty   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2010 4:54 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

Wow WOW WOWZA!!! Amazing story at first I was skeptical because i thought it was a betrayal on Inu's part but then I read and was so tantalized by this story! I love how domineering and possessive Inuyasha is! and the way he acts its like he had some demon blood in him, and I ALWAYS anticipate when Kagome starts to rebel cause I can't WAIT for Inu's reaction sexy as HELL. I even had a dream about this last night! lol good story and I hope you update soon!

Smooches



Da Grrrl Says: A betrayal on Inu's part? I'm not sure I understand...

But hey, glad you like the story. :D I've been having some block on it, which is why the new chap isn't up. Whenever it breaks, though, there will be more. Thanks for reading. ^^



Reviewer: Evera21   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2010 9:38 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

Very nice! locking the creepy yet affectionate thing, hopefully as she learns to do what he wants he will start showing more of his affectionate side towards her!! Update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! I've gotten a bit of block on this, but I'm trying to get something posted soon. :D



Reviewer: Anonymous   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2010 7:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension

AWwwww $@&#!!! I wrote u a very long review and the stupid code that I SWear I typed correctly on my iPhone but nope , it all enter to disappear. Fine!!!

Anyway, I just have say that I think i"LL need to get used to inu more than kags! I'm very used to readng him as the " dark inu" with his submissive moments. But nope, this dude is a cold bastard!!! Lol!! :)

Da Grrrl Says: Sowwy. >.< The captcha only goes up when I'm going to take a while to update because spam bots like to rape the site. I'll try to keep it off more often. :( Sucks, too, because I totally would loved to read the whole review. >.<



Reviewer: Selina aka animeladypimp   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2010 5:24 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

AWWW stoped right b4 the fucking ~_~. What a tease

Da Grrrl Says: Hehe... *sneaks off*



Reviewer: La Kau   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2010 10:27 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

<.<* When are we getting an update?  (* O) runs

Da Grrrl Says: (-*?) Quiet you.



Reviewer: Boop   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2010 1:15 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

this is kind of off topic but where did you get that of inu and Kagome smoochin? is that from an episode and if so which one? :) love to know. thanks inugrrrl.

 

love ya,

Boop♥



Da Grrrl Says: Aaaah! That was from the last anime episode (of the new episodes), InuYasha: The Final Act. WE FINALLY GOT OUR KISS!!!!! xDDDD You can watch the entire episode on my public site, Eternal Destiny, right on the homepage. Sadly, InuYasha is truly over now, but it was worth it to see the anime team give us what RT didn't -a kiss and a confession, of sorts. SQUEEE!!



Reviewer: bigfanofiykag   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2010 1:11 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

Damn, like they say, the darker the berry, the sweeter the juice. Man, this is just too damn sweet. This fic has my mouth salivating with anticipation. You go, GRRRL. I have a feeling this fic is going to get even darker. Just keep kicking ass with your great stories. I can't wait for the next chapter. Gotta go. I just had to let you know that I'm really into this one, even if I hadn't written a review until now. Take care and luvya. ;)

Da Grrrl Says: Hey La!

Thanks for checking out the new story! Yeppers, it IS dark, but I won't go as far as I know I can; my goal isn't to make y'all hate InuYasha, though I could be tempted to throw a wrench or two into the mix.

I can't remember if I sent you the mail about that plot you mentioned, but in the event that I didn't, by all means, go for it. :D It would be cool to see a different take on it.

Luvs ya, doll! <3



Reviewer: Meanha aka LadyWolf   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2010 1:58 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

ImuYasha is such a ass in this one. But she's the one taking it all. Anyway you know I want to read what happens next right? What will Koga don? Ahhhh can't wait for update!!!



Da Grrrl Says: Oh yeah, she's taking it and I would, too. >.> He's fucking hot. LOL. My judgment is impaired after that last anime episode -right now, Yasha can do no wrong! xD



Reviewer: Leilachan   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2010 1:45 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

Forgot to mention I think the new skin is Divine!! XD *stares at his abs*

Da Grrrl Says: I licked them a few times. >.> They were good. <.< o.o *licks them again*



Reviewer: Leilachan   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2010 1:38 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

She must want him BAD to get naked on the road and walk in public like that. But, I can't deny that it's hot as hell! Excellent job on this chap. Very sexy, our yash!! Wish I could have read this sooner.... Weekend from hell. : / glad you're back.

Da Grrrl Says: Court!!

Now, now... He's just having a little fun with her. xD Glad you liked the chap -he's been pretty fun to pen thus far, though I've mismanaged my time and haven't gotten anything posted in a week. >.<



Reviewer: Onna ^.~ (inuyashaloverr)   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2010 3:32 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

Well that was most interesting. Yea, am still trying to understand yash, specially now that he wont kiss Kagome *scratches head*But you the only one I know of that can heat up a room with a scene like the car scene, hehe.

And as said in IM, Maria out done herself on her beautiful Yasha! Very awesome.

 

hugzz..



Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Maruuuuuuuu! I fell out in the chair last night! xD We're pitiful somethings, eh? LOL.

And no comment on Yash. He's complicated, what can I say???? :D And agreed -Maria rocked it, but wait until you see part 2 of the skin with Neo's work. FLOORING. *Hugerzzzz*



Reviewer: Sayuriko   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2010 1:05 AM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

I come back into town and I'm like SQUEEE! New chapter and you have your gorgeous header up! You know how much I love that picture! I said it before, but I'll say it again, Maria did an outstanding job - it's absolutely beautiful!

And this chapter! You know my mind is racing! LOL. "I never said I was nice" *nods* yup, and Yasha reminds us of that every chapter in... but it's Yasha, so we still love him. :D

The kiddies are on spring break, so my time is not my own, but when I get the chance, ya know I'll be mailing you my thoughts. :P But I will say that it's definitely interesting to see Kagome's inhibitions being broken down bit by bit. Kouga's house, the lack of a kiss? I definitely have theories! :P Totally looking forward to the next chapter!

And love that song, btw. Never listened to 30 Seconds to Mars before, but I like 'em!

<33333333



Da Grrrl Says: Lily!!!!

Thanks, babes! <333 I love Maria's work and I'm getting ready to commission her again. SQUEE. I think I'm going to do something for this story next. Hehe...

I so can't wait to e-mail you back, woman. I looooove your theory mails; they make me giddy, lol. I adore your mind -you NAIL. :P

And I'm totally going to hit you with the new 30 seconds CD. they're REALLY good and you've been missing out! But more in mail, yah?? <3333333333333333333



Reviewer: la623   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2010 9:41 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

WOW...pretty insane...I LOVE the new skin...definitely one of my favorites. :)

Da Grrrl Says: Shankies, La! :DDD



Reviewer: 'Tina   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2010 4:22 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: The Sweetest Perfection

Oooh I like.  I thought you had done a BDSM story but I was thinking of someone else.  I think it's a perfect story for you to write...lots of angst, and lots of punishing Kagome. :P  I'm actually really enjoying it!  Keep up the awesome work.  I can feel the passion you have for writing this. :D

Da Grrrl Says: TINAAAAAAA! <333

Naw, this is my first dabble in this kind of dark, but you're right! Anything that lets me nail Kagome all over the place makes me happy, lol. (But a part of me likes her, I swear! <.<) Hope you're well -I must mail you and find out! <3333333



Reviewer: 'Tina   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2010 3:07 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Introspectre

Since I'm so behind, I'm going to do one proper review when I'm caught up.  But rigt now I gotta say...

Hells yeah! Josh Holloway reference. Mmm Mmm



Da Grrrl Says: Boone was my man, but Sawyer is a VERY close second. Those dimples are to DIE for! *faints*



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