Date: March 06, 2010 9:39 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension
Interestinggggg haha. I like it so far, and I can't wait to see where you'll take it. I wonder just how dark you're gonna get. ;-)
Great Job grrrl!
Author's Response: Shankies, Linds! No hints on the darkness! But it will be definitely be darker than my norm in some places. But that's what happens when you get a brutally demanding Yasha, eh? hehe...
[Report This]Date: March 06, 2010 9:01 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension
O.O WOAH.
I mean, really...WOAH. InuYasha's appearance at the end gave me chills. I loved it. Plus, we don't get enough twisted, villain-y Yasha's in this fandom and I've deff been wanting to read a darker IY. Really hot the way he came in and wasn't shy about demanding things from her. And interesting how Kagome doesn't really want to, but listens anyway and can't explain to herself why. I can see her being a little scared (it didn't help that she caught him creepin' around at night), a lot confused, and maybe even intrigued by him.
And I reaaaaally love the set-up. It makes it almost scary how she'll be alone most of the time - but thrilling and exciting (for me anyway, I love thrillers...they're my favorite kind of movie/book, and we don't get enough thriller-y fanfictions either!). Its pretty funny, too, how her fear was him whistling for a gang of ninjas.
And serious LOLs @ heifer Kikyou xD !!
I really like and can't wait for more chilling encounters. I wonder how he'll react to the fiancee (which by the way, was actually really cute - unless it turns out that Kouga's creepin' in Cali. I know he's not your fav by a longshot, so it makes me wonder if there's a catch, lol), if he'll get an invite and what'll go down at the dinner party, and a little more on who he is and what he really wants.
I'm so excited for this one. Kagome makes the perfect "lamb," too. The ninja thing, milk and cookies, and swing-set paint her as really innocent and unsuspecting, and uh...she's got this hot as hell, possible sociopath, coming in with his demands.
She's doesn't stand a chance xD
~Am ;D
Author's Response: Weeeeeeeeeeee! LOL. I was hoping you liked the start! And I KNEW you were going to laugh at heifer, lol. You know how we do!
No hints on ANYTHING because it will just ruin the punchline (this story is pretty short, as it takes place over two weeks or so), but Yasha is a TRIP. There's a method to his madness, and how crazy was it that he said her name when she never gave it? Haha. I love him already!
Very domineering and controlling, yet smooth as black ice. He controlled that situation from the start and I think kags not knowing why she was letting him call the shots is just hilarious. And nope, she don't stand a chance -snowballs will do better in hades. xD
Let the fun begin!!
[Report This]Date: March 06, 2010 8:50 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension
I'll admit - when I saw "The Neighbor" and read the summary, and then furthermore when I saw they were living in a townhouse, I was having flashbacks from last summer. >.> And I was going to LOL if that's what this ended up being.
But ooh, a dark tale. I likes it. Great beginning, my girl, and I can't wait to see where it heads. >:D
Author's Response: BWAHAHAHA!!!! OMG, I wasn't even thinking about that when I started this! LMAO!!!! Now I'm gonna laugh every time I write this thing! xD
But no, drastically different and darker than the norm, but hopefully still fun. Thanks for showing her some lub! I think it's gonna be the "tension release" fic -hehe.
Date: March 06, 2010 8:18 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension
Well... This one is going to be an interesting read, that much I can be sure.
And your warning gives me a sense of, what the fuck does that Grrrl have up her sleeves? Rabbit? Dove? Three ring circus complete with creep looking clowns?
Whatever it is you're planning, dark and twisty sounds good to me.
Author's Response: CA! ^_^
Oooh.. I like the 3-ring circus complete with creepy clowns and interesting ways to use cotton candy! <.< I don't do much dark fic, but I like it! I like the places you can go with it, so I'm going to play and see where we all end up. But I needed to get that warning out there because I'll probably be walking a very thin line most of the time. You'll see what i mean. >.>
Thanks for the review lub, babe! <3
Date: March 06, 2010 7:53 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension
Marvelous! That's all I have to say simply marvelous!
Author's Response: Shankies, Jenn! :D
[Report This]Date: March 06, 2010 6:47 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Fragile Tension
Darkfic - Hook
Aggressive Sex - Line
BDSM - SINKER, BABY!
The Mistress is giddy. She wants more. Soon! :P
Seriously, you're writing my kind of fic, but you already know that. I'm getting exciting just thinking about it. Damn, I'm a sick bitch. LMAO Can't wait to see what your brilliantly devious mind came up with. I know mine is running rampent right now. Heh Nice start, Sistah!!
Author's Response: I kneeeeew you'd be down! LOL!!! Why, you dirty lady, you! xD I just hope it earns your stamp of approval! I don't usually go in that direction much, but why not? We only live once and this fic has been on my mind for a long while. It's a short one (the way I love them!), but there should be plenty of time to have some fun with it, eh? Just toss everything you know about how women usually behave out the window and we'll be aight. <.< LOL.
*glomps 'n rolls*