Date: June 29, 2011 3:25 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
W-o-w you're really good at making me hold my breath during the whole chapter. I was squeeing and writhing in my seat while I waited for InuYasha to confess and stop making poor Kagome suffer. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: June 29, 2011 2:59 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
ZOMFGZOMFGZOMFG.
Okay, so I guess I'm going to bed on a good note tonight because not only was I treated with an update from you (I swear... every single time a puplfiction update pops up in my inbox, angels start singing in the background. Honestly, that's how exciting your update are), but such a sweet one too! Oh, and let us not forget the lovely lemony content.
I know you say that you dislike doing lemons, but you're so amazing at it. I swear, I don't think anyone can read one of your lemons WITHOUT feeling something. You just take everything girls all over the world fantasize about and just describe it in perfect detail.
I always have a ton of things to say after reading an update from you on any of your stories, but they're all just jumbled up in my head and I always manage to leave a handful of them out... so I'm attempting to not do that this time around!
*deep breath*
The reunion between Inuyasha and his 'Papa' was very cute. I loved reading about Inuyasha's 'audition', and ALL THE FLUFF! *Squeals* I'm a fan of angst, but who could resist fluffiness? ESPECIALLY when it comes from you! Most of the things you write tend to be darker, and I love all that darkness too but when you do step into yaknow.. the 'light', well... it's just SO GOOD TOO! Not to mention, it's rare which makes all the fluff more special.
Thank you for the update!
Date: June 29, 2011 1:36 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
for some reason i didnt read this story when you first posted it, why i honestly have no clue since i used to do ballet when i was younger. anyways..awwww!!! inuyasha's little speech was so sweet!! and thank the Lord he made that speech while they were there at the hospital and didnt wait until later cause kagome misinterpreting everything was like ahh! haha. though after that lemon i was like 'why does she still kinda think that he's gay?!' but im glad she agreed to go to italy with him! and domenico's trick was really really sneaky haha. and ahh the italian language. i took a year of italian my freshman year in college and im really surprised that i could still read and understand some of it. well not actually that surprised cause a few months ago i visted friends in rome while i was studying abroad in london, but i am surprised for the reading part haha.
Date: June 29, 2011 12:02 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
Wow! So much happened there. Love, pain, humor, joy. Great job. I really enjoyed it.
Date: June 28, 2011 10:20 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
Oh goodness. That was beautiful. His speech was so... awwwww. And emotional. And I'm glad that it wasn't a "and then he woke up" moment. And I loved the dirty talk. Amazing. :)
Date: June 28, 2011 9:37 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
You had me on the edge of my seat there! I was reading as fast as I could because I was almost sure the chapter would end before Inuyasha got to explain and clear Kagome's confusion. Whew! The lemon was hot! Damn, if only one day...^_^. God, I just can't stop telling you how much of an amazing writer you are! Nobody writes like you. Every single one of your stories just makes me feel. And I absolutely love it! Hikari is still number one in my heart but Pas de Deux is coming dangerously close! :) Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: June 28, 2011 9:34 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
Ooh.. love it.. but wait; he still never officially told her hims not gay yet, hehe.
Hugzz
[Report This]Date: June 28, 2011 9:23 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
OMG!!! That chapter was awesome. I so enjoyed it and how they are now confessing the love they share for each other. I look forward to the last chapter too hon!!
Huggles
Alpine ^_^
[Report This]Date: June 28, 2011 8:30 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
Forgive me for not taking time before now. Love the chap, my lovely Musume. And what catches my attention most?
'Great, the asylum is on a field trip.'
*ROFL*
Who says you not write funny ass shit! Lol..
Then just goes on to more fun from there, and boy did I need it, hehe. Been to one too many games, eh, child of my heart? ;) Cause can just see this shit actually going on, lol.
[Report This]Date: June 28, 2011 7:29 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
Thank God he confessed his love at the end because Kagome misinterpreting everything made me wanna choke her >.> Though her getting ready to tell him off because of his "trash the past" comment was pretty funny. How sweet that the birth gave him that extra push to confess, and that she's agreed to go to Italy!
I loved Rin's pep-talk (and "cannibalism" comment xD), and how she made Kagome see sense. Domenico's little trick and how Adelina took such a shine to IY was cute, too. Getting him all nervous because he thought it was an audition...lol.
It'll be interesting to see how she reacts when she finds out he's not gay (though I can't see her getting too bent out of shape over it, even if he did lie by ommission)...and maybe if Bank will get an invite to their wedding? xD And nice that Kikyou and that other troupe will be a very distant memory.
Can't wait to read how this wraps up! The story here is adorable and I love how the two became best friends first. It made their love that much sweeter!
~Am :D
[Report This]Date: June 28, 2011 5:10 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Fifth Position
Bella storia. I padri parte è sorprendente. Baby Vacca avete fatto bene. Sorprendente come sempre.
[Report This]Date: June 27, 2011 11:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
first off, i felt like i read this... but as it continued i guess i hadn't *finish* reading it.... ah - i decided to pick this up since u said u're working on the next chp.
And if this mirrors the steps in ballet, n the hint u gave to the first reviewer, does that mean it's a 6 part story?
And how come am not surprise that Kags thought Inu is gay? And he'll fake being gay?? LOL... I love these kind of misunderstandings!!
Kikyou makes me wanna dial "1800 choke-that-ho!!" LOL x)
Date: June 27, 2011 2:53 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
Thank you! I was laughing so hard on some parts. Hehe. And Ooo! The plot thickens :D
Date: June 27, 2011 1:23 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Third Position
I was squealing like a fan girl until the phone rang. Daaaaang! That was hawt. Lol. I'm off to the next chapter now :)
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2011 10:44 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
I feel terrible because I've been trying to read BOTH the chapters your posted for the past couple of weeks! Real like has, unfortunately, gotten in the way. So I'm posting my review for both on this one! I hope that's cool with you!
I love how you added some Red Sox-Yankee Action in there! If only my hubs read IY fanfiction, he'd have died!!!! lol But such is the way of a Pro-Yankee wife to a Pro-Red Sox hubs.
I'm curious to see how the Italian Dance Company will pan out. What will it mean for Inu and Kags!? I'm also counting down the chapters to when she figures out he's not of a different sexual persuasion! Keep up the good work! Proud of you for doing so much posting! but keep your wrists in check missy! ::shakes finger::
Da Grrrl Says: Linds!!
It's totally okay. I'm just glad you enjoyed the chapters. There's just 2 left, so you won't be waiting long to find out what happens. I totally forgot your hubby is pro Sux >.> hehe. I bleed BLUE, so I had to poke some fun at the whole thing. I'm working on the next chapter right now, so it will post tonight or tomorrow. :D
Date: June 24, 2011 8:11 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
This is amazing!
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! <3
Date: June 24, 2011 8:11 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
Holy moly this is amazing! I'm new to your website and i just have to say oh my god...You are a absolutely amazing, fantastic, mind blowing writer.
Da Grrrl Says: Welcome to Absolution! ^_^
And thank you for the kind compliment. I appreciate it and I'm happy to hear that you like the story! <3
Date: June 24, 2011 2:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: First Position
I never get enough of your stuff. That dance scene was written so beautifully, and that fight scene? HILARIOUS. Can't wait for what's coming next!
[Report This]Date: June 23, 2011 6:16 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
LMAO @ the Bank/Jak fight. That was hilarious! Poor Yash getting caught in the middle...and then making it worse for himself by telling Bank he's not into him. It was too funny watching him miss all the signs that Bankotsu threw out there, and then when he finally realized it ("I NEED AN ADULT!"). Really side-splitting stuff, Grrrl. I could totally picture this going down xD
And I loved Bank's "Fuck you, Fenway!" Even better was IY's angry "ILY" after everything he said to Kagome. Both scenes had me dying. Good stuff...you should do comedy more often!
For a second I thought that woman who called was Kikyou, but sweet that Yash's old mentor got him a job at a prestigious dance company...even if it might later mean him having to leave Kagome for Milan. Or maybe he won't? Interested to see what he'll do once he's free from his old contract, and how Kagome will react to his decision, and great double update. The dance scene was beautifully written. Really intense and passionate! Up until Bank ruined it with his phone call, it was nice to see them getting lost in the moment and forgetting that Kagome thinks he's gay.
Can't to see where this one goes!
~Am :D
Da Grrrl Says: I knew you were going to laugh at the Fenway crack. When I was writing it, I said, "Am is gonna snort her ass off." LOL. You know how they get at the stadium. People don't even have names -they're referred to by player or park. xD
You know I don't do comedy, so I'm extra stoked that it went over so well. I must have rewritten that part 6 or 7 times trying to get it to flow right. So I'm freakin' giddy that it worked out. :DDD More in the future >.> maaaaybe.
There's 2 more chapters to go before I can close another fic for 2011-yay! But no hints on how we close it out. <3
Date: June 23, 2011 4:04 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
Loved the chapter. I couldn't stop laughing.
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! I don't really do comedy, so I was hoping it would go over well. :P
Date: June 23, 2011 1:48 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
Now see there..LOL!! Calling the man a post-op fucktard..HAHAHAHAH
Da Grrrl Says: You know he had it coming, MJ!
[Report This]Date: June 23, 2011 8:43 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
Finally I got to read this update.... (>_<) Didn't budge for no one..( I'm sure you can insert a funny piture of that here ** )
You had me laughing so hard on the "Fag Fight" I will have to ask -- do you see these often because the discriptions is so vidid I felt really bad for Yashie.. Heck I would have ducked and covered..
And the heartache you just have to make us feel that a little -- well you wouldn't be you if we didn't. But he can crawl into my bed anytime to feel babied.. LOL!
And then to dance and deal with Gome I can't wait for what you have in store for them... you my Grrrl are a talent indeed.. thanks for sharing it with us..
tootles!
Date: June 23, 2011 12:07 AM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
So funny! I bust out laughing at least 4 times. Love it. Oh poor Inuyasha, but sounds like things are looking up for him.
Date: June 22, 2011 10:54 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
OMG ..... I'm still laughing! That scene at the stadium was hilarious! And I really like the way you ended the chapter, with something good happening for him (to balance out the day from hell XD !)
Thank you for the update -- it was alot of fun to read!
Take care,
Rana ;)
Date: June 22, 2011 7:40 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Fourth Position
oh. my... i have seen such fights and they aren't at all pretty -- but this was hilarious! what a way to find out that what you thought was 'guy time' was really supposed to be a 'date' --i'm still laughing! =DDD
a lie by omission -- the only way to fix it is to come clean to her completely and hope to at least stay friends (something tells me that she would be more happy than angry). but now he might be leaving the country.... he can wait until he finds out if he's got more options and offers since he doesn't have to accept the first offer. =
that was great!! =D