Date: August 20, 2013 11:38 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Heya! I'm back from my computer being an ass by losing the charger, and I will re read this one o//
DaGrrrl says: Welcome back! o/
I actually owe you some mail. I'm just super behind with everything, everywhere. Sigh. But I hope your summer is going well! (>.> Or, at least, better than mine. I screwed up my back and it's been awful...)
[Report This]Date: August 06, 2013 2:06 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
I'm still new to this so it took me a little time to follow the characters but that didn't stop me from thoroughly enjoying it! Great read! I love it in all its over the top glory. Can't wait to see what happens next :D
DaGrrrl says: Thanks! All of my fics are based on InuYasha characters, but only a few have anything to do with the canon universe. I prefer alternate universe where I can put them in any setting I like. If you're not that familiar with InuYasha (anime/manga), or in this case, Haou Airen or Death Note, all of these people will be confusing, but once you get to know them in their cnon, the jump to the stuff that I write is easy. :)
[Report This]Date: July 25, 2013 1:28 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
OH MY GOD!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS!! XD I want to know what happens with Kagome and Inuyasha. I wonder what else Inuyasha has up his sleeve.
[Report This]Date: July 17, 2013 1:00 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
The image of Inuyasha baking is hysterical, I love it. Really like your style of writing, it makes this an easy to follow, fun read. Looking forward to more.
Redenzione.
Date: July 09, 2013 12:36 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Hi chica, still loving this story so much just read it over again :-)
[Report This]Date: July 01, 2013 4:49 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
I love Inuyashas mouth. It's extremely dirty in a "I just wanna fuck him" kinda way. I love this chapter simply because bank and jakotsu interactions. I'm extremely interested in how their "relationship" will proceed. I'm also very curious as to why Kagome is taking her boyfriends shirt and letting him rule her. But all in good time and I can't wait!
DaGrrrl says: Thanks fr the reviews!! I appreciate them! I lol'd @ >/i>"It's extremely dirty in a "I just wanna fuck him" kinda way." That was hilarious. This story will be considered "Pulp Fiction", which is generally longer than 20 chapters and a bit over the top (Maybe a lot >.>), so it will be a ride indeed. I'm working on a new chapternow (This one has been slow going because I've been busy/lazy), and there will be cool artwork for it, too, so look forward to it all! ^^
[Report This]Date: July 01, 2013 3:54 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
I am completely enthralled. Not only is Inuyasha confident he's extremely smart. I like this portrayal of Inuyasha because most people take him out to be to cool for school or because he has so much money he doesn't need education. I say in order to rage a war you must first understand your opponent otherwise you'll lose
by becoming to confident.
Jessica
[Report This]Date: July 01, 2013 3:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Awesome first chapter! I especially love Inuyashas bad-ass attitude. Confident guys are way sexy but too confident can get you into trouble lol :-) I have decided with my newly given account (that I certainly cherish; I even squealed when I saw the email) that i am going to start with this story... I have high hopes that this story will be better than expected and I can't wait to find out.
Jessica
[Report This]Date: June 19, 2013 1:20 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
I got to finally see the rivalry and I liked. A job well done :D
[Report This]Date: June 19, 2013 12:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
I think it is a great start to the story :)
DaGrrrl says: Thanks! ^^
Date: June 18, 2013 8:00 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Very nice character details, not too much all at once, and still keeps the plot moving. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
DaGrrrl says: Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you enjoyed your first peek of my stuff. ^^ This story is just getting started, so there's still lots to introduce before it 'kicks in', but it should be a ride full of fuckery. (^_^)b
[Report This]Date: June 18, 2013 7:43 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
And the plot thickens! Enjoying the ride.
[Report This]Date: June 18, 2013 7:03 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
Good chapter. As the rivalry ratchets up!
[Report This]Date: June 18, 2013 6:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Nice start! Great portayal of guys being guys. Off to read more!
Date: June 16, 2013 8:21 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Nice update
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2013 4:48 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Great chapter.
DaGrrrl says: Thanks. :)
Date: June 15, 2013 8:29 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
So totally loving this story! We'll see just how much Kagome fights against Inu. Can't wait to read more!
Date: June 14, 2013 3:04 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
I'm not really one for the high school fics, but seeing Light's name kinda made a little more interesting. For a second I was kind of hoping he'd be like his Death note character, gotta love him even though he's freaking nuts, lol
DaGrrrl says: This probably isn't a story you should follow. It's purely High School, for one. Two, I've never read a single page of Death Note or watched the anime, so if you're looking for DN characterization, you're not going to get it. Light wasn't supposed to be in this story at all; he was put in as a replacement for another character from another series. (Plus, it's widely known that I destroy canon characterization to suit my own needs, so he would have been different anyway, I'm sure). So, again, this one isn't for you since you don't like HS fiction and you're looking forward to canon Light.
[Report This]Date: June 12, 2013 4:17 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
I love inu's character in this story! he's so sexy
DaGrrrl says: Thank you very muchly! ^^
[Report This]Date: June 12, 2013 12:57 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
May Day, May Day! Abandon ship! My mind is crashing with how awesome this story is turning out to be. I am going to have to go to the store and buy some manga to fill the void that is now in my reading brain until the next chapter is up. Lol. But all kidding aside this is really starting to get good keep up the awesome work!
DaGrrrl says: Thank you! I should be updating this one soon, and there's some new art to check out as well. ^______^
Date: June 01, 2013 9:02 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Sorry I've been absent! Glad you didn't kick me off! It's a long story involving broken bones and an epic move to another state. Anyway the chapter review! Loved it! I've been reading some more manga and the story really does feel like your personal version. I'm really enjoying how you've been developing the characters. At first I wasn't sure how much I would like the characters but now I'm really warming up to them. The camaraderie between miroku and bank is palatable and so is the chemistry between inuyasha and kagome. Anyway as always hope you're doing well! Thanks jenn
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2013 10:44 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Okay, you have Light down so well, it's almost scary! I feel bad for Kagome, and I really want to know why she's like this. Now Inuyasha...what could he be baking? I can't picture him in the kitchen without ramen involved, so I'm totally lost.
DaGrrrl says: You really think so? I've never watched Death Note, so I'm going mostly off how I just pictured him to be. After I wrote this, I consulted with a friend who is a big DN fan, and she gave me some tips on how he behaves in the manga for future chapters, but she was also surprised by the characterization I used. I guess I'll take that as a good thing from you both. :D I actually owe you some mail, too!
Date: May 22, 2013 5:49 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
I think high school fics are a guilty pleasure of mine, and this is fueling that! Can wait for the next chapter!
DaGrrrl says: Awww, thanks very much! I like HS fics, too, but I decided to make this the last one. There are only but so many HS scenarios one can dream up! XD
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2013 9:21 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
I love this story! I especially enjoy what you have done to Inuyasha's character. He's still his cocky, rich self but he's not the highest one on the totem pole. I also enjoy the characters' interactions and how they're complex such as the interaction between Kagome and Sango. Great job! I can't wait to continue reading the story. =)
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks a lot! ^^ This story still has lots to go, but I'm glad you're enjoying what's posted thus far. :D
Date: May 19, 2013 6:32 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Parallels
Really liked the way you showed the differences in the lifestyles and priorities of those coming from different backgrounds. Looking forward to seeing how all the relationships between those characters develop.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! I appreciate the kind review. ^^