Date: January 26, 2012 5:05 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Smokescreens
Inuyasha is both dispicable and hilarious. I don't know how to feel about his character. Kagome does need a backbone when it comes to her boyfriend, but Eri didn't have to say that to her. I feel bad for Sango, but i'm hoping things work out for her for the better. Love the new skin, especially the skin Inu is showing *insert drool* :)
Date: December 11, 2011 12:16 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Yep - hooked!
Looking forward to the next update.
Date: December 10, 2011 10:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Yo!
On vacation and thought I'd drop by to see what you were up to!
Loving this! Edge of Seventeen was my favourite after all, so I'm loving this teen drama. Will definitely be keeping up with this fic - badass, sexy, involves a bet, the grrrl is writing it - recipe for success! I'm hoping for a little X factor to set this one apart from others of its genre, which I'm sure you can deliver.
Glad to be reading your great work again :)
(maybe I should jump on the bandwagon and actually finish my fic...)
Da Grrrl Says: AXY?! O.O
I must glomp you!!! *GLOMPS*
How the hell are you??? It's so weird -you've been popping into my head for the last few weeks and I was like, I need to dig through all my crap and search for her new e-mail! OMG... It's totally awesome hearing from you! <33
Can you believe I still write? *shakes head* I'm nowhere near as prolific as i used to be and I'm very hesitant to start anything new, but I figured one more HS fic for old times wouldn't be too bad. I still didn't finish EoS. (I know, I know.. lol). But I've started that final chapter and had new fanart made for the occasion, so it will definitely get its final ending.
This one I just made up on a whim (and actually plotted it out. Gasp), but I've run into inspiration roadblocks and haven't really written anything since August. Still have a ton of other old fics to polish off, too. Sometimes I feel like I never will...
But anyway, glad to see that you're okay and still popping in every so often. And YES, you should finish your story (don't be like me-haha).
Date: November 08, 2011 11:23 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Heya,
I havn't been on your site for a while, but when I do come back I find new fics that you put up! And they, like this one are great. I look forward to reading more of this fic and seeing what else you have written. :D
Redenzione.
[Report This]Date: October 31, 2011 1:01 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
I absolutely love your writing. This story is great so far! I look forward to your next update! [:
Date: October 20, 2011 2:27 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
ok I have to admit that I wasn’t expecting this. But it’s not a bad thing. I just wasn’t expecting Kagome’s and Sango’s characters to be that different. But then again both of them seem like there hiding some thing that makes them the way they are. I’m excited to see how Inu and Kags “relationship” is going to progress. ^_^ oh and I loved the that you made Light smell like apples
Date: October 03, 2011 12:17 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
OOOOOO wat were the pics of? lol
Date: August 22, 2011 2:17 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
The story does have a shoujo manga aura, but dayum if it ain't excellent. I love the relationship b/w Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha; you can never go wrong w/ brotherly love. I'm really curious about Kagome's backstory and most definitely can NOT wait for Hakuron's appearance. Your stories are always so original and though I ship Sess/Kag, I can always count on you to rekindle my love for Inuyasha and Kagome. Brilliant.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much! I was in a bad mood and this review today brightened me right up. <3
I was totally going for the manga feel, so I'm giddy that it shows! Hakuron is so damn hot; I had to include him in this. There isn't a drop of Sess/Kags in this (as I'm sure you'll know), but there will be Sess and his tight/protective relationship with his little brother, so I think you'll enjoy him in this one. Thanks for the review and I'll be updating this soon. :D
Date: August 08, 2011 2:16 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
seriously i'm just giving up on prettending tlike i can finish work until i've read another chap...HS fics are usually so wel...HS but i have to admit i'm luvin the grown man swag in this one & oh the rivalry! when that hits the fan it's gonna be epic...thanks for sharing
Date: August 08, 2011 1:49 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
ok i have got to stop reading the newness 7 finish work...but i can't walk away this one totally has me hooked & it's the first chap so yay! thanks for sharing
Date: August 07, 2011 12:55 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
very good =)
[Report This]Date: August 06, 2011 11:10 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
enjoyed this chapter as well.Thank you for the great story to read
[Report This]Date: August 06, 2011 10:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
very well written =)
Date: August 06, 2011 1:45 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Nice story, had me cackling like an ass 2 early in the morning. Funny user names especially with the irony that seems to exist between 'pussy productions' and his seemingly constant 'dickly damsel' in distress.
[Report This]Date: August 05, 2011 5:05 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Ah boy... lottsa drama goins on. And Yash is friggin persistent -the dog! :P Sorry took so long to finally get to read this, I kinda lost the email with the link *blushes* Yea, I know, total lame. But I get to blame it cuz am old. :P
Hugzz!
[Report This]Date: August 04, 2011 12:48 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Inuyasha is so badass!
I wish Kagome luck!
[Report This]Date: August 03, 2011 9:38 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Love it! I could read your writing for hours....and I have ^_^
[Report This]Date: August 01, 2011 2:22 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Oh gosh! I'm so sorry about the whole spoiler-review thing :( It wasn't intentional! Anywho:
InuYasha is just....wow!! He's got a set of balls on him! lol I wonder what Kags is going to do now... I can't wait to find out what Inu asked Sesshy to do!
I totally loved this chapter. Thanks for the update, even though I'm super late on this review!!
Date: July 31, 2011 10:31 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
Kepp it coming this looks like fun
[Report This]Date: July 31, 2011 2:18 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
*waves banner*
I'm just sayin....
Date: July 30, 2011 12:39 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
I loved the interactions between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. It's so rare to see the brotherly affections coming into play, but it's cute how Sesshoumaru is willing to risk an illegal prospects for his little brother, and the idea of him pouting just cracks me up!
Can't wait to find out what exactly Sesshoumaru will be doing, and what happened to Kagome in the past for the change. Quite interesting how differently she acts with the rest of the student body and her boyfriend. In her conversation with Kaname, she acts like a total pushover, and with the others, she's like the dominating force in the room. And thanks for the quick update!
[Report This]Date: July 28, 2011 5:00 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
I must say, you never cease to amaze me! My attention has definitely been grabbed! I especially like how you feel like you should hate all of the characters, but you can't help but love them at the same time cuz...well, come on! That's an obvious one! Keep up the awesomeness! I look forward to reading more!
Date: July 28, 2011 2:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Right know I would love to make a small miracle, so that I can communicate with you just through our minds. Cause oh my god there is sooo much I want to tell you, so many things I wanna speak with you about, but the most important thing is your health and that’s why it’s ok if it takes longer to communicate with you like this. I know I’m like a mother hen but again, babe, please, spare your hands. For you, for me, for us, cause we love you and don’t wanna see you hurt. Ok, that was that and now.When I saw the pic of Hakuron, that you posted at the end of one of the chapters, I was just " he’s hot, but who the bloody hell is Hakuron???? And so, out of my utmost respect for you, I looked him up on the net, found the manga and read the whole thing in one night. And I cried at the end like a little baby. There is nothing more to say, like Oh my fucking god, I ... wow, just, hmm wow, It was very interesting, cause I read a INU fanfic story , a while ago exactly with this storyline, ok not exact exactly, but mostly. I liked Foron very much the one who should always dress as a woman. So kawaii :) By the way, I love all your little surprises, like that you speak to me through „Beyond Redemption " :) It really makes my dayI’ve got such a feeling, that in reality, in person, we would be really great friends (chicks) :D I think that’s enough of my bad grammar for one day :DSincerely yours, Alex :DI’m sending you many kisses
[Report This]Date: July 28, 2011 12:48 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
LOL! Bank and his cookies and those screennames (Puppy Powa!) crack me up. The MBC is a trip, but they're fucking bosses and I really love the little flashes of how they rule Tomori High. I'm already crazy intrigued by whatever plan InuYasha has for Kagome and how it'll shake up her relationship with Kaname. Gotta love how much trouble he stirred up at that meeting, even though the way he ended it (with possible blackmail?) seemed ominous.
I don't think I feel bad for Miroku anymore >.> though I do for Sango and Jakotsu. With Sango, I guess she was smart to pre-judge him...and awwwww, Jak xD I knew there was a reason Bank was shaping up to be my favorite MBC member (second to IY, of course).
I'm not so sure how I feel about Kagome yet. Miss Queen of Tomori had her stuck up moments, but privately pulling Sango aside and warning her of something that could ruin her HS career...and not reporting her when it's part of her job to is a pretty decent thing to do. She could have ulterior motives, like the ones Sango mentioned, or she could not. I'm interested to find out what she's like outside of her roles as student council president and Kaname's trophy girlfriend. The Inu/Kag scenes seem to show it and I loved their witty exchanges. She reminds me a little of "Breaking the Girl" Kags - who I loved cuz she knew how to throw down xD. This Kagome seems a little more composed, but she definitely shows some fire around InuYasha.
Lastly, I adore Kaede for not putting up with any of their shit...especially Kouga's. These crazy kids need someone tough like her to keep them all in check!
Seriously awesome chapter. Can't wait to meet Hakuron (zaaaayum he's fine xD), and see what other crazy things these Tomori High kids can get into. Also can't wait to read about that favor Inu asked Sessh for and what he promised in exchange for the goods.
(I bet it was a Hello Kitty Cream Puff)
~Am ;D
Date: July 27, 2011 10:39 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
dun Dun DUNNNNNNN. lol. I like the visuals you gave us for Kagome's boyfriend. I was having a hard time visualizing him. And you're right. They're fucking hot. lol. Can't wait to see what Kags is going to do...
S.