[Report This]Date: July 27, 2011 9:43 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Dear lord I am loving this fic Grrrl. So fresh and new. Really love the new style of writing you got going on. God I love bad boys and you write them so seductivly! Great username Puppy Powah haha! Can't wait to read more.
Date: July 27, 2011 12:19 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Ooohhh. I thought he was talking about his own smile too, but it seemed odd, so that clears that up for me! Also thanks for the visuals there...umm yeah those guys? H-O-T No wonder he rules the school and Inuyasha wants to dethrone him. That makes the rivalry oh so much better!
I'm really interested to see the relationship between Kagome and Kaname fleshed out too. All kinds of stuff going on there! Oh so much intrigue! Maybe it was just me, but that scene where Kagome slapped Inuyasha and she went on a verbal lashing really reminded me of Pride and Prejudice when Elizabeth reamed Mr. Darcy.
Then Sango...oh my other mystery girl, what is going on with you? I love that she saw right through Miroku at the start, but it only seemed to make him more determined. Gotta love the cat and mouse game there!
I do feel really bad for Ayame though. Poor girl :(
Also...WTF is Miroku doing at five??! OMG I'm like....peeling my eyes trying to figure it out lol! All signs of a great plot here. I really loved having TWO whole chapters to read when I got back after most of a week with the in-laws.
[Report This]Date: July 26, 2011 9:37 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
I've been out of town -again- so I couldn't read until now. Lemme say...WHOA. Okay wtf happened to Kagome to make her so...frigid? The real girl has to be in there somewhere...right?! I'm loving that Inuyasha is so pampered by his daddy dearest and big brother in this one. That makes one spoiled puppy! Yeah, you were right, I kinda want to beat the crap outta all these kids, except Sango!
This rivalry is just...like the best icing on cake right now. He's going for Kagome just to stick it to this guy? Love love love it! I so cannot wait to see how Kagome starts to react to this... It's great that you got this out so soon, I'm glad it's coming to you!
Date: July 26, 2011 11:08 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Yeah! Hello Kitty cream puffs I actually just had some at my cousins house yesterday ... an odd completely unimportant coincidence! I love Kaede bustin Kouga's nuts and as a former educator the punishment was pretty brilliant! If only teachers got a little more respect in the real world (from students and other faculty). Anyway it's a great chapter and in the interest of following your intructions in the author note I will leave it at that!
Thanks for writing such entertaining stuff especially with everything you deal with :)
Jenn
Date: July 26, 2011 4:23 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Hey Love, it´s me, you are overdoing it, please take care of your hands, we can wait for the chapters till we are drooling :D and again you are fabulous, as always, by the way I love the way you display Bank. In some way is it the cold hearted old Bastard we know from anime and in some way not :) but sexy as ever and kouga, just wow, sooo bad :D I’m really curious if you will show some real hentai action in the next chapie, or if you will let them squirm a lil bit longer :D And it’s always nice to read a piece where Seshie and Inu are like, I love you Oniisan, Love you too pup, sooo sweet, everything in this story is just the right way to be in sync with my heartbeat J
And like always from now on,I´m sticking to my promise and never ever let you hanging again.
Your Alex kissDate: July 26, 2011 2:21 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
hey there girl! sorry its been a while since ive reviewed, been super busy moving to my new place, then it took FOREVER to get the damn internet set up. anyways, ive finally caught up on all your updates and i have to say the little oneshot you posted a couple of weeks ago was fucking hot!! haha. anyways, back to this story, awww your last HS story, ive always loved your HS stories, well all your stories actually haha. and umm, can you say cliffhanger!!!! i cant wait to see how that's gonna go!! though i do have some ideas im obviously not gonna post them on here, i'll just keep them to myself and see if im right when i read the next chapter haha. ohh by the way, LOVED inuyasha's SN, 'puppy powa' haha soo cute! how do you come up with these things?! haha
[Report This]Date: July 26, 2011 1:58 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
P.S I LOVE Hakuron. We have to stop liking the same men sis -_- I mean this just wrong LMAO.
[Report This]Date: July 26, 2011 1:55 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Okay So I'm all about Inu-kun. Kaname is a bit of ass in this sooo I'm go with my bad boy yasha (who I do love more lol)Okay Koga is a pain!! He's so gonna get his being baby acting all dumb lol. Miroku looking at sango huh hmm this should be fun. Bankotsu was sweet at a moment that I thought he would just leave be. So that made me happy, I mean if the MDB are that cool they would have the balls to help who ever they wanted lol but to each it's own.
Kags is in for it now I get the feeling this is were the fun begins. She's kinda slow but I agree that delayed reaction set her up for all he's going to do. Inu got some games in mind."Puppy Powa" OMGosh that's too funny!!! cute but funny. I want to know what he asked for now it's really getting to me lol. So let's just get to it....when will Inu start doing sexy thing to her huh? He can be sooo HOT have mercy on my soul hot LMAO.
Oh and I LOVE THAT THIS UPDATE WAS SOOO FAST!!! Please rest your hand and then update again real SOON!!
Love ya.
Date: July 26, 2011 12:31 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Omg I love this story, especially chapter three! You've really out done yourself inugrrrl! Well done, I can't wait for the next chapter cause like always its always soooo good. I've recently picked up your stories and they're just fantastic. I love them. I'm far from catching up to seeing all of them but this one has caught my eye first. Thanks for posting!!
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you!! It's always nice to meet a new visitor, especially when she/he is enjoying the stories! I haven't done a HS fiction in years, and since it will probably be my last in that genre, I'm hoping to make this a lot of fun in the twenty-some odd chapters I think this thing will be. I'm also updating in good time (a miracle!), so it's awesome to get such great feedback. Thanks again, and welcome to Absolution! ^____^
Date: July 25, 2011 11:18 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Oh, oh, what a cliffhanger. He shut the door *eyebrow waggle*. Thanks for updating InuGrrrl <3. Love your updates as always.
I love how Inuyasha is so sexy -- Kagome is so perfect for him!
Da Grrrl Says: Hm... I wonder what he'd need privacy for?! But let's not judge him too harshly. xD He may have a perfectly normal reason to wanna get her alone, right? Haha.
Thanks for the review luv!
Date: July 25, 2011 11:09 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
!st off, I want to give you my condolences and sympathies to you and your friend's family. I'm sorry to hear that.
2end off, Loving the new fic!!! Inu with a golden barbell on his tongue... saweet!!! At first I thought Kags bf would have been Hojo. lol but the character from Vampire Knight is even better. Don't know him, or ever read the manga but he's good looking. Even Hakuron... all I can say is hot hot hot!!! I can't wait to read the next chappie!!!
Happy writing and I will certainly review! *Huggles*
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Miss Smurfy. I appreciate that. I'm a lot better than I was when I found out. I knew it was going to happen, but I guess I didn't really accept that it would, and the guilt was made worse because I didn't finish her fics in time. I feel awful about that. Seriously awful. >.<
I'm glad you like the new story. I didn't really expect to start a new one (other than a oneshot I'm doing), but I'm glad I was able to get it off to a good start. I still have many that I need to finish, but fresh blood is always great and motivating, especially when it gets such a nice reception. :D And you KNOW if I include crossovers they gotta be awesome. xD Cause I'm totally NOT a crossover grrrl at all. But it will be nice to play around with the guests. Thanks for the review luv! :D
[Report This]Date: July 25, 2011 10:14 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
As always that was a great chapter. I get excited when I open my email and it says you've had an update. This story just keeps getting better and better. I'm excited for more. Keep it up.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Brit! I'm happy you're enjoying the wares. I'm having a nice time writing them, too! More soon! ^^
[Report This]Date: July 25, 2011 9:41 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Ohmigawd, PUPPY POWA. I squee'd. XD I freaking love that lol
Lovin' where this is going, Goober! I can just FEEl Inu's sexiness oozing through the screen and leaving me in a pile of drooling goo lol :) Keep up the good work, love!! <3
And as always, no pressure ^_^
-Nutella!
Da Grrrl Says: NUTELLA! <3333
I can't even believe the words are flowing so well for me, all things considered. I was trying to work on other things, but it was forced, so I just said, "I'll go with what's working for me right now and not kill myself." So, yeah, no pressure, but PLEASE don't think I forgot you. You're one of these things I'm working on. xD I wanted to have it ready for in time for your birthday, but I don't see that happening, which sucks, but I'm easing through it so so don't give up on meh!
Totally can't believe it's taking me this long to do your fic. It's been MONTHS seriously. I fucking suck, especially when you did my oneshot request so quickly all that time ago. Man, I really hope mine doesn't suck when you finally get it. >.<
Date: July 25, 2011 9:03 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Wow!!! I think this is the best school fic that I've had the pleasure of reading!!!
Can't wait for the update...
=]
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you very much! ^_____^
Date: July 25, 2011 8:45 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
This was awesome. Was bent out of shape to get to the end of this chapter and not have more. Having fun reading all the OOCness. Works for me! IG, be as creative, buck-wild and crazy as you want. Bring it on! Thanks for the update, sweetie!
I'm excited about the guest appearances! Hakuron IS a hottie with his cool dragon scar. Yes, he would have to be out of character for this series! Bodies dropping everywhere! He's a true, brutal gangsta! LOL
I also love Akira from Shinju's Ai Ore, too.
The only guy that would have me drooling and dissing everyone here is Dante Sparda! Or Date Matsamune from Sengoku Basara! Or, of course, Vampire Hunter D. Yeah, I went old skool. Ha!
Much love :-)
Da Grrrl Says: Shankies!!! xD
This chapter was going to end up being about 11k, so I made myself stop. I don't want any of the chapters to be that long. But I'm so glad you liked it!! I OOC EVERYONE in EVERY fic, so this is really just the norm. I switch up personalities according to how they were raised in the story, and I find that people enjoy it. They can do canon elsewhere, but when they come into my house, they don't know what to expect and that's fun.
WAAAH!!! Hakuron is one of my main squeezes. My friend made a little video for me with Mayu's characters (Hakuron and Akuma), plus Zero from VK and Yori from "I love my Little Sister". Go check it out at my gallery -it's pretty fun to see all the pretty manga scans. I don't plan to change his personality *that* much. The killing will just be absent. Maybe. xD
Someone else mentioned Dante to me. I don't know a lot about him, but I know who he is. I don't know if I'll do a lil "fanservice" and give him a cameo, but don't count it out.
OMG, Vampire Hunter D? "The house of Lee MUST fall." HAHAHA. When she said that in the anime I had to laugh. It was one of those weird statements that just struck me hilarious -along with her funny, dubbed voice. Thanks for the reviews, m'dear. I so appreciate it!
Date: July 25, 2011 7:34 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Gah! I want to punch Inuyasha in the face right now! Lol but I guess everything will work out eventually. I thought it was cute that Bank is this super rich and 'intimidating' man, but he was munching on a chocolate chip cookie. Maybe I'm just crazy but it makes him more human in my eyes. I love love love this story! Please update soon!
Da Grrrl Says: OMGAWD!!! All this VI-O-LENCE! xDDDD
But I did say on my blog (If you saw it) to beat THEM up and not kill the messenger! (Thanks for not killing me...) :P InuYasha is a total brat, but if he was all Mr. Goody we wouldn't enjoy him as much, ne? :D
And I kinda liked Bankotsu and the cookie, too. It just came to mind, him being this total badass with this addiction to cookies. Too cute.
I've already outlined the next chapter and will be starting it tonight, so you *should* see another by Wed. ^^
Date: July 25, 2011 7:17 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
I like Inu's character in this fic. Kagome's too. She seems like a bitchy, ice queen, but from her interaction with Sango this chapter, seems like there's something else to her that you can only reveal. lol
Can't wait for the next installment. XD
Da Grrrl Says: CA!! :P
Isn't he a stinker? He's a lot of fun to write, but so is Kagome. She doesn't take shit >.> at least not from him. No hints on her and Sango, tho. :P
Thanks bunches for the review!
[Report This]Date: July 25, 2011 5:16 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Inuyasha is such an ass!! But he's a sexy ass :)
Hope to see an update soon ^_^
Da Grrrl Says: Makes me wanna get some art one of that puff-n-stuff bootay of his! YUMZ. xD
More soon!
Date: July 25, 2011 5:12 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Oh My GOSH! Abso-fucking-lutely amazing. Can't wait to read what happens next. EEP!
Da Grrrl Says: Thank yoooooou!!! I so appreciate that! <333 More soon!
[Report This]Date: July 25, 2011 4:42 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Babeh, there will be no guessing where this is all going coming from me. All I know is that wherever it ends up, I'm goin', too. And I plan on enjoying the hell outta the ride.
Btw, him blackmailing her homestly surprised me. Not that such an act might be beneath him, I just assumed he'd seduce her/cast a spell/ etc,
; )
I'm eager to see what happens now that this new twist (yay for blackmail) has stirred things up nice and messy.
Oh, I do adore your soap operas!
Da Grrrl Says: COURT!!! I can't give you any hints on the pictures. I SOOOO want to, but you just gotta wait until the next chapter. That will give ya some revelations. But now, blackmail is not at ALL beneath him. >.> NOT AT ALL.
GLOMPS!
P.S. Are you available for beta? I totally can use one right now. >.>
Date: July 25, 2011 4:34 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Can I just tell you how happy you've made me today? Oh my goodness, I have so many things, I want to say 'cause you know... I talk a lot so (cough) yeah. I'm attempting to straighten out everything up there in my noggin...
Kagome's such a snob! I kind of love it the same way I kind of love all the guys' douchiness.
Kagome rolled her eyes and turned the corner, nearly fainting when she missed a collision by a mere inch.
MY GOD - you should have seen me after I read that line, I was bouncing and squealing, "THIS IS IT.. THIS IS ITTT!"
I was so excited for Inuyasha to bug the shit outta her! That scene was so freakin' perfect. He got all up in her personal space, figured out she smelled like apple and tasted sweet, THEN TOOK PICTURES OF IT ALL LIKE THE DOUCHE THAT HE IS! GAAAAH! I love it! LOL. He's such a prick that it's hilarious, and since Kagome's such a snob, I don't feel too bad for her. Although, I'd hate to deal with someone like him. Not to mention, her boyfriend is annoying as hell. Kaname really irritated me in this chapter with that phone call to Kagome. I hated how she just agreed to it too. Guys are suppose to be whipped, not the gals. (X In my humble opinion, it's way better in a relationship if the girl wears the pants. Most guys get way too cocky when their girls gets that obedient.
I was laughing so hard when Kouga got punished. He definitely deserved it after the stunt he pulled.
OH! And let's not forget this lovely part of the story!
PUPPY POWA? PUPPY FUCKIN' POWER?! Oh my god. I died again. That killed me. And Sesshomaru - demi-god?! LOL. OF COURSE! That was the cutest conversation ever even though I'm still not sure what it was about. I wonder what Inuyasha's request was...Illegal and unethical? And what is Inuyasha making for Sesshomaru?! LOL.. a pouting Sesshomaru, that's adorable in a sort of scary way. LOL. Is b29; suppose to be the heart? I was wondering what that was, I thought maybe it was some new lingo that I was not aware of and I had to look up on urbandictionary or something.
Sango's an interesting character, she's probably the most relate-able character so far. Oh! And poor Jakotsu. ): I wonder if Bankotsu and Jakotsu will eventually become romantically involved or just friends.
Man, Inuyasha is seriously ice cold for that. That was a dirty, dirty, dirty move. Blackmailing her at a meeting. *shakes head* He's such a naughty boy. GAAAH! I just get more and more excited to read the next chapter because I can't wait for all the steamy goodness, all the drama, and just AAAAH! I could faint from how juiced I am at this very moment.
This was a beautiful way to start my day. Thank you, thank you, thank you for the update! You mentioned in your post that you definitely went over your goal to keep the chapters under 4000, so I do hope your hands aren't too worn. ): I love your writing and receiving updates from you, but I definitely don't want you to hurt yourself. =/
And your final note about Hakuron going to appear in this story almost gave me a heart attack because I fuckin' love Hakuron and Haou Airen! That manga made me cry my eyes out for weeks. I couldn't get over that ending!
Thank you again for the update!
Da Grrrl Says: ABBS! xD
Girl, hands down, your reviews have been putting the biggest smiles on my face! Thanks so much for that. <33 It's been a rough couple of months, and having such enthusiastic comments for my latest dip into crazy -haha- is such a nice, nice thing. So you get glomps!
GLOMPS
InuYasha, as always, is the most fun in this story. he's just terrible and doesn't care because he knows he's just GOT it like that. As the rules of the bet says, "No limits." Any means necessary can be used to get a piece of her pie, so I wouldn't put much past him. He's a bad, bad boy. A Puppy Powa boy! xD And yes, he decided that the meeting was over! Gotta love his "direct" way of taking care of things.
Kaname is a trip, too. The wealthy and over-privileged always are, ne? I can't reveal much on the method to his madness, but I will say that Kagome has her work cut out for her on both ends.
Damn. The heart didn't work for you! It looked like a heart when I did it, but I dunno. I'm so annoyed by that! I'm gonna try to fix it.
*returns*
Okay, I fixed it. It wasn't quite the heart I had before, but at least it works! HTML pages can be very finicky with stuff like alt-symbols. >.<
SQUEEE! You love hakuron, too?! Is he not the most awesome thing ever??? (Next to Yasha >.>) I sobbed FOREVER when i read that ending. I didn't think any story could make me cry like that (and some have made me cry, but DAYUM). Still, I didn't regret reading it. He was the sexiest fucking guy. *fans self* He's exactly how I like Yasha to be -total badass, total lover. Woot!
Thanks a billion for the super, crazy, awesome reviews! I so appreciate the time you take to leave them. *HUGS* More soon!
[Report This]Date: July 25, 2011 3:58 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals
*Waves from center of nerd group*
ha! Tony and I totally stayed at 2 different ryokans whilst away in Kyoto.
XD
being called a nerd is worth every second of that experience! I will send a pic via email soon. Complete with us in nerdy yukatas! Uh, me in one, atleast... Tony was too manly to wear one. Lmfao
And Holeh sh*ttles, this fic is a riot.
Noodle gallery?!
Lawd, that was golden! (y78;▽y78;)
I'm so looking forward to Yash giving all his sexy, playboy self's got to bang, er, bag... wait, bang is right... Kagome. Mmmm, I love him bad best. ^_^
mucho luv!
[Report This]Date: July 25, 2011 2:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Yay! I get back from Japan (which was amazing, btw, but not quite what I expected... Courtney's idea of Japan + reality = vast world of difference) to find a new fic from one of my all time favorite authors. Doesn't get any better. : D
I love, LOVE your nutty high school fics. *cackles* I'm giddy for more, my dear. Bring it.
[Report This]Date: July 25, 2011 1:53 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
I love that manga Haou Airen!!! o_o
I enjoy the insight u brought to Kagome! I dont really hate her now - its like she's trapped in a fake world - stifled the "fakeness" and not being able to show her true personality. But i do enjoy the rise Inuyasha gets out of her so easily.
This is called for an interesting turn out - like always.
With Kouga - the way u end that scne got me thinking that detention WILL be life changing for him!! I can't wait - i can never wait!!! lmao
Gosh u have a way with fucking words - seriously. I jus love how things are turning out - and the witty replies from each person jus cracks me up. You seriously seduces words - am fucking serious! lol
Those nasty replies makes me laugh alot - and Inuyasha jus have a way with making them beyond fucking sexii - it's like honey against ma emotions!!! *sighs in bliss* I love him - fucking love him... I love them all!!!
The family account - with his name - KAWAII... and i love the relationship he n sesshy has and how sesshy caves so easily - that's an AWWWWW moment!!!
Can't wait to read more!! I'm eager to see what goes on in the council room; eager to find out bout Sango - and still loving Miroku even tho he was a slight dick to Sango.
It's all LOVE!! =P
[Report This]Date: July 25, 2011 1:37 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch
Love my demigod. I am such a sess fangirl. Love seeing kaname. Love vk. The boys were delicious again this chapter can't wait for the next chapter.