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Reviewer: kagome313   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2011 12:32 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

Ok first, the philosopher bit - especially Plato? I love it!!! I've been readin a bunch of historical romance novels lately and one in particular had loads of philosophies quotes and i fell in love with Plato and Socrates... i cant remember any quotes from the book tho =( and am not home since the net still isnt up Dx...

Anyways, I feel like in a way Inu likes Kags - with how he spoke of her n noticing her change... also it feels like he might have chosen to stay away from her (until the bet came up) bcuz he fear what might happen?

Ah - i dont like that snobby Kagome tho lol, i jus wanna cuss her ass out - especially how she wanted to confront Sango - ma eyes b rolling alot (for the whole chapter lmao)...

Kouga is a fucking TRIP... and don't even talk about that tongue-ring Inuyasha!! Seriously - am going even MORE crazy now u have him with that piercing!! *___*

He cracked me up with what he said to Kaname (who i dont like either... but i love to hate him so it's all good).... "Love my cock, asshole. You'll be tasting it soon enough." LMAO - I just can't wait!!! I had to re-read it cuz first i was saying - "wait, Inu going gay on me?" rofl, but then my slow mind caught on -_- Kaname is smart though and sharp - that's a given.

Gah - i jus enjoy this so damn much n i see u updated, so 2 chps for me one time!!

*spazzes out with Tongue-ring Inu on my mind*



Reviewer: missmjwilson   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2011 12:28 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch

I am really lovin' this story! I am on the edge of my seat!



Reviewer: Kau   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2011 12:07 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Suckerpunch

Did I mention before how much I love this story!  The guys are amazing. Miroku showed he can be as jerky as the others. Kouga is such a pain... but a good pain for me.  He really has it for the teacher and the prune line made me laugh.   Bank awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww maybe he does have a heart. 

But to the main event: Inuyasha and Kagome. I've never seen a Kagome written with such tude. I like it. I love the fact that she goes toe for toe with Inuyasha. Thou that scene with Sango had me thinking maybe she isn't too bad.  Inuyasha can he be any worse.  He's is such a bad ass. 

 Keep it u heffie!  *waves her lil banner* *>.> Thou it was mocked recently <.<* and maybe I should retire it. o.o* We'll see.



Reviewer: leadranach   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2011 10:18 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

Oh Grrrl -- I am so sorry about your friend.  It's never easy or fair to loose someone important in your life; my thoughts and prayers are with you (and her family).

Thank you for the new chapter -- I'm really enjoying this one, it's fun to read!  I can't wait to see what's going to happen between Sango and Kagome (not having the instant friendship is a neat twist!) and I'm curious to learn more about what happened to Kagome to make her so cold -- and of course Inu and Kags (that's gonna be fun!)

Until next time, remember to take care of yourself (and know that there's lots of luv coming to you from lots of people!)

*hugs*

Rana  ;)



Reviewer: kimakaanna   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2011 10:36 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

I read this chapter early today and wow I'm so in love with this story...even though their snobbish ways are so ridiculous lol But you know what they say: If you've got it, flaunt it! And they definitely have no qualms about flaunting their dough LOL!

Oh yeah, and I'm totally rooting for InuYasha to win this bet, but only because I know he'll eventually fall in love with her....hopefully!

Seriously though, I wonder what happened to Kags to make her so reserved...hmm...it could be maturity, but then again, it could be something else! I suppose time will tell ;)

Aww, I already see Miro/San sparks flying...sort of lol. And ROFL at Sango's dislike of Kagome heehee!!

Kouga was a fool for his little stunt lol I found it hilarious!! Damn, I know that teacher HAD to be embarrassed! I mean, all he could do was walk out. How the hell is he gonna face that class tomorrow...if he comes back?!

Ooooh, do I sense a probable Jak/Ban in this story or is he strictly hetero? Maybe in the closet? Or he hasn't discovered his urges yet? Or am I totally off and he's just gonna be Jakotsu's friend? So many questions and I can't wait to find out the answers in this upcoming chapters.

I can see that the Inu/Kaname rivalry will be one for the ages! Inu totally bested him in the essay 'contest.' Ha! In his face!! Whoo whoo! InuYasha: 1 Kaname: ? lol

I see that Sesshy and Rin will be in the story. Will we get any romance between those two?! Heehee

This seems like it'll be a since ride and I just know I'll enjoy every moment! Thanks so much, Chica for the update!



Reviewer: kimakaanna   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2011 10:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

These are some freaky ass boys LOL! And I'm ashamed to admit that I'd be first in line to bend to InuYasha's every command :P I'm such a groupie!

I personally love your high school fics, by the way! So sad that this is the last one T.T but I understand!

Whew!! InuYasha's got some stiff competition; that Kaname is a hottie! I'm interested to see how this story will play out, Chica! I'm glad to see that the creative juices are still flowing because I wanna see if these four, spoiled rich boys can find love :p

P.S. You know who else is total hotness? Dante from Devil May Cry. It's a game, but there's also a series. So pissed that there's only TWELVE episodes in the series :( It was good while it lasted, though!



Reviewer: Hanyoukagome962   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2011 9:26 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

Oh boy i can see that this is going to be another crazy fic. Cant wait to see whats gunna happen. I loved breaking the girl and edge of seventeen and im kinda sad this will be your last high school fic but w/e all your work is awesome. Update soon.



Reviewer: momo   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2011 8:31 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

Now this is how a high school fic should be written i cant tell you how many horrible high school fics ive read over the years. keep it up.

also i love how you used vampire knight's kaname as inuyasha's rival. Sometimes he reminds me of sessho



Reviewer: Jessica   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2011 6:07 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

Also I would like to say how deeply apologetic I am for your loss. I completely understand the hardships of losing a friend. In 2009, we had just graduated and I lost a great friend of mine, he drowned and it was heartbreaking! I hope you start to feel better you have my prayers

Jessica



Reviewer: Jessica   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2011 6:03 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

Yay!!! I checked the site and you had updated just had to read it!!

Awesome awesome as always :)

Ready for more yippee!

Jessica



Reviewer: Lindsay   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2011 10:46 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

FINALLY! I got a chance to sit down and read some fiction! Real life can be a b*tch sometimes...

Anywho! This story looks really interesting! Kagome seems kinda (no....REALLY) outta character in a way I'm not sure about yet! lol! But hey, reading your fiction is about being open to new ideas (which I LOVE btw!)

I'm sorry to hear about your friend. Losing someone you know or care about is tough but everyday gets a little easier. I hope everything is well with you grrrl! ::LONG DISTANCE HUGS!::



Reviewer: Nutella   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2011 5:25 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

Hahahaha, I'm loving the rivarly between Yash and Kaname. :D Brilliant! Remind me to never get into the battle of wits with you, lol. I'm glad to see that you're feeling better; I read your blog and it made me smile. :) Keep up the good work, Goober, and I can't wait for the next installment! Hooboy, I can just FEEL the heat!! Lol

-Nutella<3



Reviewer: Inceeba   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2011 1:24 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

You are my girl, I love it with each word more and more, I’m smirking like crazy and my hubby is just asking, what’s so funny what’s so funny, and I just " nothing" :D he wouldn’t understand :)Thanks for your wishes on FB hon., they were very much appreciated.Oh and the Pic is fabulous, I soooo love him, god the things I would do to this Hanyou: D bad things, hmmm, sexy things: D Oh and one more thing, I like Kaname, I saw the anime, great music, and someway I don’t know, I like him, yeah they are both smoking HOT , but I like him for the girl better, in VK, not here, for sure :D here you can make him an arrogant rich pussy, cause nobody beats INU,nobodyyyyy :D PS: I’m waiting for some hot sexy action but please, please, don’t write on the expense of your hands, DO YOU UNDERSTAND???Forever yours ALEX



Reviewer: Treece   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2011 12:44 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

I enjoyed this chapter soo much I can't decide which scene I liked the most!  Yash's group reminds me of the F4 from Hana Yori Dango except all total bad boys.  Sango makes me recall the heroine of the series; poor girl in the school full of rich jerks.  Thanks for working to get this marhhhh-ve-lousss update out. Much love!



Reviewer: Ikalia   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2011 11:46 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

Holy crap! Its like Kagome has morphed into Kikyo...creative. Wonder what caused that when she disappeared for a year? Poor Sango, too. And I absolutely love the rivalry you are spinning, it makes Inuyasha going after Kagome all the better.



Reviewer: Jenn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2011 11:08 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

Well my curiosity is definitley pigued I'm really looking forward to finding out what happened to change Kagome and what's going on with Sango.  I lke that everyone has flaws and there's no clear good guy aslo the issue of new money vs old a subject I'v always found interesting. Can't help but be impressed with the quick character development as always.  Hope that you are stayig healthy and if not happy at least content.  So sorry to hear about your friend wish that there was anything to say to make it better my thoughts and prayers to her and her friends and family,

Thanks again,

Jenn



Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2011 8:54 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

the rivalry between Kaname and Inu is definitely going to be interesting in this story. I like it.

Very interesting thus far and I am intrigued. Keep up the good work.

PS
I did have a better review written, but my internet killed itself for a little while and I lost it. :P



Reviewer: Meanha aka LadyWolf   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2011 4:09 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

You have VK dvd you suck I can't get it yet. I read the manga why before the anime was made saw both animes. I could tell you what happen but if I did that wouldn't be fun lol. You took Kaname out of his zone. He doesn't act that way. But Inu is my baby so I little more on his side lol.

You can um pass me them DVDs lol.

Wow these young men are cold lol. so is Kagome going to be a bitch in this one? Bank was mean to Jakotsu(i hope he makes friends) he seemed cool in this one. But Koga was a asshole lol but I knew he would be lol. Sango & miroku huh? Wow sango hates Kags?! That new well it's not used that much.

I'm wait for the next one big sis. It's 5:o8 so I know I have typos but I too out of to care and I'm the typo queen anyway LOL.

lov ya



Reviewer: Miss Miroku   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2011 3:08 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

This Inuyasha is effin' hotter than usual! (gotta love piercings ^-^) I desperately want to see how this serious Kagome is going to react. Maybe she'll sic her boyfriend on him, or bite his tongue *snickers* I'm sensing a dark past on one or two of the characters and since it's your specialty besides awesome, unique plotlines, I will be expecting angst lol. As usual, my eyes were glued to the screen 'til the end and now I'm awaiting the next chapter *le sigh*



Reviewer: S.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2011 2:31 AM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

I love that his tongue is pierced. :)



Reviewer: Abby   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2011 10:57 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

I was clapping and squealing the entire time reading this story. When you mentioned that you would probably have a new chapter up by tonight, I screamed so loud I woke up my roomies. Ha! They hate when I'm excited since I get super loud and apparently move around way too much. XD

ZOMFG! I didn't expect an update so fast since you do have obligations in your everyday life and your hands get so worn out from writing as much as you do =/ So, I'm just grateful you're still trying to finish up some stories for your readers! I'm probably going to reread this chapter... I think I reread the prologue a good 10 times since it's been posted? ...Yeah, I was pretty into it.

My mind is all jumbled up again, but there are so many things I want to comment on. 0_0 *sigh* Ok.. let's hope I manage to get everything I want to say out!

These guys really are brats. They all need a good belt whipping... then again, some of them might enjoy that. 0_0
I just LOVE how Kagome is referred to as 8g's (-_____-). How considerate! LOL! THEY'RE ALL DOUCHES! Kagome's character is kind of a bitch, aint she? I don't blame Sango for hating her nosy self! Her character in this story (from what I know so far atleast) reminds me of how Kikyo is usually portrayed in highschool IY fics. It's interesting, actually. That little stunt Kouga pulled - my god! I would hate to be his teacher! Ugh! They're all so annoying, but I kinda love their douchiness since it makes for such a fun read. They're like on the same level as Jersey Shore's, 'The Situation'! (Gotta love that show!)

"Love my cock, asshole. You'll be tasting it soon enough."
"...he strolled past Kaname, flicking his pierced tongue at him. The tongue that was going to be lodged in his bitch."

I died. First of all, I forgot to mention this in my last review, BUT A TONGUE PIERCING? LOL. I died. Second of all, Inuyasha is cold... ice cold, like ICE... (LOL. Had to add that just 'cause it amused me for a good minute with how stupid it sounds)

*raking through Abby's brain*

Uhhhhh...


OH! Okay, so when I read/watch anime/manga and they have the guy all bad ass AND brilliant - it's just not fair 'cause you know.. I wasn't born all brilliantly bad ass! I don't have enough guts to do any talking back to teachers! I'd be way too concerned that they'd hate me forever and purposely grade me harshly.

Kagome's description in this chapter made me think of Victoria Secret models... They're so innocent in the face and then the rest of them is just all vavavavoom! Like damn, makin' my normal self look bad. ("-_-)
Speaking of Kagome though, I wonder what made her change so drastically. That'll be interesting to figure out.

Kaname is another douche, in a very different way. He's in the same kind of douchiness as Kagome is - all "perfect" and annoying! I had to look him up since I don't watch/read (Vampire Knight? Is that what it's called?) the anime/manga he's from. I'm looking forward to finding out more about his relationship with Kagome like if he really cares about her or if she's just arm candy.

OH! And, I read your blog post about your friend a day after my review to this story so I just want to add that for what it's worth, I'm sorry that you lost someone close to you. That bit of knowledge was a huge shocker. I recognized her pen name since I read a story of hers way back. I didn't know her personally, but it's always tragic to lose someone in that way.

Well...I think this time I managed to stuff all my thoughts in this review. Still, I doubt it. I'll probably kick myself later for suddenly remembering what else I wanted to add, but for now I can't think of anything else.

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE! Obviously, I enjoyed it. LOL. I can't get enough of your writing and this story! I have my two loves all in one place - IY highschool fics and your writing! Like zomg.. that's like combining all my favorite foods and somehow making it taste good. 0_0

Thank you again for the update!!! (:



Reviewer: Brittany   Anonymous  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2011 10:39 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

Very good. I'm very interested in what is Kagome's back story and why she came back changed. Also why is Inuyasha being fake? I'm very excited to see how he will go about getting Kagome. The other characters are important and I look forward to seeing how you write all of them into this story. Keep it up its getting very good.



Reviewer: Onna ^.~   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2011 9:44 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

O.M.G. Kag am gonna be a bitch in this? should be most interesting when Yash meets up with her. Might make him scurry under a bed some-wheres. :P And tho not familiar with Kaname, sounds like it's gonna be a fun and tight lil ride :D Can see no love loss between him and our MDM, but also did notice none of the others really seem to be interested in making the grade, sorta speak, or am that me thinking to much again. :P I do have a tendency in doing so;)
Anywhoz, lovez your writing I do - iz my precious! :D

Hugzz ...



Reviewer: Shei   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2011 9:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

Great story absolutely love where (I think) you're going with it. Can't wait for Chapter 3!



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2011 6:35 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: The Young Royals

Ew, they're such snots! xD Haha, but this is great. I laughed so hard at the MBC's antics (except for Kouga's, cuz phones going off mid-lesson was such a pet-peeve of mine in HS >.>) and I loved their obnoxious screennames. Kaname's takes the cake w/ "Ruler of All," lmao. The rivalry and banter is so hilarious and fun. I'm looking forward to seeing more of it...especially from Bankotsu! I felt bad for Jak and the way he treated him, but his "so help me if I see one raisin" line (reminding me of that pic) had me DYING.

The background we got for some of the characters here was interesting. I gotta wonder about Kagome and what changed her between middle and high school, and InuYasha too if his smile is also sometimes forced.

And poor Miroku! He has his pig moments like all of them, but of the four MBC members, he seems at least a little less bratty...and he just gets raked over the coals for it. Though like his boys, I doubt he gets denied often, so it'll be interesting to see how/if things develop between him and Sango...and I wonder what the Queen Bee has to say about her lateness during lunch.

Crazy, but SO fun to read chapter. I love (and simultaneously want to ring the necks of) the characters, as out of hand as they are xD

~ Am :D



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