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Reviewer: C.A.   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 9:45 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

This is an interesting start to a new fic. I'm interested to see where you're going to be taking this.

Don't swamp yourself too much. Take your time. Enjoy writing. I'm patient. I like when I get an e-mail saying you updated something, because I know that you try hard to deliver, for lack of better words. Keep on being awesome. :)



Reviewer: Lexxi   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 9:13 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

gah! i can't wait to read this, it already sounds so .... fun, for a lack of a better word. (:



Reviewer: Ikalia   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 8:03 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

Love the new skin, love the teaser for this story, and absolutely CANNOT wait to read what happens. Bad-boy Yash is always so hott.



Reviewer: Jenn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 7:19 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

Yeah!  This is promising to be Awesome!  I loved the Planet reference.  What a great way to start my birthday day!  I hope everythings going great for you!

PS Also amazing how with a prologue I;m already invested in these characters :)



Reviewer: InuGoddess715   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 5:46 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

Ugh!!!! Could you have made the little bastards any more disgusting?! Little pigs. I REALLY look forward to seeing them catch hell. They certainly deserve it. NO respect for women at all! I liked it girl, but ...UGH!



Reviewer: Abby   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 4:00 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

OHMYGODDDDDDDDD!!!!!

I'm a fucking a tomato right now cuz I'M SO FUCKING STOKED DUDE. *cough* Sorry, I curse a little too much when I get excited and I'M SO EXCITED RIGHT NOW! Oh my god! I LOVE your highschool fics, but I definitely didn't expect you to do another one. I'm so glad you did. You should have seen my reaction to this story. I went crazy like completely psycho. One, my usual excitement from when you post anything was there and two, ANOTHER HIGHSCHOOL FIC. Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god. My brain is so scattered right now... I think it was because I was bouncing around way too much before, during, and after reading this new fic. You see, when Abby's excited, she bounces; when Abby bounces, everything in her head bounces along with her and well.. Bonnie and Clyde begin to hurt too just because they don't enjoy a lot of movement. I sound so ridiculous right now, but I can't help it. I'm giggling and squealing all over the place. I love the dialogue you write, it's always so witty and amusing. When you're not describing things in amazingly gorgeous details or making me blush with your intense lemons - I'm laughing my ass off. You're sense of humor is awesome. If you ever decide to ever get a book published one day, I'm definitely grabbing a copy. I could spend an entire day just reading your stories over. In fact, some weekends when I just feel like staying in and relaxing I usually do that. Sometimes, it makes me feel like some sort of stalker because I check your blog/website pretty much daily. 0_0 I'm embarrassed kinda admitting that 'cause I don't wanna seem like some creep.

GAH! I just cannot wait for more chapters of this story to read.

Oh! And Bonnie and Clyde are my breasts 'cause I just feel the need to give name everything.
Hm.. I realize how insane I sound in this review. I sound really creepy, don't I? That's not good.

Er..
Well ... *ah-hem*
Thank you for sharing this story with everyone! (:



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 1:37 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

It ate my review! It was much longer than that, I swear! Anyway...

I love high school fics, they are a guilty pleasure. No matter how much I try and stay away...I just can't do it. It's like throwing away that favorite old pair of jeans...just can't do it. Love em too much!

So! Picking on poor little Miroku gets him set up on a bet for little miss awesome? I love it! I can't wait to see what he does to try and get her. I desperately hope for just a little physical violence with her current boyfriend...even if he is mr. perfect. I bet the chase between these two is going to be very entertaining, especially if she's 'out of his reach' like Miroku said.

OMG Inuyasha is H-O-T on this new banner! *fans self* I really do love that human form.

Okay, there IS a captcha code this time...that's a good sign right?



Reviewer: Skye   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 1:16 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

The high school genre in a fandom's fanfiction will probably forever hold a special place in my heart. Your's were the craziest and the best! Edge of Seventeen, mmm, guuuuurl.



Reviewer: Miss Miroku   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2011 12:52 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

I came on to this website and the first thing I see caught me breathless. Like, seriously, I was staring at the art for five minutes just admiring it. Then I saw the title and squee'd with joy. Another story! Your player!Inuyasha made me smirk (cuz I likey that character out of all the possible ways you could put him in) I'm only familiar with Vampire Knight through AMV's and putting Kaname with Kagome= mind blown. I can't wait to see what's next.



Reviewer: leadranach   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2011 11:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

This will be quite the ride -- can't wait to read more!  Yash is so fun to read when he's being bad <3

And oh, wow -- the new skin is gorgeous!  Kudos to the artist (who is very talented - beautiful work!)

You have just been on fire lately!  Luv seeing you so inspired ^__^   Rest up those hands of yours, and take care!

Rana  ;)



Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Rana!^^

I guess when I started thinking about retiring my flip was switched, lol. I'm trying to have as much fun with fanfic as I possibly can with all the people who have shown my work so much luv -like you! Or else, what's the point, right?<3

Thanks TONS for all the reviews and I'm so happy you like the art! WAH!! He's really quite amazing, especially since this art is a replica of a traditional art that another artist made for me. He just re-did it in his own style and it came out fabulous! I can stare at this Yasha all day. :DDD



Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2011 10:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

LOL! Me and Anesha were actually just talking about guys who act kind of like InuYasha does in this (Bank said it best: the "Bitches drop their drawers for this asshole on command" type). I'm loving how confident he is in himself...because if Kagome is as out of his league as Miroku says she is, it'll be fun to see the chase and how he'll manage to steal her away from Kaname Kuran.

Though knowing you're on Zero's side in the VK love triangle makes me wonder if you'll give Kaname the hell you usually reserve for Kouga in fics xD

I'm SO excited for this and the header with M's pretty artwork up looks INCREDIBLE. I love this! <3 Seems like it'll be one helluva wild ride.

 ~Am :D



Da Grrrl Says: WAAAAH!!!!! ^___________________^>p>AM!!!!!!! I'm so glad you like it! For some reason, this prologue gave me the bizniz! And it was ONLY a damn prologue! o.O I wanted to get their personalities out there from the start so you can get an idea of how they "rule" the school, and InuYasha is just nuts. lol. I think I'm gonna have fun with this one, especially since this is my last hurrah for HS fics. I don't think it will be as long as BTG or EOS (I'm sure it won't be), but I'll try to have it be just as crazy (to an extent!).

I sent an e-,mail to Bubs, too, but I'm not sure how often she checks e-mail, so pass her the word for me. :D

I'll try and get the next chapter together soon, but I really wanted to start it so I can give it to ya! hehe... And thanks! This is my 4th or 5th header now, and while I'm nowhere near you or Neo, I don't feel so awful about it anymore. LOL.

GLOOOOOMPS!

P.S. No comment on Kaname. (HA!) It puts me in a spot, though, because Lily LOVES him while <.< I don't...



Reviewer: 3lue 3utterfly   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2011 9:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

I'm hooked already and this is just the first chapter! Hope you update soon.



Reviewer: 3lue 3utterfly   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2011 9:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

I'm hooked already and this is just the first chapter! Hope you update soon.



Reviewer: Brittany   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2011 9:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

I really like this story, very excited to see where it goes. It looks funny and interesting.



Reviewer: Drake   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2011 9:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

Nice start, looking forward to updates on this one. You go grrrl! :)



Reviewer: Katlady   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2011 8:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

YAY! I love updates



Reviewer: Kau   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2011 6:29 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club

*waves her lil banner*

*dust goes flying everywhere since it's been a while*

This was a suprise. I didn't really expect it. Inuyasha is damn smexy. Miroku poor thing he should be the main hentie. Bank and Kouga o.o* can I be smushed by them. 

I wonder if Inuyasha can really handle the challenge or will he end up eatng it... o.o* keep going! &waves lil banner*



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