Date: March 14, 2012 4:51 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: One Caress
totally awesome chapter! I loved the lemon it was well written and tasteful. Some people should take lessons from you, lol. update again soon.
Date: March 14, 2012 4:50 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: One Caress
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Date: March 14, 2012 4:49 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: One Caress
GREAT chapter. This is one of the saddest things I ever read, but it was GOOD! And I HATE stuff that makes me cry, lol. That fight between Sessh and Kagome was so terrible. My goodness, it was awful. I hate that Sessh's anger got the best of him; he said some truly awful things to Kagome. I know he was lashing out because he was hurt, but OUCH! And Kagome was no slacker in that department either (not good). I look forward to seeing how this mess gets fixed. Terrific angst. I can't belive I'm enjoying being tortured, lol
Date: March 14, 2012 4:45 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Wounds That Scar Me
I must admit there's something of an elegance the way you're writing this story. First off you made us utterly miserable with the fact that Inuyasha was no more through Kagome's pain. Then you made us fall in love with Kagome and Sesshomaru falling in love and being together. But now it's as if Inuyasha's ghost is not only haunting Sessh and Kags, but us as well.
I love it! I love the tormenting feelings of love, loss, and betrayal in the chapter. And I think you're doing a brilliant job of writing very real, human emotions into these characters. This is interesting, titilating and I'm on the edge of my seat, with a lump in my throat, anxious for the next chapter.
In a way, I feel like I've lost my love whenever you write about Inuyasha. Wow...excellent!
Can't wait for more!
-dee
Date: March 14, 2012 4:44 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Wounds That Scar Me
*cries* You are so mean! So, so mean! Evil person...evil person should update...*nod-nod* Update soon please!
Date: March 14, 2012 4:43 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Wounds That Scar Me
i read your story and really enjoyed it please update as soon as you can because this story is full of surprises and to sume it up i can't wait to see what happens next^_^
Date: March 14, 2012 4:43 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Wounds That Scar Me
how sad! it was a very good chapter even if it was sad. hope to see more uplifting chapters to come. update soon.
Date: March 14, 2012 4:38 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Wounds That Scar Me
That was so...so sad. Geez, this chapter was filled with so much drama (in a good way). People always get so unreasonable when they're angry or want something.
Sesshoumaru really should go after her, regardless of what Shippo told him.
SO, UPDATE SOON!
Date: March 14, 2012 4:38 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Wounds That Scar Me
Kami I cant Not cry when i read this...
Excellently done
Date: March 14, 2012 4:33 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Sacrifice Tomorrow
...Way to make me cry.
x3
Date: March 14, 2012 4:32 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Sacrifice Tomorrow
Update update update update update update update update update update update update PLEASE!
Date: March 14, 2012 4:31 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Sacrifice Tomorrow
Omg! No! *cries* he can't leave, it's not fair! *cries* just when things were getting better
Date: March 14, 2012 4:23 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Sacrifice Tomorrow
Oh my God! I am crying my eyes out right now! That was so heart wrenching! Please tell me there is a happy ending and if there is please update soon!
Date: March 14, 2012 4:21 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Sacrifice Tomorrow
It isn't the end yet, right? *snifs*
I think both of them were selfish.
Please update soon, I'll die without an update...
(just kidding of course)
Date: March 14, 2012 4:20 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Sacrifice Tomorrow
You know what's even better than your writing? The progression and direction of the story! It's really gut-wrenching and heart-warming at the same time. I must say that I love the way you keep Inuyasha's memory alive...as if Kagome's not the only one that can remember those days like yesterday, but the readers too!
And somehow, you've made me fall in love with the idea of Sesshomaru and Kagome being together bc they do truly love each other. It's all really powerfully and wonderfully written. Great work!
dee
Date: March 14, 2012 4:19 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Sacrifice Tomorrow
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Date: March 14, 2012 4:16 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Sacrifice Tomorrow
WOW!
Loved it, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Poor Sesshomaru, I kinda feel sorry for him, hopefully Kagome can make things right between them.
Date: March 14, 2012 4:13 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Running Up That Hill
WOW.is al I have to say..found this story today and im in lov with it...can't wait till the next update...
Date: March 14, 2012 4:12 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Running Up That Hill
TEARS! Big whopping anime tears! Please let this couple make things right before something else happens to drive them apart. Everyone has the right to love and to be loved in rturn.
Date: March 14, 2012 4:05 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Running Up That Hill
That was an awesome chapter and the story so far is WICKED.
So can you like please update like really really really soon please.
Well done with the story so far congrats and please update soon.
:)monkey-101(:
Date: March 14, 2012 4:04 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Running Up That Hill
I already review your story on your website but I will do it on fanfic too! :)
Really really good story. When you rate romance/drama you wasn't joking! I cry ... a lot! *grin*
Hope you will be able to update and post the last chapter really really soon, please!
take care
Date: March 14, 2012 4:03 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Running Up That Hill
You're earing up my heart here! Not with just this fic, but with all the others of yours that I've read. It's like they are all screaming some deeper meaning, some sadness that cannot be ignored. I don't know if that made sense, but it's just a vibe I get. It stays with you, and though it's through heart ache it also teaches you something in the process. So first, let me take a moment to sincerely thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing beautiful fan fiction with true meaning and depth. And now, I'm afraid I have to break one of my own rules of reviewing fanfics and politely beg you for you to release the next chapter soon otherwise it will devour me body and soul (that's a tad exaggerated on my part, and really meant to convey that I've fallen in love with not only with fic, but all the others that I've only had time to read and not review yet.)
And lastly, I wanna thank you again for not only writing this, but for unintentionally making me come face to face with a past event so similar to the one in the story. It answered a lot of my questions and quelled a lot of pain, and even though unintentional I still wanna thank you for helping me cross one of my own hurdles.
Much love from one of many fangirls, Keep writing, dreaming, smiling, and laughing!
~stormbringer246
Date: March 14, 2012 4:02 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Running Up That Hill
NONONONO don't leave it there, continue continue continue, please! this is truly amazing and heart warming. You have my heart in my throat, eager to see them get together!
Date: March 14, 2012 4:02 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Running Up That Hill
Oh my good golly gosh. Update this, and soon, or I will have to come after you with cheese sticks and chicken pot pie! You don't wanna know what I'll use them for!
Update, gosh darn it!
Date: March 14, 2012 4:01 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: Running Up That Hill
I WANT MORE. MY ADRENALINE IS NOW GOING HAY WIRE. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND WRITING.