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Reviewer: xXKimiko SakakiXx   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

Such a emotional chapter this is. I may never understand what turmoil Kikyou's going through but I do know she must love him ALOT. Now that Inuyasha's alright now, I do wonder what will happen next. Will he continue his ways or decide to finally move on? Please update soon!

kimiko



Reviewer: xbeautyxxisxxlifex   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

I think you should continue. You have me hanging and you're only 12 chapters in. IT IS AN EXCELLENT STORY!

Update as soon as you can. Please.I'll just die if I do not get to know what happens, and GO SESSHOMARU! He totally kicked ass!

BOO KAGOME; Her man sucks.. I would pick Inuyasha any day.



Reviewer: Sarah   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

YES! I had loads of fun with the angels :D haha anyway, this was another great chapter from you...I think I know what's going to happen next though so I'm looking forward to the next chap to see if I'm right. I love the way you write by the way, you elicit so many emotions from your readers and that's what I like in a good story! Keep it up,

Sarah



Reviewer: xXKimiko SakakiXx   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

well...

that was a very depressing chapter. (sigh)

poor kikyou, can almost feel the pain (ALMOST LOL) and wat are they going to do with rin? :O

hope u update soon!

kimiko



Reviewer: Spirituality   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

I get so consumed by this story. I couldn't even tell you exactly why. It could be because I'm so religious and this hits close to home. That's not pathetic, right? Tears are brimming, darling. Can't wait for the next installment..! Amazing, like always.

Spirit.



Reviewer: Tsumetai-kaze   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

that. was. AWESOME! i missed this story so much and i am beyond glad you came back to it

it would really suck to not be able to read such an amazing story

and that chapter was an awesome comeback



Reviewer: Midnight Blackbird   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

this story is amazing

but it really made my heart ache

still, can't wait the next update!



Reviewer: kagome inlove inu   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:51 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

YES! Inuyasha is free! I hope Kagome soon realises he's been always there for her and loves her soooooo much! I really liked how you described his feelings...oh, I'm babbling but I can't help it. Your story is one of my favorites and I was just starting to think you weren't going to continue it when you updated!

That just made my day! Thanks! :)



Reviewer: KatLady13   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:51 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

Still love this story, no matter where it's posted. I'm thinking that InuYasha is going to be made human now, so he'll be free to pursue Kagome. That will be awesome. I can't wait to see how she'll react when she sees him, or how much his human emotions affect him. Thanks again for the update, even though this site is a mess!



Reviewer: xXKimiko SakakiXx   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:46 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

oh PLEASE tell me this is some sort of climax! buh knowing the problem with naraku, it's still rising action (sigh)

this is really heartbreaking, especially at then end with all the flashbacks. where IS mathay? like a prison of some sort or so? this story is really unpredictable so i really wanna know wats gonna happen next!

kimiko



Reviewer: LianaLyn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:45 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

I love this story, really I do, but Inuyasha is getting on my nerves with his touchy/feely relationship with Kikyo. I mean, he told the girl he wasn't in love wit her and yet his body is saying something different. Mixed messages man. What on earth is he thinking? Even though he's in love with Kagome, I kind of feel like he's cheating on her by holding Kikyo so intimately. Ah well, like I said great story, love your description of everything!



Reviewer: BloodFlowsLikeHoney   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

Dear InuGrrl,

I've been looking forward to you updating this story for a very long time. I was practically dying in suspence. The last chapter was really well written and I enjoyed reading it. I'm sorry so few people have been reviewing your story, and I'll try to review all of your stories more. I can't wait until the next chapter, so please update soon.

-BloodFlowsLikeHoney



Reviewer: XToastyLoveX   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:44 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

WOW! this was a truly amazing chapter! I love this story to my heart! and I adore how much Inu cares for her to kill someone! I know its weird to say but its true! and I hope he find some way out of his cell! I really like your writing style alot! and hope you update this story alot in the future along witha ll of your other great ones! such as Knife of Romance but THATS for a diffrent review! LOL good story keep it up!



Reviewer: leadranach   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

I absolutely love the way you write! It's so visceral - I can feel every emotion you describe. 'Hikari' is one of my favourite stories, and this chapter was well worth the wait! The way you ended it had me on the edge of my seat; I love how you're portraying the characters, especially the interactions between the brothers and Inuyasha with Kagome and Kikyo. I enjoy your stories immensely - can't wait until I can read more! :)



Reviewer: FallenxAngel413   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

this story is SO awesome, it keeps my interest from beginning to end and I find the need to reread my favorite parts while I'm waiting for another chapter.

Feel bad for Inuyasha though. I sadly know what it's like to watch the one you love love someone else. I just hope Kagome will be able to at least SEE him somehow, in golden sparkles or something! lol hope you update soon ;)



Reviewer: Sarah   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

OMG omg wow you REALLY did UPDATE! I am so in shock right now mainly because I love love lovee this story and also because I had been waiting so long to know what happens next...and the best part? You updated on MY birthday! I'm going to think of this as a super cool birthday present from fate..haha anyways I've always loved this story and I often come back and re-read it just for fun but it's nice to know your still continuing...as for this chapter...I haven't read it yet cause I was in such a rush to just review and say THANKYOU. Well I'm off to read the chapter now...much love and thanks. :)



Reviewer: KiwiClover   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

...wow! Now *that's* a cliffhanger! Anyway, I found this story practically by accident, and I must say that I am SO pleased that I did! This is just one of those stories that grabs a reader's attention completely, and doesn't let go.

Also, it's very nicely written - you showcase the characters wonderfully, be it through their actions, thoughts, or dialogue, and I love the shades of emotion you put into this story...not just the obvious stuff (oh, my heart bleeds for Inuyasha!) but the subtle things, like Sess's interactions with Jaken (the paints? aw).

Well done! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks for sharing! :)



Reviewer: Sarah   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

You are wonderful! Thankyou for updating so soon, it honestly makes my day. This chapter was amazing too! It was so painful reading about Inuyasha's sentence and the flashbacks with Sesshomaru were so heart wrenching...I absolutely love their relationship as brothers and how there is this hidden love that they have for each other. But I can't believe Inuyasha has to serve such a horrible sentence, I hope that somehow he get's out of this mess. Anyways, it was wondefully written yet again and I do hope you keep up this great work, you're on a roll! :)



Reviewer: Spirituality   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

"Sine amore, nihil est vita."

So easy to tell what this phrase meant..It's heart-clenching. I could have just about had a heart attack when I saw that you updated, AGAIN. You're going to get this a million times, I'm sure, but thank you so much. I can't get enough of this story. The pain of being in love, the deception and nearly perfect way in which you describe Hell. It's almost as if you're trying to depict and emphasize every seperate sin, and succeeding wonderfully. And Sango! Oh, what a discovery! I love that girl. The ball seems to rolling in the supernatural direction for the girls, now. I can't wait to see where they fit into the Final Battle. Again, gracias muy mucho para este..Can't wait for the next!

Spirit



Reviewer: LianaLyn   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

I won't be late. If you get lonely or whatever, just come to my room." He leant in and kissed her cheek. "My bed is always open."

His bed is always opened? Oh gosh that just doesn't sound like a man who's inlove with Kagome. I wonder if Inuyasha is using Kikyo to satisfy his need to physically touch Kagome. After all, he can only look at Kagome, but it's quite hard to not touch the person you love and that's where Kikyo comes in and takes her place. If so, then yes, I feel very bad for Kikyo. Perhaps I'm reading too much into this story, but that's just how good it is!



Reviewer: Say0mi Saki   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:33 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

This story being updated was probably the highlight of my day. I love reading updates from you. (: I was in such a terrible mood today, so I'm completely honest when I say that this update really lifted my mood. This story is so beautiful, really it is. The relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru is extremely touching. I can't stop from smiling, I'm so excited for the next chapter. I'm looking forward to when Inuyasha and Kagome finally meet, because they have to meet at some point.. right? I'm just so happy with how things have turned. Although, I do feel horrible for Kikyo. I can't imagine how devastated she was, she was so in love with Inuyasha. Thank you for update! I can't wait to read more. (:



Reviewer: michelle   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

Omg that was brilliant. The scene with Abi was grusome, damn that had to hurt a shitload. When will Kagome finially be in the loop? I can't stand it, I want her to know all Inuyasha's done for her and to get rid of this Hakudoshi bloke. I really do like how you made Hakudoshi in this fic, not many people think of him. And Kikyo, oh my. I feel so bad for her, I really like her in this fic, but I'm still a die hard Inu/Kag lover, lol. But, I hope the story ends up happy for Kikyo too. And I fucking adore sessomaru in this fic, *swoons*

Um, please, don't delete your account, no matter how frusterated you get. I need to be able to look your website up, lol. And, could you please inform me if you are going to stop posting on this site? I'll just be pining for years and never know... *shudders* Type me up if you e ver get stuck, dear.



Reviewer: theruthlesscow   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:30 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

This story is freaking amazing! I love the idea so much. Your writing is astounding as always too. One of the things I like the most is the relationship between Inuyasha and Shessomaru. It's like a real brother to brother connection -more or less- but it has that same type of harshness I'm used to.

I really love the emotion in your writing; along with your descriptive setting and plot, it portrays the wonderful story playing in my mind as I read. Your stories completely capture my mind and block out everything else when I read, and it's awesome. Not many stories do that for me.

I wish I could come up with a representation of Hell, half as well as you have. My first story (still not done), has my depiction of 'Hell' and doesn't even compare... lol.

I've never read anything like this and I can't wait until you post another chapter. Keep up the amazing work. a32;



Reviewer: Michelle   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:28 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

 Hey darling, it's been about two years here... do you remember how you said you would never leave anything, no story unfinished? I'm waiting on pins and needles here! I'm about ready to pee from excitement. I really want to know how Inuyasha is going to get out of this one, and I love, love, love Sess and Kikyo in this fic. I actually don't mind them, and I like seeing them as the good guys for a change. And the twisted up version of hell you got here is so what I picture, and it figures Narraku would be gay lol.

This story is so very great, ans if you get writers block Im more than happy to help. Just gotta know too. When will Kagome find out about Inuyasha? I'm dying for that chappy.

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Reviewer: DemonRider404   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2012 9:27 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel

A very deep story, I love it! a32;



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