[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 9:10 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: A Kiss in the Shape of a Bullet
Oookay so I can't believe I forgot so much of this! The fifth element is the vessel which is a 'she' and they talk like it is on earth (aptly named) in a soul. I'm guessing it's Kagome (would be a kicker if it was Rin though lol). Wowza. No wonder her name has been in the book of bereavement so many times! Have they been after her this whole time? Trying to get the soul from the body maybe? Is that how she connected with InuYasha so easily? Omg I have so many questions! I see that it was because he breathed his essence into her that she feels his roiling emotions, I like that concept a lot. I am more and more convinced that Hakudoushi is evil and has some sort of demonic powers he may not even know he is using. She did hesitate in answering him if she loved him or not, and only answered after he kissed her into it. She is young and naive and flattered, just caught up in a whirlwind of excitement. That isn't love, especially not the kind that InuYasha has for her. Also, much love for Within Temptation, this song fit the chapter perfectly! I think this is your best chapter yet! I love the descent into madness he went through.
Date: June 16, 2011 9:03 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
And there's another one! I think in all the reviews that I'll be leaving today, I'll sound super repetitive since I'll bring up how amazing you are for updating several of your stories, opening up Absolution again, and forthe amazing chapter itself. Thank you, thank you, thank you! I do hope that Inuyasha and Kagome wont be separated for too long. I wish Inuyasha would have taken Sesshomaru's offer, but it's easy to see why he didn't grab the offer. Kikyo's such a sweet character in this story. In most stories, Kikyo's and Kagome's roles would be switched. Your writing is always so exciting because you tend to steer away from the norm, and different is always refreshing.
Thank you again!
Date: June 16, 2011 7:32 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
Awww...sad ending! I'm wondering where exactly you're gonna take the story. I was so sure Inuyasha would jump at the chance to be on Earth with Kagome! I hope they eventually make their ways to each other, although it sounds as though it's going to be really difficult!
Good Job Grrrl! (5 UPDATES! I DUNNO HOW I'M GONNA READ IT ALL! ;)
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 7:19 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Everything I am and Everything in Me
This chapter was so refreshingly heartbreaking! I mean I know there's that whole pesky Heaven v Hell match of doom coming up but still! I really cannot wait until Kagome learns about InuYasha and how much he is devoted to her and loves her. His whole life is turned upside down by this and everyone around him knows it. I wonder if it is or will affect his powers at some point? I was wondering though, is it the connection that Kagome forged when she was four that has her being able to sense his feelings or is it because he breathed his life essence into her? Maybe both? I do like how you've portrayed her trying to figure out if she really loves Hakudoushi or not. Who hasn't done that with their first boyfriend/girlfriend after awhile? The whole do I or don't I conundrum. It seems like she is having fun with him, but she also thought about he enjoys kissing her, not the other way around or that it was mutual. That makes me wonder if she has genuine feelings for him or if she is just swept up in all the excitement and wonder of it.
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 6:42 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Ones You Break.
Uhmmm, this part about her being the catalyst and not being sure how she will be used. I guess it could be Kikyou...but I think it's Kagome. Omg is Abi Kikyou's mother somehow? I've had the thought before but I guess it actually is possible, isn't it? A third of the angels went to Hell with Satan, so I guess she could be Kikyou's mother, couldn't she? Wait. Do Angels have parents at all? Maybe my logic is flawed here after all. Hakudoushi has no idea where he is from eh? I think he's a demon that was planted there to garner Kagome's favor and through that get to InuYasha, to get him out of the way. He's evil, he just doesn't know it yet! Lol. I watch too many soap operas. Poor InuYasha, getting back just in time to see her kissing someone else.
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 6:09 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: The Bleeding Heart...
So Miroku has been visiting Sango for years, probably after following Yash at some point I'm guessing. Sesshomaru is falling for Rin. Ayame and Kouga have to hook up at some time, right?! That leaves poor poor Kikyou out in the dejected rain. You mentioned treason in here too, I wonder if that was some foreshadowing for her? I really want to know where InuYasha comes from, I think you hinted at that in an earlier chapter too. It seems like Kikyou may have a different background than most too, seeing as how she had nightmares and has some connection to Abi. Poor silly Kagome, she seems totally flattered that a guy would be interested in her. It kind of seems like he is too good to be true, and she is just caught up in it. I wonder if this is part of the prophecy at all?
Date: June 16, 2011 5:32 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Bring the Disease
Hmm, that bit with the mirror in the last chapter has confused me! I thought I had it all figured out, but now I don't think so at all. Also, I can't believe I didn't catch it the first time, but Queen Abi!! I just realized where you got the name. Sheesh! A good second read through was apparently really needed. So Abi has some serious significance to Kikyou and Yash is the only one who knows. Also there is a prophecy coming out that is probably about Yash and has already started. Hmmm. At least the elite are taking it seriously, except for Kouga. Your characterizations of them are all done so well that you can see where they are each coming from easily.
Date: June 16, 2011 3:23 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Points of Authority
I love how the fate of humanity is resting on Rin's shoulders and she doesn't even know it. On top of that, Sesshomaru deciding to chat with the big G about pressing reset is fracking hilarious! This part though, "A tiny dot, all that was left of her heart, fell away like a flower petal after a frost. "I'm really happy for you," she whispered. 'You'll never know how much I love you, or how much it's killing me to lose you.' "Congratulations, InuYasha."- that was really amazing. The imagery and raw emotion was perfect! That right there is why I like Kikyo in this story right now, I can sympathize with her I guess, and normally I just can't see where she's coming from she's so bitter.
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 2:47 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: ...And Then She Met Him
You have used so many characters in this already and you know who I forgot? I forgot that there was a younger sibling of Kagome's on her father's side! I'm glad that Kagome started her day with a feeling that something was missing, at least subconsciously she is aware that InuYasha is present or absent. It's only natural that she would take interest in guys, especially at 18! Poor Kikyo, in love with him now, when he loves Kagome. That's sad, but he mentioned that he gave up hope, so I'm guessing he did love her and either never knew she felt the same or she hadn't developed those feelings yet. Poor unrequited love. Normally I don't like Kikyo, I have a really hard time sympathizing with her most of the time, but you've done a really nice job so far of creating a situation where she is likable!
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 2:40 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
Oh wow that Kagome scene was so unexpected. Sesshoumaru is the shit in this story and Kikyo damn you. How dare you make me care for that pale wench. (* o) Are yougrowing soft on her too?
Date: June 16, 2011 2:01 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
Oh wow. I wasn't expecting an update from this fic. but I'm so glad you did :) I like the progress that each chapter has, but it makes me want to cry for the hurt I can only imagine Inu's going through right now, and poor Kags, as it stands it's over before it's even really started for her. I wish there was a better way for them to communicate. Maybe some help from Miro, like it's hinted here that he'll watch over her now... anyways, thank you for the five updates- off to read more. :)
Date: June 16, 2011 1:22 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Castles in the Sky
Thankfully my baby is sleeping (finally) so I'm trying to read as much as I can, stupid chores and errands can wait! I like how protective you have Sessh being to InuYasha, and that he's envious is a great development. I like that he's the right hand, so he can cover a lot of things up, and that Yash is in a position of power leading the elite. Having the elite made up of imperfect angels is pretty amazing, that allows for so much to go on, aside from them having extra powers. So they can have feelings, lustings and longings. I think I just covered everyone but Kouga lol. InuYasha is just so one-minded here, but when you love someone to the point of them being essential to your being I don't see how you couldn't be. At least he got to tell her his poem and see her on her birthday!
[Report This]Date: June 16, 2011 12:51 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel
I've got to go back through and reread all of this before I leave a review on the new chapter! I want it all fresh in my mind when I get to it. Aside from the originality of this story, I think what sticks out most to me in this chapter is how quickly all of his defenses are gone due to Kagome. He's gruff before, uncaring and ready to leave before he sees her and then he smiles because of her. It doesn't seem like much of humanity could cause him to have any reaction at all, but this girl does. The sudden attachment of herself to him I had forgotten, so I'm very glad I came back to reread it. I also like how mysterious you made him, unveiling slowly what he is.
Date: May 16, 2011 1:48 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope and Devotion
I know I just left a review on "In His Eyes" But I couldn't help but review this one as well! You never cease to amaze me with your brain! Where in the world do you come up with these amazingly unique plots! I adore this fic! It's so DIFFERENT. Love it! Thank you for sharing, seriously. You actually made a site for people to enjoy your fics. (And beautiful one at that, I give props to the artists.) Its surprising that the same author wrote "In Your Eyes" Thats a compliment btw. Its just two completely different worlds with two completely different personalities for both Kagome and Inuyasha. BUT both stories are equally fantastic. Thanks for everything that you do for your fans! :]
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you!! I'm happy to hear that you're enjoy the fics! Hikari, though it may not seem like it due to the lack of updates *cough* is one of my favorites. It's a bit hard to write because I get block so often, but I really do love it and have plans to finish it no matter what. :D
And thanks for the compliment on the site! "Abi" is my baby so I do try to keep it visually fun and easy to navigate. There will be more skins with awesome art in the future (I'm actually making 3 new skins now), so be prepared for some cool stuff.
Thanks again. The kindness is appreciated!
[Report This]Date: April 21, 2011 5:42 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope and Devotion
I read your work on fanfiction and have followed your hear. I would for this story to be update because wondering about Inuyasha fate is killing me :) so without further abdue please post chapter 13 pretty with a strawberry?
Xbeautyxxisxxlifex = screen name for fanfiction
Jessica = actual name
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Date: January 23, 2011 1:08 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel
Wow! I just spent hours reading this story and I am blown away! You are truley an amazing and talented writer... this story is so original and well written... its addictive. I'm in love with it and can't wait to read your other stories!
[Report This]Date: January 14, 2011 1:06 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope and Devotion
I dont know how many times i have read this but it never cease to touch my heart ;A; so Beautiful!! I hope Inuyasha will get Kagome he just has to. May Naraku take you if you dont make them a couple ;A;
Date: January 03, 2011 7:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel
OMG. That was so sad ;[. I really do hope Inuyasha & Kagome get together, and I do hope you decide to update!
Date: November 22, 2010 8:16 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope and Devotion
OMG! How did I not notice this update! Thrilling! I am at the edge of my seat. I absolutely love Sesshoumaru in this. I love how you always make the brothers care for each other rather than hate one another.
Date: November 01, 2010 3:29 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope and Devotion
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: October 23, 2010 9:00 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope and Devotion
late read, but i loves it<3 poor yash): can't wait for more!(:
[Report This]Date: October 21, 2010 8:32 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: The Ones You Break.
I have cried EVER SINGLE CHAPTER since I started reading this today. My heart is BREAKING for Kikyou!!!! Oh, that poor woman!!!!!!!!!!!!! INUYASHA STOP HURTING KIKYOU!!!!! *Seriously crying* OMG GROW A BRAIN!!!!!!!!! Poor Kikyou!!!!! She's SO selfless and everything InuYasha has been DOING....omg, how can she NOT love him? Sorry, I'm kind of emotional after reading chapter six, I can't help but just feel SO much pain for Kikyou. Seriously; I should have read this sooner. It's AMAZING.
[Report This]Date: October 19, 2010 2:14 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope and Devotion
that chapter was awesome! i feel kind of said for kikyo cuz she had went on and almost gotten herself killed for nothing...and i love how romantic sess being with rin (wet dreams for angels) lol and i want inu to become human so that he can FINALLY be with kags =D
...and as for not reviewing stories...im sorry,,i mean i love your work and constantly check my email for updates bt sometime i am just too lazy to write lol bt i promise that form now on i will try to review even its just a couple of words to let you know tht i support and love your work
one of your biggest fans,
Via
[Report This]Date: October 15, 2010 9:08 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope and Devotion
"InuYasha was finally going to get something he had spent years longing for..."
Oh my...if he's not being reinstated is he going to be made human?? Such an exciting chapter. I loved Sesshomaru (as always, a rarity!) and how he handled EVERYTHING. What a BOSS. That he brought IY back by pissing him off was funny, too...but hey, it worked! And now I can't wait to see what'll happen to him. If he doesn't get made into a human then I wonder what he'll do...and how the other angels'll react to not really getting him back. The poor guy--you beat up one human(and turn a few hairs white >.>), and everyone in heaven wants to hate you for it.
The villains in Hades were...wow! I actually felt bad for Abi (and Falcon, who must be horrified! lmao xD). And then Rin! D: "Sesshomaru" was scarily sweet with those promises of them being "together." Somethings up and I'm almost a little nervous to see what. You've made the villains (like Naraku and Am-heh) so creepily bad.
Really interesting. Can't wait to see where it'll go from here.
~ Am :)
Date: October 15, 2010 7:37 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Hope and Devotion
3 Words:
I miss you.
This is a beautiful but extremely angsty chapter. I wasn't prepared for how dark it was going to be. And that Abby scene...frighteningly brilliant. I'm loosing hope that Inu and Kag will ever meet! I've never been so on edge and anticipating with one of your stories before, like your anticipating something crazy in a thriller! You always put so much effort into these chapters and it really shows.
On another note. I sorely apologize for not reviewing many times. It was a mix of junior year at college and me being completely lazy, which it's probably more of the latter. I just want you to know, I keep up with your work constantly. You're the one Inu/Kag fic writer I'm attached to ;p Thank you so much for the fabulous chapter. I hope you continue on to the best of your ability. I know you said it's getting harder to write, and the last thing I want for you to do is to push yourself for something your heart is not in. I'll most definitely try to up my efficiency of responding back. I give you my love and support dear ;)