Date: June 25, 2012 10:27 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
OMG -- you made me squeee when I saw the update in my mailbox ^___^ This story is my all time favourite! And even though I know you're not too happy with it, I thought it was a great chapter -- finding out about Rin and Sess and what's going on down below keeps things fresh. And yes, I am REALLY excited to read about what happens later on! In the meantime, take each day as it comes and spoil yourself a bit -- you deserve it
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, sweets! <33 I think I would have felt better about this chapter if I was able to do the stuff with InuYasha that I wanted to. That, on top of doing citrus when I wasn't in a citrus-y mood was the killer for me, I think. >.< But now that I've got some stuff out of the way, it clears the way to write more about the stuff that interests me -like IK. XD And since I know it's your fave, I'll do my best to make the next chapter worth the read. :D
Date: June 25, 2012 8:20 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
I'm glad you updated and I hope the next chapter will come to you more easily. I look forward to the next post :)
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks. I'm hoping for the same!
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2012 8:02 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Castles in the Sky
The first chapter had me really interested, and the second makes me want to read more.
The more I read your fanfiction's, the happier I feel.
Good vibes, for sure.
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you so much! That's really nice to hear, considering the way fic has been kicking my butt lately. lol.
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2012 6:51 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
So happy you updated. Once again a great chapter. The scene with Sesshomaru and Rin was really good, finding out Naraku was watching was interesting as well. The ending of the chapter left me wondering, so I can't wait to see what happens next.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much. <3 I wasn't happy with this one, but I'm just so glad it's over! I especially didn't like the SR, but that's because I'm so IK I hate messing with other pairings for citrus. :P But I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway! ^^
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2012 5:25 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Aww.. I know I repeat this alot but thank you so
much for still being so dedicated to writing for us even when you clearly aren't inspired. It's really appreciated! But dang, even with your lack of inspiration on chapters you consider bad, the writing is still amazeballs. Even with no Inuyasha, that Sessomaru and Rin scene definitely made up for it..that pairing is close runner up to my main pairing. Hakudoushi isn't a bad guy in this story but I definitely want him out of the picture.. To yaknoooow.. Make room for Inuyasha! I'm glad he's going to be backing off for a bit because that means Inuyasha could swoop in and start wooing her. XD you want to hear something funny? I was watching the Filipino channel with my mom a few months ago and this new drama starts and I almost peed my pants cuz it was really similar to Inuyasha's and Kagome's "relationship" in this story. It's as if someone who handles dramas on that Filipino channel just read the first few chapters of this story and made it into a drama. Super ironic! I only got to watch the first few episodes so I have no idea if it still continued with being all similar but I just thought that was a weird qwinkydink I should share.. *cough*. Thank you again for continuing to write!
Da Grrrl Says: ABBBBBBB! <333
As always, thanks for the sweet review and always rooting for me when I'm in my @_@ state. LOL. I'm not hating writing right now (for a change) but I definitely was mad at this chapter. I haven't been in a Hikari mood at all and really had to force it. So, yeah, I'm not happy, but at least it's gone and I can start fresh with the things I left out of this one.
I totally forgot you like Sess/Rin so much! I went through hell for that BS lemon, lol. I wasn't in a smut mood, and because of their personalities in this one, I couldn't write the "raw" way I normally do... XD So I made "lemonade" but Lord knows it wasn't easy in the slightest. >.< HOWEVER, now that I know you love those two, I'll try my best to always write them well for ya! *glomps*
I'm totally shocked about the drama. XD What's the name of it? I don't understand the language, but I'll totally try to catch a peek. ^___^
Date: June 25, 2012 4:39 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
its ok! its only better if you published what you like;if not you could became frustared with the story.I just dont want Hakudoshi with Kagome XD
Da Grrrl Says: LOL! If I only published the chapters I liked, I'd only update once a year! We're our own harshest critics, so I hardly ever like my own work. But this one in particular gave me the business, so I'm angrier with that I normally am. More Yasha in the next chapter! :D
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2012 2:56 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
I love all the drama with Kagura! She is such a snake! LOL Hakudoushi's final words seem so prophetic... I can't help but wonder about them. Good to see you update and looking forward to more!
Da Grrrl Says: K-Gurl! Thanks for the comment luv! Kagura is probably the best part of this chapter. She's SUCH a conniving heifer, you can't help but admire her femme-balls. :P
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2012 2:14 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
You have no idea how ecstatic I was for your update! This was all really good, I don't know how you can write such excellent material, especially when you're battling with writer's block! I was so glad to see Sess with Rin again, and then bam! Naraku was watching. What a fetish he must have for silver hair and golden eyes. I am also happy to see that Kagome is sticking with her most recent decision, and is being so supportive of her Mama. I'm really enjoying the political type warfare you've got going on, all at the same time. This isn't just a love story, it's so much more! I know you may not be happy with this, but I love it! This is my favorite story, and any updates for it make me thrilled! Thanks for working so hard on this, even though it gave you so much trouble. I sincerely hope the next chapter comes to you much easier.
Da Grrrl Says: Kat! <3 How are you?? I got your mail and I'll be checking in on you soon. :D
As for the chapter, it makes me feel a lot better to know you liked it. I know Hikari is a fave for you, so I really hate the thought of disappointing. >.< I had a lot of trouble with this story (always have), but I'm trying to quit putting pressure on myself about it. It's not an easy fic, mainly because it's pure fantasy (not a genre I'm really into), so I'll always have to work harder here than I will on others. Sigh.
But really, I'm just glad to be rid of this chapter so I can start on the new one. Strange sounding, I know, but that's how it works for me. Once I get rid of the really difficult chapter, I (most of the time) can bang the next one right out. Hopefully, I'll be doing it soon. Hope you and your family are well and enjoying the new digs! :D
Date: June 25, 2012 1:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel
Oh yeah, forgot to say: as always, no pressure love.
Da Grrrl Says: I wish I could follow that advice... >.<
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2012 1:40 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Wonderful chapter, Goober. I will admit, I was a little disappointed that there was no Yasha, but upon reading your little authors note at the bottom, I agree; being unhappy can definitely put a stop on creative juices and I'm grateful for whatever you managed to push out anyway. =] Thanks for the chapter, Goober, and I hope you're doing alright. If you'd like to vent sometime, you know my email. I'm always here to listen.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Nutella. *glomps* The road has been long and hard! >.< I'm trying to remember the stuff I loved about writing and sharing, but it's admittedly hard. Hikari is a story that always gave me fits, but this last one made me consider discontinuing it. >.> Writing one chapter should not be THIS hard. That's why I gave in and just posted it without trying to add on. I just needed it GONE. >___<
Thanks for always knowing exactly what I'm dealing with. *glomps* You're da bomb, and when I'm ready to kill everything, I know just where to go. <33333
Date: June 25, 2012 1:05 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Not seeing Inuyasha in this chapter just makes me more excited for the next one :)
Can't wait for the next update!
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, doll, and don't worry. You'll get plenty of Yasha in the next!
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2012 12:21 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Yay! So much is happening. How will it all come together?!? Can't wait to find out!
Da Grrrl Says: I promise to show more of how things will gel together in my next chapter. :D
Date: June 25, 2012 12:14 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Wonderful I can't wait to see what happens next. Length does not matter.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, sweets! I feel a little better about it now, though I'm striving for the next chapter to have the rest of what I wanted for this one. I'll consider this a "set up" chapter since the plot is about to kinda "take off" from this point.
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2012 11:32 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
I liked it. It showed how Sesshoumaru and Rin are doing as well as Hakudoushi and Kagome.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks. :) I'm glad it wasn't a total disappointment since I didn't add everything I wanted to.
Date: June 25, 2012 10:18 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Great job on the chapter, don't worry bout it being small, people will understand.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, babe. <3 I was more concerned with content than length. I didn't cover all things I wanted to because I didn't like what I had thus far. But luckily, it's gone now and my mind is already clearing for the next chapter. :D
Date: June 25, 2012 7:18 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
YAY!!! You updated!! Don't worry you'll get inspired soon and whoever you do, we'll be waiting here for you.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, doll. <33 I'm writing already -I just had to get rid of this particular one before I made myself nuts!
Date: June 25, 2012 5:25 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Carefully Woven Webs
Hopefully Inuyasha will sneak in your window and help make you happy again so you can do amother chappie lol Thanks for the update :)
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, girl. Since you know me on FB, you know the mood has been ... >.> I get that way on a chapter sometimes -I have to get rid of it or I can't move on in the story. It's happened before with KoR. I'll write and rewrite until I'm literally sick, lol. Almost happened again. >.< But now that this one is gone, I'm already mapping out the next, lol. *Checks window* XD
Date: June 12, 2012 11:43 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Love is Letting You Go
Ha ha! I can just imagine Inuyasha falling to earth naked. I wish that would happen in real life...
[Report This]Date: June 03, 2012 8:37 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Love is Letting You Go
XD
Wow. Love the whole showing-up-on-earth-naked idea, and his sarcasm, of course haha :p
Great story ^-^
Date: June 03, 2012 1:24 AM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Touched by an Angel
Nice, very nice. I have to fight temptation to read the next chapter right now, though. Curse you work, why must you schedule me so early! All well, I'll get to the rest eventually :)
Date: May 24, 2012 12:14 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Love is Letting You Go
OHMYGOD DOES THIS MEAN HE CAN FINALLY MEET KAGOME?!?!?! WOOT WOOT Can't wait until you update ^_^
[Report This]Date: April 20, 2012 4:00 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Absence
Sad chapter, hope to read happy things soon, good chapter though!
Date: April 17, 2012 5:22 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Love is Letting You Go
This chapter is so sweet for so many reasons!
[Report This]Date: April 14, 2012 2:06 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Love is Letting You Go
I love this story!!! Inu coming down to earth naked was just hilarious
[Report This]Date: April 11, 2012 4:12 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Love is Letting You Go
Jeebus! Every time I reread this I just get so flippin excited!!! This is my most favorite story, ever! I love it soooo much! Such a true love they share, and right now...its just one sided (sorta). OMG. I cannot wait until she sees him...what will their reactions be to one another? This seriously gives me chills! I hope this story bugs you for an update soon...like oh say around April 24? lol