[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 5:39 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: While The Earth Sleeps
KIKYOU, NOW I REALLY HATE YOU!!!!!!!YOU DESERVED TO GO TO HELL!!!!!!!!POOR INUYASHA!!!!!I HOPE HE WISHED ON THE JEWEL!!!!!POOR KAGOME...LEFT ALL ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!POOR SHIPPO, AND KAGURA!!!!!INUYASHA SHOULDN'T HAVE DIED!!!!!BUT HE WILL FIND A WAY BACK TO HER...HE HAS TO...FOR BOTH THEIR SAKES!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 5:36 PM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Storming the Armada
NOOOOO~!!!!!!!!!!!!!MIROKU!!!!!!!!!SANGO!!!!!!!!!!!KIRARA!!!!!!!!!!!SESSHOMARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!COME ON KAGOME HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!KIKYOU YOU BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 5:33 PM
Chapter number: 15
Title: In the Now
YES!!!!!HURRY KAGOME, HURRY SESSHOMARU, HURRY EVERYONE...INUYASHA NEEDS YOUR HELP!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 5:31 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Through the Madness
NOOOO!!!!!SANGO, MIROKU, SHIPPO, KIRARA, INUYASHA, KAGOME, SESSHOMARU, EVERYONE IS IN A BIG MESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
EACH CHAPTER SOMEHOW FINDS A WAY TO MAKE ME CRY!!!!!HAPPY OR SAD I ALWAYS CRY OVER SOMETHING IN THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 5:28 PM
Chapter number: 13
Title: All the Worlds From Here Must Burn
NOO!!!!!INUYASHA!!!!!KAGOME!!!!!KIKYOU, YOU ARE SUCH A BAKA!!!!!NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!INUYASHA NEEDS HELP!!!!!KAGOME....HELP HIM!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 5:14 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Stolen Moments as the Hour Approaches
YAY, SANGO AND MIROKU!!!!!KIKYOU IS SUCH A WITCH!!!!!ANYWAY, I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 5:08 PM
Chapter number: 11
Title: Making Love and Amends
AWW...THEY NEED EACH OTHER TO SURVIVE!!!!!I HATE KIKYOU!!!!!JUST CAUSE SHE DIED FOR HIM DOESN'T ERASE THE FACT THAT SHE PINNED HIM TO A TREE AND TRIED TO KILL HIM COUNTLESS TIMES!!!!!WHAT A B-I-T-C-H!!!!!ROT IN HELL KIKYOU!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 4:56 PM
Chapter number: 10
Title: Quality Time and Truths Revealed
OH NO!!!!!INUYASHA HAS TO BREAK FREE!!!!!SHIPPO IS SO SWEET!!!!!HA IS ADORABLE!!!!!I LOVE HIM!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 4:50 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Restless and Forgotten
YAY, SHIPPO!!!!!AWW...PAINFULL BUT SWEET MEMORYS!!!!!OH REALLY, KIKYOU?????LIKE SHE COULD REALLY MAKE INUYASHA STOP LOVING KAGOME!!!!!HAH, SHE IS SO TOTALLY DREAMING!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 4:48 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Torn Loyalties
AWW...RAMEN...POOR INUYASHA...POOR SHIPPO...POOR MIROKU AND SANGO!!!!!STUPID KIKYOU!!!!!I WISH SHE WOULD DIE AGAIN!!!!!SHE DESERVES TO BURN IN HELL!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 4:45 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: About Last Night...
AWW...HE'S STILL STUCK WITH KIKYOU...I HATE HER!!!!!AND I KNEW IT WAS KAGURA!!!!!AND SHE IS WITH SESSHOMARU!!!!!WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!!!!!I WOULD GIVE THIS WAY MORE THAN TEN IF I COULD!!!!!INFINITY!!!!!I SAY IT SHOULD BE!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 4:42 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Forever Bound
YES!!!!!THEY ARE ONE...LIKE THEY SHOULD BE!!!!!ONE HEART, ONE SOUL!!!!!I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 4:36 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Meeting You Again
YES!!!!!I KNEW THINGS WOULD TURN AROUND!!!!!THANK THE KAMI!!!!!I LOVE THE PERSON WHO CREATED INUYASHA!!!!!I AM GOING TO BE ADICTED TO THIS WEB SITE FOR LIFE!!!!!I CAN'T GET OFF THE COMPUTER NOW!!!!!
P.S.
PLEASE ADD ME!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 4:34 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Confessions of a Hanyou
YES!!!!!THANK YOU, KAGURA!!!!!THANK YOU SO MUCH, INUGRRL!!!!!I L-O-V-E THIS STORY!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 4:32 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: Sleep Well, Dear One
NOOOOO!!!!!NOT KAEDE!!!!!AWW...KAGOME IS GONNA CRY SO HARD!!!!!I KNOW I AM!!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 4:31 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: Saying Goodbye
OMG!!!!!I CAN'T STOP CRYING!!!!!AND I CAN'T STOP READING!!!!!THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS STORY FOR EVERYONE WHO CARES ABOUT INUYASHA AND KAGOME!!!!!I MAY NOT LIKE WHAT IS HAPPENING NOW, BUT I HAVE A PRETTY GOOD FEEELING IT IS GOING TO GET A LOT BETTER!!!!!HEY...CAN YOU PLEASE ADD ME?????MY ADDRESS IS:
lewis_hester13@hotmail.com
PLEASE?????
P.S.
I LOVE ALL YOUR WORK!!!!!I DIDN'T READ IT ALL YET BUT IF IT'S BY YOU THEN IT WILL BE THE BEST THING I EVER READ....I AM SURE OF IT!!!!!
[Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 12:28 PM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Epilogue: A Hanyou's Wish
One word. WOW!
I thought that I was about the only one that noticed where Rumiko Takahashi was going with Sess. and Kagura. I'm glad to see a story about them being together
I can't beleive the emotions that I felt while reading. I really did start to cry at the end and I can't wait to read Tome 2. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this story.
Author's Response: Thanks, Viki! I'm happy you enjoyed it. When I wrote this a year ago I got a lot of flack for chap. 18, lol. But that was because the sequel was already in the works. But I'm glad you were okay with it!!
Date: March 21, 2007 10:01 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Epilogue: A Hanyou's Wish
I loved this story so much! but the ending was a bit disapointing... All the chapters were really good, but this last chapter (18) felt rushed. I wish you would have expanded just a little more.
Such a good story, could be much better if you just make chapter 18 more detailed. A stranger, just comes into the room and all of sudden just is asked to stay for the childbirth of a strange woman and does it? even if at the begining he didnt recognize her, how do you justify that?
I would have liked if you just explained what was he doing in the hospital, was he a doctor? or was he just visiting? did he feel anything at all when he first saw her, or did he just stay because she asked him? You did so good on every chapter and then this one just felt too rushed. I would really like to see a revision and maybe a small extension, making it better. I really like your stories, and this one was great, but the ending was too incomplete, it felt like it was written like a quickie just to have a happy ending, but without really putting much effort into it. I think your readers would like to see the ending to be as good as the rest of the story, and to be honest it does not do it justice.
Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed review -I appreciate it! I don't know if you knew, but this fiction does have a sequel and that was why the epi was written the way it was. So all of these questions get answered with the next story. ^_^
Date: March 11, 2007 5:01 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Epilogue: A Hanyou's Wish
About time I read this whole thing XD
I had only read the last few chapters before I got stuck into the sequel =p Can't wait to see how you end it, I have faith in you!
Author's Response: Ax!! Thanks for the review and the faith. I flippin need it! >.<
[Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 1:54 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Epilogue: A Hanyou's Wish
...::some more rogue tears:; wow. very well done (as alwyas) ^__^ i'm a little thrown by the ending; did inu know who he really was? i mean...to hold her kid and the soft non-felt kisses and that shabang...he had to know, right? it's like the entire 'family' was there, but they weren't, but they were! lol.
very cute. i'm horrified that kikyo had enough power to destroy sesshoumaru (still seething, actually) but it all came together in the end. i loved the kagura that you did (didn't i say that i wuffed her?) very well done. stupid kikyo...grr...death wasn't painful enough. i say throw her to the snarkers!
GREAT story!! so well done! lots of tears. ::sniff:: wonderful story kiki!!!
[Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 1:54 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: Epilogue: A Hanyou's Wish
...::some more rogue tears:; wow. very well done (as alwyas) ^__^ i'm a little thrown by the ending; did inu know who he really was? i mean...to hold her kid and the soft non-felt kisses and that shabang...he had to know, right? it's like the entire 'family' was there, but they weren't, but they were! lol.
very cute. i'm horrified that kikyo had enough power to destroy sesshoumaru (still seething, actually) but it all came together in the end. i loved the kagura that you did (didn't i say that i wuffed her?) very well done. stupid kikyo...grr...death wasn't painful enough. i say throw her to the snarkers!
GREAT story!! so well done! lots of tears. ::sniff:: wonderful story kiki!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Wen! The ending is explained in the sequel, I swear! I wrote this a year ago and people still get me about chap 18. I swear, it would have been more detailed if I wasn't going to continue it :P
[Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 1:41 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: Storming the Armada
O_O; ....::shocked to silence:: ...but...but...they CAN'T die!!!!
[Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 12:57 AM
Chapter number: 6
Title: About Last Night...
i have to comment (i'm just blowing up the review section, aren't i?) resistance is futile! LMFAO!!!! He's a borg!!!! that's wonderful!!!! that stopped the tears for a while, i'll say that. heheheheh.
[Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 12:51 AM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Forever Bound
a part of me is angry that he got off with calling her koi. i get that his heart belongs to her, that's no problem, but to the fact that he's ripping her heart out and tossing it into a blender set on high is what's pulling at my heart cords right now. poor kaggie. i guess i should feel worse for inu...cause he got the clay pot end of the deal, but still...poor kagome. ::still sobbing here, incase your wondering!::
[Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 12:39 AM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Confessions of a Hanyou
you know, when you wrote gust of wind, my mind instantly screamed kagura. and then i laughed and was like, it couldn't be, she's gone. and then bam, she's not. i wuff kagura!!! i'm glad she's still alive. great scheme to use her to knock him back. and i feel bad, as i rant on, about kikyo; she wants this normal life, regardless of the fact that she is indeed made from clay. so...seriously; if you put kikyo in water, would she get all mushy? hmmm....