Reviews For Breaking The Girl
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Reviewer: kiobitosama86   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2012 6:20 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: It's Always By Chance

lol inuyasha is the devil and im lovin it



Reviewer: kiobitosama86   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2012 6:11 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

things are getting crazy already. loved it!!



Reviewer: dreamer789   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2012 10:44 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

this was such an amazing story! The plot was good, and the story line flowed very nicely, and it was interesting all the way trough and I LOVED the ending!



Reviewer: Swolf   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2012 10:31 PM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Plots, Resolutions, & Random Acts of Silliness

LOL XD Fluffy,tell me a story!!!

Da Grrrl Says: I don't think there's a single person who read this story who doesn't like this chapter for that scene. lol.



Reviewer: Izzuhbella   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2012 7:00 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

Loved it!

Great ending to a great story!

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! <3



Reviewer: Izzuhbella   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2012 6:10 AM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Koigokoro

Awe! So romantic! I loved it!



Reviewer: Izzuhbella   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2012 5:42 AM
Chapter number: 23
Title: Learn Your Craft

I'm really loving this story so far.

Very interesting. :D



Reviewer: pinksinge   Signed   [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2012 9:35 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

AWWWWWWWWWWW yay! they're finally together:)



Reviewer: pinksinge   Signed   [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2012 8:39 PM
Chapter number: 22
Title: Secrets, Lies and Brotherly Love

I love that cute moment between sesshomaru, inuyasha and their uncle :)



Reviewer: Cakemeister12   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2012 1:22 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Anything You Can Do...

Oh my oh my oh my.... A jealous Kikyo, amazing!!



Reviewer: animegirl163   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2012 1:40 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

I remember reading this story in another site, now i just read it for fun again. I have to admit that it still made me teary eyed. I forgot how gruesome it was. I think this was one of my first fan fic that I read from your collection that was shocking to me. How did you come up with the torture it was to much, I cringed every time something happened to poor Rin. That Nuraku deserved a lot more than what he got. I loved the story like i said this one was one of the first fics I read from your collection.
Im glad I reread this again it was a great trip down memory lane :)

Da Grrrl Says: I haven't reread this in YEARS, so I don't even remember all of that scene. >.<

*Makes mental note to take a look*.

It's funny. My best friend's favorite character is Rin and >.> she loves that torture scene. It's one of her faves (Yes, certifiable, she is) and I'm usually trying to remember what I wrote, or I'm asking myself how the heck I pulled it off. lol. I was a lot more gruesome with thing when I first started writing and shocking people is sort of second nature, so i guess that was me unleashing? :P



Reviewer: itachiiyoubastard   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2012 9:10 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

Been pleasantly reading my way through your classics, the nostalgia is bittersweet. Mainstream fandom has long been deprived of quality. A given, I suppose, since the conclusion of InuYasha but such a shame.

I digress, your writing remains poignant still and never fails to enchant.

Hats off to you!

Da Grrrl Says: Major, MAJOR compliment. Thank you SO much for that. *hugs*



Reviewer: Draconas12   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2012 3:23 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

Awesome! Loved it! It was a great story and written well. Though your writing style seems to have changed from this one to other stories. But maybe that's just me.

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

And you're right. My writing style did change. This was my first multi-chapter story from 2005, so yeah, changing and developing a stronger style was inevitable. I feel like this story is just all over the place and written on the fly with little regard for grammar and story structure. Nowadays, I try to be better with that. :)



Reviewer: Draconas12   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2012 1:21 PM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Anything For You

Awesome! I love how the story is going, you've done a great job!



Reviewer: Rickosokay   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2012 9:03 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

Awsome, Loved It.



Reviewer: Draconas12   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2012 2:09 PM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Want You To Know Who I Am

I hope this chapter means a turn around for their relationship! Great job though!



Reviewer: Draconas12   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2012 1:55 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Secrets and Schemes

Great last couple of chapters. Inuyasha needs to get his crap together though!



Reviewer: Draconas12   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2012 12:22 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: A Race and a Kiss

Awesome! You bring it to the point where I think Kagome and Inuyasha will get together then bring in the witch. Good chapter and great story so far!!

Da Grrrl Says: Awww, thanks so much. BTG is such a weird -EVERYWHERE- kinda story (you'll see what I mean). But it always makes me smile when someone enjoys it. ^^



Reviewer: Draconas12   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2012 4:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Sounds like a great start to a story, can't wait to finish it!



Reviewer: shexshe   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2012 10:41 AM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

Loved it. It's charm really reminds me of a different time.

Da Grrrl Says: lol. Doesn't it, though? It reminds me of when I lived and breathed fanfiction and had a million ideas and didn't know how to consolidate them all, so I wrote by the literal seat of my pants. Ah. Good times. Now, I put way too much thought into everything and writing isn't nearly as fun. Makes me long for the days of old when I didn't care and wrote with the wind. :)



Reviewer: shexshe   Signed   [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2012 9:07 PM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Secrets and Schemes

Rin and Sango are hilarious! Love it.



Reviewer: shexshe   Signed  starstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2012 8:15 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Two Can Play That Game

Been a while since I reread this one. I love the way Inuyasha and Kagome play off each other. Good work.



Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2012 5:13 PM
Chapter number: 37
Title: The End is Always The Beginning

wow if this is your first story,which is very good,oh boy!Icant wait to read the rest of them!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks a bunch. <3 that was indeed my first serial fiction and it was a nutty journey, lol. it could have been done much better, but I was a new writer, just getting my feet wet. I'd like to think I got better with time, but I'll let you decide for yourself. :)



Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2012 2:29 PM
Chapter number: 27
Title: Koigokoro

aww ...i wanna go to the beach too!!!



Reviewer: Moonlight   Signed  starstarstarstarhalf-star  [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2012 11:11 AM
Chapter number: 19
Title: A Miko's Plot and a Romantic Interlude

awww so romantic



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