Reviews For Breaking The Girl
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Reviewer: Fallen6906 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

hey by the way my um email is jaangel88@hotmail.com in case the answer is yes kk



Reviewer: Dilanda Albata (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Awwwwwww.....That was the sweetest ending ever!! You are truly amazing!!



Reviewer: Dilanda Albata (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I cannot believe this story is almost done..I think I'll check out your other works and see if they can even compare to "Breaking the Girl."



Reviewer: Dilanda Albata (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:04 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

o.0! I definitely wouldn't have guessed Satoru would be the traitor..anyways, I hope you update real soon..but then again, I also hope one of my friends will just give me all of Ayu and Gackt's C.D.'s or a bunch of anme and manga for my birthday, but that's just not happening now is it? 



Reviewer: Dilanda Albata (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Oh, that was harsh, leaving us at that. You said you wouldn't do that at the beginning of the chapter....pure evil I tell you, EVIL! Is Rin dead? You had Sesshoumaru going all "I WILL AVENGE YOU!!" Speaking of Sesshy, is he dead? I liked him :( I hope you update real soon... 



Reviewer: Dilanda Albata (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Now the fun begins! I would've loved to keep reading but, of course, you would leave it at a cliffhanger. That's evil man, just evil



Reviewer: Dilanda Albata (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:03 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

ooooOOOooOOooOoo!!!!Kouga's in trouble now! 



Reviewer: Dilanda Albata (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

This is going great so far...I would have reviewed before but mediaminer stopped sending me e-mail notifications when my favorites updated. Now it's being even cooler and wont let me sign in -.- ......  



Reviewer: QuestionableIntentions (mm.org)   Anonymous  starstarstarstarstar  [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I just read the ending again...out of the entire story, i think my favorite part is the fight up until the ending...(and koigokoro, of course. xD)you did such a fantastic job with that ending. *sighs* i cried. again. xD kami i love this story!!! hehehe...:)



Reviewer: QuestionableIntentions (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

InuGrrrl!! omg hunny this was abso-fucking-lutely beautiful! xD and I DO quote! :) the fight scenes were amazing, just the right amount of intensity, violence, and suspense. :) and i love the way you really made them all bond together in this one. it totally rectifies everything that happened in the earlier chapters. i love this story. if and when you come up with a sequel, i will gladly gladly read it. :) congratulations on finishing it, and fantastic, fantastic job!!! :) huggles, michiko



Reviewer: QuestionableIntentions (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

hun, this is a fantastic story!!! you're keeping up with it VERY well! please please continue quickly! ^_^ oh and by the way, it's okay with the grammatical/spelling errors and such. ^_^ It doesn't do much to ruin the flow of your story. it's cool. XD



Reviewer: fallenangel7583 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

O_o i wasn't ready for thier uncle to betray them. damn. that really sucks! and damn Naraku for being a bastard! i really hope Sesshoumaru get's to put his foot up Naraku's ass for all of this. damn him to hell! he's suck a sick freak! poor Rin! i can't wait to read more, keep it up!



Reviewer: fallenangel7583 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

you know there is some foul crap going down when Sesshoumaru is adding honorifics onto his own name to breed fear. damn, you write one scary as hell sesshoumaru. my heart is still racing. props to kouga for growing a pair and damn naraku for what he did to kaede. i fear for rin's safety. man...if naraku touches her...epp? that just won't be cool. sesshiles is already nearly ready to rip someones throat out. everyone hide!!! 



Reviewer: fallenangel7583 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

awww. damn. i've been trying to leave reveiws for this story for so freakin long and every time it just kept spitting them back at me saying i was missing something. hopefully this one will go through. GREAT FRIGGIN story! i loved it!!! soo much drama. good lemons. very well done!!! i really hope that kikyo get's what's coming to her. interesting use of mayu (sp?) as well. very well done. i have a feeling Kagura is going to go AWAL from kikyo, isn't she? woot...go Kagura. very well done. keep it up!!!!



Reviewer: Tyashaay14 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

OH that was soooo sweet and so funny....I can't believe you made her say abso-fucking-lutely...LMAO...that was priceless...I really enjoyed this story...You did a very good job on it...well until next time, next story...luvs Ty



Reviewer: Tyashaay14 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 10:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

That was hilarious...Fluffy revived Kouga and all he says is "WHat Happened?"...that cracked me up, I love this fic...it was so addicting and I'm kinda sad but also happy that it's almost over...good luck with the last chapter and the rest of your other fanfictions...great job!! luvs Ty 



Reviewer: Tyashaay14 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

OMG....THAT WAS LIKE....I DON'T EVEN KNOW IF THERE IS A WORD FOR HOW I'M FEELING RIGHT NOW!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER, BUT POOR RIN...POOR FLUFFY...WILL HE BE OKAY? UPDATE SOON!! 



Reviewer: Tyashaay14 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I really love this one...I can't stop reading your stories...they are so addicting...lol...great job...keep up the good work...update soon Please!! 



Reviewer: Tyashaay14 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

omg omg omg omg omg omg omg Oh my freaking god....that was awesome....I can't wait to see what happens next...please keep it up...I love this story!!



Reviewer: SailorEarth (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

This is a really great story! Please, update soon! A very good job!



Reviewer: SailorEarth (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Man, the flow of your story is really really good! I can't wait for your next chapter. The creativity of the story makes up for the grammar mistakes which are unnoticeable to me. Update soon! 



Reviewer: woo hoo122 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

PLEASE CONTINUE that was awesome



Reviewer: woo hoo122 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

*clap* *clap* *clap* AWESOME please continue 



Reviewer: Kitani (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

This story started out a bit rocky but you did a great job with the whole thing! Nice ending! I think my cousin had to hit me over the head a few times to get my attention off of the computer! ^_^ It's a really good story, hopefully there's another one in the works.



Reviewer: Kitani (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2011 9:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

What the hey man?! The battle is getting intense and you leave off there?! Okay, I should breath a little, but you should write right now! Just please update soon! 



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