Reviews For Breaking The Girl
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Reviewer: chanda (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Yeah I found you...*L* This was a very good story, I am glad that I can read more of your fics. 



Reviewer: SilverWolf21 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I love the story as i have have said before and i think a short sequel sounds kinda cool. I didnt exactly want to say bye just yet to them so the sequel will just about wrap up everything. But if u dont feel like i have your other stries to help me over. So do as you like and have fun 



Reviewer: Cherry-girl (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

O_O! Please! I would love to read that! This story was the best!!!!



Reviewer: call me kara (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:40 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Wow is all i can say...you have this way of wrapping up everything at the end wonderfully. i actually cried! i never cry while reading good fanfics, ever! this is definately a one of a kind story! i loved it. i have read tons of fics, and none compare to this one. usually with long fics i get so bored after a while, but each chapter kept my attention as i wanted to always know what was gonna happen next. you also have a great way of describing the characters and allowing me to form a mental picture in my head of the story as i read it. i NEVEr got bored. you make inuyasha sound so sweet! it made me cry because i want a guy like him! every girl who reads this probably does. or any guy in this fic for that matter lol. anyways... i loved it...please write more stories with the same intensity! wow i give you a big fat 10!!!!!!!!!!! great job..(and that whole abso-fucking-lutely thing, perfect touch!) u are a writer girl! keep it up...i only could dream of being that good. 



Reviewer: Nami Sasaki (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:25 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Honestly, the first chapter kind of made me twitch in my seat. It was like this. o___o twitch twitch "The Plastics wtf?" twitch twitch. I was kind of discouraged after that and probably won't be reading the rest, since I'm kind of an Inu hater anyway, but you're still a pretty good writer. 



Reviewer: inuyasha-angel18 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

*sniffle sniffle* I loved it!!!!! You did a wonderful job writting this.I actually cried at the end. I hope you write a sequel.



Reviewer: RavenSeito (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:24 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

awesome awesome awesome I just read this and wow. Awesome. I'd love to to read a sequel to this if you write one. please do. 



Reviewer: Kagome_forever (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:22 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Once again, I love this story and all of your work, please make the sequel, I'd love to read it. Anyway off to write another review! Love, Kagome_forever!!! 



Reviewer: Kagome Yamamoto (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

wow i just red your fic and i love it! i really wish you would write a sequel and soon!i would love to read it and im already starting to read your other fics. Kagome Yamamoto



Reviewer: skits_revenge (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:21 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I can't stop smiling!!! I abso-fucking-lutly (lolz) love your fic! Especially the enbd! Kant wait to read more!!! -Katsuyuki 



Reviewer: inux3kagome4ever (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:20 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

your story is and always will be uber cool! u have a very interesting imagination,.......KIKYO HATERS UNITE!!!!!! 



Reviewer: miaa_hiaa (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

it took me three days to read this...i have to say that you are my favriot writer on this site! *hugs* your so awsome! 



Reviewer: britne (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:18 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

if u make a sequel i will love you forever!!!!! LOL 



Reviewer: Sakura Haruno (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

that story was awesome! i loved it when inuyasha asked kagome to marry him! i cried because it was so sweet! please make a sequal! im dying to know what happens next at the wedding! 



Reviewer: Sailor Sarcasm (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:17 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I have to make up new words for this. 'Tis so much fun...Write a sequel so I can read it when I finish the first one. And everything else you've ever written that involves InuYasha...



Reviewer: inuwinfast (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal sequal



Reviewer: Manderz30(mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:16 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Really great fic! I hope to read a sequel soon. Your a great writer keep up the good work.



Reviewer: Dragoncountess98 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:13 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

wow i really like this story! and the proposal at the end was awsome!!!!!but what about rin and sess? did he ever mark her? he said mate...and miroku,sango,kouga what about them? you should definately make a sequel!!!!! i totally agree!!!!oh! and what about kags being the miko of that region or how does she finish training?? definately need a sequel please!!!!!!!!!! lol



Reviewer: chibirin8 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

This would have to be the longets fan fic i have ever read and one of the best I just love inuyasha fan fics. and I plan on reading moreof yours I just hope they are as good as this but then again i dont know any 40 chapter fac that could be better then this one unless it had yaoi lol :P 



Reviewer: CarrieFay (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:12 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

That has got to be the best ending ive ever read! I loved it form beggining to end! I would definatly love to read a sequal! This is a great story and im so very happy i found it! You are a great author and i love your stories! Keep it up! Buh bye! 



Reviewer: coldTenshieyes (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:02 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

THAT WAS THE BEST FREAKING FANFICTION I HAVE READ IN LIKE EVER!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT! You gotta make a sequal! and you gotta make Fluf- er... um... Sess porpose or whatever@!!!! I love it you have to make a sequal! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT! It's really great!! 



Reviewer: Miroku's Sango (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:01 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved the ending line very clever 



Reviewer: mikaela (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 6:00 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I loved it. xD You're an awesome author. 



Reviewer: Quiet Storm (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I laughed so much at the ending, just perfect. I took 2 days to read it; a well worthwhile journey. The high school part was great. How things turned from gangs, to "breaking Kagome," to an all out war was awesome. My favorite part was when Inu raises his arm toward Kags even though he felt hopeless, then she goes to him... I still replay that in my mind. I got chills when I read about Kaede...ufff, it still bothers me. I was on pins and needles when Rin got "Sesshy's" strange phone call..I felt dread. Your build up to make me, as a reader, hate Naraku was so good that I wish that you had been more generous in showing us how he suffered when defeated. E.g., show us his thoughts of disbelief and how he hurt when transformed InuYasha beat the pulp out of him. He deserved that and more after what he did to Kaede and Rin. I loved the pack scenes and flipping of the bird to each other. I honestly have to say that I suspected that Sesshy baby was going to bring Kouga back. I was so happy when that happened. I didn't expect the uncle's alliance with Naraku; particularly, when he assisted in Kag's training. All in all, I loved the surprises, I loved how you called Kikyo's gang the Plastics; it really worked for me. The Rin/Sesshy and Inu/Kags intimate scenes were glorious; luv 'em, luv 'em, luv 'em. Ah, you're great with the motorbike, clothing, fight scene jargon. The plots were engaging, action filled, and clear. I'd write more but no space. You RAWK! Your beta too!! Hugs, QS 



Reviewer: Angelstoxickiss (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:56 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I loved this fic! sequal? Please? 



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