Reviews For Breaking The Girl
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Reviewer: AngelHeart21 (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

This was a great story. It was funny and sad and just messed up at some points. I loved it! I hope you keep writing. ^_^



Reviewer: kagome313 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:55 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

This is WONDERFUL!! Pwease hurry and update, or if there is no more updating, atleast say so. It is such an intersting story, seeing how they started out arguing and getting each other jealious, then it ended with so much romance in it, i REALLY LOVED IT!!!. you are one of few best writers i have, seriously, your abso-fucky-lutly GREAT!! lol 



Reviewer: Krami (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:54 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

All I can say is, wow. You have a morbid mind lol, but that's part of why the story is great. I never want to picture kaedae/rin like that again..Anyways. Great story!



Reviewer: rss (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:53 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

omg i seriously loved this!! it was pretty sad with how hirrble naraku was but the ending was perfect and the happy moments with the couples made me like it soo
much!! definately in my top 5 faves ;) nice work!!!! ^^



Reviewer: hedgehogmadhatter (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:52 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I read the whole thing and loved it! The mushy ending was perfect, and Kagura kicked some ass! Very cool. Kikyo was evil and Kagura turned out to be good, my kind of fic. BTW the writing is very well done. Also thanks for reading and reviewing my fic, I really appreciated all you said. After the turkey is done this weekend I'll read some more of your stuff. Peace! 



Reviewer: luv4inuyasha (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

omg!dat was such a moment!i got a lil mad wen inuyasha had "s" w/kikyo but he had 2 imagine it was kagome.....rite?yea.n e ways i luv ur story!it i sssssssooooooo cute! 



Reviewer: Sayoko x3 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:49 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

i love this story too! Its greatt! 



Reviewer: BloodyTears (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:46 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I wish I could rate all of those a 20! Haha! Your style of writing is the type I envy! While I was reading this, I actually filled up with tears!! O__O;; I NEVER do that to any book/fic I read!! And at the end when I read Kagome's answer, a big smile plastered onto my face and I thought, "I REMEMBER INUYASHA SAYING THAT NEAR THE BEGINNING OF THE FIC!!" Haha!! This is an amazing fic, you have this innate talent of writing! I hope it takes you places. 



Reviewer: Lost Star (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:46 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I rated your story the way I did because it was funny, well written, had alot of suspense, and was very original. I loved your story and I can't wait to read some of your other stories. 



Reviewer: Ikiwi (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Wow.. This was such a joy to read. I really really really loved it. There wasnt one part of this story that didnt add depth and a new and exciting aspect to the plot. Never stop writing, you've got such a gift. Thanks so much for this lovely story. It was amazing! The ending was so perfect.. I could go on, but I'm supposed to be finishing up an assignment.



Reviewer: pickle juicu (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:43 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Wow that had to have been the best story wriiten as the Inu gang p0rtrayed in the real world. I've also resd alot of storys also and I really think those4 were the best characters. thank you for this wonderful story. You should def keep writing.  



Reviewer: Irish Rose (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:42 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

that was AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Reviewer: SouthernGoddess (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:41 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

The story was great! I enjoyed the characters, the plot, all of it was really good.



Reviewer: buwan anghel (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:39 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

omg i luv ur story. it is beyond awesome. it brought to me to tears, not that that's a bad thing. it just means that to me i could feel the emotions and it brought me to tears. i can't believe inu's uncle betrayed them all for freaking land. when naruku was goin to kill he neways. i mean u don't turn ur bac on blood no matter wat. the part w/kaede was soooo sad she didn't deserve for that to happen to her. the love b/t inu and kagome is sooo wow and beautiful that it kind of makes u want to have that. i luv your stories, your an amazing writer. p.s. pls update smc soon. 



Reviewer: sexy_capricorn (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:38 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I just finished this story and I have to say that this story has every fricking category. First, it was like a high school fic, then it was a romance, then some drama came into it, them more romance, then more drama, then a little dash of thriller, then out of the blue some hardcore action, then back to high school to finally end with some more romance with a little of comdey dashed on the top. This was the best freaking rollercoaster. I cried, I laughed, the gasped, I cried again (Kouga dying). Then I cheered(Kouga coming back to life) Then I awwed(InuYasha proposing). Anyways, good luck. ^_^!  



Reviewer: mirokusbaby (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:37 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

im super speachless your a great writer and i luved your story i cant wait to read more of your work!!!!!!!!! ^_^ normally i dont read fanficks but 1's like yours sure make me want to read all of the fanficks ever written. im so excited now after reading all of these great fanficks it makes me want to write some of my own.^_^!!!!!!!!! 



Reviewer: jprincess16 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

This story was great I just loved how it was fun and bright in the beginning and then without warning just turned to dark and gory and then back fun and bright again. Would I read this story again? Abso-fucking-lutely LoL I loved that part.  



Reviewer: Amaryllis Embers (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:36 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Hey, I haven't exactly read all ur fics but, I think ur one of the best authors. So Who ever that person who is raggin on u and Shar-Shar, R just jealous that they don't have a fic(s) even remotely close to ur's and Shar's or they can't even comeup with one like it. That or their reveiws r too low for even the dogs to bite.(No pun intended) Keep up they great work! 



Reviewer: ShaylaBlade (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:35 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I read this story a while ago and showed it to Lost Star. THIS STORY IS THA S***!!!!!!!!! ....awww....look at loststar reviewin ppl stories :)



Reviewer: Demongirl (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 5:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

ahhh!that was one of the best freakin stories ive ever read. and i love the ending. its perfect! hope you wright more! 



Reviewer: inuyasha_girl92 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 4:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

I have read most of you story and I must say you are one of the best authors and maybe even the best. Loved it! Keep Writing! 



Reviewer: HopelesslyEscaflowne (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2011 4:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

This is a beautiful piece of fanfiction. I enjoyed every moment of it! ^^ The plot started out innocently enough with a nice little backstory for Kags that eventually expanded into the story it is. The transition was seamless and I applaud you on a great plot that was definitely original and one I thoroughly enjoyed. I also appreciated your style and I enjoyed how every chapter always had something new and exciting. It made every single chapter feel meaningful. ^^ I loved your use of words even if in someplaces the grammar or meaning was incorrect. Despite those few errors it's a wonderful story that I hope everyone has the chance to read.



Reviewer: inugurl27 (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2011 10:59 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

OMG wat an amazing ff ever. this has been my fav from any of the ffs i have ever read u relly need to make a sequl and never give up on riting 



Reviewer: Inukag_obsession (mm.org)   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2011 10:58 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Oh my god i really loved it!!! I liked the ending most, I have to say. The abso-fucking-lutely is sooooooooo good. I would have NEVER thought of that. Its really THE best story ever~!! 



Reviewer: demon priestess (mm.org)    Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2011 10:57 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

You had a few spelling mistakes, but man was your story awesome!I abso-fucking-lutely loved your story! 



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