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Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 2:30 PM
Chapter number: 25
Title: Alchemy Pt. 2

Dude...screw. you. Kikyou.

=( Loved the chapter...hated what happened between InuYasha and Kagome. Rin's performance made me laugh. Ayame's was brilliant (bet Kouga's gonna be feeling sorry that he's going to be losing such a great thing when all this shit goes down and they figure out he helped). Hiten and Eri=<3. I wonder where Miroku and Sango disappeared to? Hehehe.

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 2:15 PM
Chapter number: 24
Title: Alchemy Pt. 1

*glares at Kikyou* Bitch. *glares at Naraku* Go screw Mayu and jump into Miroku's wind-tunnel, why don'tcha?

Great chapter, Grrrl!

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 2:05 PM
Chapter number: 23
Title: Learn Your Craft

Lots of training for everyone!! =) Good chapter.



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 3:01 AM
Chapter number: 22
Title: Secrets, Lies and Brotherly Love

"Let's do it, Fluffy!"

Bahahahaaha.

Greatness! =)

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 2:43 AM
Chapter number: 21
Title: A Day of Discoveries

...soooo...I don't like Kikyou (obviously)...but I hate Mayu and Naraku! Ugh!! And Hojo?! *shakes head*

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 2:19 AM
Chapter number: 20
Title: Anything For You

Grinning from ear to ear right now, Grrrl!! =) Absol-fucking-lutely lllllooooovvvvveeee this chapter!!

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 2:11 AM
Chapter number: 19
Title: A Miko's Plot and a Romantic Interlude

Awwwww....how cuteeeeeee! Does Fluffy (hehe) not know about Kagome being a miko yet?

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 2:04 AM
Chapter number: 18
Title: And So It Begins..

Hot damn....shitttttttttt. Great chapter, though.

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 1:59 AM
Chapter number: 17
Title: Want You To Know Who I Am

So I scared the shit out of my dogs when I screamed in happiness of this chapter... =) YAYYYYY! Love love LOVE it, Grrrl!!!

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 1:50 AM
Chapter number: 16
Title: All My Roads lead To You

Kouga...needs to NOT be there at this moment....

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 1:44 AM
Chapter number: 15
Title: Not Just Any Cheer

=) Up until the last paragraph, it was amazing. Then with Kagome's thoughts it was like.... "Ahhh...no! It had be an Inu-Kag moment!! =("

Great chapter!

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 1:29 AM
Chapter number: 14
Title: Secrets and Schemes

...very, very curious to see Rin's "master-plan" behind this... =)



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 1:13 AM
Chapter number: 13
Title: Feelings Are Like Rollercoasters

So...now I have tears in my eyes. Sooooo not liking what has happened. Not. Good. =( =( =(

...it was still a good chapter though.

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 12:37 AM
Chapter number: 12
Title: Plots, Resolutions, & Random Acts of Silliness

HAHAHAHA.

HAHAHAHAHA.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Oh Kami...that was greatness!!

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 12:19 AM
Chapter number: 11
Title: If He's Your Man Now...

I knew Kikyou would get her ass whooped! Gah InuYasha...*sighs and shakes head*

Great chapter, Grrrl!!

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2010 12:12 AM
Chapter number: 10
Title: What a Lord Wants...

Lemons are good... =) Great chapter.

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2010 11:59 PM
Chapter number: 9
Title: A Race and a Kiss

Awwww shittttttty! Kikyou, go away. Go see the relatives you're supposed to be seeing...not wrecking the amazing moment InuYasha and Kagome were just about to share... >.<

Great chapter!

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2010 11:52 PM
Chapter number: 8
Title: Spider's Pit

Great chapter!

InuYasha really needs some manners...I mean, after all this...*sigh* But it makes for a very remarkable story!! =)

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2010 11:43 PM
Chapter number: 7
Title: Saturday Night Prep

OR she'll break you... =)

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2010 11:38 PM
Chapter number: 6
Title: Anything You Can Do...

Friends or not, Kikyou's ass will/would get whooped! =) Great chapter!

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2010 11:32 PM
Chapter number: 5
Title: Two Can Play That Game

LMAO!!! Grrrl, I have tears streaming down my face from laughter!! This chapter was a.m.a.z.i.n.g.!!!! Love love LOVE it!! =)

 **ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2010 10:43 PM
Chapter number: 4
Title: Hands Off, She's Mine

Hehehe....loved it!! Stillllll don't like Kikyou...that bitch.

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2010 10:28 PM
Chapter number: 3
Title: Partners in Crime

Loved the chapter...don't like Kikyou (go figure)... =)

 **ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2010 10:13 PM
Chapter number: 2
Title: It's Always By Chance

Really liked this chapter...lovin' the characters, too! =)

**ShortieJ**



Reviewer: **ShortieJ**   Anonymous   [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2010 10:05 PM
Chapter number: 1
Title: New Kid in Town

Took the advice and found the site...and I must say, so far, I'm enjoying it!

Good chapter!!

**ShortieJ**



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